CRIME SCNE INVESTIGATOR..MJHT LAST CH.pg84...23/8 - Page 43

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Hey Fiza..🤗

wow Fiza awesome updates...

very very nice update...

finally got the weapon...and clues...

Rocking FF...love all of them...the sadu yet handsome n smarty ACP...witty n intelligent forensic expert...ever jovial asst...n last but not the least miss carefree beauty with brains...!!!

all the parts r superbly presented...seems very realistic...total investigation part is well showcased...mentioning every little things required seemed watching CID but the best part is to imagine Mayu in this avtaar 😍...!!!

the highlight was the convo between mayur n sam-ben through out the investigation...sammy-ben duo r hilarious...whereas mayur rocked with little tiff n some light moments...!!!

aha confession...the weird of all i came across n reaction of our miss cool after confession was the weirdest of all🤪...!!!

ooho mayu can really be this naughty was unexpected...love the way he teases her all the while whereas sammy-ben duo r way too adorable noticing n teasing this weird couple on earth...mayu's concern surely proves his deep love for her...though she is well aware but purposely over look which irritates him the more😆...!!!

those calculation...forensic tests...cross questionings...following every possible detail of victims shown r worth reading...u r being at ur creative self girl ...pace of the story n progress in their relation is well balanced...mindblowing work once again...way to go Fiza 👏...!!!

P.S...sorry for commenting this late 😳...!!!

Nupur: hello sir..mein Nupur bhushan bol rahin hoo…ap ki ex student

Pricni: aray Nupur how ru…

Nupur: sir kiya mein ap se mil sakti hoo

Pricni: bulkily…kal . hi ajao

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Nupur: Mayank princi se kal k appointment mila hai….

Mayank: thik hai…we will go

Nupur: tum bhi chalo gay

Mayank: han….any problem mis bhushan….

Nupur: choti se….principal sir shimla mein rahty hain ..as mera skool bhi wahin tha….

Mayank: oh gr8…tu tumhain meray sath shimla jany mein daar lag raha hai…..

Nupur: mjhy koi daar war nhi lagta….get ready we need to leave now….

Mayank: wasy Nupur shimla I have heard is so romantic place..

Nupur: act professional Sharma…n stop flirting

Mayank: I told u its late to act professional with u……I'll pick u up in evening …..we will go together….fine..he said simply without any flirting…

Nupur: ok

Mayank: sorryyy.

Nupur: kyun

Mayank: mein mazak ker raha tha.. I hope u don't mind…

Nupur: no I don't..its ok

Mayank: oki than kuch acha sa bhi rekh layna date per chalein gay…he looked up from his screen a smile mischievously

Nupur: date…mayank shimla k garvyard buhat khubsoorat hai..tumhary liyan waha jaga book kero…

He giggled…amd she to joing him…

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Nupur: good evening sir

Pricni: good evening…little devil

Nupur: chuckled and than got a bit embarssed..n Mayank lookd at her prince

Sir ap ab bhi

Prcni: ap bhi kiya…yeah shatan khabi shatani nhi chor sakta …

Mayank: so correct….

Princi: dekh….matlab work place per bhi…

Nupur: sir asi koi baat nhi hai..magar life ko enjoy bhi tu kerna chaiy..is ki traah thori dead man

Mayank: ab mein kaha se agaya….mein ab jab enjoy kerny k mood mein hoon tu tumhain hi problem hai..

Nupur: wht do u mean by enjoying with me haan

Mayank: kitni garab sooch hai tumhari…mein koi double meaning baatein nhi ker raha hoon

Princi: mjhy lagta hai tum dodno mjhy se milny aay thay…apni pyar bhari baatein ghar ja ker kerna…..

He chuckled and she frown

Nupur: ap ko yeah pyar bhari baatein lagti hai

Princi: lartay tu hum us se hi hain…jis per humain sab se zayada behroosa hoo…k hum kuch bhi kah lay woh humain choray ga nhi…aur itna yaqeen tu kisi pyar kerny waly per hi hota

He was grinning looking at her….ab bolo expression

Nupur: sir ap bhi na abhi lovestories mein hi hain…..acha hum yaah ap se kuch information layna aay hain

Pricni: kasi information

Nupur: ek murder hoa hai

Pricni: tu tumhara is kya talqu

Nupur: sir I am handling it …aur humain shaq hai k yeah humary hi skool se jhora hai…

Princi: it cant be it cant never be…..

