MN OS || Mayank Sharma, My Angel!.. || Pg30 (25/8) - Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

yes that was a crap but the bestest and amazing crap😆

Thank you for such a lovely comment🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
Bidu Glad to see u here and glad that u r fine now,but u need to take rest😳
anyways OS is awesome,fantastic and as usual
description is beautiful👏
hats off to u,I can imagine ur feelings and condition at that time,Its really hard to behave normally as nupur or I can say u did.

loved Mayank's care love for her,perfect husband,Mayur a perfect couple😳
and han u said u have ur mom with u,so I must say Mom are always caring,😳
loved the way u described.

take care
love
ruchi❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago
this wasnt all craps, Bidz.
it was awesome.
very nice n touchy os.
loved mayur love.
keep writing.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Bidz!

really glad ur fine now!!
but continue taking rest!!

and i'm so srry for commenting so late!
i got so damn busy!!

anywayz..
onto the OS

it was sooo Amazing!!

i absolutely loooved it!!

it was so saaad though..

but sweet,
seeing mayank's concern for her
and her consoling!!

tht was reeelli sweet!!

keep writing Bidz..

TC
-Aashi <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello my wonderful readers 🤗..

Thank you so much for your superb responses on my previous work. Here's a MN OS. As you all know, all my writings are inspired from something happening in my life, even this one too. Eid is coming after a couple of weeks and I'm missing my grandparents, my cousins and my childhood friends a LOT. I so want to go back to them in my homeland Bangladesh. Coming to the point, the following OS is inspired from my craving for my dear ones. Hope you'll like it . 😳

Lots of Love,
Bidushy. ❤️

I Feel You Every Moment..

"Aap vapas kab aayoge? Pata hain main aapko kitna miss kar rahi hu?", I said in the midst of my sobs and stared at my husband's photo with an ocean of teary eyes, and the next moment, my phone rang, flashing - Mayank. My lips crept in a huge smile.

"Hello!", I said softly with a shy smile. "Mere photo se baat kar rahi thi?", he asked me and giggled. "Aap ko kaise pata chala?", I asked in an amazed voice. "Nupur, did u forget that we are a year old married couple and I know you more than you know yourself?" He asked me sarcastically, yet I was finding his sarcasm cute.

"No I didn't forget!", I said and blushed. He, imagining my crimson red cheeks, said teasingly, "Meri sharmili biwi, abhi mujhse bhi baat karo please,", the PLEASE sounds super childish. I said that to myself in my mind and chuckled.

"Aab has kyun rahi ho?", he asked confusedly. "Kuch nahi, bas aise hi. Anyways, aap vapas kab vapas aa rahe ho? I miss u so much," I said to him sadly and pouted.

"Tum mujhe miss kar rahi ho ya apni shopping ko? Waise bhi it's a festive season, so tumhe shopping karne ka maan toh kar raha hoga and I'm not there, so you aren't getting the finance. Kyun? Theek kehe raha hoon naa main?", he said to me in one go. I knew he was joking but my heart felt like crying for some kind of reason. I was hurt! Soon tears formed in my eyes and flowed down my cheeks.

"Nupur? Are u there?", he asked worriedly when he got no response from me. "Aap ko kya lagta hain ki main *sniff* aapke paiso se pyaar karti hu? Mujhe apki *sniff* zarurat hain sirf shopping *sniff* ke liye hain? Yeh kehena aap ke liye kitna *sniff* asan hai, par mere dil ko kitni taqleef hui yeh *sniff* sunkar, jante hain aap? Aur pata hai aap ko ki *sniff* mujhe aap kitne yaad aate ho? 1 hafta *sniff* ho gaya aap ko business trip par gaye huye par malum hain yeh 1 hafta mere liye *sniff* kaise guzra? I'm craving every second *sniff* for loosing myself in your arms. But u won't *sniff* understand," I told him in a single breath pouring my heart out and sobbed continuously.

He was too shocked to react on what I said. After a while of silence, he spoke with guilt in his voice, "I'm sorry Nupur! I didn't mean it. I was just kidding. You know naa ki I've a bad habit of cracking such stupid jokes. Please maaf kardo. I'm really sorry." Feeling the extreme love in his way of apologizing, I was melted in a blink.


