CRIME SCNE INVESTIGATOR..MJHT LAST CH.pg84...23/8 - Page 34

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Posted: 14 years ago
edited my comment on pg 46 :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnk god mayank ne try toh karna shuru kiya...hope so everything will be normal again very soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
VERY VERY NICE UPDATE...
YOU KNOW... I AM REALLY VERY VERY CURIOUS... TO KNOW... MORE ABOUT THIS CASE... BECAUSE THIS MAY BRING MAYANK AND NUPUR CLOSE...
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
plzzz continue soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
thank god...mayank realized his mistake dat he misunderstood nupur...luved their scene
nupur description abt bejni, sam n mayank was sooo sweet.luved suhani and mayank part.
mayank holding his ears n apologizing was sooo cute.
lovely
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice update...
suhaani is good😳
and mayank's description by nupur ..awww...
loved it😍
do cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesum update👏hope myur ke bich jald patch up ho jaye

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesum update👏hope mayur soon patch up sam benji were awesum.thanks for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

Thnku so much guys for all ur love and liking..this one is my personal favt..lets how u all find it.

Chapter: 11

Descending down she joined the group..n was chating with sam n benji….soon benji left as one of relative called him…n thn sam got a call….so the two of them were deliberately left alone…without no choice ….other thn talking with each other…..

In corner they were hating so loud music….

Mayank; I thought tum tu parties enjoy kerti hogi….tu kaan band kyun ker rekha hai

Nupur: mjhy itna loud music nhi pasand…party k yeah matlab thori hai….

Mayank: Nupur…I ..i want to talk to u

Nupur: tu itni dair se kiya ker rahy ho

Mayank: uffu…nhi woh..yaha nhi….can u cum with me out….

Nupur: kyun

Mayank: kyun k yaha mjhy kuch sunai nhi day raha

Nupur: ok….

Mayank: tum chalo bhar mein arah hoon

Nupur: she looked at him in an urge to kill him…tumhar kuch nhi hosakta…..hopless case…ahhh

Turn she left towards the door….followed by a smirking Mayank…. did tht on purpose ..takay ksii ko pata na chaly….but sum1 was having eye on them…

Suhani: yeah kya scnce hai bhai

Benji; chup ker ….chalny day yeah scne….khuda k wasata…..koi tu aay jo humain is khadoos se bachy

They giggled

………

Reaching the garden ….she was standing holding the railing on side….watching the beautiful atmosphere right there…..flowers all over, with dim lights….soothing scent of thm was making the ambiance hypnotic…

He reach there n stod beside her..puting his hand just beside her…..it was silence tht was all over there….he was enjoying the calmness around, the peace he was feeling inside….n she was getting highly irritated with his silence..so

Nupur: kya hai….bolo….

Tht made him realize he ask her to cum here for purpose….n thts so difficult for him to do……not he has ego problem in front of her….but he just done know wht actually u shud say

Mayank: woh..actually ..us din ..mein shayd ghusay mein tha

Nupur: shyad nhi…u were ..

Mayank: aur woh tone bhi kuch

Nupur: kuch kafi zayada thi…Mr.sharma

Mayank: dekho Nupur..yeah Mr.sharma mat bolaya kero mjhy

Nupur/: han izzaat tu tumhain raaz nhi ati

Maaynk: izaat nhi hai yeah mjhy paat hai …u say in mocking way…so don't

Nupur: kyun kya kerlo gay

Mayank: tumhar mein kuch nhi ker sakta…

Nupur: tu phir yaha kyun boloya tha

Mayank: gana gany k lyan …he said fully irritated …a, he was felling so difficult to talk with her..b, she was distracting him n now he really don't know wht to say….he forgot his sorry speech….

Nupur: nhi pls….suhani k sasural walo per buhat bora asar paray ga….soch gay bhai pagal hai tu behan tu…

Mayank: Nupur tumhain pata hai

Nupur: mjhy kiya pata hai …mein kiya anter yami hoon

Mayank: us din mein kuch zayada bool gaya ….aur sab galat bhi…he was looking down sutimes n sumtimes towards her …playing with stone with his feet

Nupur: tu …yeah tu mjhy pata tha….phir …..she was smiling inside…yeah pagal hai…kuch bhi nhi bool sakta …

Mayank: I didn't mean to …

Nupur: so….but u said so

Mayank: han but I know I did worng

Nupur: I know u were wrong….

Mayank: kya yaar Nupur tu sharafat se maan nhi skati

Nupur: Mayank tum ek laafaz asani se nhi bol saktay…..400 words bol daly per nhi….sorry bolna nhi aat …ya tumhari dictionary mein asa word nhi hai ….

Mayank: I thought it was bigger thn to be cleared with sorry…..

He said this with so much guilt in his eyes…

Samrat: hited his head with hand….abhi bhi ullu tu sorry nhi bool raha…mahan hai yeah

Benji: kya hai…Mayank tera kuch nhi hosakta……

Yes they were there…itna acha scne kasay miss kerday…sneaking from behind the tree thy were enjoying nupurs leg pulling n above all Mayank Sharma trying sumthng he never ever did….moanfying sum1 n tht so a girl

Nupur: abhi bhi sorry nhi…uff…jao maaf kiya …kis khadoos se pala per hai…she turned to leave…n as reflex he caught her wrist…

Mayank: pakka…seriously…sab kuch pehly jasa…asking in full concern , hesitation, n sumwhere relieved

Benji: hath pakra

Samrat: tum mera choray ga

Nupur: han baba…pakka…ab mein jao…

Mayank: han…thnks…thnks aloot

Nupur: mera hath choro gay tu jao gi na….