Mayank: sir actually humain Nupur k badge ki sari girls k no. aur address chaiy

Pricni: mil tu jay gay per confidential information is tarah

Mayank: humary pass permission hai for ur records,,but bs yeah baat na leak ho..pls…

Pricni: oki…dekho meray pass un ko bulkily current tu nahi honagy …but han kcuh saal pehly reunion mein update hoay thy tu u cant take it….

Nupur: pls sir we want them ASAP…

Pricni: thik tum logo kal sham tak mil jay ga..

Nupur:sham tak….

Pricni: han tu…kyun Mumbai mein rahty rahty tum shimla bora laga raha hai

Nupur: sir…shimla khabi bhi bora lag sakta hai…..

Mayank: thnku sir …..

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Mayank: so ab kal tak kiya keray gay…

Nupur; hmmm…yeah tu khama kha k time waste hai…wasy mein tu tumhain city ghomany k soch rahi thi

Mayank: nhi ..abhi tu kahin dinner per chalty hai

Nupur: Mayank…tum ny phir date ki baat ki

Mayank: aray wah ..tumhain mera woh plan yaad hai mein tu khud bhool gaya tha….mjhy nhi pata tha tum meri baato ko itni achy se yaad rekhti hoo.

Nupur: Mayank…stop it ..

Mayank: mein ny kya kiya….mein tu dinner k bool raha tha

Nupur: tu

Mayank: tu kiya….meri maa mjhy bhook lag rahi hai….ap ko nhi lag rahi tu pls kisi restaurant k pata bata dain mein aklela chal jao ga…..

Nupur: she looked at him….in a side way and smile a bit…chalo...

Mayank: thnku…he smiled and they went away….

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At night she was closing her rooms curtain, when she find him sitting at the edge of mountain watching the farthest end of sky. She shocked her head and closed the curtains…

To find a place to stop in life, to have a break and rest, seems like its impossible. He chuckled at his thought from when he starts finding places to have peace. life may have everything but at times that everything just become to worthless in finding the one.

God Mayank tu kitni complicated baatein kertay hoo……

I have walk in life like this always, never submerged my self in any urge to have find companion, never I felt like this to have someone, but strange it is, some one unwillingly cross ur path and than suddenly arose so many desire and feelings of incompleteness in u, and when u realize that's the one…dash..u woke up and find urself right here, at the edge, just like always.

So the moral of story is ur better as what ur are, changes at time my friend can be dangerous to hearts health…ahh…but the damage has been done ..sigh…ya n whowz gonna cure it..

Nupur: tum yaha kiya ker rahy hoo….

He looked back with sudden expression of surprise, is this the answere….

Nupur: hello…she wave her hand infront of him

Mayank: yeah kiya hai…

Nupur: coffee….yeah lo….saying so she passed one to him, wch he accepted with smile and get back him to his view…

Kya hua tumhain..

Mayank: mjhy…kya….kcuh nhi…

Nupur: tu yaha kyun behaty hoo

Mayank: asay hi acha lag raha tha….comon Mayank don't behave like deavdas she has right to chose, so except it and get back urslef …

Tum yeah kali, karivi coffee

Nupur: no way…yeah tumhary liyan hai…mein ny abhi mali maar k banai hai..

He chuckled..

Mayank; coffee malai mar kay wah….

Silence was for sumtime , wch was soothing for him as always but irritating for her….

Nupur: tum akelay rehtay hoon

Mayank: hain….this was surprise question to wch he raise his eyes brows….tumahin bora laga …plan change hogaya kiya…sachi bato Nupur …woh samny mandir hai…abhi chaltay hai …anty se mein baat kerlo ga un ko bulkily bora nhi lagy ga..he said in full on nautanki mood

Nupur: tumhain pata hai yeah jo roll reversal jo hoa hai na 13 chapter se ….mjy bulkily pasand nhi araha …..why u have strted to behave like me…

Mayank: per kiya hai na readers are really liking it …tu is continue kerna peray ga……TRP k sawal hai…

She looked at him n laughed….

Nupur: baat ko taal rahy hoo thik hai…

He smiled while sipping his coffee, placing the mug aside….

Mayank; kya janta chati hain app….bolain…

Nupur: tum hamesha se akelay rahty hoo…

Mayank: nhi…

Nupur: ufff…..to the point jawab dayna zaroori hai..

