Jaz's Writing Corner Note pg22 Oct26 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

I read bleeding love and o re pya...u gave me a heart break and then a dream...sad but beautiful...u are so mean...realy,u give us hope for a happy end then bang it was a dream 😆 lol...yup...that was my very own Ekta style dream sequence...everyone was shocked...needless to say!! 😉Then i read ek pal and home coming...is there some one sane enough not to love these stories?!Girl,what u do is art...writting and the music that inspires u mixed together gave a masterpiece i worked so hard in the FF to make sure every song (beginning and ending) was perfect!😳 ...first i loved o re pya,cause is a very sweet song that i love but when i saw in ek pal that u used lifehouse- everything i fainted!!! 😲 I mean,realy? Lifehouse is my fav,my water,my food,my everything 😆 😆 I was so pleased to see u liked too... i LOVE that song...hands down...one of my most favorite songs...because its so simple...so powerful and so beautiful!!! i used in Humesha Saath as well..i cant get enough of it...its like the PREFECT couples song!! haye!! 😳U should try another song from Lh called "storm" it kn be an inspiration for an os,who knows,its a great song!! wow...it is good...im bookmarking it so i can hear it a few times...maybe i will be inspired!! the singer...his voice is beautifully haunting...know what i mean? 😛Ek pal was a story of a mom,a nite that was the reason that kept maneet alive for years...the story was so beautiful that i enjoyed every word of it!! Ek Paal was actually a piece i had written for Milind and Prachi of Kayamath back in like 07 or 08...but i think the story...and characters...suited Maneet as well...so...i used it again...i think that is the one piece that i still get old readers saying they are in love with...im proud of that piece...it was the purest form of Maneet's love...not together but immense love for each other!! 😃The cherry on top of my reading session was home coming...u blew my mind with that one,how kn smone suffer so much...then their struggle with the little baby was so touching...i could barely see the screen 😭 But u gave it a happy ending...loved it to the core,again father-daughter scenes superb... 👏 👏 home coming was a special Maneet one...i honestly dont know where the idea came from...or how i even had the guts to proceed with the story...but it worked out in the end...though someone did say that the way i developed Geet's father in that story was...not convincing...😕...im thinking for following that with some stories of Roshni as an adult...marriage and all that...😃 I am addicted to ur writting to ur style...i love ur work from the bottom of my heart...its sounds silly for me saying this cause i am too much down to earth and dont like to exagerate but thatswhat i feel about ur work! God bless u and keep u healthy to write more beautiful stuff like these! aww...youre so sweet!! thanks for your kind words!! its comments like these that keep me going and writing...you guys make it all worth it!! 🤗

updated as of September 8 😃

happy reading

JAZ

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Just read "without his mishti"...Myself i am one of those who tries to find a reason behind every feeling or gesture that one person thats in my interest does...and u here just went inside maan's head and heart and pulled all those emotions and wrote them down...it was wonderful reading them ,how an arrogant like him deep inside is so selfless...his fears were so rite then,too bad that smtimes words blurr the understanding between souls...both were wrong and rite at the same time...Simply loved the way u presented his plight...the contrast of the feelings...perfect...thank you, see ya' Jaz!!

you know...i wrote this so long ago..i had to go back and read what it was about cuz i completely forgot...😆...but once i caught...i understood your comment better!! he he...but i just thought the cv's didnt do full justice to his feelings...ya...they showed a little of it...but not as much as i wanted to see...especially having GC act it out...i was totally picturing him as i wrote this piece...thanks for reading and commenting

JAZ