'HUMKO SIRF TUm SE PYAR HAI'(AR-updt 10/3/13 on34) - Page 13

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Lovely FF.. Loved AR's relationship and the bond between Ridz and Ammy's family.. So Armaan started realizing his love for Riddhima.. DO UPDATE SOON.. 😊
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Lovely FF.. Loved AR's relationship and the bond between Ridz and Ammy's family.. So Armaan started realizing his love for Riddhima.. DO UPDATE SOON.. 😊

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HUMKO SIRF TUMSE PYAR HAI...
PART-5

HE woke up with a jerk. Yes it was a dream, but that dream showed him the realty of his emotion. He was swatting and panting badly. He was still on his bed. Even it was a dream but the pain of losing her was visible in the tears which he had. He stood up and ran towards ridzs room.

Some habits can't be changed so he entered her room by the balcony window. He came in and saw his angel sleeping peacefully. Moon light was dancing on her face as it feeling proud to be able to touch her.

Tears in his eyes were shining like small diamonds, due which she was not clearly visible to him. He closed his eyes and let those tears fall. When he opened his eyes saw ridzs , who was smiling in her dreams, a smile also came on his face seeing her smiling.

He sat beside her, saw her with all the love and pain in him that time.

Ar- u know basket jab mujhye laga ki maine tumhye kho diya , I felt like (some more tears came out of his eyes) aisa laga jaise kisi ne mere sine se mera dil ,mere sine se nikal kar jameen par patak diya ho.

He took a long breath , bent a little and kissed riddhimas forhead.

Riddhima woke up with a jerk as she felt his warm tear on her cheek.

Seeing armaan she was hell shocked and worried too.

Ri- lav aap yaha kya hua. (she sat on her bed and put her palm on his cheek)

Armaan said nothing just hugged her so tightly that she was out of her breath.

Now ridzs was more worried.

She knows that this is not the right time for asking something, right now she just need to clam down him. So she started creasing his back.

Ri- lav koi problem hai plz tell me.

She was still in his ambience, he was holding her so tight and nuzzling his head in her hairs.

Ri- lav don't worry sab thik who jayega.

Armaan broke the huge and saw her.

Ar- basket tum kabhi mujhye chor ke mat jana. (he said that like a cute kid, looking so innocent)

Ri- (a smile came on her face seeing him like this) awww hum apko chor ke kabhi nahi jayege kahi nahi jayege. Aur waise bhi kya aap hume khud se dur jane dege.

Armaan nodded his head in no like a cute baby and now he had a chotu smile on his face also.

Riddhima huge him with a assurance that no one can apart them.

Ri- ok ab bahut raat ho gayi hai , ab apko so jana chahiye.

Armaan saw riddhima and this time with his naughty smile and placed his head in her lap. He stretched his body and made him self comfortable on the bed.

Ri- what aap humri god mai sar rakh kar humre room mai soyge.

Ar- aur nahi to kya agar mai chala gaya aur tumhe koi le gaya to. I can't take that risk (saying this he put one of her hand and place it in his hairs and signed her to ruffle them)

Riddhima was simling at his childish behavior.

She knows its impossible to win from him. So she does what he said.

Ri- aap bahut jiddi hai.

Ar- ha toh u have any problem. Now let me sleep.

Ri- ok ok. (as she knows there is no way to win from him)

She rested her back on the bed post. She was creasing his hairs and now he was in deep sleep. But with a cute dimpled smile on his face.

After some time she also slept.

In early morning as armaan told 6 bejtye nahi hai ki utha kar baith jati hai.

She woke up and 1st she realized her condition and then saw armaan who sleeping like a cut baby who still in her lap. She smiled and put his head on the cushion very softly and went to the wash room.

In sleep armaan covered himself fully with the duvet.

While this aditya entered riddhima's room.

Ad- arye ye abi tak so rahi hai. Is she fine?

He started coming towards riddhima's bed.

Just then riddhima got out of the wash room and she saw aditya.

Ri- omg paa agar paa ne lav ko yaha dekh liya toh. (horrified expression)

Aditya was just about to open the duvet, ridzs scream.

Ri- paa.

Adiya turned

Ri- paa (pause) aap yaha (pause) itni subah, kya hua (she had horrified expressions)

She took so many pause as she trying to find any idea .

Ad- tum yaha ho toh ye kaun so raha hai..

Now she was hell scared.

Ri-(mar gaye) paa ye wo ye wo anji di hai haa.

Ad- kya anji wo yaha kya kar rahi hai.

Ri- wo party mai bahut late ho gaya tha na toh maine di ko rook liya aur wo mere room me hi soo gayi.

Ad- ohh toh tum itna ghabra kyu rahi ho, mai to bas tumhe milne aya tha.

Waise tumhe nahi lagta ki anjali achanak se moti ho gayi hai.

