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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys, thnks aloot for ur encouragement, and like this kind of confession….the ff has been extended from 15 chapters to a mayb around 20, as requested by many of u , not to finish it soo soon, specially faru..so bad new, need to tolerate it more..

Chapter: 14

At bureo

Nupur: haan tu kal haumain ek baat pata chli

Samrat: kya…humain bhi batao

He look teasingly at Mayank who was busy in going through file with a frown

Nupur: ek murder side se jo do humain clues mil woh ek hi hain

Mayank: matlab

Nupur: one is the ring tht was given to sameers fianc on her engagement……

Benji: n other is the bracelet tht was given by Rajveer to his ex finace…..

Mayank: means…..they r connected

Samrat: yes thy r …the killer wants to tell us sumthng

Benji: wht tht he is killing all man who left..he was laughing

Mayank: who left there fiancs…..he loked at them with shock

Nupur: tht is soo right

Benji: wht else similarity ….look for it yaar

Samrat: me n mayank are looking at forensic way u n Nupur look the other way

Mayank: but..

Benji: koi problem hai

Maaynk: ha nhi woh…tu forensic k baray mein zayada janta hai aur Nupur sameer k baray mein tu …

Samrat: tu benji aur tu sath hoja

He was doing on purpose he wants him to ask Nupur publicly

Mayank: nhi

Nupur: tumhain exactly chaiy kiya

Mayank: tum….

Evry1 looked at him surprise, Nupur was furious, samart was patimg himself…n benji was trying to understand evrythng

Mayank: I mean tum sameer k personal life aur rajveer k case k bary mein kafi achy se janti ho n u have solve serial killing previously to ..tu I was

Samrat: bus bus bus…..itni explanation kafi hai …..oki we r moving at forensic lab….have fun

Nupur glared at him angrily

Mayank: wht

Nupur: tum sab k samany kiya proof kera na cha rahy thy

Mayank: mein ny kiya kaha…hmm…aur kiya proof kerlo ga mein

Nupur: kam per concentrate keray

Mayank: muskil hai but I'll try…he said mischievously

Combine bth the cases from strt

Nupur: oki

Mayank time: 7 am 2pm

Death neck posion

Cocmom bth quick deaths

Bth previously broken

Mayank: how long it has been the broke

Nupur: meray aur sameer ko tu 7 days hoay thy

Mayank: again 7….he looked at the board again n again …by the time nupr was calling rajvers fianc to get the time of engagement broken

Nupur: almost 2months she is saying..

Mayank: Nupur get the exact date …..he told his as if he was shock….get it nupur….OMG..pls

Just look at the figure….

Nupur: wht

Time is 7 thn 14……this is in series

Mayank ur right…..

Nupur: again the engagement broken day 7th….n the other is 49th….divisble by

Mayank: 7….nupur samer n rajveer have in common wht

Nupur: bth r rich, a bit spoil brat..

He turned to her..n put his hand on his waist

Mayank: u were getting married to spoil brat aur yaha ek sharif insaan per tum doubt kerti hoo…had hai…

Nupur: mayank case per conc kero ..…pause….n nthing..no business link nthing

Mayank: the bth grils u n the rajveer fianc wht u have common..aprt from u bth have no brains

Nupur: u doubt on my brain Mayank

Mayank: no actually I doubt on ur heart….haa…wasy ek cheez aur common hai woh chora zayada cheese hojay ga..he ws looking from top to botton referring to her looks

Nupur" islyan mjhy yeah work place romance pasand nhi

Mayank: dekho mein ek shraref insane hoo…romance only after marriage

Nupur: mein koi shadi wadi nhi ker rahi abhi

Mayank: abhi kaun ka raha hai 2 3 wks k time day do ga na

Nupur: no way nt ..nt before 1 year

He looked at her with smrik n strt taping his finger on table..n she hites her head inside ….

Nupur: I didn't mean ttht

Mayank: wht..tumhar yeah plan hai…tu pehly batana tha na..im fine with it….he was suppressing his snile, looking ta her expression wch were…finding answer to his rapid fire…..

Nupur: shut up Mayank conc

Mayank: oki dear…han tu tum dono mein kiya common hai

Nupur: kuch bhi nhi

Mayank: kuch tu Nupur pls try n find whts common between u n tht girl…

Nupur let me chk her profile…see

She was going to the file again and agin..while he was checking and assembling the thinks agin properly pointing out

OMG Mayank….

