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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter: 20

Sitting on floor he was smiling and remembering everything that has came across him, touching him so deeply, he looked at the picture of fantastic four and chukled,

Mayank: yeah police kin chekaroo mein per gai…taking a deep breath, he put it aside and was walking down the memory lane, wch holds so much for him to cherish, to hold on

Samrat: tujhy se mjhy yeah umeed nhi thi…siting beside him

Mayank: kiya..tu yaha kiya ker raha hai

Samrat: devdas ko chinibabu ki zaroorat hai ..meri bhai

Mayank: he giggled…nupur chali gai..per tum logo per se us k bhoot nhi utra…

Saamrt: aur tu..teray uper tu woh pori tarii hai(she is all over u)

Mayank: hmm…kya kero… I have helplessly fallen for her

Samrat: tu yeah us ko batana ja ja ker…yaha kiya ker raha hai

Mayank: us ko pata hai…

Samrat: dekh….mjhy nhi pata us ki problem kiya hai..but I know she has sumthing for u..comon Mayank get up yaar…maloom tu ker

Mayank: kiya maloom kero…asa kuch nhi hai…chor is sab ko…aur fikar na ker..ek raat day day ..i'll be back with my self

Samrat: no …we don't want that sadu, expressionless, frnd of ours back samjhy….

Mayank: pls samrat…

Samrat: oki ..im leaving but just think…

……………….

Mumbai….

NM: nupur….mein ja rahi hoon half an hour mein ati hoon wapas…..

Nupur: thik hai maa…

She was leaving and open the door…

Nm: hmm..tu ap yaha …kasay ho

Man: bulkily thik…..

NM : jao is ko tu tum hi handle kersakty hoo…terrace per hai…take ur time mein ja rahin hoon

Man: thnku..he smiled

She left and he closed the door …proceeding towards the terrace, he found her standing leaning to the wall…

Man: devdas tu mjhy ban chaiy tha ..tum kyun ban gai

She looked back and was shocked to death

Nupur: tum yaha …yaha kiya ker rahy hoo

Mayank: han mein yaha….aur abhi tak tu ..im standing….now …im thing of…he intently looked in her eyes..n proceed nearer her….

She looked back she knew there is no place to go…but why she is getting scared..woh Mayank hai kuch nhi keray ga…

Nupur: kiya hai..

Mayank: yaar tumhain kuch lrkiyaoon ki taraha hota hai

Nupur: hain???

Maynk: han matlab, whn a handsome hunk like me proceed towards a girl, altleast woh thora tu ghabrati hai

Nupur: woh is lyan ky woh tumhai ajnti nhi…tum asa kuch nhi ker sakty …

Mayank: tu tum mjhy janti hoo..he said crossing his arms …

Nupur: yaha kyun aay hoo…koi kam tha…

Mayank: han buhat imp..

Nupur: new case….

Mayank: nupur…mein koi baat ko ghoomana nhi ata ..nahi I want to…y u left without meeting me…

Nupur: common Mayank tumhain pata hai k tum meeting mein thy aur meri flight thi

Mayank: y u left without meeting me nupur….he turned to look at her clsoly

She ddint answer…

He holded her from shoulder n turned she was still looking side way….

Mayank: tumhain mhj per bilkl bhi bahroosa nhi hai..ek taraf tum yeah kahti hoo k tum mjhy janit hoo..or ek taraf u dont trust me….

Nupur: Mayank zabardasti hai kiya

Mayank: han hai…..jo sach hai so hai…..

Nupur: u cant handle…

Mayank: wht, u ….haha…tht is difficult but I'll …achy acho ko handle kiya hai mein ny….PAusE….

Nupur pls don't run, I know its impossible to handle me, but pls try tu ker sakti hoon ….i know tumhary elawa koi handle nhi kersakta…..i m not gonna let u regret ur trust on me ….pls ek baar give me a chance I promise nthing will be repeated like the past ….

Nupur: she chukled….by GOd Mayank…asa proposal sirf tumhi day sakty hoo

Mayank: aur meri is baat ko proposal sirf tum consider ker sakti hoo…..

So

Nupur: so kiya….wasay ek baat bato…

Mayank: kiya

Nupur: yeah film ki hero wali herkat kerny ki zaroorat nhi thi

Mayank: thi..warna ap ..tu meri emails k jawab bhi nhi dayti…..

She foward a letter and he looked surprised…

Mayank: yeah kiya hai..

Nupur: read…

Mayank…looked at it, a his liped curved to smiled, and thn to smirk ….he slided his hand on her waist n pulled her closed, her eyes poped out

Nupur: Mayank choro

Mayank: so ms bhuhan …delhi kyun transfer kera liya…

Nupur: meri marzi..she was still struggling to get off his grip….