Ri- (shocked and scared expression in one time) haiii pata nahi sayad.

Ad- achha mai chalta hu.

Ri-(relived) yaaa

Aditya found smthing fishy but didn't bothered much and leaved.

Ri- thank god baach gaye wrna aaj hum paa se kya kahtye.

And she moved to armaan who was sleeping peacefully in the duvet. As she just came out of the shower and didn't got the time to dry her hairs. So water drops were traveling her body coming from her wet hairs.

She pulled the duvet.

RI- lav uthiye kahi paa wapas aa gaye toh.

He was in a deep sleep with a huge smile on his face, which got disturbed by water drops vic fall on his face.

Ar- oye teri ye barish kaha se suru ho gayi.(and he opened his eyes a bit.)

He got the most beautiful sight of his life. Riddhima was sitting next to him and was bending her head a little that her face was over his face and the drops from her hairs were falling on his face.

He was staring at her, her green almond eyes in which any one can live his life, her pink cheeks on which water drops were traveling for the 1st time he was jealous with those water drops which can touch her.

Her rosy luscious lips were creating an unknown desire in his heart, he was busy in admiring her when this act of his got disturbed by her as she shacked him.

Ri- lav uthiye isse pahle ki koi apko dekh le yaha.

He pulled her and turned himself, and now he was on the top of her.

Ar- dekh liya toh, kya kisi ne isse mujhye dekha nahi hai aaj tak. Aur agar paa ne mujhye dekh bhi liya toh kya ho jaye ga. Maine kaun sa robbery ki hai yaha.

She hit his head by her hand.

ri- lav u areee na stupid ho aap.

Ar- arye wo kyo.

Ri- rahne do aap nahi samjhege.

Ar- okkk. Pata nahi u girls naaa

Ri- ok ab hatiye mere upper se.

Ar- naaa

And he huged her.

Ar- noo mujhye tumhare paas rahna hai.

She was confused by his behavior.

Ri- kyo aaj koi aur nahi mila kya tang karne ke liye.

Ar ' no I just want u. (making baby faces)

He started sliding his fingers over the water drops on her face to neck. She finches by his touch. His cold fingers were generating electricity in her body, and her heart started jumping inside the shield of her body. He was writing his name by his fingers on her, and was really happy with the way her body respond to his touch. Her breathing were getting heavier, she was trying to speak but that was really hard for her, her lips were moving but words were not coming out. he was smiling at her, he moved little forward and kissed on her right cheek. She closed her eyes and her mouth left open in shock. He moved her left cheek and kissed it also .She was shivering now, she clenches his shirt by her fist, her body was going numb.

Just then her ear alarmed as she heard a voice which got her to the real world.

Voice- ridzi open the door yaar, I am waiting.

Ri- anji di omg humne paa se bola ki wo, oo no' agar paa ne dekh liya toh'.

Mar gaye .

She pushed armaan and got out from his control. Now armaan was shocked by her behavior.

Ri- lav aap jaldi se jaiye dee aa rahi hai kahi paa ko mil gayi toh musibat ho jaye gi.

Ar- what musibat.

Ri- lav agar aap 2 minutes me yaha se nahi gaye toh I will not talk to u.

Ar- ok ok dhamki dena band karo.

And he started moving toward the door.

Ri- arye aap kaha jar rahe ho.

Ar- basket plz decide jana hai ya nahi.

Ri- jaise aye thye waise hi jaiye.

Ar- kyooo

Ri- gooo

Than she ran towards the door and opened it.

Ri- dee paa se toh nahi mili hai na.

An- nahi kyo milna hai kya.

Ri- no no nooo, wo humne toh aise hi pucha tha.

An- tu itna shiver kyo kar rahi hai, kuch hua hai kya'

And she got lost in the moment ago. She confused and shocked not only by armaan's behavior but by her reaction also.

Ri- haa, wo kuch nahi hum change kar ke aatye hai.

And she went to the washroom.

In the washroom she was standing in front of mirror.

Ri- o god, kanha ji ye lav ko kya ho gaya hai kitna ajeeb behave kar rahe hai.and what was that oh god pata nahi ye kya ho raha hai.

on the other side armaan was on the cloud nine, he was so happy and in this happiness the world seems more beautiful to him. The air was sounding musical to him, plants were dancing with him.

Dil ka ye kya raj hai''

Jaane kya kar gaye
Jaise andhero mein tum chandani bhar gaye..x2
Kare chaand taaron ko mashoor itna kyun
Kambakht inse bhi khoobsoorat hai tu
I Love you tu ru ru
yeah...
I love you
he was busy dancing like a kid who got factory of his favorite chocolate.

(now there will be two parller scenes )

In Singhaniya mention.

