MN OS || Mayank Sharma, My Angel!.. || Pg30 (25/8)

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: ankita2804
oyyeee hoyeee ... sooo many OS-s ...baap re ... hav to start reading from first... ;)

kal to pakka promise ki saare mere pending comments karungi...
padh to liya hai...n achchha v bohot laga...
but chhota comment karungi toh... wont u kill me...??? :D hahha...
tera banner bana rahi thi...so tym nahi mila aaj... kal..obviousllyyy saare os padhungi n comment v karungi... :)

Aur kitni post reserve karegi, woh bhi bataade...😆
aab banner toh banaa liya haina, aab jaldi se mere 2 FFs aur yaha pe comment kar...accha wala comment...😉
agar naa kiya toh khoon choos lungi...😈😆
n thanx once again for the banner...its truly beautiful...😍

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--
OMG Bidu☺️☺️☺️ OMG Ruchi! I hope ur cheeks aren't burned! 😆
It was damn romantic dear,I kept on blushing while'
reading😳😳 Still now is your cheek red? Hehe 🤣

First of all loved that u maintained the essence of AR through out the OS
armaan is so armaan type and ridz is also typical ridz type. I'm glad that i could keep the AR essence..😃

And I love Arman and his surprise...hehehe he made ridz tensed 😆
naughty as usual😛 and then loved their intimacy 😉 Hehe yeah...and everyone loves AR intimacy...even i love too...haaye u wont imagine...i was shivering n feeling goosebumps while typing up the intimacy part...☺️

well ridz gave him a big surprise in return,that she is pregnant
loved arman's reaction,again too armaan type😆 Hehe armaan type...yeah 😛

all in all loved the OS keep writing Will surely keep writing...😃
love
ruchi❤️

Thank you so much Ruchi for your detailed comment.. I truly appreciate it.. Love ya loads.. 🤗

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat
awww...
that was such a sweet n cute update..
loved it..
thnx for the pm...

Hey Anumeha...glad u loved it...thank you so much...🤗

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shonadesire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

awesmmm OS👏⭐️⭐️👏
loved it so much
thanks for pm

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

Okay so I was supposed to be on bed rest 😕 .. But hey! I'm absolutely fine now! 😃

So I'm back to entertain you all with my writings, and here I present you with a new MN OS, basically inspired from the present part of my life with obviously some fictional stuffs added to it .. 😉

The only difference is that Nupur had Mayank and I have my mom ..😳

I'm very much thankful to Almighty Allah for a new life, and then my family and my friends including you guys cause for all your prayers and best wishes, I'm perfectly fine now .. Thanks a lot guys .. Love you all! 🤗 🤗

Do Dil, Ek Jaan ..!

Nupur and I were sitting outside the doctor's cabin .. My heart was literally pumping fast since the doctor called me and told that the report had arrived .. After a while, the doctor told us to come inside .. I was shaking with fear .. Nupur noticed it and held my hand tightly, giving me strength, where as the situation should had been the opposite ..

"Doctor, Nupur's report is fine, right?", I asked with my trembling voice .. Nupur was mentally prepared to listen what was actually expected and I was praying not to hear the expected news ..

"Mr. Mayank, don't get panic but we need to operate your wife immediately because she's suffering from an early cancer ..", the doctor said calmly and i felt the earth being snatched beneath my feet .. Yet, controlling my emotions, I asked the doctor about the date of Nupur's operation and the doctor replied that they would inform me anytime soon ..

We came back home with silence prevailed all the way .. "Mayank, get fresh and I'll serve the lunch fast ..", Nupur said to me smilingly and I was shocked .. How could she be so strong? I wondered ..

"What happen? Why are you looking at me like that?", Nupur asked me confusedly .. "Nupur, are you fine? I mean..", I felt myself at a loss of words .. I was almost on a verge of crying .. My eyes were shining with tears .. Seeing that, Nupur came close to me and hugged me tightly .. I broke down in her arms ..

