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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
finally mayank spoke
aww nupur was so hurt and sad
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-


Fizu
it was very very very nice update dear
it was d best part of this FF
mayur convo was just too good
my heart ached while nups was telling mayank abt her father
Nups killed her father but she loved him so much...
OMG mayu hold her hand- ye tou kamal hogaya.lol lol lol

fantastic update jana
beautiful part
keep it up



itna khush kyun ho rahi hai pagal...usne nupur ka haath pakda tha na ki tumhara 🤣...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 10:

Amazing

Simply mind-blowing

Waiting for d next update

Cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys..here is next update..next may be a bit delayed not too much but like 3 4 days later I'll be giving…thnks for the love….i really did nt thought this ff will get such response….lov ya

CHAPTER 12:

Suhani: bhai kaha hai

Benji: Nupur ko ghar drop kerny gaya hai

Sunhani: oye hooo….interesting hai…..agaya

Smarat: tu mjhy bata dayta mein drop kerday ta….kamaka u need to go n thn cum back

Mayank: nhi its oki…I wan'st returning phir kuch yaad agaya

Sunhani: kya

Mayank: ur gift….jo mein ny diya hi nhi

Sunhai: really bhai…kiya hai….

He put out a box n forward her …she opened n droped her jaw

Suhani; bhai…yeeh tu diamond hai….OMG its so beautiful pendant

Mayank: u like it ..bs phir thik hai

Benji: soliter….itni pasay kah se aay

Mayank: ACP hon mein samhja…

Samrat; han bhi ek hum hain maa rishta lay ker bhi jay tu larki khati hai …is se kaun shadi keray ga

Mayank: woh teri shakl k kamal hai

Samrat: tu benji ka kya hoga….

Mayank: us k pass tu akal bhi nhi

They laughed out loud

Suhani: wasy bhai tumhari wife buhat khush rahy gi

Mayank: doubt full hai yea

Beni: whisperd to sami…..shadi nhi kery ga nhi bola is ny doubt full hai….hmm..

Samrat: rukh abhi pakarta hoon

Suhani: kyn doubt full hai…tu itny solid gifts do gay, cooking bhi kerlay tay hoo…kafi hot ho….aur kiya chay,…..

Samrat: larki ko propose kaun keray ga..

Suhani: woh bhi ker lay ga….woh bhi istyle se

Mayank was smiling just listening to conversation

Benji: impossible….

Smarta: ya impossible …wasy yaha scne kuch aur hai woh khud is ko moo se nikla walay gi …

Suhani: han yeah bhi hai….bhai

Mayank: hm kya…he was sumwhere else imagining sumthng

Benji: woh ring lay ny gaya hai..propasal ki..kayaloo meinn

Samart: han smile tu dekho

Mayank: im nt smiling

Samrat: ya right ur grining widely …aay haay

Mayank: rekh tujh mein bata ta hoo….

……………

Reaching his home he was standing near his room's window n was smiling at himself wht he was doing today….

Maaynk Sharma ap ker kiay rahy rhy aj hann…he chuckled n lie down on his bed….closing his eyes finding so much in life suddenly to cherish evry new day…….

With a reflex he opned his eyes

Case khatam hojay ga tu im going back Mumbai….

Thts the only thng tht was making him restless….chalo kuch ker lay gay

……………

Next day….

Mayank: yaar it high tme ..atleast sameer k case mein tu kuch progress ho

Samrat: we got the poison origin….

Mayank: wht gr8….kya hai

Samrat: apple..

Nupur: kiyaa...apple how got be

Samrat: apple seeds are rich in cyanide….so if accidently granted with juice

Mayank: u can get posing…..God dam it…..kuch tu hoga ..kuch tu…hum kuch miss ker rhay hai..kuch tu …

Nupur: per kiya….kya miss ker rhay hai

Mayank: ek kam keraty hai….me n sam will look from strt to end at sameers case n u n benji do so at rajveer …..

Samrat: cool…but let me finish with sumthng at forensics I'll join u thn

Nupur: ya pls go through everything again sam…its u who can give us sumthing

Sam: sure….lets strt…

………

Mayank…

He took a marker n went to his writing at board….pointing out each n evry thng

Every time he was writng a point sumthing was choking inside him, evry time he has to write sumthng, he was closing his eys n sum unknown fear was engulfing him…..evrtime he was making himself realize..its nt true u just need to conc on work..end will not b the same…..