Mu- ridji kaha thi tu I was waiting for u na. ye dress try kar ke dikha na.and hi anji

An- hi muski, pata nahi isse kya ho gaya hai, lagta hai dimag mai chemical locha ho gaya hai.

And they hi fived with each other, ridzi glared at this.

Mu- waha aaj lagta hai subka mental balance hill gaya hai tabhi toh bhai corridor mai maniacs ki tarah nach raha hai.

Ri- kyaaa

An- ab tujhye kya hua.

Ri- hume kya hoga, aaa hum dekhtye lav kya kar rahe hai.

Where as armaan armaan was busy in his dancing. Actually he was khusi mai thora pagla gaya types. He was dancing bending his hand like she is dancing with him.

tu ru ru yeah yeah
I love you hoo ooo..

Din bhar kare baatein hum
Phir bhi lage baatein adhoori aajkal
Mann ki dehleezon pe koi aaye na
Bas tum zaroori aajkal
Abhr main hoon,tu aasmaan hai
Paas hai tu, par kahaan hai
Zidd meri tu nahi, meri aadat hai tu
I love you... I Love you tu ru ru


yeah...

he saw her coming towards him. Wind turned little cold, her hairs and rupatta was floating with air and she was smiling seeing him.

For a moment he lost in her beauty and then he moved towards her and sat on his knees and forwared his hand asking her for dance.

She smiled and accepted his hand.

He placed his one hand on her tiny waist and other interviewed with her one hand. (plz imagin some ballroom dance steps for them)

Kabh kabhi main khud se hoon ye poochta
main tere kadil bhi hoon kya
itna to mujhe hai maaloom
milke tujhe behtar main insaan ban gaya
thoda thoda tujse seekha
pyaar karne ka tareeka
Dil ke khuda ki muj pe naayet hai tu
I Love you tu ru ru
yeah...
I love you

Seeing her so close to himself his heart was going out of control, some wild thoughts started taking birth in his mind.

Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai
Jaane kya kar gaye
Jaise andhero mein tum chandani bhar gaye
Kare chaand taaron ko mashoor itna kyun
Kambakht inse bhi khoobsoorat hai tu
I Love you oo..
I Love you oo..

I Love you
yeah
I love you
I love you
I love you
he started approaching her. He saw her smiling and blushing at the same time this was making him more crazy.

But all of sudden she started screaming. he was so confused by her behavior.

He was seeing her with shock expressions.

Just then he heard a voice.

Voice- aap dono kya kar rahe hai aur ye chilla kyu raha hai.

Armaan turned towared the voice and got horrified as he saw riddhmia there.

Ar- agar ye yaha hai toh'

And her tuned, now its his turn to scream.

Ar- aaa atul tum , tu yaha kya kar raha hai.

At- mai' abet tu kya karne ja raha tha.

Ri- aap dono chila kyu rahe ho.

At- arye ridzi pata hai ye kya kar raha tha.

Ri- kyaaa

Armaan put his palm on atul's mouth.

Ar- abe chup ho ja wrna tere choty chotye tukrye karke teri anjali ko gift kar dunga.

At- nahi nahi armaan mere bhai aisa mat karna tumhe toh pata hai na meri anji ko blood se kitna dar lagta hai.

Ar- sale ko anjali ke liye dar lag raha hai apne liye nahi.

Mu- ridji tu yaha kya kar rahi hai chal na .

Ri- yaa chalo.

And atul also lft the place.

Atul- ( armaan's champ and same as in dmg, he is Fatima bi's son and lived with her in the same house)

Ar- hye bhagwan aaj toh mai bach gaya wrna agar maine champ ko kiss kar liya hota toh.

Yakkk chiii

Just then rahul enters.

Ra- hye ammy tune aisa kyu kiya.

Ar- maine kuch nahi kya wo champ naaa(fumbling with his words)

Tu jaisa samjh raha hai wais a kuch nahi hai.

Ra- accha toh tune fight ke liye ha nahi kiya toh kyat u uss idiot deny ke sath party karne jar aha hai.

ar- fewww so u r talking about that, maine toh soch ki tune sab dekh liya.

Ra- kya dekh liya maine.

Ar- abe sale rahool jyada cid bane ki jaroorat nahi hai, uss idiot ne mujhye challenge kiya tha aur tujhye pata hai mai singhaniya hu aur hum log na apne kahi hui baat se pichye hatye hai na hi kisi ke challenge se.

Ra- thik hai mai abi ridzi ko bata deta hu phir dekhta hu kaun maidan se bhagta hai.

Ar- oye anpi behan ke naam ki dhamki mat de, wrna mai punching bag ki jagah tera face use karuga waise behan se yaad aaya tut oh mera hone wala sala hai na.

Ra- kyaa kaya bola tune abhi

Ar- kuch nahi yaar mai toh keh raha tha tu achnak se bahut beautiful lagne laga hai. (And hugged him)

Ra- jyada smart mat ban jab ridji ko pata chlega tab ke bare mai soch.