"It's okay," I said with slightly smiling, wiping off my tears. "Pakka? Dil se maaf kiya? Aasu poche?", he asked me very cutely. Unable to resist his cuteness, I broke in a laugh and said, "Haan baba! Sacchi! Dil se maaf kiya aur aasu bhi poch lia."


Satisfying with my voice now, he sighed in relief and said smilingly, "U look angel when u laugh." His voice sounded dreamy and I blushed, even more than the previous time.

"Thanks!", I said in a low voice. "The pleasure is mine, Royal Highness.", he replied while grinning and I smiled from ear to ear. "Accha Nupur, I need to go to an important meeting in 5 minutes, so *pause* I need to get ready" he said to me sorrowfully and my ear-to-ear smile didn't take a single second to disappear. "Theek hain but please try to come soon. It's hard to pass a single moment without you.", I said to him during my frown. "Even my condition is as same as you," he said to me and I could imagine the same frown in his voice.

"I really need to control my feelings now or else he won't be able to work properly there.", I thought in mind and managed to smile somehow. "Okay so stop frowning and get ready. Work hard for your dream project. Good luck for your meeting and do miss me," I delightfully said though the last three words sounded like a tease.

He, understanding my voice was jolly, smiled and said mischievously, "You miss me too, specially at nights cause.. ahem ahem, you know naa!" As he said that, my blush had reach to an extreme level. "Badmash!", I said and hung up the phone.

"Unke aane mein 1 hafta baki hain." I remembered and sighed. "Dopahar ho gayi hai so uthna hoga." I told myself firmly and got up. Just then, I felt my pallu stuck with something. I turned back and saw it stuck with a small pin at the corner of the bed. Surprisingly, that was HIS side of sleeping! Was it some kind of sign? Perhaps he wanted me to be with him. I knew that it was illogical yet my heart wanted to believe it. I thought beautifully smiling and lay back on the bed.

I looked intently at his pillow for a moment and then, I held it closest to my heart and closed my eyes. I could feel him near me and it was surely affecting me, making my heart pump fast and my body shiver. After sometime, I nuzzled my nose on to the pillow and inhaled its fragrance. It was his aroma. He was in me, and this thought was enough to make me happy.

Getting up from bed, I went to the cupboard and opening it, I took out his shirt. I caressed my fingers on it and kissed it. Everything belonged to him was making me feel him around me, even my own existence. YES! MY OWN EXISTENCE BECAUSE I BELONGED TO HIM. Just then, I felt the wind playing with my hairs, flying them. I turned around and walked towards the window. It was a cool breeze. I had a strange feeling when it touched me. I closed my eyes and there I could hear a husky voice, deep inside me - Nupur, I'll be back soon. Love you.

"Sometimes the distance makes the relationship stronger. The crave and the desire to be with the one you love makes you love him/her more." - So true! I thought and smiled. I didn't bother to understand the depth of it when I heard it from my friend but today I do understand. I really do!

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome os dear..loved it soo much...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Bidz- it was so so sooo cute OS

veryyy nice dear
Lovelyyy

"Sometimes the distance makes the relationship stronger. The crave and the desire to be with the one you love makes you love him/her more."

well Said Bidushi- its so true

i loved this OS so much
do write more
TC
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful os
loved it 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww... bidzyyy... it was so beautiful🤗
and don't worry sweety.. you'll go home soon!!🤗🤗

❤️❤️...

~jiya~
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Posted: 14 years ago
bidzzyyy!! .. 🤗

Absolutely beautiful!! .. i could feel the pain and loneliness of nupur .. it was so well described and the naughty and teasing mayank .. awww .. that was a dream.

I completely understand what people feel on the time of festivals, it is so hard to live away from your home and you remember them every day, but on festivals there is this strange anxiety that takes over, i have also spent one Eid out of Pakistan, i realized that the true color is only when you are in your home .. but i would say that please don't be sad .. you have your sweetie pie maa beside you right? .. try to think who have no one with them in these foreign lands ..

so smile and it was a beautiful effort with beautiful ending ..

God Bless you ..

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