MN OS || Mayank Sharma, My Angel!.. || Pg30 (25/8) - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey Bidz
beautiful OS dear
very nice and romantic

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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
Wao So romantic Yar
I loved it
thanks for Pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Cute and romantic os
thnx for the pm😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
arrey waah...miss romantic...teri OS toh superbbb hain yaaar!!!!!
1st one reminded me of my frnd's experience(who knw whose dat😉)
2nd one- damnnn coool n beautiful...manik n maur are tooo mischievous...
3rd one...kya bolu uske baare mein...i dint knw dat you cud write an OS in such a romantic way..
hats of to you for bringing back the MN chemistry...
kudos to you
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
WOW... All ur one shots are awesome..!
Pls write more n pls do pm me..!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow Bidu
such a romantic OS☺️ ☺️
true mayur magic😍
loved it
plz write more of mayur😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys.. 🤗

Thanks for ur precious response and making me feel great.. Here's an OS on AR.. Mayur fans, totally depends on you if you wanna read or not.. 😳

Regarding this OS, I would say that its dedicated specially to my dearest friend Aashi whose birthday was on 3rd August.. 🥳

Love you Aashi!! Thanks for being my awesome reader and once again, happy belated birthday!!
🤗😃

.. Anniversary Surprise ..

"Aaahh! So damn tired. I need to go home and sleep ASAP. Uff this headache.", Riddhima said squeezing her eyes and touching her forehead. She was sitting on the bench in the locker room in Sanjeevni. "But I have night duty today!", she said and sighed. "Kya karu?", she said in confusion.

Just then her cell phone buzzed. She saw the name flashing on the screen and her lips curved in a huge, beautiful smile. "Yeh Armaan bhi naa, din mein kitni bar phone karta hai.", she said and shook her head.

"Hello.", Riddhima said with a sweet smile. "Riddhima, come home fast.", Armaan said in a serious tone which tensed Riddhima. "What happened Armaan? Itna serious sound kyun kar rahe ho? Sab theek hai naa?", she said worriedly. "Riddhima, kuch mat kaho aur please ghar aajao.", Armaan said almost pleading. "I'm coming.", Riddhima said and hung up the phone. "I hope everything is okay.", she exclaimed in worry and rushed to the parking lot.

***

"Armaan! Armaan!", Riddhima called out to Armaan as she entered the house, Malik Mansion, Armaan's home, oops correction, her home. She walked to the middle of the hall and thought confusedly, "Yeh Armaan kaha chala gaya? Damn I'm getting scared now." Her heart started beating fast. She was too worried.

Suddenly, she felt someone hugging her from behind. She obviously knew who he was. She could feel his warm breath and it was familiar to her since 6 years. "My dear hubby Mr. Armaan Malik, you almost got my heart out. Pata hai ke I was so scared after your call. You were sounding so serious.", Riddhima said in one go pouring out all her tension.

Armaan smiled at Riddhima's concern for him. He brought his lips close to her ears and whispered, "Happy 2nd Anniversary Riddhima." Saying that, he leaned forward and kissed her cheek.

Riddhima was in utter shock. How could she forget their 2nd anniversary? She thought and felt guilty. Turning herself around to look at Armaan's face, she said lowering her eyes with guiltiness in her voice, "I'm sorry Armaan. Main bilkul bhul gayi thi. I even went to hospital before you woke up. Tumse baat bhi nahi huyi. I'm really sorry. Kaam ka pressure itna tha ki yaad nahi raha. Maaf kardo please."

Armaan bowed his head down to look in Riddhima's lowered eyes. Tilting her chin up, he softly kissed her lips and said with a lovely smile, "Riddhima, you don't need to be sorry. I can understand." His lovely smile turned mischievous. He slid his hands around Riddhima's waist and pulling her closer to him, he said authoritatively, "Riddhima Malik, in our relationship, there's no space for thank you or sorry. Got it?" Riddhima shyly smiled and nodded. "Good!", Armaan proudly smiled at Riddhima and left his grip over her waist and continued"Abhi tum fresh ho jaao. Tumhari dress maine bed par rakh diya hai, and I got a surprise for ya on the terrace."