And he left the place.

Ar- arye yaar ajeeb museebat hai, ab mai kya karu maine toh nahi kaha than a uss deny se ki mujhye challenge kare, mujhye basket se baat chupne padegi'. Par kaise. Ooh god help me. Aaj kal wise bhi mera dimag thora kharab ho gaya hai, maine atul ko kiss karne ki kishish ki chiii

I have to contol my self warna pata nahi mai kis kis ko basket samajh kar kiss kar baithuga. Yakkk

Just then riddhima came in. she was wearing a very pretty red churidar suit (sauce wala red mind it) looking really beautiful.

Ri- lav ye dress kaisi lag rahi hai. (very happily)

Ar- (ek toh mai aise hi parshan hu upper se ye aise mere samne ghumogi toh mai kya karuga.) mujhye marna chahti ho toh ek baar mai mar do na tarpa tarpa ke kyo marna rahi ho.

(he went from there with his irritated face left riddhima in shock)

Mu- isse kya hua.

Ri- pagal ho gaye hai aur kya (hell irritated voice)

Mu- aab tujye kya hua.

She didn't ans and left the place.

Armaan's room-

Ar- ohh god mai kya karu , kabhi khushi se nach raha hu to kabhi kisi pe chila raha hu, isska toh bas ek hi rasta hai mujhye basket se baat kari padegi.

She was sitting under the rajnigandh tree which was her favorite place.

RI- ye lav ko ho kya gaya hai, hum mantye hai thora bahut flert toh wo humse pahle bhi kartye thye but,

Kal se toh haad hi ho gayi. And hume kya ho gaya tha jo humne feel kiya wo kyat ha. Omg kanha ji plz help me aap hi batoo na lav ye kyu kar rahe hai.

Just then she felt a hot breath near her ear which were tickling her so she just flinched.

And some words escaped from her mouth.

Ri- laaav

Ar- kyoki tumhari in ankho ne use deewana bana diya hai.

She turned her face and was staring him with confused expressions.

Ar- basket mere sath bahar chalogi.

She was so confused that in daze she spoke.

Ri-haaa

Ar oh wow thik hai kal sham ko, and don't bay a dress for u I will get it ok.

And ab mai jata hu mujhye kuch preparations karni hai.

She was sitting there hell shocked and confused.

Ri- kahi ye lav ka koi naya plan toh nahi hai hume tang karne ka.

Fewww see kitni mehnat karni parti hai and u ppl doesn't care

Do lines bhi nahi likh sakte.

Mai kaun sa realty show walo ki tarah votes mag rahi hu just asking for two lines yaar.

Do tell me liked it or not.

Precape-

Edited by ishka_virani - 14 years ago
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hey ish...

thank you.. for pming me...

i so loved this part...

aww.. armaan is so cute...

hehhe.. bechara atul humesha galat time pe galat jagha pe phaunch jata hai...🤣 and rahul to uska saala banne wala hai... par hume ye bhi nahi bhulna chahiye.. ki armaan bhi uska saala banne waala hai...

n the bedroom moment was so romantic... ridz doesnt know her feelings... still was responding to ammy's touch... loved that... and oh.. ammy is such a flirt... usnne ek do kisses to aise hi steal kar li... shukar ha atul chila pada nahi to us bechare ko bhi nahi chodta ... hehehe...

and whats up with aditya.. waise to kabhie room mei nahi aaya.. lekin aaj jab armaan tha room mei to aa gaya... mujhe to lagta hai saare daddy's ne siren laga rakha hota hai... jab bhi ladka ladki ke kamre mei hota hai siren baj jaata hai... n dad tapak jaate hai room mei...n hope its not related to ridz rishta... or something like that too... ki pata chala ridz ki shaadi tay ho gayi hai to aditya ridz ke sote hue dekhne aaya tha bed pe... u know senti types...

and sorry for late comment ... aaj mai pura tym ghar pe nahi thi... aaj maine ma kasam... sirf tera update pada hai... mai to bas sone jjaa rahi thi...and neend aa rahi hai tab bhi longest comment daala hai... i think...

now my update request for today... as i love ur ajab prem the most.. so toda i'll request an update for that...

and as aaj kal mai bhaut busy rheti hu... so agal kal ki update request nahi de paayi.. so update ur 3rd ff too... sorry uska naam bhul gayi.. but sachi mei story puri yaad hai...

and ab mai s ff ko bhi kyu chodu... bechaari bura maan gayi to... so cont. this oone too ... and that to very soon

loads and loads of love...

actually make it trucks of love...(😉)

aditi

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and also congrats u became a senior member...

sachi kahu.. mai itna dhyaan nahi rakhti but upar ka comment pada tha... so thought of wishinng you...:)

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