CRIME SCNE INVESTIGATOR..MJHT LAST CH.pg84...23/8 - Page 51

aww... interesting but yet suspense...

wow what a promo😊plsss cont soon wanting to read the update pls cont soon

Mayank real culprit hain kya? OMG! How can Mayank be the culprit when he himself worked day and night to solve the case? He even suspected Nupur! Too much confusions mann! I just dont want Mayank to die! :( poor nupur! </3
Well, the promo is full of suspence! My heart almost came out when mayank was shot! :O
Fiza, after this promo, you have made us damn desperate! Please update soon!

ye kya tha mujhe kuch samaj main nehi ayi...

yeh kya tha? is mayank is murderer? nooo. plz mayur ko kuch mat karna. plz save mayank😭

is it nupur's mom the culprit ...i guess so🤔...!

I don't know wht u felt abt this update…for me its seems to be "khoda pahar nikla choha"…don't know why im still nt satisfied with it…:(….

Chapter: 18

The night was sleepless for everyone,

Vishal as he was in fear….

Nupur as she was dam excited and was checking evry deatail again n again

Mayank, who has checked everything and was trying to catach some sleep, tomorw the case will be solved and life will be back to square one …." Case khatam aur mein mubai wapas bhgao"….

Closing his eyes he took a deep breth….its oki Mayank …its perfectly ok……

Nupur: hopefull kal case windup hojay ga maa

NM: oh that's good, tu phir hum wapas chalein gay hain….

She was keenly observing her expression…

Nupur: wapas…

NM: Mumbai…kyun nhi jana

Nupur: nhi…mera matlab han jana tu hai..

She was lost in her though and her mother smilingly biding good night left he rwith herself…..she almost forgot about this part of the story, she has to leave everything soon here, she didn't thought she will be leaving them all, they have become such a gr8 part of her life…so much that she thought will nevr get deattachecd

Samrat, benji..and ….mayank..us k kya…

Us k kiya matlab woh koi special hai…

U know how he is, even than ur asking

I don't want to think about it, subha buhat ka hai im sleepy …..

U cant run away from it nupur ..its better not to …..

Thinking about what tomorw may hold form each of them they tried to relax there minds who were so much in depth of fear..

Fear of losing life…

Fear of losing everything

Fear of losing herself again , if trusted……

Morning

Mayank: ok evry one is prepared any question, koi garbar nhi honi chaiy pls …

Benji: all set …

Samart: yup all set

Mayank: where is nupur

Samrat: I think in her cabin

Myaank: fine ..i'll check her…..

Knocked…

Como in

Mayank: yaha kiya ker rhai hoo

Nupur: last time details check ker rahi hoon…I think plot ti bulkily perfect hai ..haina ….

Mayank: hmm…

He wasn't looking at her not for a min, and she was observing it…he was clamiky rather plainly was just trying ot work..

Nupur: sab thik hai…

Mayank: han…hm m….chao u brief sami and benji abt it…I have some work.bye…aur at 4 we are leaving to vishal 's house

Nupur: oki….

: evening;

Vishal open his house door pale like sheet….

Vishal: ohh ap hain

Benji: tumahin laga mooth hai…..

Nupur hited him playfully….n looked with expression…."arm se pagala gaya hai kiya"..n thy chukled..

Samrat and bnji took positon out side home, mayank beside the door as it will open and thy will got….nupur at the end of corridor so tht she can aim n shot right at the door….as she was bst among them as shoter

Two officer wer place near the road to tell, two at back…any one cuming this way….was being observed

One thing thy know the killer always ring the bell to com in so they will get it easily…

Vishal , nupur Mayank were siting in lounge with ther guns read, it was as time has stop, and was passing with snail speed..they were continuously looking at the clock, while at times mayank was standing near window to look n check outside…

Nupur: check the position of sami and benji..…anything u saw guys…..

Sami: all clear…very clear…

Benji: same here…yaha koi nhi hai…..

The expression of vishal was of immense fear, while Mayank and nupur were impateitly waitng fro the killer to be seen…

Dhan….a sound was heard, as if sumone was in backyard

Mayank nupur looked at that direction while , vishal gasp n cuddled himself more ….

Mayank: did he changed plan,

Nupur: not possible….but

Mayank: maybe…..

Nupur: let me check….

Mayank: nhi I'll…

Nupur: nhi u meant to be here ..maybe it's a distraction….let me check….