"SURPRISE!", Riddhima said with a delightful smile. "Haan meri jaan! Abhi aur jyada time waste mat karo aur jaldi se fresh hokar aao. Aur haan, thande paani se shower lena, sar dard jaldi chala jayega.", Armaan said to Riddhima caressing her cheeks. "Tumhe kaise pata chala ki mere sar mein dard hai?", Riddhima said dumbfounded. "I know you from six years sweetheart. Tumhe tumse bhi jyada acchi tarah se jaanta hoon, samjhi, Mrs. Malik?", Armaan said pulling her cheeks. Riddhima kissed Armaan's cheek and said with a broad grin on her face, "Samjhi! Okay, so I'm coming in 15 minutes.", saying that, she walked to her, i mean, their bedroom.

***

"Yes! Everything is perfect.", Armaan said smilingly once he was satisfied with the arrangement he did as Riddhima's surprise on their anniversary. Oh well, he was standing on the terrace near a round table on which was a yummy chocolate cake with "Happy 2nd Anniversary" written on it. The terrace which was gorgeously decorated with red and white balloons and rose petals. It was a moonlit night, so the light of the moon enlightened everywhere making the environment extra-romantic.

Armaan paced around on the terrace glancing at the doorway in every second. Too impatient, you know! After a moment, finally, he heard the foot steps. He felt his heart pumping really fast.

As Riddhima stepped on the terrace and Armaan saw her, he felt the moment has frozen. She was looking drop dead stunning wearing the white saari which he bought for her. The sindoor on her forehead, the mangalsutra around her neck and the red bangles around her wrist, that symbolized their eternal relationship, added serenity to her natural beauty. Her long silky hairs played with the breeze. Armaan was truly speechless. "Angel.", that was all could escape from his lips.

***

Riddhima started walking towards Armaan. She was looking all around and contently smiled seeing the decorations. Armaan was still gazed on her. It was like as if he was hypothesized by her mesmerizing charm. Sighing, he said dreamily, "Oye hoye! Mrs. Malik! Kya jaadu kar diya. 6 saal mein bhi i seriously can't get over you, Riddhima." Riddhima chuckled at Armaan's dreamy expression and told him, "You don't even need to get over me." Saying that, she winked at him.

Armaan laughed and sarcastically said, "I'm not allowed to get over you. Akhir joru ki gulaami toh karna hi padhega." Riddhima raised her brows in awe of Armaan and said to hm, "Awww!" Saying that, she pulled him in a tight, warm hug.

Once they broke off their hug, Armaan pouted and said, "Riddhima, abhi chalo, lets cut the cake. My mouth is watering." Riddhima laughed slightly and said, "Chalo."

They stood in front of the table, bended and cut the cake with the knife holding it together. Exchanging happy smiles, they fed cake to each other, sharing a single piece obviously. "Happy Anniversary, Mr. Armaan Malik" "Same to you, Mrs. Riddhima Malik"

They wished each other and hugged. After they pulled themselves back, Armaan pleaded, "Riddhima, please aakhein bandh karo." "Kyun?", Riddhima asked curiously, or better, lets say pretend to be curious, because she probably knew the reason of Armaan telling that to her. "Riddhimmaa! You question too much. Just close your eyes naa. Please!", Armaan almost begged. "Okay!", Riddhima nodded smilingly and closed her eyes. Armaan beamed and went behind Riddhima taking a red jewelry box which he had kept hidden under a cloth on the side-table.

"Aur kitni der Armaan? Kya kar rahe ho?", Riddhima said, annoyed. "Bas ho gaya.", Armaan said and put a stunning diamond necklace over her neck. Riddhima opened her eyes, touched the necklace and feeling it, her lips curved in a beautiful smile. "Wow Armaan! This is so gorgeous. Thank you so m-" Riddhima, who was saying all these in one go, with lots of excitement on her face, stopped when suddenly her dear hubby Armaan gripped her waist tightly and nuzzled his nose in her neck.

