NewFF(Maneet) Mere humsafar Thrd 2 Upd pt26 pg 141 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

sorry was busy with family .. so late comment ...

 
 
Thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
 
Thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
 
Thanks a ton for your constant encouragement and support.
 
I was happy to see that majority of u like Maan of mere humsafar and yes many of u r right that there is a past behind this behaviour of Maan I will reveal it at the right moment... I promise that each one of u would enjoy the story as it progresses
 
Very soon u may get a song sequence on Maneet till then enjoy reading
 
Ye lo the most important part HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY to each one of u
 
love- Piya
 
PART 18
 
Geet goes back to the outhouse
 
Annie: Geet...Geet
 
Geet does not respond she simply leaves the place
 
Maan also comes out and goes to his room
 
Dev notices that something is wrong with Maan
 
Dadima is waiting for everyone
 
Dadi: Dev aap aa gaye...Annie kaha hai? (Ok so finally u r here Dev...where is Annie?)
 
Annie also arrives
 
Dadi: lijiye Annie bhi aa gayi
 
Dadi notices that Annie and Dev are lost somewhere
 
Dadi: Bete aap dono ko kya ho gaya hai aap pareshan lag rahe hai (What happened u both look worried)
 
Dev: Dadi maine abhi Bro ko dekha wo kafi gusse mein nazar aa rahe the(It seems that Bro is in a very bad mood today)
 
Annie: Exactly, maine bhi abhi geet ko aawaz di magar wo bhi bade hi gusse se chali gayi (Same is the case with geet)
 
Dadi: Annie bete aapne geet ko kaha dekha (Exactly where did u see Geet?)
 
Annie: Dadi maine geet ko terrace se nikalthe hue dekha (Near the terrace)
 
Dev: Bro bhi tho wahi the...
 
Dadi: Iska matlab hai unn dono k beech phir se ladai ho gayi (This means that a fight has occured between the two of them)
 
Annie: Dadi toh ab hum kya kare? (now what should we do?)
 
Dadi: Hum kuch nahi karenge Annie jhada unhone kiya hai issliye sulah bhi wahi karenge ..wo koi chothe bachhe nahi jo humhe unke maamle mein taang adana pade (We r not going to do anything...the problem is between the two of them and they r matured enough to resolve it at their own level)
 
Dev: Ji Dadi magar hum sab ne milkar faisla kiya tha na k hum Bro aur Geet ko paas lane mein madat karenge
 
Dadi: Ji bete magar hum unki madat tabhi karenge jab unhe humari zaroorat hogi...koi bhi rishta zabran nahi banaya jaa saktha ...rishte ki shuruwat unhi ko karni hogi uss rishte ko anjaam tak hum pauchaayenge (Dev we would only help them when they really require it...we can't force them to get into a relationship)
 
Dadi: Aap dono Maan aur Geet k saamne iss baat ka zikr hargis nahi karenge samjhe aap (None of u would discuss this matter in front of Maan n Geet)
 
Dev: Ji Dadi
 
Dadi: Chaliye ab nashtha kijiye ( Let's have breakfast)
 
Outhouse
 
Geet is trying to calm down herself
 
She removes her diary and starts writing
 
" Aaj jo kuch bhi hua ussmein kya sirf unki galti thi...
Shayad nahi...main bhi utni hi galat thi jitna k woh...
Haan yahi sach hai...wo lamha hi kuch aisa tha jisme k hum dono kamzoor ho gaye...
 
