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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi all,

Xtremely soory for the delay...Had been really busy...Guests @ home...😃 😳

Will be regular from nxt week...

A big thank u to all who hav commented and pressed LIKE so far...🤗


PART 25

They fell down and kissed the death.Prithviraj ran to the spot but it was all over.Only thing left was Maan's armour and crown which he cremated with due respect...And he declared,'Apne pyar ko hazil karne ke liye tum phir janm loge mahayodha...apne rajdharm aur jeevansangini ko jitne ke liye issey bhi hazaar guna shakti ke sath tum phir aoge mahaveer Maanavendra...ye suraj,chaand agni aur dharti is baat ke gawa honge! Veer yodha Maanavendra ki jai ho...

Maan shook as if from a dream.Everything was clear to him now...these are his people...they are suffering only bcoz of him.Had he kept his promise to protect his love...they would hav returned back to Udaipur...he could have met his son! But this time he wont let the evil take over! He knew very well the evil intentions of NT.She is so poisoned that she is still after his people! He wanted to get out of the dungeon...to tell his people that its time to come out..May be he could never restore them to Udaipur but still they didnt have to struggle like this even without sunlight...

Just then the guards took him forcefully to the mess.His hands were freed and he was made to sit on the floor amongst the row for prisoner's meal!
A man sat nxt to him.His hair was slightly grey had a small beard like he had not shaved for months.His manners were different from others.But Maan decided to talk minimal.He wanted to meet the rajguru,king Virendra and talk to them.
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Meanwhile NT and Abhay were enjoying royal comforts.Virendra and Jodha came to meet NT.
Virendra: maharaniji apne hume abhi tak adesh nhe diya?
NT(seductively):humne to kaha tha na maharaja se sangam ke baad hi hum sandesh apko de sakte he.
Virendra: ye kaisi baat kar rhe he ap?😲 Apke raja to Maanavendra he na?
NT: Lekin is waqt ap hi to in logo ke raja he?😈
Virendra:kintu humare purvajo ne to..


Abhay: lekin wo kai saal purani baat he.Kya ap apne rakshak ko udaas karenge?😡

Virendra: nhe mahaveer Maanavendra ,hum to apke daas he...

Abhay:to phir chaliye.Pehle kuch manoranjan ka ayojan kariye.
Virendra:jaisi apki agya!

Virendra took Abhay to the entertainment court of the palace where dasis were singing and dancing.Abhay indicated them to stop and whispered something to Virendra.Virendra was shockd.This ws not that he had heard about the great warrior.He reluctantly ordered to bring the new prisoner.Geet was brought there.She was totally confused by all the happenings.Abhay lukd at her...his eyes full of lust.






Geet: Abhay wats al these? Why r u playin with their feelings? 😡Just tell them the damn truth!we are just on an expedition..

Abhay smirked.
Geet(to Virendra):see honourable raja,ye sab sach nhe he.Ap jaise soch rhe he,waisa koi Udaipur apka intezar nhe kar rha he aur na he koi shatru he.That era is over! Its a democratic country now! Babaji wats the hindi for it? Hmm..loktantra rajya..ap samaj rhe he na?
Virendra laughed loudly.
Virendra: is ladki ko kya ho gaya? Udaipur rajya hi nhe raha? Ye to asambhav he,he na maharaj?
Abhay:bilkul.Is ladki ka dimag kharab ho gaya he.Mere sath thodi der akele rahegi to samaj jayegi..
Virendra:jaise ap chahe!

He left...
Geet(screamd): Are u out of ur mind Abhay?😡Dnt u dare come near me!
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Maan choked as the old man addressed him,'Maanavendra?'
He lukd at him puzzled.Had he met him before?His face lukd so familiar...
Maan: Mr.Pratap?
Pratap smiled.Maan was so happy.Finally he could do something for Geet.Her dad is safe.
Maan: s..s..i..uncle? How did u reach here? They wont let u in unless u hav that tatto?
Pratap: just two words..Maanavendra & Geetanjalidevi..They didnt kill me for the reason i know ur name.And ironically they hav imprisoned u.
Maan: But how do u know?
Pratap: i didnt, young man.I went to Udaipur palace just to collect some data for my research.Thats where i found a potrait.The guide there,an old man of 78,told me that it was raja Maanavendra and Geetanjalidevi.He even told me that the portrait was made by the princess herself.I was proud that i had found the perfect match for my daughter!
Maan:uncle?
Pratap:yes ur dadi came to meet our Geet. We were abt to fix ur marriage.

Maan smiled.
Pratap: but after coming here i came to know about the whole story.I understood that u are born for each other! Maan,i'm really happy for my daughter...
Maan: Thnk u uncle.I assure Geet vl b alrite.
Pratap:i know u vl take care of her.

But Maan could sense something wrong with Geet.His muscles twitched in rage with the thot of her being in danger..😡 😡
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Abhay was moving towards Geet.
Geet:mere paas mat ana Abhay...
Just as Abhay was about to touch Geet,a knife struck on his palm.Virendra and the guards rushed to his room hearing the voice but it was closed from inside.