Nupur took out her gun, n start proceeding towards the backyard slowly aiming at the front, turning to her back…

She slowly proceeded towards backyard…hearin sum forrsteps..she got close to the wall…moving slowly…put the sound of footstep was also increase…it was clear someone is processing towards her…..moving a bit fast she moved fow cumng at the ned o fnce n came infornt pointing gun

Freez….the said in union…..

Samar: Nupur…wht the hell ur doing here

Nupur: I heard someone outside tu came to check

Samrat: I was hear na…u shud have told me…even I heard someone…..

Mayank was looking out in fornt for any movement , turning back he placed his wrist near his mouth…to convey msg to nupur

Nupur anything there

Nupur: no mayank no one….

The bell rung…

And vishal jumped from his seat…

Nupur cum back it was for distraction may be…quick back at postion

Looking at the clock it was 20 mins left in 9 pm..mayank ask nupur to take her position, while Mayank went near the door and ask vishal to open the gate..he fearfully open the door…slightly but was shocked to see the sight infront of him..

A beautiful lady was standing in front of him, with a smile on her face

Girl: may I come in

Mayank was shocked to hear the voice, girl…he looked at the other direction from where nupur slowly entered n stod beside the corridor entrance..

Mayank thought may be she is a fan, but was a soft voice…

They kept hiding the just cant get out until he or if she will not attck on him..

Vihsal: ap kaun….

Girl: Mayank nupur ny bataya nhi…

With that she hited the door to push him in ….n crashed the door widely opening with pressure hiting mayank with it….

She went inside, mayank collected his scnese in a sec..n cleaned the blood tht came from his nose…. but was shocked to see tht why nupur is'nt giving him back backup…he looked at her n she was seems to be in shock……

She raised her hand up pulling a big knife out…mayank rushed to her and holded her hand tightly….while nupur rashed from her place…

Vishal was droped on florr..seems to be unconscious….…

Girl: he is dead…she laughed evil….

She pulled mayank's hand and threw him on floor…turning she took off his gun..and aiming vishal….

Mayank was shocked to these her tactics, she was definitely trained in marshal arts ..he hited her legs to make her fall down, she did but unfotunelty near vishal…she crawled a bit n took the knife n placed it near his throat…..

Nupur: no rida ….

He looked upto her in shocked, her face was still white n pale…

Nupur: rida pls…asa kuch maat ker….

Rida: kyun nupur…dekho isko..she kicked him agin…kitny sookon se jee raha hai yeah, aur siya ko dekho kitna tarap rahi ahi woh…..ek bhi nhi choro gi…..

Dekho meri jan, mein ny kaha tha tumse pehly bhi tumhary sath koi bora keray I cant see,

Nupur: rida mein ny us ko apni merzi se chora tha

Rida: jhot kyun bolti hoo…hmm…mjhy pata hai tummy scarifies kiya hain….in logo ko jeena nhi hai…tum samjhti kyun nhi hoo…dekho sameer, rajveer, visahl..sab itna sara drink kertay hain..roz lrkiyan badlty hain…...wasy hi takleef se mar jay gay…mein tu asani se un ko azaad ker rahi hoon….

Yeah sab ko takleef daytay hain,

She was fanatically roaming the knife on vishals face….n mayank was silently proceeding to her

Rida: is kaho meray pass na aay ..she said to Mayank..mein is ko koi takleef nhi dayna chti …acha insaan hai yeah..

Mayank; sirf acha insaan hoon, he placed his gun back in its place…meri choti k kuch nhi lgta….

Nupur who was already in shock , felt her whole wolrd spinning..

Mayank: I told u Nupur don't bet I cant murder someone….

Nupur: why…she just was able to say tht….

Mayank: cause its meant to be jan..he came close to her..n touched her face….but this wasn't part of plan…he refered her n spread his hand lovingly, but still ur love doesn't change are mission….

Oki go back up…skip the font in red…n read again….

Per yeah nhi hai….they will increase there sin day by day, they cant gave peace to anyone, they will live a dreadful life, so I making them rest in pesce…..

Nupur: asa kuch nhi hoga rida….tumhari zindagi karab hogi

Rida: asa hoga….dad ko dekha tha….kasay maray thy woh….

Nupur was now just putting evry puzzle in place..she can easily knew the motive of her , such psychic murders….

Mayank pointed out the clock it was just 10 mins nine…she looked at her agin..n he passed signal to Samrat and benji to cum in

He took out his gun from his shoes and aimed her to shot..

