MN OS || Mayank Sharma, My Angel!.. || Pg30 (25/8) - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
hey Bidz

woah..i m sooo late
srry

k that was great
so cuuute!

i loved the kids too
and MayUr..ohhh😍
sooo romantic 😆
loved it over all

i feel so good after reading that..
ur right! the CV's didnt show us anything like that but u handled it so PERFECTLY!! I LOOOVE U!!!😆

Luv,
Aashi <3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
awww...it was too sweet...😍
maanik is too cute bechara he feared his mom so much😆
and mayank,lazy n naughty husband😳😆
loved Mayur scene,it was too cute😳

nice OS,but short plz write a long one next time
love
ruchi❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
a cute os yaar...😉
i was blushing ☺️ reading d kids conversation vid deir parents...
thanx for d pm...
continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
awesome os.
very nice.
like kids...they r so smarat.
love it.
keep writing.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
just one word to say..perfect... perfect in all sense...keep making more like this...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Hey guys .. 🤗 I'm back with another MN OS .. 🥳 Just random as usual but the most romantic amongst all i have written so far on MN.. ☺️ I hope you all will understand after reading it.. 😳 Anyways, it is dedicated to all my wonderful readers.. ⭐️.. Happy Reading.. 😃 🤗

..Together Forever..

"Aaj mujhe jaldi ghar mein dekh kar Nupur bohot khush hogi," said a happy and smiley Mayank Sharma and entered in his apartment secretly because he wanted to surprise his dear wifey Nupur Bhushan Sharma.

Mayank looked around his whole apartment but didn't find Nupur. Usually that would not happen! At 8pm, Nupur should had been sitting on the couch and watching TV or gossiping with someone on her phone according to the daily routine.

But today she wasn't there. Something was wrong, thought a confused Mayank and walked to his room, and there he got to see the most shocking view of his life. His darling wifey Mrs. Sharma was sleeping. Whoa! Was he dreaming? He pinched himself and realized that it was reality.

But hey wait! Something was weird. Nupur could not sleep so early. I mean 8pm was early for her, not for Mayank though as he was an ideal human being.

Confused, Mayank walked closer to Nupur to check her when he got another shock. He heard Nupur sniffing. Was she crying? This thought made Mayank so tensed and his smile vanished off in a blink.

Mayank rushed towards the other side of Nupur to face her and there was the third shock! Tears were continuously streaming from her beautiful eyes wetting her white cheeks. "Kya hua Nupur?", asked Mayank concernedly and sat close to her.

Nupur snuggled up to Mayank and in no time, she hugged him very tightly. Mayank enveloped his delicate Nupur inside his strong arms. "Tum ro kyu rahi ho Nupur? Sab theek hai na?", he asked softly caressing her silky hairs.

"Mayank mujhe *sniff* bohot akela feel *sniff* ho raha hai. Aur bohot rona *sniff* aa raha hai.", Nupur said in the midst of her sobs. Seeing her like that, Mayank felt his heart coming out.

Breaking the hug, Mayank wiped off Nupur's tears, cupped her face in his hands and said lovingly, "Mere rehete huye tumhe akela feel kyu ho raha hai? Mujhse koi galti ho gayi hai kya?", he said the last line with a sense of guilt in his voice.

Nupur immediately covered Mayank's mouth with her palm and said with so much emotions and looking straightly in his eyes, "Nahi nahi Mayank! *sniff* Tumse koi galti nahi hui. Shayad main hi kuch jyada kar rahi hoon.", saying that, she frowned and turned her direction to the other side.

Mayank held Nupur's chin and made her look in his eyes that were filled only with love and care for her. "Nupur, tumhe jab aise udaas dekhta hoon toh mujhe aisa lagta hai ki shayad mere pyaar mein koi kami rehe gayi hai. Agar aisa hai toh plz mujhse kaho. Main khud ko badalne ki puri koshish karunga.", he said honestly.

Nupur felt her heart contented with immense happiness seeing the limit of Mayank's love for her. How lucky she was to have such a caring hubby! This thought brought a little yet beautiful smile on her face. Placing a soft kiss on his cheek, she said touching his cheek and looking intently in his eyes, "Tumhare pyaar mein koi kami kabhi nahi ho sakti Mayank."

