CRIME SCNE INVESTIGATOR..MJHT LAST CH.pg84...23/8 - Page 54

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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice...:):):)
i was sooo scared...i thought it would be nupur's mom...lolzzz...stupid me...😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

As I was going out of town 2morow…so thought of updating evrythng….will be back on Monday ..so no updates till tueday..

Chapter: 19

Samrat: u were right Mayank, vishal has a major heart attack, he is in CCU…ek min aur late hota tu , heart would have died of hypoxia(low oxygen)

Mayank: it means this time the weapon would not have been the knife

Samrat: I think …maybe scared and I think vishal was too much of a coward or weak at heart..yeah tu medical report aur vihsal se baat ker k hi pata chaly ga…

Mayank: ek favour kerna Samrat..nupur k na pata chaly k as kuch tha pls….us ki halat kafi karab hai aur aagr us ko yeah pata chaly ga k rida nevr was about to kill him with knife to woh pata nhi….

Samrat: tu itna disturb kyun hai aur is ko kiya hua hai…

Mayank: she was her best friend, is se zayda mein is se kuch nhi poch paya , I think is larki k koi past the, aur islayn

Samrat: woh itni psycho hogai thi…GOD….

Mayank: rida ki body aur area clear kerna hai, postmortem n everything

Samrat: tu ek kam kera, ya hospital, press, aur documentation tu sabhal..mein aur benji site dekhty hain…asay hum nupur ko bhi dour rakhy lay gay in sab se….

Mayank: ya its good idea, wrna woh many gi nhi…thnks

Samrat: oh hello….woh meri bhi dost hai…teri agar kuch aur hai tu is k yeah matalbb nhi hia…

He smiled and he hugged him

Samrat: congrats….we solved another case….

Mayank: yes we did….

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Reporter: so ACP Sharma, congrats u solve another case

Mayank: it just not my success it was team work

Reporter: is vishal alright and why he was attacked by the murder

Mayank: vishal is out of danger, all details related to case will be given to u in a press conference , right now we cant disclose anything..

Reporter: ACP bhushan, how was your experience working at delhi, can u tell us wht connection these three cases have

Nupur: we will tell u evry details, right now pls lets us complete our work

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Nupur: Mayank site per kaun hai..we need to check it

Mayank: nupur site per Samrat aur beji hain, we need to handle here, Samrat se press handle nhi hoti , woh phir hum se baat kerny ki khosih mein site pocha jatay

Nupur: tumhain pata hai tum buhat zididi ho..(referring to no let her work at crime scne)..

Mayank: tum se thora kam…

……

So the killer has precisely no motive , it was just the past that was engulf in her ,

Reporter: ms bhushan, it the second time u have to came in front as ACP rather than as a human, it isn't difuclt

Nupur: it is , but yet its my duty, so I need to remember , I am guardian of people I just cant make my heart get over my duty and responsibility…

He smiled listening to her, kiya baat hai meri baatein itny achay se yaad hain…he wasn't addressing the press, let nupur did it. He knew she needs to act normal, and face it everything to face herself.

Mayank: sir nupur tu press conference mein hai…yes I'll be there ….

He left the place..

Repoter: so kiya Delhi getting a new co ACP …

Nupur: no Mumbai is getting her ACP back 2morow, I'll b leaving todays evening …

Thnku….

She stod up from there and looked around, whn a constable came to her

C: madam .yeah sir ny diya hai..

Sorry sweetheart, commissioner sir ny bolaya hai, so I am leaving , see ya at night…..n pls do say no…

Mayank..

She looked at the note and shocked her head, its better for him that he isn't see me leaving ..

Moving to bureau she collected her things….clearing the drawer, collecting files, her data, laptop, and memories to .

She looked around the whole place. It was her life's bst 5 moths, life that has been so static can just change in mere 5 moths to this extend, people can get engulf in heart so deeply she never thought…. Sure she is gonna miss evry1…specially these three sum…

She hold a picture tht was forced my suhani to be taken at her engagement, and she framed it and gifted nupur…the bst was the tag line written on it.."fantastic four"…she chukled , all of the are one n only piece of world…..

Spreading her hand on the picture, she smiled …

Benji: tu tu ja rahi hai

Nupur: benj…mjhy tu jana hi tha….tujhy pata tu tha…I don't belong here benji

Benji: kyun tu rukh bhi tu sakti hai na….u know tujhy head office mein transfer ki offer hai..phir..simple yeah bolo na k tujhy humary sath rehna nhi hai..tang agai hai na..

Nupur: benji tu asa kyun bolo raha hai…common try understand, aur mein sirf city se jarahi hoon…tum logo ki life se thori…im always gonna live with u guys, aren't i…han..

