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Posted: 14 years ago
its great to know that u're better now...take care😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Welcome back Fiza 🤗
No problem we can wait for the update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!!...this was an interesting as well as a n hilarious update..."cosmological views"...hahaha...*ROFL*...
anyways get well sooon fiza...take care...:):):)
and faria thanks for the update and PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Not fully back so pardon errors, thnku for so much love n concern…thnku…I wonder why I always felt so short of words to thnk U all…lov ya dil se

Chapter: 17

Nupur: Mayank got everything…

Mayank: lets go….v need to reach Mumbai…

..

Reaching Mumbai the both rushed to the bureau, it was not worth wasting time a sec

Mayank went to Samrat cabin ..opening his door

Mayank: samara conference room…

Benji…to conferences room

Benji: y aim coming

Mayank: not cuming…cum at once

She whispered to Samrat

Nupur: sadu is back

Samrat: mjh tu laga tha shimla is such a peacfull romantic places, per is k kuch nhi hosakta, try bhi nhi kerta yeah tu

Nupur: try tu ker raha tha..but

Smarat was looking at Nupur lost figure about to ask but mayank and benji enter..

Mayank: oki guys…this is a complete case of serial killing,

The first case , murder was done at the seventh day of at which engagement broke, the second was done at 49th day of engagement broken

Benji: all are multiple of each other…and next will be

Nupur: 2401st day of engagement broken

Mayank: to our luck Siya's engagement was broken on her birthday so we can easily know the day when we need to get him

Nupur who was busy with calculator , holded her head with hand,

Samrat: when Nupur…..

Nupur: day after tomorrow…

WHATTT

Nupur: yes…

Samrat: but we cant say how he 's gonna kill him

Mayank: but sumthing wch will b highly rapid killing,

Benji: thts mean once if he attacked the person, we wont able to safe the person..we need to do it before the attck

Mayank: at the moment of attck, we don't know him who is the culprit, plus we need to arrest him red handed, n carefully

Nupur: its highly difficult Mayank, most of the time serial killer are so sharp, and psycho that they will do such think that u have to kill or they kill themselves, hardly I arrested one , us k itni observation mein rekhny k bad bhi , he kill himself

Mayank: I know but we need to try

Benji: tum logo k pata kasay chala

Nupur: priya , me , siya all belongs to same skool

Samrat: but y ur skool, may as u were handling case

Mayank: but she wasn't handling the case from start.

Nupur: aur mein tu abroad ja rahi thi training k liyan ….yeah tu on sameers father request happen…

Maayank: that only the person who is killing can answer..

Ok guys, benji u got address of siya..

Benji: yes…we need to talk to her

Nupur: nhi..we cant….he is eyeing on us

Mayank: Nupur he is a serial killer, he will not change his plan for any, tumhain nhi lagta k us ko pata hoga k tu princi se mili hoo

Nupur: hm…humain siya k bajay vishal se baat kerni chaiy….

Mayank: we need to meet commissioner sir first to get the permission plus to arrange all the need full

Nupur: hmm lets go..benji tu rajeveer k maloom ker woh aj kal kaha rehta hai, location check ker, were are the possible ways one can enter and we can get our positions…

Benji: ok

Mayank: sir this what it is..

commissioner : brilliant work …its amazing ..tum logo itni asa ni se serial killing tak pochac gay….but need to be very carefull

Nupur: we know sir…..we need ur permission to do the need full…

Commissioner:: sure, mein abhi search or security warrant issue kerwata hoo, so Mayank ab tu ghussa nhi hoo mjhy per…

Mayank: he smiled…nhi sir ap per ghussa hosakta hoon kiya…

Nupur: kis baat k liyan…

Commissioner : tumhain team mein shamil kerny k liyan

Nupur: ohhh….sir woh tu yeah zindgai bhar rahy ga….ap ny the Mayank shrama k sath kisi ko compare kiya….

The laughed and went out with the security

Nupur: so Mr. shram was hell angry ..

Mayank: u wont belive how much I was..hating u …so much

Nupur: obviously tumahry girlfriend jo share ker rhai thi na mein…

Mayank: chukled…han..but than..point views kasy badl jatay hai na…..

Nupur: hmm chalein

Mayank: Nupur….

Nupur: hmm

Mayank: thanks

Nupur: yeah case mera bhi hai Mayank

Mayank: choro tum nhi samjho gi….

Benji ko call kero vishal se milna hai….

Nupur: hmm….

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Nupur: waoo ghar tu dekho zara

Mayank: tumahir class ki sari larkiyoon ko itni ameer loog hi pasand aay…jab hi tu…

Nupur: jab hi tu kiyaa

Mayank: tum bechary ek fixed salary waly ko kyun ghass dalo gi…he said making a puppy face…n she cant just help to smile..

Vishal: opens the door…..

Nupur was standing in fromt while Mayank aside so he didn't notice Mayank

Vishal: heloo..oh mine…he check her from top to bottom to which she raised her eyebrow…..how I can help u beautiful or ur here to help me ..he winked..

Mayank who was hearing everything felt like giving him a tight punch on his nose, he cam in front like in full on anger to wch nupur suppress her giggles

Mayank: ACP , crime branch….we need to talk to u MR VIshal….can we…

Vishal: am … ya sure pls com in…he proceed in

Mayank: ullu k patha…is ko tu merny hi tu…

Nupur who was holding her self hard burst into laugh…its was getting difficult to stop them when Mayank glared at her..n she stoped

Mayank: u stay out of it …mein khud baat kerlo ga is se….she bited her lower lip and suppressing laugh nooded in yes..whn he turn in she again burst into laughter…

Mayank: vishal jo hum tum se khany jarahy hain us ko arms se suno…u may find it stupid but it is like this…ur life is in danger

Vishal: wht …why .matlab I have..i am never involved in such thing

Mayank: u broke up with siya

Vishal: siya kaun…

Mayank: ur ex finace..