He giggled and continue

Mayank: my father never lived with us..mjhy nhi pata kya kyun kab…maa any khabi bataya nhi…islyan mein ny khabi pocha nhi…..

Nupur: matlab tu shooroo se hi asay hoo

Mayank: kasa…saduu…..han..tumhain pata hai maa use to call me that ….he smiled wider to wch she giggle in surprise..

Nupur: intelligent people….

Mayank: maa was always like this, full of life, at times too vulnerable, yet focused, strong headed…she has a strong aura around her..she was a very discipline woman, but yet has her times of fun too….

Perfect balance of strick, loving, yet a friendly mom. I can never even think of arguing with her. Not at all, but because of all that , im here today, people call me the best, indisputable just because my mom made me such, taught me to deal with everything.. tht life gave u. u know ..he said excitedly…she was dam pretty...long hairs, and smarat use to have silent crash on her…

Nupur: what ….luaghed..OMG…no sami cant be…

Mayank: wht sami cant be…..MR. Samrat has been too much in his college days..chopa rustam hai woh….

Nupur: u didn't beated him …ur mom matlab

Mayank: no pls not like that…I mean she was pretty that he use to drool over her…

He was taking endlessly about his mother, he has so much excitement . there was so much gilter, and so much of expression in his not so speaking eyes, he was talking like a child ..she chukled..after all he is talking about his mom…

Mayank: MS Nupur bhuhan…..she was still gazing him….he smiled a bit…NUPUR…

Nupur: Mayank mein bahiri nhi hoon samjhy….uff

Mayank: acha jab hi …4 daaf awaz day chukka hoon….he leaned close….asay kiya dekh rahi hoo

Nupur: she looked at him n suppress her blushed smile…mein kab dekh rahi thi…

Mayank; achaa….dekho dekho…tum yeah haq diya….

Nupur: tumhain daar lagta hai….his smile vanish….

Mayank: kya….

Nupur: tumhain akelay rahny se daar lagta hai

Mayank: Nupur u have lost it..need arahi hai tumhain jao sojaoo….

Nupur: tumhain kyun nhi ati….

Mayank: he looked up irritated with questions,,he never want to answer….

Nupur: islyan sab k ass pass rehaty hoo…she was looking at him intently

Mayank: Nupur..bekar ki baatein maat ker samhji..yeah koi tumhari film nhi hai …

She was still looking at him, wch at moment was making him restless, crave, and hard to hold on…but than he was smiling to inside…

Mayank was humming a song( teray chehray se nazar nhi hat thi nazary hum kiya dekhain) wch whn Nupur after a thought was remember lyrics of, n whn she got, she just moved her eyes away as an impulse..

Mayank: Mjhy tu addat hai …chalein ya raat bahar tumhain bhi yahin rehna hai…

Nupur: han…hmm chalo…he was still looking at her…but she wasn't….

He smiled and followed her….kuch kuch hota hai….

Nupur: she turn and got straighten

Tum ny kuch kaha ..

Mayank: tum haray kan kuch suna chaty hain

Nupur: good night….

Mayank: lo tu tum mjhy se yeah suna chati thi….oki,…Nupur…GOOD NIGHT…he said grinning fully

Nupur: Mayank tumahin pata is waqt mera tumhar moo tor daynay k dil chah raha hai

Mayank: galat tumhar dil is waqt muskarny k chah raha hai…yeah tumahr deemgh hai…galat signal may loo….he said as a matter of fact and the smile tht she was suppressing so badly got hold itself and spread on her lips….

Nupur: tum pagal ho chukay ho soo jao pls…

By the time the reached the lobby…

Mayank: good night…

Nupur: good night… per tum is waqt kaha ja rahy hoo…

Mayank: walk per

Nupur: Mayank sharfat se apny room mein jao ….raat k 1 baj raha hai…

Mayank: yaar im nt sleepy..

Nupur: chaloo..he dragged him with her…adadein kuch zyada begari hoi hai tumhari…anty sahi tumhary sath strick thi…

He chuckled while he was dragged and thrown in his room…

Closing the door he smile contently after that seems like ages someone actually ordered him with authority..

Mayankk control plsss….

beautiful update fiza
loved it so much
keep it up
sorry for short comment

omG, i am loving Mayank's Changing Behavior. and again ur humour was just Kamaal..Loved it, and thnx for giving this update Today..😊

mindblwoing update didi...lovd it when the principal called her little devil..and the last scenes btw mayur was soo peaceful and serene..

awesome part...