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Posted: 14 years ago
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plzzz updte SOON d nxt chap...
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Originally posted by: mad4karan

plzzz updte SOON d nxt chap...

will be able to do it in next two days, sorry to keep u waiting, will udate both ffs soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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VERY INTERESTING START KAVYA...I LOVED IT!!

IT LOOKS LIKE THIS ARJUN IS VERY, VERY BAD, HE'S OUT FOR
THE REVENGE AND NOTHING'S GONNA STOP HIM ...WELL
IT'S GOING TO BE GREAT FOR SURE!!
LOOKING FORWARD FOR THE NEXT PART SOON.
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Part 2:
Everything is fair in (love and ) War

Arohi was thrilled that she got a response from that serious looking guy. Her smile turned into a wide grin when arjun smiled lightly looking at her . She elbowed shefu slightly. It was like saying see you said no one would fall , now look at him he has all eyes on me.

Jay was surprised for two reasons, arjun said hi back to some stranger and that too to a woman and second he actually smiled at her. He gulped down his drink. Arjun then suddenly put the glass down and walked out of that place, followed by jay. Arohi was taken aback, he looked like he would come down to her and talk and within a second he was out. It was now shefu's turn to elbow arohi. Arohi gave her an angry look. Why did he leave like that? not that they had spoken or said anything but she felt some stange connection in those eyes. She felt like she lost something in those few seconds, not heart ofcourse that would be too soon, or was it?

She came home with that lost feeling, but once she saw her grandpa sitting in the living room, she forgot all that happened in the evening. She sat next to him and enquired how he was feeling, her grandpa has been sick lately ever since her grandma DJ died he was feeling lonely inspite of so many people around him. Only arohi's presence gave him solace. That was the reason he wanted her to stay in Bombay and not go too far from him. As arohi went on talking , all he could see was her innocence and her dreaming eyes. Every second he wished for only one thing that she should get someone who loved her for what she was and take care of her the same way they do. She was just like her mother gullible and sensitive, easily believes and trusts anyone that talk a little softly. After making sure he took his medicine and his fav song was on in the player, she went to her room.

She had to cross Sanchit's room and could hear the couple fight , that was nowadays become a routine for them. She saw gauri coming up talking to some one, normally she would have asked if it was jiju but they were separated so no way the rebel garui would be talking to her husband sorry ex-husband. Sudhir and Amrit ahluwalia , her parents, were still up, she went into their room. Had a small chat about her day and asked amrit to make her fav bfast in the morning. Amrit was little biased about arohi, making sanchit and gauri jealous at times. They both had set their life in a certain way and wouldnot change a thing, while arohi moulded along with everyone, that made armrit's tasks easier. Sudhir was opposite of amrit, he was a true business man would do whatever it takes to keep his reputation intact, sanchit and guari took after him. And always told arohi to be more like them.

Finally when arohi came to her room, she detested being alone again. She changed into her pj's put on the music, took a book and settled down on the bed. She saw the balcony door open and went to close, the moon and the cool breeze made her stay out. She looked at the faraway dark sky , lit by the stars and the moon and she could not anymore resist seeing the stranger's face , that was haunting her since the evening. she had been forcefully shuting his face from popping up. She had met many boys , some in college, a few in parties, a couple that had come for her alliance, but none of them were able to make her stand in the balcony under the moon and think of them. Even though his looks were confusing she could sense the pull towards him. But there was no way she was going to see him again, it was just a few minutes passing cloud. But if she were to meet him again, what would she do, what will she say. She was dreaming too much about something that had no chance.

Arjun was in his hotel suite, lying on the bed thinking. That is all he did always, think. This time it was a little different, it was not about business , but it was about taking a different route that was new even to him. Not even once did he feel it could be wrong. Sanchit ahluwalia was enough for him to hate whatever and whoever related. When he saw that girl she reminded him of his mother, so? that was just for a sec, after that she was just another girl, till jay pointed out who she was. If he hit sanchit financially he will suffer materialistic loss, but he also want him to go through a big emotional loss. The same way he went through. That family should also loose someone dear to them. He could kill them all and get done with it and happily live in a cell, but they should live and suffer, all of them, guilty and not guilty.