Seeing the slight gorgeous smile on Nupur's face and hearing her assurance of his love for her, Mayank felt his world complete. He didn't need anything more! Smiling with teary eyes, he softly caressed her cheek with his thumb and leaned forward closing his eyes. Nupur shyly smiled and closed her eyes with a silent promise of trust. Wasting no more time, Mayank sealed Nupur's delicate lips with his into a deep passionate kiss with unlimited love.

Nupur held Mayank's t-shirt in her fist and responded to his kiss with equal love and passion and it went on for long. After they broke off, Mayank requested Nupur with a lovely smile, "Terrace par chalo naa plz!"

Nupur simply nodded without questioning and went with him to their terrace. As soon as she stepped there, her lips curved into a huge grin seeing the full moon enlightening the whole city. "Wow Mayank! It's so beautiful!", she said excitedly with the most stunning smile. Mayank smiled broadly seeing his Nupur happy. That was all he wanted! "Everything is so pure! I'm speechless!", said Nupur again staring intently at the moon.

Suddenly Nupur felt Mayank hugging her tightly from behind. She heavily breathed under his grip. "Bas yehi khushi tumhare chehre pe dekhna chahta tha.", Mayank whispered in her ear and kissed her earlobe. Nupur shyly smiled in pleasure and gripped Mayank's hands tightly.

"Tum khush ho naa?", Mayank asked Nupur in his husky voice and kissed her shoulder. "Bohot!", Nupur said and sighed feeling the touch of the love of her life which was truly heavenly to her. Her cheeks turned dark red by then.

Mayank made Nupur turn towards him and enveloped her waist tightly in his arms. "Mere rehete tumhare aakho mein kabhi aasu nahi aayenge.", he said to her with a firmness in his eyes. Slowly getting closer to her, he buried his head in her neck and placed soft kisses there.

"Mujhe tumpar pura bharosa..", Nupur stopped and moaned in pleasure as Mayank kissed passionately on her neck and shoulder and nibbled her skin. She circled her arms around his shoulders holding them tightly and dug her nails a little bit in his skin. Kissing ardently on one side of her neck, Mayank explored the other side, while Nupur just gasped under his intense touch. "Mayank!", she said in a breathless voice after quite long of the passionate moment she shared with her love.

"Ssshh!", Mayank pulled himself back and said to Nupur putting his index finger on her lips. Nupur kept on staring in his deep, passion-filled eyes and soon she closed her eyes submitting herself to him in all sense.

Mayank beautifully smiled and carrying Nupur in his muscular arms, he led her to their bed and laid on top of her. Nupur had her eyes still closed and her lips curved into a smile of content and satisfaction. Caressing Nupur's hands softly, Mayank entwined their fingers tightly. He brought his face close to her and feeling his warm breath, Nupur heavily breathed. "Mayank!", she said in between her heavy breaths, shyly smiled and whispered, "I love you!" Mayank smiled slightly and said in his manly voice, "I love you too Nupur!", saying this, he pecked softly on her forehead, eyes, nose and finally on her lips turning it into a passionate kiss and with this, they surrendered each other to a blissful and magical night.
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Very Romantic and Nice os..😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Bidushy🤗🤗 wow sis wha a romantic OS☺️☺️ I LOVED ITTT
so hot to handle☺️ 🤗
keep writing more
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
This was so beautiful😍 I loved him coming home early to surprise her then being shocked seeing her in bed and even more seeing her cry I've gone through the same feeling a Ton of time ie: being surrounded with people but still feeling alone so I know how painful it mustve been for her but she has mayank and unfortunately I dont😆 loved their convo especially the I won't ever let you cry bit at the end. Reminded me of the scene after the confession when he promised her that he would never let her smile fade which made me super nostalgic a year later and I'm still nowhere close in getting over them love the romance you added it was very well written and sweet as well👍🏼
thanks for the pm and I'll unres tomorrow on the other post promise😃 sorry for forgetting I have 48 Pms piled up
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
beautiful and romantic os❤️❤️
loved it...

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