Mayank: arm se nuppur…why r u screaming

Nupur: yeah tu ..same skool….

Mayank: wht…u both r from same skool n u didn't knw her

Nupur: I don't remember her…she left t 5 grade so how I can

Mayank: ahh..oh…ok …….compile evrythng

Nupur : oki but with wht can be his ….

Mayank: with next whn is planned

Time 7 am 14 21(9 pm)

Circle square triangle( angular series)

Days 7 49 6.6years(2401 days)

Fianc rich, brat, famous

Girls from same skool

Mayank: do u know ur princi right now

Nupur: han I know ….

Mayank: Nupur we need to contact all girls at ur class….we need to locate a girl nearer to this profile….whoes engagement has broke 6 to 7 years ago

Nupur: ho sakta hai ab tak tu us ki shadi bhi hochuki hogi aur

Mayank: six years back means almost at age of 21…..tht young kuch yaad hai kisi ki engagement hoi thi

Nupur: yaar meray gp mein tu kis k BF nhi hai tu shadi tu rehny hi do

Mayank: us k mjhy buhat achy se andaza hai..looking at u..she glared n he chuklled…acha socho…bulky strt talking with thm..call ur princi we need the details …ASAP

Nupur: Mayank but the weapon

Samrat: got it..he enter with a scream running to mayanks cabing

Mayank: arm se kiya hoagay

Benji: we got the weapon….

Mayank: kya

Benji: woh kiya hai jo kabhi jo rock solid hai aur hath mein aay tu pani

Nupur: ice…she said irritated

Mayank/Nupur: ICE…wht….shocked and surprised….

Samrat: yes ice …a rod of ice is as sharp as anything in this world

Nupur: n thts why we didn't found any traces in blood…cause woh tu melt hogaya …..OMG

Mayank: man….mujhy is murder se mil na hai….wht brains

Nupur: chaloo…mily tu pehly woh…

Mayank: get on ur princi….

Gr8 work Samrat and benji….

Benji: finally we r getting something n this case….gr8…prinic se kyun milna hai

Mayank: kyun k in skool walo nay ..mahila bacho scheme shoro ki hai

Samrat: chukled ..kya

Mayank: ji…woh sab sary porashoo ko marday gi jin jinn y kisi bhi larki ko chora…ya pakra…..

Benji: Mayank…tu kiya bol rahi

Nupur: is k deemgh karab hogaya hai

Mayank: chukled….nupur and rajveer's finace were classmates…..

Benji: kyaaa…..auu tum us k interview lay ker agi aur pata nhi chala

Nupur: yaar tu 15 saal pehly ki shakl yaad hai abhi she has changed a loot …..

Mayank: ok fine…ur principle…un se pehly baat ker …

Nupur: ker rahin hoon :

Mayank; benji k sath baatein tu kahtam nhi horahi tumhari

Nupur: Mayank…stop irritating me ….

Samrat: ek min seize fire

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow fiza awsome update...
i must say kiya brain hai killer ka...ice rod...😲
and the way mayank tease nupur ...😆😆😆
awsome...
wht a brillant calculation...👏👏
loved it yar...
keep it up...🤗
Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
has has ke mera pet dukh raha hey...mayank was amazing... u were getting married to spoil brat aur yaha ek sharif insaan per tum doubt kerti hoo…had hai…🤣


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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely updt
loved mayank teasing nupur
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb update
Mayank became romantic all of a sudden and man!!he was flirting while discussing the case😆
Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesum update👏 loved how mayank was teasing nupur.pyar ne insan ko kya bana diya😆 do cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
fab, amazing. I love this naughty mayank
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Posted: 14 years ago
mind blowing update
luved mayur teasing sessions...soo sweet
ice rod...grt..never give a thought to dis
brilliantly written fiza
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Posted: 14 years ago
fizaaa BY GOD- frship day par tune itna accha gift diya hai yaar
i love u somcuh
today i m damn happy
yeee u gonna extend this f- giveme a tight hug
love u jaan
upate was super cute
bapre mayank + romantic attitude- how it possible???
yaar it was too ggod
and thier investigation- My GOD tujhe tou CID team main hona chaiye
wonderful update iza
fantastic
Do cont. it

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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb Part
Ek bat batao Jintna tunhara demagh chal raha ha is story ma kahi wo murder tum hi to nahi ho hon 😆

I loved Mayur cute scenes
thanks for Pm
cont soon

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