CRIME SCNE INVESTIGATOR..MJHT LAST CH.pg84...23/8 - Page 39

Fiza, awesome update.

so nice n full of suspense

just loved it.

loved mayank-suhani-benji convo

wow...mayank is changing...he was thinking of nupur

lolz...love their teasing season.

poor mayank...lolz

hmm...so nupur is one of d suspect.

bt i knw she's innocent.

jo dikhta hai...wo hota nhi hai

wonderful update.

i love d chart.

beautiful

hats off to ur writing skill

continue soon

thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

GUYS WILL HOPEFULLY UPDATE TODAY OR TOMMORW...PAKKA

Oki so u all are worried Nupur k kiya hoga…here is a filler for u …I m ready for ur chappals after this update..n ya thnku so much for the overwhelming response im getting at this story ….lov ya.

Chapter:13

Nupur benji im cuming

She reached Mayank cabin n just opend the door…

Nupur: Mayank I got….

She stoped inbetween ..cause as he turned towards her …she knew sumthng is very wrong….his eys was speaking much more thn required…there was sumtihng more thn just pain and dilemma in them…

Nupur: kya hua

Mayank:kiya… kuch nhi…tum bolo kiya hua

Nupur: yeah kiya ker rahy hoo…..yeah mera naam kyun…..hmm…she said mischievously

Mayank: kuch nhi..bs asy hi tum bolo na kya bol rahi ho…he was trying hard nt let her look to the board

Nupur: htho mjhy dekhna hai ……

She looked at the bored and guessed why he was hiding from her ……she looked at him…with a wicked smile and than back to board

Nupur: oh mine…..By god…yaha tu pora crime scene set hai janb…aur tum mjhy se yeah cuhpa rahy th…kyun

Mayank: kyun,….kyun….asa kuch nhi hoga yeah sirf initial clues hain…its not the conclusion

Nupur: let the court decide k conclusion kya hai…..tum apni duty se kyun beechy hat rahy hoo…

She was stnding near him n he was looking at her with surprise…she was so "nt botheres look" and he was freaking out

Mayankk: tum hain arrest bhi kiya ja sakta hai..tumhara career ….media sum bechay par jay ga

Nupur: I'll handle tum kyun pareshan hotay ho……

Mayank: Nupur it's a big thing…he was losing his patience

Nupur: han tu yeah meri problem hai…tum kyun pareshan hotay hoo

He was already getting frusted with the facts on board, thn her indifferent behavior towards this huge matter was making him more anger…n thn "tum kyun pareshan hotay ho" as if she didn't knew …..

Grip her from her arm he turn her to make her cum infront….

Mayank: mein kyun pareshan horaha hoon….mein kyun pareshan ho raha hoon…tumhain pata hai yeah kiya hai….koi albi, koi defence hai tumhary pass…..

The more unknown fear he has in his heart was increasing, the more, her clam smile was making him more irrated ..

Nupur: woh sab mera masla hai…tum case file kero

Mayank: holding her from both shoulder he pulled her close….sab tumhara masala hai..hain na….sab tumhara masala….mjhy kasa laga ta hai yeah bhi tumhara masla hai…..

Nupur Mayank ur hurting me

Mayank: im hurting u ….ya ..i AM hurting u(referring to the doubt)…yeah bhi tumhara masla kyun nhi hai

Nupur: tumahri problem kya hai do the need full

Mayank: I cant do the need full dam it..cant u see…..how can I do it ….the person I love the most how I can doubt on her….he said in full rage holding her …almost crashing her in his arms…..

It was thn whn he realize he said wht he was holding inside…..he was fearing nupurs reaction….lsoing his grip…

Mayank: sorry…he turned to other side

Nupur: sorry for wht….

Mayank: for hurting u….turing to her ….but not at all for wht I feel….dont thnk so …he looked at her.pointing his finger

Nupur: u don't love me Mayank….

He looked at her with the utmost surprise….this was not wht he expected…she may say no…may he was determine she will say no…..but this….

Mayank: wht

Nupur: wht wht…u cant love me…u just meet me…find sum1 influencing u …thts it …mayank its nthing more than tht…..she was sayig so plainly n tht was hurting more…..

Mayank: Nupur pls…..whtever u want to say u can…but don't u dare …don't u dare doubt abt wht I feel…u don't want to trust its ok…but don't question it pls…..his pls was almost a whisper

He didn't knew she will doubt on his sincerity …spreading his hand on his face to remove all tht has cum from his heart…n removing a moment in which his heart over cum the person who has stood throughout the life hard, n alone….than today why the rejection was hurting …tht he was so preprared for ….

Mayank: bolo..pause…..tum yaha kyun aaii thi….

Nupur: woh Rajeever case mein kuch progress thi….she was looking n closely monitoring his expression , he was watching outside...

Mayank: hmm….bolo..kya…per abhi is kya kero….the last line was a mere whisper but she heard it

Nupur: tumahri is problem k solve kergo pehly

Maynak: kis…he looked surprise

Nupur: this Nupur bhusahn the suspect…..dil k jaga demmagh ka istamal kertay tu sab solve

Point no:1 me lord…..mein delhi mein nhi thi jab yeah murder hoa

He looked at himself…stupid Mayank

Point no:2 mein lefty hoon aur the way cut is done on the neck its of a righty…..

So u cant put be the top most suspect mr. Mayank Sharma ……

He closed his eyes n hit his head wch was spinning n found sum settlement…..

Mayank: tum kuch kaha rahi thi na Rajveer k case k baray mein

Nupur: kal bat kertay hain…tum apny hosh mein ajao…bye n tc….mayank tum galti ker rahy hoo

Mayanak: mein koi galti nhi ker raha….dont u …he pointed his finger to her n then left his cabin taking his things

………….

At home:

NM: y u said tht ..nupur its wrong y u doubted on sum1 feeling

Nupur: he needs to be sure of wht he did….u don't know him ..he always doubt until he have proof….us ko her cheez mein logic chaiy….woh kuch dino mein is mein bhi logic dhonday ga//.mom pls leave this issue

NM: she puted her hand on her shoulder,….nupur her insaan….evry man is nt like ur father…who betray….u need to give him a chance

Nupur: I need to trust him to give him a chnce

NM: no …u just need to trust his heart n ur heart to give u bth together a chance….oki….

Mayank: poruing some coffee for himself he set in the floor of his balconey, he chuklled at himself and the moment in wch in propse a girl, wao wht a way na,

Common Mayank u know asa kuch hoga thn y r u behaving so, ghusay per control ker, and act normal, don't spoil ur relation u have in hand, for what u cant have.

Sigh ….hmm..i'll I am fine, will be fine….just need a bit time, islayn ghar agaya…saying so he closed his eyes n rested his head back, to get sum peace and console himself silently…

Originally posted by: --jiya--

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waah fiza-ji.. kya confession tha BY GOD!! 😛

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~jiya~