I was not in a state to speak anything .. Nupur rubbed my back and consoled me saying, "Mayank, don't worry .. Nothing will happen to me .. Pakka promise! Dil se promise! Mujhe kuch nahi hoga .. Have faith .."

I broke the hug and cupping her face in my hands, I said looking into her eyes which only reflected how brave she was, "Nupur, tum mein himmat ho sakti hai par mujh mein nahi .. I just can't .. I'm sorry .."

Nupur's eyes became teary seeing me like that but as usual, she held her tears back and told me with a trustful smile, "Mayank, main tumhe chod kar nahi jayungi .. Main wada karti hoon tumse ..", saying that, she captured my lips in a soft yet warm kiss with a silent promise of being with me forever ..

Soon the day had arrived .. Nupur was taken to the operation theater .. I was told to wait in the surgical waiting room .. Two hours passed and my heartbeats became faster with each passing nanosecond ..

Finally the doctor came to me and said with a happy smile, "Mr. Sharma, your wife is absolutely fine now .." I felt as if I got my life back inside my body .. I asked the doctor with tears of joy in my eyes, "Can I see her doctor?"

"She's still unconscious now .. You can see her after she's taken to the recovery room ..", the doctor informed me and left .. I sat on the chair again and sighed in relief ..

After a quarter minute, a nurse led me to the recovery room where I saw my Nupur lying unconscious .. I sat beside her on a chair, caressed her forehead and kissed it .. Seeing her absolutely fine, I felt my heart contented with immense happiness .. One of the nurse informed me that she would be conscious soon ..

Probably after 10-15minutes, Nupur opened her eyes slowly and the first word that escaped from her lips was "Mayank!" Yes! She said my name even in the half-conscious state and in no time, tears flowed from my eyes and my lips curved in a huge smile from ear to ear ..

"Nupur!", I said emotionally holding her hands in mine .. She looked at me and smiled slightly .. Really, how could she smile in such a state? I thought and after a second, a smile of amusement crept on my face when the fact struck my mind that she was the Jhansi Ki Raani of today's world, so how she could not smile even in such a weak condition .. Seeing Nupur awake, the nurse removed the oxygen mask from her face ..

"How many times did you cry Mayank?", she asked me in a whisper as she was too weak to speak anything .. I laughed a little at her question .. Gosh she knew me very well! Seeing my face, she could tell that I cried ..

"Only 5 times ..", I said lowering my eyes .. Nupur's eyes grew wide hearing that .. "It was just a minor surgery and you cried 5 times? Are you crazy?", she said to me in disbelief ..

I covered her mouth with my palm and said looking lovingly in her eyes, "Yes! I'm crazy .. I'm crazy for you cause I love you and now don't talk much cause that will effect on your health .."

Tears formed in Nupur's eyes seeing my concern for her .. Soon the tears flowed down her cheeks from the corner of her eyes .. I wiped off her tears and gestured her not to cry .. The nurse came in the meantime and requested me to be aside as Nupur would be shifted to general ward .. I nodded ..

The nurse took Nupur to the general ward on a wheel bed and I followed them .. When we finally reached there, the nurse requested Nupur to try shifting to the other bed .. I saw Nupur's feet shivering when she tried, so without giving her a chance to say anything, I picked her up in my arms and put her down on the other bed .. The nurse smiled at us and left ..

"Mayank, don't you have any shame? The nurse was here and you ..", Nupur said to me .. I could see her cheeks turn red due to blush .. I smirked and said, "Nupur, we are husband and wife .. So just relax and smile .." Nupur finally ended up smiling and I smiled seeing her smile ..

I sat close to her on her bed .. She snuggled up to me .. I enveloped her in my arms and she closed her eyes feeling the heavenly pleasure in my arms ..

"Mayank, agar mujhe kuch ho jata toh tum-", I stopped Nupur to tell that by putting my index finger on her lips .. She opened her eyes and our eyes met which led into an emotional eye-lock and it soon broke when I told her, "Meri saasein bhi rukh jaati Nupur .."