Nupur: Mayank nhii…asa kuch mat kerna

Rida: Mayank mjhy pata hai …ek min hai…mein apna kam adhoora nhi choro gi…with in three mins he will be dead….

She agin raised her the knife..n mayank grip her hand..n waist ..

Nupur: rida nhii….pls nhi

Rida: its meant to b nupur…its meant to be….

He hited her hand on his leg to make her drop the knife…n she bowed down touching her hand ..she slided her leg n pulled in the gun …n aimed to mayank…

Rida: mein yeah nhi kerna chati thi…but u forced me….

Don't came near me …she was moving out..n mayank move forward…

Don't mayank im saying..i'll shout n u know I'll

Mayank: no u wont…wht u want u did…im nt in ur plan u wont

Rida: plans change mayank….need to safe myself

She loaded the gun and ……

Daaa…..shot….

She smiled and fall on ground and nupur rashed to her….

Nupur: call an ambulance quick….

Rida: I know u love me too much nupur …but u cant safe me, don't save me plss….its better for me this way haina…..she touched her face…

N ……

Samrat and benji entered the place…and looked at the sight…

Nupur was siting right beside her, bowing her head down, any1 can't understand wht was all about , but vishal was still unconscious….

Mayank felt sumthing suspicious and looked at the clock it was stil 5 mins to nine than why she said she has one min….

Mayank: smarat take vishal to hospital, chk him quick we don't have much time…

Samrat chked him , his heart and pulse was not showing good signs,

Samrat: im fearing infraction Mayank…..benji…help we don't have time

They both lift him and took him put they don't have time to wait for ambulance so police van was taking….

Mayank move forward slowly and sat beside nupur, he didn't knew what connection she has with her..but she was deeply connected

He put her hand on her shoulder and slightly squeeze it…she turn and hugged him as an impulse….

He was taken a back with this sudeen reaction from her, but than held her tighly and rubed her head and back to clam her down…she was stif, no sobs no tears…yet she was holding him s tighly….

Nupur: why I always need to do this to my love ones Mayank

Mayank: shh…clam down…

Nupur: I killed her..she moved her head to take a glipse at her , still in the same position

Mayank: u did what was right, u cant help it nupur, u tried but she was not ready, it for her betterment…u didn't did anything wrong…

Slowly broking apart..he cuped her face and looked her

Mayank: ur ok…

Nupur: she moved back realizing she was just going so weak, and that's so infront of him rather in his arms…she nodded in yes…

We need to collect the clues from this sight, lets check it

Mayank: he held from her shoulder…u go from here, we will handle this…plss

Nupur: I said n aim fine

Mayank: I know ur …but just leave…chalo…first we need to see vishal…kcuh karbar hai …

Siting in car they were moving towards the hospital rather rashing..

Nupur: rida was my best friend, my sister, everything , how cum I didn't got to knew that what her dad did has rooted so much strongly in her mind, she was such a storng girl, optimistic, so logical..a topper….

He closed his eyes in frustration and than looked at her who was looking outside , he held her hand…

We have been together from 1^st standard Mayank…always together, I talked with her yeaterday, she use to wish me luck for this case, thought I nevr discuused it with her…

Evry1 use to say we r one…n ..i ..i ..i killed..

Myanak: nupur ..he stoped the car nad turned to her…

Tumhary pass aur koi rasat nhi tha nupur, u r guardian of life, u can't just make ur heart take over ur duty and responsibility, u proved yet again what this batch attached with u means….

Nupur: why always me…why I always need to prove…

Mayank: he has no answer to it…he just pulled her head and hided her in his arms,

It ok to cry and show Ur pain...let it go nupur pls…let it go…

She was holding her fist tight not letting herself in front of him, n he was rubbing her neck slight to calm her down…they broke apart as Mayank cell rang

Mayank: ya smart….ya in 2 mins we will be there….

Sorry for the joke….lol…this idea camed up whn me suja n faru where chating n just click me ..wht if mayank is culprit……sorry ..kaun pakar k sorry

N about rida the name…..ridi it wasn't sachi in my mind to use almost ur name as murder..per …I liked it now….mjhy murder kaha na….haha…now have it…sorry if u minded it…its just a coincidence.

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dr. hokar aise zaalim harkat hadh hai...bechare readers ki jaan hi nikaal di😳... kisi ki jaan gayi aur tumhari ada thairi😈...upar se bechari ridi ko murderer bana diya😆...!

great update as usual...poor nupur has to go through it all again...she is shocked to death...!