She did look innocent with big eyes and sly smile. It will be easy to woo her as far as he knows. He had already awoken interest in her, he was sure of it, that was the reason he left so she would be wondering what happened. He had no experience in all this. Still he had mastered the act within a few seconds. His mind was trained that way, to think few steps ahead always. There is nothing wrong in what he wants to do, he was innocent his family were innocent but the ahluwalia's used their might and power that time, so will he now. He is mightier than them now and he can destroy them single handedly, he doesnt even need all those high connections they had used 10 years ago.

He thought carefully again, he remembered the convo he had overheard. So she wants someone loving caring etc etc. tall and handsome he already was and the rest he can imbibe. It will be easy, that he will do when they meet again. Now it is time to plan how to get close to that family he should see how much they love their daughter Next morning he called jay to arrange a meeting between him and Sanchit. .

Sanchit Ahluwalia came to his office on time, he was 30+, but looked older than his age. He was lately very agitated and frustrated. He was undergoing loss in real estate business. His wife and his dad had warned him not to invest so much in it and he still did and incurred loss, had given them upper hand on him to poke him with we told you slurs. To hell with them, he was confident and acted on it, so everyone faces loss, it is not irreparable loss yet, if he finds some investor then he can recover. So when , rahul, one of his employees from accounts department told him he met someone , an upcoming business man who wants to make money , he was hopeful. Rahul walked in with more information. The name is Arjun Singhania, wants to invest in real estate in Bombay. Sanchit asked rahul to see if he can meet him. Rahul told him that he had spoken to his friend and through him can fix an appointment. And so it was fixed, the meet , between them.

That evening they met , a dinner appointment. Sanchit was expecting to see a middle aged person, he expected the person to be like him. But when he saw a young man walk in and sit in front of him, he was surprised. 'Sanchit Ahluwalia' he said extending his hand. 'Arjun here' he said , shaking his hand firmly. His eyes were so sharp that it made sanchit fear if he was dealing with the right person. 'glad to meet you' he said 'likewise' said arjun not moving his eyes from sanchit's face. It is still there the scar on his face, given by him, that was so long ago, but seeing it again face to face had gotten his blood to boil again. If he had not planned anything different he would have punched him right in the face now. But he did not let his face show it. 'wow Mr. Ahluwalia, finally meeting you, heard a lot about your business ventures, was afraid if I could ever meet you' arjun's sudden change in the stern look made sanchit relax a little. Phew this is just a kid wanting to learn and seek from him he felt proud of himself and gave a know it all look. That is how arjun made sanchit to underestimate him. The more he thinks he has the upper hand the more quickly he will fall in his trap. They continued to talk what sanchit could offer and what arjun could. It was still in initial stages so they were taking it easy. 'wow that is a big scar' arjun said suddenly looking at sanchit's face, near the cheeks and ear coming down to the chin. 'ah this, I don't even remember how I got it, has been there since long' sanchit said with a careless tone. Oh I can remind you. that too with action again arjun's fists were clenched, while eyes still managed to give you are great look. When they were done, Mr. Ahluwalia insisted on paying the bill, arjun did not refuse, ofcourse you are going to pay not just for dinner . 'nice meeting you' will let your secretary know when we can meet again sanchit said , 'ah no not my secretary , I do a lot of business but still like to handle important things on my own, so call my direct line, big people like you should not be kept waiting' 'ofcourse ofcourse' sanchit had started to bloat