He was still not looking at her….

Acha zayada bharam na dekha common…

She forced him and hugged him..he too hold him tight

Benji: im gona miss u yaar, tu kaha mjhy in do dead man k sath chor ker ja rahi hai…

Nupur: ek kam ker tu transfer ker lay mumabai…wht say

Samrat: han han..sab ko lay jao yaha se ……

Benji: nhi hum kahin nhi jay gay…..dekh na humara pyar tumhain wapas lay aay ga….aray yeah bara sadu kaha hai….

Nupur: woh com sir k pass gaya hai I thing …koi meeting hai…

Samrat: tu tum kyun nhi gai….

Nupur: I was in press conference…

She was emptying her one drawer…whn smart looked at her suspiously, he signal benji to go and call Mayank….

Samrat: tu ..tum ja rahi hoo…

Nupur: haan yaar….is mein new kiya hai…..

Samrat: Mayank ko bagir batay…hain na….

She was stopped right there and turned to look at Samrat

Nupur: asa kuch nhi hai…is ko pata hoga ..jasy tum sab ko pata hai…..aur woh meeting mein hai bad mein bata do gi….

Samrat: tu janti ho us ko nhi pata k tum aj ja rahi hoo….bhag rahi hoo

Nupur: mein bhago gi …kis se….

Samrat: khud se..i don't know nupur whts it is that is holding u away from all of us, specially Mayank…..but ek baat kaho ..us ko pls bata ker jana…..atlest us ko sukoon rahy ga…he had an glimpse of u last time….woh sadu hai tumhain pata hai…he will nevr talk about this to any1..atleast tum se hi kerlay ….

Us k pyar k lyan nhi tu..us dosti k haq se hi sahi…us se mil lo….

Nupur: meray pass time nhi hai Samrat I need to leave…in evening ..

Samrat: that is in an hour….he came forward and hugged her tight…we will miss…u and I hope to see u here back..ASAP…

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Benji: Mayank k phone lazmi silent per hai…he isn't picking up….

Kya yaar hindi film k hero heroine hain yeah kiya

Samrat: if they r …tu just leave…jo us ki kismet…jaha tak mien janta hoon…nupur kam se kam us ki bata ker jay gi…mily na sahi but she will tell him….dekhtain Mayank kya kerta hai…

Benji: Mayank kuch keray ga….ufff….

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Cominer: gr8 work bth of u…tum logo k credit per govt ki taraf se kuch honour hai…hopefully jaldi sanction hojay ga..let see….all the bst..congrats..and I m really proud of u both

Mayank: thanks sir…good day…

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Kya hai itni miscalls …text msg..MS bhushan ..kiya baat hai..ap ko humari yaad kasay agi…he smilingly opened the ms…wch changed in to frown

Mayank, im leaving boarding for Mumbai, thought of meeting u but u were in meeting, takcare of urself, and thanks for tolerating me for so long. If I have evr hurt u pls try n forgive me…

Nupur…

He looked at the text and smiled pitfully…

Mayank: so u left…mjhy se milna bhi zaroori nhi samhja..gr8….

Siting in his car he holded the stiring wheel tighly m closed his eyes tightly….miss ya mom….saying so he strted his car and rashe towards his home, though previously he ask nupur that he 'll be there at night he was planning to try again, n ths time properly, and needing her n aswere why , whn, wht….but life always plan sumthing different for him…

So now it was the end of his story …he giigled

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Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
No it must not be the end of his story
come on Mayank do some thing yar
Great story and great update
thanks for Pm
or itna din ma is story ka bagair kasa raho gi😭
just joking 😉Have a safe and happy journey
Edited by DhanakZ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...😊
ye Nupur ko kya ho gaya hain...😲
woh kyun bhag rahi hain uff...😡
aur Mayank usse rok kyun nehi raha...😕
i jst hope ke Nupur khud hi Mayank ke paas wapas a jaye...😉

hv a safe journey API...
love u lodsss🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesum update👏lat line was not clear to me.hope mayur jald ek ho jaye.happy journey

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Posted: 14 years ago
wonder y she is running away...n yes its surely not the end of his story ( akhir aap kis marz ki dawa hai 😉)...!

edited comment pg 76...!
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor mayank. everyone he loves, just leaves him.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updt
feeling bad for mayank ...cont soon
thanks for the pm
Edited by gopi06 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i hope they'll meet soon...feel bad for mayank...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fizaaa
nupur ko tu kyun myank se alag kar rahi hai- u stupid, seires ok k , moron - mayur ko jaldi mila de..
nehi tou- u know me na- i can do anything...so thoda daar mujhse..

wanna se mayurs reunion in ur next aprt
come back soon jana
love u and take care


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