Maynk: sorry

Nupur: dekh kitna asan hota hai bolna…aur tumhain itna muskil lagta hai…tumhain her woh baat itni muskil lagti hai ho jo tum actual mein kahna chaty hoo

Mayank: asay hi hoon mein..turning to fence agin ….n this time she accompany him there…..

Nupur: galat hai Mayank …..asa nhi kertay …..u will regret tht in ur life….hamesha hum sab nhi hongay tumhari khamsohi samhjny k lyan

Mayank: kyun….he said with so much surprise n fear…..tum kaha ja rahi hoo…..

Nupur: Mumbai….case khatam hoga mein chali jao gi….

Mayank: dekhta hoon kasay jati hoo…filhal tu yeah case solve hi nhi horaha tu no chance

Nupur: yeah tumahri sazish tu nhi ….chalo meray sath tumhain bhi shamil kerlay tay …suspect no 2….

Per tumhar tu koi background hai nhi …dard naak…..proof nhi hoskt..so sad

Mayank: nupur pls…he almost pleaded

Nupur: kya…proof kero

Maaynk: he looked at her in disappointment,….i really don't mean tht….woh mery moo se kyun nikla mjhy nhi pata…n I know woh buhat gaalat tha..i never doubted ur credibility…I never evr did so….bus paat nhi us din kis baat k ghusa tha ..jo mein paat nhi kiya kiya bool gaya….i really did mean to seriously

Nupur: wasy yeah baat tumhain

Mayank: sir ny batai thi

Nupur: surprised …so tum pehly din se jantay thy

Mayank: hmm…..

Silence was around agin but this time ..it was dread full…for Nupur eveythng was going back again…the time she last saw her father …..

Nupur: u know I shot my Dad

Mayank: hmm…he lookd at her who was aimlessly looking far ….far to find a aim, far to find an edge….

He was tryng to kill u …u did it in self defence Nupur

Benji: yeah do no itny slow baat kyun ker rahy hai

Samaart: ab chalein pls….teri behan k kuch kayal hai…

Benji: acha bhi chal tu

Nupur: nhi…I didn't did tht in self defence….i shot him…right here….she pointed out by placing her hand on her heart….

Mayank: but u were injured, shot at shoulder…zara sa miss hota tu u can….

Nupur: I can die…..u know I have won shouting championships…..my father taught me to aim….to just look at bull eye …he was bst ..he never miss his shot….he told me how to hold a gun, from age of 3 im doing shoting ..he made me best…..

Mayank: phir……he was looking at her who was expressionless…n whn turned to him….he saw sumthng in her eyes tht was hurting to much hurting……she looked back infront

Nupur: I shot him…I didn't want any1 to arrest him….n he saved me by shoting right at the correct spot….so tht nobody question me….he was gr8 father …he really loved me…..

Sliding his hand on her tht was griping fences very hard…he sqeenz it a bit…..

Nupur: but I missed the shot …for the first time…n he didn't died right at the spot….but with pain…she closed her eyes as didn't want the droplets to flow down

N he was frimly holding her hand…..

Mayank: u did wht was right Nupur

Nupur: I know…but at times it hard to separate a crime hunter n a daughter from each other ….but we have too,.looking at him

Mayank: he closed his eyes in yes…n bth turned to see the sky in front of thm…but he didn't left her hand for a sec..tht he was almost sequez…n sumhow it was giving her so much of assurance, so much of support tht she didn't bother to took away from his grip….

His cell runged…..

Mayank: yes SU…

Suhani: bhai wasy mein ring ceremony tumhain disturb kiya baghir ker layti per kya hain k ring tumhary pass hai….ap ny kaha tha lao gay….tu lay ho ya yeah bhi kisi ULJHAN mein bhool gay

He chuckled at her teasing tone…..

Mayank: aaa raha hoon…2 mins..sorry

Suhani: we r waitng…

Mayank: chalo ander chalein..…ring ceremony is abt to strt….his hand was still at the same place

Nupur: hmm….

Turning around..he slowly n reluctantly removed his hand ..n strt walking when he found her not beside him

Mayank: kya hua chalo

Nupur: ek sath…teasingly...tum chalo mein ati hoon

He looked away n smiled..n thn lookd at her again

Mayank: seedhi tarha chalo sath….common…he forward his hand to her to which she looked surprised…pls..he said with closing his eyes in assurance….

Putting her hand in his , he pulled her few steps …to make her cum with him…n move in…reaching In he left her hand…..n Nupur was laughing inside at his behavior….

The ring ceremony was perfectly done….n flowers were showered on the couple…of wch on landed on her hairs…he pointed out ..but she didnt get it …again pointed out but she didn't…with irritation Mayank moved closed n pulled it out of her hair…n put infront of her showing yeah..

Benji n smart were continuously eyeing on them….n benji dreamingly was falling on samrat…whe he pushed him away with irritation……

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it lodsss
srsly it was awesome...
awww Nupur killed his father n Mayank knew abt it 4m d 1st day so nice of him...😭
dis part was emotional wid lotsss of fun...😉

its really true u can say sorry so easily bt sometimes wen u hv to say sorry to some1 den it becomes d most "HARD" job to do...

awesome update...👏
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago

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