'hope everything works out for us' he said and added 'arjun, I can call you that right?' 'sure you can, you are older to me and I respect elders' 'look arjun , in business we have to lose something to gain something' 'doesn't that apply to life aswell?' 'yes yes it does, but now that we are talking business , we need to focus on making money right, so sometimes we lose our ethics and have to do things we don't want to' 'tell me more' said arjun. 'like we may have to bribe and get sanctions , to get our tenders passed etc' 'oh that stuff, yeah ofcourse, I have some people who can do that too, just let us get started and we can do whatever it takes to get the deal going' 'wow you are a quick learner, and hey there is nothing wrong in it right , after all this is business and everything is fair in business' 'yes it is , everything is fair in war , even if it has to be in pretext of business' arjun said deeply looking sharply again at sanchit. Sanchit who was oblivious of the threat in his voice, and could not see the exact meaning of that sentence, was happy that he found someone who can help him get out of the sink hole 'I like your attitude' he told him, 'me too, infact I heard a lot about ahluwalia's , would like to meet you all once'. 'sure sure why not, I treat my business partners as family' 'well that is nice to hear, will look forward to that' 'infact we are celebrating my wife's birthday this Saturday, why don't you come' 'me? Oh no no, we just met and ..' 'no no , you have to join us, it is for close friends and business partners and now that we are almost singing a deal aren't you also my business partner, so you have to come' 'if you insist' arjun said . He was ready to take the leap.
Arohi was back to being normal, out of those haunting eyes, she was busy preparing for the party, it was her responsibility always, and she enjoyed doing it. Her sister would never help, her sister in law lately was always in grumpy mood, and the servants would do one thing if she said one. plus she felt good when she did something for others. She made her own guest list, all of them from their immediate friend's circle, her brother would not say anything but she knew he will not like if she included her college friends in these purely business oriented parties. may be that is why her simi was angry , that he wants to use even her birthday party for his business. when will her brother change and see the sensitive side of their married life. sigh even simi doesnt compromise sometimes. Her brother came home early and that too not so drunk, he was looking a bit relaxed, looks like something good happened at his work today. 'arohi' he called out to her, 'ji bhaiyya' 'one more addition to the list' 'who?' 'Arjun Singhania' 'okay' she said writing down on her list, 'make it the best party ever' he said, 'I always do' 'ofcourse you do, you are the little angel and my saviour' he said lovingly. that much soft words were enough for her, she ran with double excitement upstairs. only after a while she remembered she had heard that name before, yes she did, yday evening, that guy who entered had loudly said 'the great arjun', is it the same guy, she hope not, she couldnot possibly face those eyes again at the same time she wished it was the same guy.
Edited by kavyasam - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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kavya, thanks for the update
oh i pity aru -
she is going to be fooled
she is going to become the prey to arjun's hatred towards sanchit
pls continue kavya - we are just in part 2 but already i have developed a passion for this ff and cant wait for the next chapter
Edited by Arjuhisis - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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me second for a change (Varsha where are you)

Loved the character of the calculative Arjun. Really love the revenge theme - its awesome. But please don't make it mushy too soon. Want to see Arjun go right down to the marriage and beyond in his quest for revenge.😃😃😃
Edited by punam2712 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wo em gee 😲

A W E S O M E !!
Superb Di !

I loved it.
Arjun Singhania. Haila, The Arrogant Young Man huh ?? 😍
Whats it that makes him so fierce towards Aluwahlia;s ??
Poor Arohi 😲

Update asap Dee 😊
Edited by -Awantika- - 14 years ago
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that was really awesome diii. plz continue!
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Originally posted by: punam2712

me second for a change (Varsha where are you)


Loved the character of the calculative Arjun. Really love the revenge theme - its awesome. But please don't make it mushy too soon. Want to see Arjun go right down to the marriage and beyond in his quest for revenge.😃😃😃


here i am!! late.ain't i??
had to catch up with some sleep 😉

umm...di,what makes arjun so,calculative about life??
we would love to know the past!
will arjun have to break the heart of such an innocent angel??
sanchit makes me sick 🤢
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

first

kavya, thanks for the update
oh i pity aru -
she is going to be fooled
she is going to become the prey to arjun's hatred towards sanchit
pls continue kavya - we are just in part 2 but already i have developed a passion for this ff and cant wait for the next chapter

me too loved writing it priya. she will be fooled big time. :(.

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