Nupur emotionally hugged me tightly and said in between her sobs, "Woh din kabhi nahi aayega Mayank .. Kabhi nahin!" I smiled at her assurance ..

Breaking the hug, I kissed on her tear-drops and finally on her lips delicately .. From her side, the kiss was turning passionate but I pulled myself back and said mischievously, "Mrs. Sharma, abhi aisi tabiyat mein itna romance theek nahi hai, samjhi .." Nupur shyly smiled and hid her face in my lap ..

It was night 10pm .. "Mayank, tum ghar jaao .. Main theek hoon .. Subha mujhe lene aa jana ..", Nupur said to me but I paid no heeds to her .. "Nupur, just shut up and I can't leave you like this, got it ..", I said to her in an authoritative tone which was enough to make her quiet ..

I told the nurse to take care of Nupur until I would bring food from home .. After an hour, I came back and saw my madam, who was fortunately my wife Nupur Bhushan Sharma, was watching TV .. Wow! That was called Nupur's Morena ishtyle, that was, watching TV at late night in such a condition .. Probably she was fine yet my worries were justified naa .. After all, I loved her too much and she was my life ..

"Nupur, turn off the TV and have dinner .. See, I brought home-made dinner for you ..", I said excitedly showing her the food .. The same excitement which she had before when she heard about the home-made food disappeared when she actually saw the food .. "Mayank, yeh kaisa bimaaro jaisa khaana hai .. I won't eat this ..", she said to me irritatedly .. "Shut up Nupur! Doctor told you to eat this only and I won't take any risk .." I said glaring at her and she shut her mouth up ..

I fed her and she was quietly eating like a forceful kid .. She was making cute irritating faces which made me chuckle and it added fuel to her irritation .. Finally, when she had finished eating, I said appreciatively, "Good!" and patted her cheek, while in return, she made some more annoyed faces to me ..

Nupur was finally asleep .. Tired, I sat on the chair beside her with my elbows on my thighs and my palms on my cheeks .. I was literally falling in sleep but I didn't want to sleep .. "Kya pata agar Nupur ko kuch chahiye hoga toh .. Naah I can't sleep ..", I decided and kept on looking at Nupur ..

It was midnight .. My head was on Nupur's bed and my hand was holding hers with our fingers entwined .. Just then, I felt her shivering and I jerked up from my sleep .. "Nupur, tum theek ho naa?", I asked her with worry lines on my face .. She didn't reply anything and kept on trembling .. I sat on the bed, took her in my arms and finally she became normal .. Heaving a deep breath in relief, I tightened my hug on her and we both slept pleasantly in each others' arms ..

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I know it was crap as there was less romance yet I would be honoured to get your appreciations/criticize .. 😳

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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Mamoona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

This is not at all Crap, its Wonderful OS and loved his care and concern for Nupur, Very Nice OS

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: -moona-
This is not at all Crap, its Wonderful OS and loved his care and concern for Nupur, Very Nice OS

Oh thanks a lot Moona! 😳
I'm glad that you loved it! 😃

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

Bidushi- glad to see u here
OMG its ur get well soon gift- r a gift tu hum logo ko tume dena chaiye- ulta tum de rahi ho- how sweet...love u dear
but hey u should take care urself- jaida update karne ki jarurat nehi hai- samjhi
we can wait for ur update hun

coming to ur update..
By GOD- it was sooo beautiful OS

just awesome- mayu was so caring
my mayur were adorable as usual- they r just perfect couple made for each other
weldone bidz..
fantastic OS
loved it to d core
keep it up

May ALLAH bless u...
and get well soon

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jiya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

it was not at all crap Bidzy..😳

and what happened to you?😔😔

get well soon sweety.. warna mujhe filmy stories kahan padhne ko milegi??🤗

❤️❤️...

~jiya~

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#100

btw i forgot to add - mom hote he itna pyaari- sabse alaag- very caring ,lovable and too good taht we cant imagine. they can do anything for us She loves us and we all loves her.. Anyway give my best regard to ur MOM...

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