Mayank: he pulled her more closed…so shadi abhi ya ab k plan k mutabik nxt year..

Nupur: mein ny han nhi kaha

Mayank: na bhi nhi kaha…..

Nupur…..will u be mine…

Nupur: hmm….

He pulled her in to hugge tighly embracing her in his arm…closing his eyes hiding his face……

Nupur: Mayank mein hmm kaha tha han nhi

Mayank: hmm or han k ek hi matab hota hai samjhi….n now shut up…….

He pulled her more closed almost sequezing her in his arms, feeling her near, she too was comforting herself here, freeing herself from all the fears she hold inside….the hug as full of passion, longing , love and trust….

Wasy tum kitna drama hoo na

Nupur: kyun

Mayank: apko jasy policey mein arm lock (locked in arms) thoran tu sikhaya nhi hai hai na…jo larkiyon ki tarah..mayank mjhy choro ..mjhy choro …..ker rahi thi…..

She giggled n comforted herself more in his arms….

Nupur: kya kero sab bhool gai ….ufff

He broke aprt….still holding her in arms

Mayank: kyun….

Nupur: soch ker bato gi…filmi hero…

He ws looking intently at her, so close resting in his arms, seems like and impossible tht has occurred in his life…

Mayank: so the in films confession doesn't end with out a ….he said mischievously

Nupur: a???

Mayank: aa…he moved fowrd to her..

Nupur: Mayank…don't dare to…

Mayank: shut up…o rather let me do the owners ..

Nupur: may….

Her words were left incomplete, whn he silenced her, showing his loonging for her, feeling her so close, for her side it was a confession to him, responding to his love with same effection and passion.

it has been a month nupur left delhi, n life was stoped for bth of them, it wasn't just Mayank who was missing her, but she was too terribly missing him, n thts whn she decided to shift to delhi agin n be near him…she wanted to give him a chance, to give life a chance, sumwhere she was determined tht he is not gonna let him regret it ….

Broking aprt he rested his head aginst her….caressing her cheeks with thumb and rufling her hairs with his fingers…

Mayank: thnks nupur…thnks for cuming in my life, and excepting me….

This time she hugged him tight….she hates whn he become vulnerable…

Nupur: wasy abhi tu meri maa ko bhi mana na hai…

Mayank: haha ..us ki fikar mat kero..life k experience fiza ko yeah sikhtay hai k larki ko patany se us k parents ko patan zaroori hai…larki man hi jati hai..islya woh her story mein yeahi kerti hai…

Nupur: matlba,..

Mayank: anty ko tu phone per mein ny sab bata diya ..yeah tu tum ho…..ek han kahny ko kitna dahlati hoo ..uff….

They kept stnding there for so long, feeling each other , finding solance….

Rin ring…

He took out his phone….

Ya …what…I 'll be ther til night

Mayank: kiya hai….he said disappointedly, resting his head on her shoulder…..

Nupur: kya hoo

Mayank: murder…of a girl…ab yeah tu tumahry skool kin hi hai na …pls maloom kerlo

Nupur: Mayank…I'll kill u….

The end

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Pardon errors…

Writers NOTE:

CSI for me was a full on masti , writing it was too fun for me, I honestly really enjoyed it. It was first time I had a complete written story , and how I control myself not to post it in a goo I know….

CSI earned so many new readers, never thought it will be my one of the most popular stories….

A request pls don't ask for epilogue, as im upto sumthing else …

Thnks aloot for being a part of this experiment…trying sumting new and getting so much respond is such a gr8 feeling…

Waiting for ur coments

Thnks aloot…

Hope to see u guys at Walking with you….

Lov ya…

Fiza….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
mindblowing ending
finally mayur r together...enjoyed this ff very much
lovely..this was very interesting ff

Edited by love.mayurarti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
love you fiza-ji.. this was one of my favourite stories.. thank you for writing it🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ending...the fact that u enjoyed writing this FF is reflected in the fact that we enjoyed reading it through and through...
very nice...:):):)
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Posted: 14 years ago
n i'll be dere aage bhi if u write aise hi amazingly on mayur :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
i am glad that mayank nupur had decided to went back and mayank came to her.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yes it was full of masti and Wonderful ff, it was different ff from others, we enjoyed every update and yes it is indeed one of my fav ffs, Beautiful ending..!
and loved their confession in zara hatke style and their sweet Moment..!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
mayank and nupur r 2gether...gr8
lovely ending
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da ending...dis ff ws one of my fav...it soo soo unique,different n innovaive

tc
loads of love
Edited by cutiepie12 - 14 years ago

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