Looking at the points he wrote..his one hand was in his hair …frustrated holding thm..n one eyes was indirectly looking at the board….

It cant be…it just not true….

His hands were playing with butchers kneif….yesterday he found with coincidence sumwhere ….n tht "where" he is hating why he found….

Flash back

Dropping her at home…she was abt to go

Nupur: wanna have sum coffee….

Mayank: hmm…..chalo thik hai

As if he was waiting tht she will offer her ….

Nupur: hey mama…

NM: he dear …how was the engagement…ohoo…Mayank…gr8 to cya

Mayank: hey ..thnks

NM: tu tum yaha ..matlab seize fire

He looked actually glared at Nupur…why u told her all tht…it was embarrassing n ….was feeling guilty again

Nupur: wht…I don't HIDE thing from any1….she said in full on teasing tone

He put hands on his waist n glared at her in anger

Mayank: nupurrr……

NM: aray bhi…relax…..mein coffee layti hoon…achooo

Mayank: ur oki anty

NM: han beta…kal barish mein bahar hum dono tea aur pakro enjoy ker rahy thy….ushi k asar hai

Mayank: he chuckled…u sit here..is ke saza hai aj meray hath ki coffee peo…

Nupur: no way woh dark coffee nhi pls..mayank….

Mam pls is per nazar rekhn atleast meri coffe k lyan…right now I need to get out of this..attire….uff..

NM: aao I'll show u kitchen

He was looking for a spoon to stir

Nm: waha hai drawer mein

He opened to find a set of knifes in the drawer….to his surprise it was set of different butchers knifes…

Mayank: anty yeah..

NM: ohh yeah…Nupur ki hain….us knifes ko koi hath nhi laga sakta…us ko lagata hai karab hojay gi…n thn she cant cut her things proper…n thn cant cook….just imagine…

Maaynk: u know I was looking for the same for so long

NM: acha kyun

Mayank: need for investigational purpose….can I borrow one…Nupur ko ap handle kerlo gi is shaaarat per

She chukled

NM: tum bhi daar gay…thik ..aj kal wasy bhi woh itna busy hai k .us k pass time nhi in sab k lyan tu ..umedd hai k tum bach jao ga…..

Flash back end

He was starting at the board aimlessly whn samrat came in

He didn't said antyhng whn his eyes dropped on Mayank….n thn when his followed mayank's eyes …his breath stoped at his throat..it cant be he knew….but thn……

He placed his hand on his shoulder….knowing wht he must b feeling right now

Mayank: I know it cant be samrat but …….

Samrat: us se baat ker……

Mayank: kiya…yeah…k im doubting….. sigh

Samrat: yeah teray hath mein ……

He looked at samrat with fear n hurt written loudly on his face

Mayank: Nupur ki hai…us k ghar se mili

Samrat: wht…tu kab agaya

Mayank: lambi kahni hai……can u leave me alone for sumtime….hum thori dair bad kam shooro kertay hain…..soory tujhy

Samara: its ok Mayank..relax..kuch nhi hoga…..tc

Mayank: hmm

Looking again n again at the point he was fighting with two people inside him…one was a person who blindly trust on Nupur for evrythng…who sumhow owe himself to her….who is to lost in her….

The other tht has too fulfill his duty …n tht is indicating tht he needs to mark her as suspect…and may need to take action…..but he can't…he didn't want to

Its not abt want to Mayank…u have too…..u have too….its ur duty

But I know u she is innocence…

Tht court will prove…u can help her tht time…

But wht will she thng im doubting her again

No she wouldn't she knew its just the circumstance….she will understand….

Pakka…

Hmm

U know na ..this time I cant …just cant handle losing her……GOdDD…..pls help…..nupur mjhy samjhy ny ki khosoih kerna …..

…………………

On the other side…..

Nupur: OMG..mayank….OMG ….just cant imagine this…….she rashed to Mayank…..who is marking nupurs name with red on board as a suspect…..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yeah I am First 👏
Oh feeling so bed for Mayank
Hope Nupur is not guilty
Thanks For pm
cont soon
Edited by DhanakZ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nupur ko arrest karenge kya???😭 nooo...
plzzz cont soon...n da update was great :) loved the first part though...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update..hopefully nupur is not guilty...cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
i think someone tried to trap her or someone did that who was related with her...
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Posted: 14 years ago
I'm getting more confused with each updates..
I just hope this tym Mayur dnt fight..
update soon

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