Vishal: oh god wohh…..it has been years man…n she cant harm me….she is to coward..

Nupur: she should have…

Vishal: did u said anything

Nupur: no…have u heard abt rajveer and sameer murder

Vishal: ya i have

Mayanak: they are series of killing and next is u

Vishal: but how cum

Nupur: dekho vishal….hum yaha tumhary sath case discus kerny nhi aay hain…hum sirf yeah batany aay hain ka kal tum per ek attack hoga, n we want to protect u from that….if u will co operate

Vsiahal: per meray pass apni security hai

Mayank: we know that, but woh kcuh nhi ker pay gay, we need to be here around u …

Vishal: per agar us se pehly us ny kuch kiya tu

Nupur: nhi keray ga…phir bhi for ur sake ..we will leave are two officer along with ur security .but 2morow we will b at ur house …after afternoon….fine…so if u have any appointments cancel them , no one should cum to meet u…understand

Vishal: ya….fine…..but

Mayank: relax…we wont let him harm u ….trust us…..

Vishal: I 'll try too..

Mayank: we need to go through ur house…

Vishal: sure…

They look around in kitchen, and check drawer, n found butcher's knife….

Mayank: yeah…

Vishal: its of my maid….

Mayank: oh….

They look around and Mayank was about to enter his room , whne he stoped him too

Vishal: no …woh..yaha….i mean

Seeing him so confused , he got wht he must be hiding, shaking his head in uther irritation he called

Mayank: nupur…yeah area tum check ker..i'll check the roof top

Nupur: oki sure….he by pass her as if cant looked at her in embrassement

She went inside the n chuckled imagining expression of mr.shrama….moving inside she found a girl sleeping…in…ahem…

Checking whole room she found a bangle, first she thought it must be of her, but than viewing it she got that its not new….very ethnic

Taking it out she goes to vishal,

Nupur: yeah

Vishal: yeah tu meri dadi k hai….oh god…yeah tu from ages mjhy nhi mil raha

Nupur: Mayank….see…engagement bangel…am I right vishal

Vishal: ya….

Mayank: tum ny koi new servant ya maid rekhi hai…

Vishal: nhi…..

Nupur: oki..v will see u 2morow..

….

Mayank: so the crime scnce is already well prepared for 2morow.

Nupur: with knife, and a clue……intresting….mayankkk..y u didn't check his room..it was so cousy, relaxing..chilling…naa…..

Myanka: he knew sumthing is cuming now…God save me..kiya

Nupur: u know she was really hot…n she burst in laugh

Mayank: tumhain zara bhi sharam ati hai….had hai….

Nupur: nhi…sari tu tumahin ajati hai….she was laughing

Mayank: I'll kill u nupur

Nupur: that u cant…

He turned to her n looked at her seriously almost scaring her

Mayank: don't b so sure about it….she kept looking at him weirdly with a frown, n now it was mayank's time to laugh at her….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u for updating API...

hoping u r fine now...😕
if nt den GET WELL soon API...🤗🤗

missing ur updates...😔

well i loved d update...😃
it was awesome...👏👏
i loved it lodsss...👍🏼
awww Mayank as usual possessive han...😉
i so love dis protectiveness n possessiveness abt MAYANK😊😳😊
god...ye Nupur 😳😉
bilkul sharam nehi ati ise...☺️
i cant stop laughing imagining dat...😆😆😆

love u API...🤗
Take Care of ur HEALTH...🤗

Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very very cute update. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey fizaaa 🤗...was missing ur update a lot...how r u feeling now??..i hope better..😃

Ok coming to the updates,in chapter 16..i loved nupur-prachi convo n mayank suppressing his laugh...hehe can imagine tht n gosh i cant stop laughing...😆

loved nups dialogue in chapter 17..."sadu is back"...😎...sanu's short convo was cute...haha the commissioner...what a question he asked...😛😆...the best part was in the vishal's house...loved mayank there...he was irritated with vishal n nupur teasing him by giggling...aww shoo sweet...😳...loving the MN bonding...its growing day by day...they both tease each other a lot...that's something very amazing...cuz their friendship grows strong by this..❤️..pata nahi kab nups mayank ko ghass dalegi??😛...bechara mayank...🤣

cont soon n take full rest...we can wait for ur update but u need to take proper rest ok...😊

love
bidushy ❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
so Lovely and cute update
I loved Sharmela Mayank 😳
I really Like it
Thanks for Updating and Pm
Hope U are better now
Take care of yourself

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Posted: 14 years ago
u just can't rest na...chain nahi hai na tumhe...bimar ho phir bhi updates ki padhi hai ladki 😳...U NEED REST samjhi...!

Fabulous update as usual...i like the pace of this FF...investigation procedure is brilliant...all characters r focused on their particular job part...the way they steal moments being professional at the same time is what i love the most n our lovebirds sugary sweet little moments r cherry on the top...!

P.S...TAKECARE 😊...!
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Posted: 14 years ago
O GOD the most amazing update👏
i was laughing like hell🤣🤣🤣
the dailogues were osom👍🏼
most osom was mayur talk while entering the house mayank expression😆😆😆
entering the room was hehehehe😉😆😳
tc of urself alot🤗
and do write soon😛

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