Abhay: Maan? 😡Tum yeha kaise aye? 😲
Maan: kyu Abhayendra? Kya tum bhool gaye? Mene pehle hi kaha tha.Mere icha ke bina tum Geet ki taraf ankh bhi uthakar nhe dekhoge!
Abhay:oh! Matlab tumhe sab yaad a gaya?

Geet ran to Maan and hugged him.




Geet: Maan! Wats al these? Lets get out of this place.Maan..**sob** 😭 😭...hum wapas chale jate he...i dnt hav any hope of seeing dad! 😭Mujhe yeha se le chalo Maan..😭
Maan brought her even closer and kissed all over her face madly.
Maan: relax Geet.I saw ur dad!
Geet:sachi?
Maan:hmm...(he kissed her forehead lovingly) we vl go back bt mishty ussey pehle kuch kaam he.
Geet:kya kaam he?
Maan turned angrily to Abhay.😡
Maan: pehle,iski iss jurrat ka sabak to sikhana hoga..
Abhay:itni asani se nhe Maan..
Abhay immediately opened the door.Virendra and guards came in.They were al xtremely angry seeing a bleeding Abhay.
Virendra:tumhari ye himmat?😡

Maan: meri patni par koi ankh uthakar bhi dekhe to me uska ye haal kar du ki dushman bhi taras jaye us par! 😡

The command in his voice startled Virendra.He was taken aback.Geet felt so happy when he addressed her as his wife.She dont know why but she felt like she had been waiting for this her whole life...

Virendra(to Abhay): kshama kare maharaj kintu kisi aur ki patni par zabardasti karna apko shobha nhe deti.
Abhay: ye jhut he.inki shadi nhe hui.😡

By that time NT and Jodha reachd there.

NT: Ha agar ap logo ko vishwas nhe hota to dasiyo se kehkar iski talashi lo.ye kuwari he!
Geet:nhe! Plz nayan..
NT: Bas nayan tara! 😡Apna natak bandh karo!
Geet lukd at her puzzled😕.Why is she addressing her as NT.
Jodha:nhe.Ye stritva ka apmaan he.Hum aisa nhe hone denge.
NT shot an angry glare at Jodha.

Abhay:to theek he.Ek pratiyogita rakte he.Jo jeetega usi ki baat sach mani jayegi.
Maan(smirks):manzur he.
Abhay:tumhe dwandh yudh karna he,humare pehelwan se!
Abhay knew very well that he cant beat Maan.But the wrestlers of Rajput are gigantic men and its impossible even to fight with them.However strong,Maan wont hav that strength against a savage wrestler as he had been brought up in a city as a posh man.
Virendra:to theek he.Kal subah sabke samne ye yudh hoga.Tab tak inhe wapas le jao.
The guards took Maan and Geet.
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PRECAP: GEET ANGRY AT MAAN 😡

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Edited by madhubala123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update dear...
hate that stupid abhay...
widh ki geet ko bhi sab jaldi se yaad aa jaye
Edited by lovelycutietedy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

edited in page no. 109

thanks
Edited by harshdb - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved it
awesome update
waiting 4 geet to remember her story
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey madhu 🤗🤗🤗
mast update 👏👏👏

chalo finally rona to band ho gaya hai 😆😉
maan was really awesome in this part 👏😳
finally maan found geets dad 👏👏
& omg he knew abt maanvendra & geetanjali👏😲😲
i m sooo
& that abhya & nt 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡
in dono ka to character dhela nahi hai, character hi nahi 🤣
nt raja par line mar rahi thi thats really disgusting 😡😡
& ab to virendra & jodha ko bhi lag raha hai ki ye dono galat hai 👏
& really maan did fav work by saving geet 😳😳😳
& ab to abhya also know that maan ko sab pata hai 😲
& chalo geet ki iksha puri hui iss janam me 😍😳😍😳😍😳
that was really
& this abhya is really use less 😡
pehle khud to challange deta hai aur phir usme part bhi nahi leta hai😡😡😡😡
abhyandra was much better than him 😆😉
kam se kam khud to kuch kar ta tha😉
in all mast👏 , awesome👍🏼 , bahot accha 👏, superb👍🏼 tha
thanx for pm & 😊
i guss agla part me geet ko sab yaad aayega ya phir maan batayega use 😍😍😍
wating for next part to see maan fighting 😍😍😍
love arushi ❤️❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...hope Geet also remembers soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome, brilliant part
loved it.
maan found geet's dad and geet's dad know maaneet come back here for each other
Abhay 😡
maan saved geet
precap is scary
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeee!!!!
glad to see that maan found geet's dad!
another war!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelycutietedy

awsome update dear...

hate that stupid abhay...
widh ki geet ko bhi sab jaldi se yaad aa jaye

thnaks dear for comments 😃

I think Abhay should get an award for most hated character 😡 😆

watever he does Maan vl protect Geet...

Hope Geet remembers soon...😊

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