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vitak

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Posted: 19 years ago

#21

👏 awesome!!!!its seriously good 😃

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ashi_mania

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Posted: 19 years ago

#22

awesome....totally loved it 👏 👏 👏 👏..do continue soon 😛

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Posted: 19 years ago

#23

i dont comment on fics..that frequently but mitali this is mindblowin..i mean it really good...and i dont flatter ppl or say something is good wen its not..seriousli i think u shud publish ur work..its fantastic

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hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#24

very nice..it has a total english feel 2 it...seriously sent me bak 2 my enid blyton days.. 😳

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nehal

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Posted: 19 years ago

#25

Loved your fan-fic Mitali 👏 It has an amazingly different feel to it. Plz continue soon.

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sonam1509

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Posted: 19 years ago

#26

mitali ur fic is superb
do contine asap

a big round of applause 4 u coz u need it
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komal

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Posted: 19 years ago

#27

hey mitali
like ur 1st fic dis is also amazing........... 👏

do continue soon

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srkm

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Posted: 19 years ago

#28

Part 3
" shona shona mamumm….whr r u" screamed a voice
" yes mamma…im in my room"
sonia came in, looking for her daughter…
" how was uv's farmhouse?"
" ohh its was great…very beautiful.."
" aur kya kiya tum logne…tell me nah shona?"
" wht mamaa…wht shuld I tell u?"
" did u ask uv y he refused the mr.gray's offer?"
" yes…he says he wants 2 do more in life than less bonds…. n I agree he doesn't need to tht all his life" answered ashi..
" par he needs 2 do something nah..."
" I knw mamma…I understand…but I understand uv too…there is something troubling him….there is smething he is searching for…but I don't knw what….he needs time mamma n I shall give him that…"
" hmnn…I don't know shona…but if u feel he needs time then ya give him time to think over what he wants to wid his life….but don't forget u cant wait for him forever…"
" I wont need to mamma…I know"
" I hope so.."
" k now mamma go I need to sleep…bas bahut question u have asked…now good night"
" okk okay babaa…gud nite shona"
sonia peeked a kiss on ashi forehead n left ashi alone….to think….n think over her decision…for she was confident to make it…but then again u shuld not belief ur doubts but doubts ur believes rite….

Edited by srkm - 19 years ago