***Bad Couple*** (sk ff) (pg67 prt10) - Page 38

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Posted: 14 years ago
aww poor sujal 😭😭 🤗 ... mil jayegi baby ...dont get disheartened 😭😭...

hope kashish is safe & sound 😊... plzz make sujal find her soon 😳😳...

continue soon 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
@cute_samrah-jahan bhi h...zarur milegi apne hero ko dear...thnks 4 cmmnt

@bd-thnks...yeah..both are suffering

@jyothi-thnks dear...dnt worry sab thik hoga

@nisha-dnt worry..ab se pyaare pyare ud milenge..thnks 4 cmnt

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetangel_25

i really wonder where kashish is!!!...dont worry, mil jayegi...sujal h naa... This rainy night is reminding of d last rainy night and al the damn things..wohi to..soch kashish pe kya beet rahi hogi...m getting a very bad feeling..kahi use fir se kuch na hojae..kuch bhi nahi plz....dua karo...police jus gets on ur nerves at times..yup...they are bind by thr duty...bt even sujal didnt know how to find her..uss bechare ko kaise pata ho...and that good for nothing friend of hers..use sujal to necha dikhane me zyada interest tha..usne hi to sujal pe loyalty test karane ka idea dia tha...how sujal is missing her..zindagi ka hissa jo bann gai h kashish...bt usse zyada worry ki baat hai ..i jus hope she is ok..yup acha kiya sujal ne jo ma ko rawana kar diya..cont very soon..tc


thnks a lot dera. loveee ur comments...bhagiyo mat samjhi naa
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 22
Kashish kahan ho tum?..wo hi to sujal soch raha hai
see Sujal is too lost without u dear...wohi to..akela pad gaya h
hope she is fine...hope for the best
cont soon dear...sure


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Nice part...thnks

It is good that Sujal is trying to remain focus on the task of finding Kashish, even though he himself is quite shaken emotionally. yup..he is focused on his motto He is worried about her...natural naa Hope that he finds her soon and that she is safe and sound...hope for the best
please continue soon...sure


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

aww poor sujal 😭😭 🤗 ... mil jayegi baby ...dont get disheartened 😭😭... awww i loved this 1...it was so much frm ur heart

hope kashish is safe & sound 😊... plzz make sujal find her soon 😳😳... hope for the best

continue soon 😳 sure


lovely comment...thnks
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 23

Whole night went in tossing and turning for Sujal.

He gets up as soon as morning sun illuminates the sky.

Today, he had determined to find her at any cost….no matter what happens.

The sky wasn't clear but the rains were brisk.

Sujal had a game plan today. He would trace her path. Try and think like her…..imagine himself at her position and find her.

He mounts his car, thinking where can she go.

He drives to the nearby bus stop.

The place is badly flooded, he walks to the place where there used to be an auto stand.

Its difficult to walk past the knee length water.

He decides to keep his thoughts strictly optimistic which were tilting towards the negative side.

He stands on the pavement looking around. Imagining, if he had been at her position that day what would he have done.

He imagines the place to be completely flooded and the roads were completely deserted, and it was raining like cats and dogs.

Finding a public transport was out of question, she was covered in her dupatta, her mounting a private vehicle was out of question.

Yes….yes…..! a thought illuminates him.

She would look for shelter…but where?

He looks around the place…he os searching every where every shab , every site.

Near by he locates an abandoned construction site, and starts looking around

He turns to climb the stairs of the site whn his he suddenly freezes and turns.

He heart all most screamed out.

THERE SHE IS !!!!!!!!!!!!!

She was sitting with her knees clasped to her body, her eyes swimming in uncertainity, she was pale shivering with fear. Hiding inside one of the huge, moster size pipe kept on the road.

He runs as fast as he could and reaches her.

She was covere don her duppatta but he knew it was her, he just knew, his heart just knew !

s- Kashish !!!!!!!

She looked up at him with her petal like eyes, her eyes displaying relief and a sense of comfort on witnessing him yet uncertainity.

She stand up seeing her husband in front of him, her duppatta falls of her face uncovering her angel like face.

She was staring at him blankly.

He was so happy to see her, to see her safe …he didn't know how to keep his happiness ..he didn't know what to do…he felt like jumping, he felt like dancing, he felt like hugging he tight, he felt like crying with joy.

s-Kashish !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

he was unknowingly frinning ear to ear in a stupid happy manner.

s-i am happy that you are safe !!!!!!!!!!!

He was going to hug her but stops himself on right time

s-chalo lets go home.

She is blankly looking at him, seeing the happiness in his face.

She had never seen him so happy. Was he so happy to have her back?

She?...She…who enver gave him any happiness…not even gave him his husbandly rights….faught with him..compared him with her boyfrnd….still he was happy to have her.

s-kya hua? Ghar chalo.

She finally mutters.

k-ma

he sighs hard.

s-Kashish, I am sorry about what all happened. Maa wapas chali gai hai. Aur, rahi baat tumhare jaane ki. That's your home, tumhara ghar hai wo. Kisi ko hak nahi hai tumhe tumhare ghar se nikalane ka

Her eyes turn misty as she hears his words, she feels a lump in her throat; as she remembered how she criticized his small flat and his capabilities when she stepped in his home after marriage.

It was one of those moments for her when she would crave to melt onto the loving arms and cry all her guilt out. Close her eyes and forget the whole world.

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
finally sujal found Kashish and Kashish is realizing his niceness.
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part loved it cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful...but bohot chota tha..lol..even more coz u ended up at d wrong point..hehe
liked the way sujal tracked her yr..nthng filmi..straight and practical..apke dimaag ka to jawab nahi..hehe..n he was soo happy to see her..and so was kashish..she was in so bad condition.. :( ..n now she is guilty of her mistakes..ek beatiful climax mil sakta tha is part ko..par u., arrr..ab jaldi cont krna..tc

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