She felt a shiver ran down her spine and her cheeks turned crimson red. "Uff! Even after 2 years of marriage, his touch effects me in the same way like before.", thought Riddhima in mind and sighed.

"Riddhima, I loved you, I love you and I promise that I'll always love you till the last breath of my life.", said Armaan sensuously and passionately kissed her neck and shoulders on both sides.

"Armaan," Riddhima closed her eyes and whispered in a breathless voice and felt herself weak to speak and to stand even. She moaned in pleasure as the passion in his kisses increased with the passing time. "I love you too.", she somehow managed to whisper at least.

Armaan made Riddhima turn to him and leaning forward, he sealed her soft lips with his in a passionate kiss, to which Riddhima responded with equal passion and love.

After they move apart, Armaan devotedly kissed Riddhima's neck and shoulders again making Riddhima close her eyes and groan in bliss.

"Riddhima Malik, this is not gonna work like this. Tujhe Armaan ko woh baat bataani padhegi. Agar aise hi chalta raha toh aaj toh pakka nahi bataa paayungi, jab ki tujhe aaj hi bataana padhega kyuki kal toh Armaan ko lekar jaana hai naa waha.", Riddhima thought in mind and sighed realizing at Armaan's intense caress was making her knees feeble. But she really needed to inform him something. "Riddhima, back off and say it.", Riddhima felt as if someone inside her said it so she moved back making Armaan completely shocked.

"Riddhima, tum theek ho naa?", Armaan asked concernedly. "Armaan, i need to tell you something.", said Riddhima sternly. "Kya?", he asked coming a bit closer. Taking a deep sigh, Riddhima closed her eyes and said in a single breath, "Armaan, I'm pregnant. I got my reports just now by mail. Doctor called me half an hour back and said that we need to go to her for my check-up tomorrow."

Armaan raised his brows and his jaw dropped in utter shock. "What?", he could manage to say only that. Riddhima nodded nervously with her eyes still closed. Her heart started beating fast thinking about Armaan's reaction. "He didn't want a child now. Uss ne mujhe bataaya bhi tha. Par aab? Aab kya woh mujhe baby abort karne ke liye kahega? No way! I can't throw away a part of mine like this.", she thought and almost about to cry.

Riddhima opened her eyes in jerk when she realized two strong muscular arms enveloping her delicately. "Riddhima, i don't understand one thing.", Armaan said in disbelief. "Kya?", Riddhima asked stepping apart from his hug. "I don't understand ki tum mujhe itni badi khush khabri aise kyun bol rahi ho jaise tumne koi paap kiya hai? I mean, come on yaar, smile. After all, a new angel is gonna enter in our life.", Armaan said with excitement reflecting on his face once he broke the hug.

"Tum khush ho?", Riddhima asked to be sure. Oh god! Such an unexpected reaction, she thought. "Yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai? Bohot khush hoon. I'm the happiest person in this word right now.", said Armaan, broadly smiled, suddenly he lifted Riddhima in his arms and twirled around.

"Armaan, yeh kya kar rahe ho, chodo mujhe. Aahh niche utaaro.", Riddhima said and Armaan put her on the floor. "Riddhima, meri khushi ka toh thikana hi nahi raha. Oh god! Hum dono ka baccha iss duniya mein aayega. Wow dude! Tu baap ban gaya.", said Armaan in excitement and pride. "Congrats Armaan!" "Congrats to you too Riddhima!"

They congratulated each other and hugged again. Finally their world was completed. Thinking that, they smiled feeling their hearts contented with immense joy and happiness. Armaan kissed Riddhima's forehead, while Riddhima snuggled up to him more, hiding her face in his chest.

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Hey!
A very Cute OS. Everything was just sweet and a treat to read. It was written well. Keep writing ;)
xx Priyanka.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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The os amazing
Should write another one
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
bidzy meri darling,meri jaan,meri pyaari behen haaaye haaaye
superbbb i mean it was damnnn beautiful
loved the enitre presentation
n AR romace😳😳 kya bolo...itz was sooo romantic...
it felt lyk i was watching an AR romantic movie :) :)

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