Main bhi toh unki taraf kheechi chali jaa rahi thi...
Unn kuch lamho mein maine unka ek naya roop dekha
 
Najane kyun mujhe unki aakhon mein ek narmi nazar aayi...
Aisa laga k woh jaise dikhthe hai waise wo hai nahi
Unke sakth shareer ke peeche ek maasoom sa dil hai jo k logo k dard ko samajtha hai aur mehsoos bhi kartha hai
 
Magar uske baad unhone jo kuch bhi mujhe kaha wo koi bhi ladki seh nahi sakthi thi
Gusse mein aakar maine unhe karara jawab toh de diya
magar ab aisa lag raha hai k unke iss bartaav k peeche zaroor koi badi wajah hai
 
Hum dono k beech ladayiyaan toh hoti rehti hai magar har baar inn ladayiyon mein maine ek baat mehsoos ki hai k
wo ladkiyon se aur kisi bhi tarah k rishte se nafrat karte hai
 
Unka gussa unki kamzoori ko chupane ka ek zariya hai
haan..kamzori aur wo ye hai k wo apne aap ko iss duniya k har ek jazbaat se dur rakhna chahte hai..najane kyun?
 
haan aur aaj bhi wahi hua...apne gusse mein uss waqt main iss baat ko samaj nahi payi k unhone jo kuch bhi kaha woh jaanbujkar kaha
 
Agar wo itne bure hothe tho wo mera itna khayal nahi rakthe...Dadi aur Annie k naa hone k bawajood bhi unhone mera dhyan rakha...
 
Wo itne bure nahi hai...agar mujhe unhe badalna hai toh gusse se nahi balki shant dimag se kaam lena hoga
 
Mujhe unhe yakeen dilana hoga k zindagi mein rishto ki kya importance hai
 
 
Babaji meri madat karna...aap hi ke wajah se main aaj ye samaj paayi hoon k unke rawaiye k peeche zaroor koi wajah hai
 
Wo bure insaan nahi hai...
 
Geet stops writing and gets ready to leave for work
 
Meanwhile,
 
Maan enters his room
 
Maan is feeling guilty
 
He removes a photograph and looks at it angrily
 
Maan: Aaj jo kuch bhi hua uski zimedaar sirf ye aurat hai...isi ke wajah se mujhe auratjaat k naam se hi nafrat ho gayi hai...saare rishto se mera bharosa utt gaya hai... maine aaj jo kuch bhi kaha wo sach toh kaha magar...
 
He stops for a while
 
Maan: Magar maine Geet par ye kaisa ilzaam laga diya... main Geet k baare mein aisa soch bhi kaise saktha hoon...
 
Maan: Humare beech unn kuch lamho mein jo kuch bhi hua usmein meri bhi toh galti thi...mujhe geet se aisi baate nahi karni chahiye thi...
 
Maan: Usne meri baato ka jo jawab diya wo sahi tha...magar maine geet k baare mein aisa socha bi kaise...main bhale hi usse pasand nahi karta magar ye baat bhi sach hai k woh alag hai...wo kabhi kisi galat baat ka saath nahi dethi
 
Maan throws the photograph
 
Maan: Maine Geet ka dil dhukhaya hai mujhe usse maafi maangni chahiye... nahi main MSK hoon main kisise maafi nahi maang saktha
 
Maan once again suppresses his feelings
 
He was about to leave his room but then before going out he goes and stands near the window
 
Geet is ready to leave for work
 
She is looking very beautiful
 
Maan is simply admiring her
 
Maan: Kaash main wo saare lafz wapas le saktha...jinki wajah se aaj tumhe takleef pauchi...
 
PRECAP: Maan: "Geet main iss project mein koi bhi galti nahi chahtha iss liye tum kuch bhi karo kal subah tak mujhe iss project k saare details ready chahiye bale hi iske liye tumhe raat bhar office mein kaam hi kyun na karna pade"
 
My Friend khushi username (knirwal) insisted me to write this note in the next update. Guys there is a FF contest going on if at all any one of u feel that my FF i.e. DIL MIL GAYE and MERE HUMSAFAR is worth nominating then kindly nominate and vote for my FF.
 
Thank you
 
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Love-Piya
 
 Part 19: Page 34
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update... their self-thought parts are really awesome...
waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

happy frndship's day ...
Posted: 12 years ago
nice one
do contnue
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
i loved this one Piya...it was awesome as usual...n all that geet wrote in her diary...that part was damn good...n also geet realising that maan is not that bad of a person...i guess mayB u were right...very soon i will start loving this maan as well...haha...continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...will be waiting for the song sequence...hope it will soon come...