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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Nidhi...

OMG!!!! What a character description...or should i call it as character review?

You are too funny...at the same time you have reviewed every character so deeply. Hats off to you.

Now coming to our bak-bak


maan thinks geet will b very happy knowing the fact that he loves her since past 2 yrs...par hamari geet ne toh uska big tym POPAT kar diya yeh kehke ki she loves him since childhood...bichara maan itna sadme mein hai ki aaj tak bata hi nahi paya ki he knows her since past 2 yrs...!!! maan

sach me Nidhi...ye maan bhi na...he is too slow. Geet has told 24 years story. But our maan is not able tell her 2 years story. She was right...he is such a LEM...Low Efficiency machine. But bechara...what will he do...our ACTION Rani Geet is not letting him to tell anything.

he already told her that he had married her 2 years ago. But our over smart geet is thinking that maan is in dream. Babaji! Bechara maan ko madad karna

dev pata nahi kaunse no. ki update se geet ka sach janne ke liye nikla tha...aaj ja ke kuch pata kiya...par lo...woh bhi galat source se...bichara source hi galat femi mein ji raha hai..usse ja ke dev the jasoos ne kuch pata kiya...par looser kahika woh bhi bata nahi paya...!! dev

i guess Dev took jasoosi training from our GHSP jasoos jugnu mama.

Jugnu mama must have taught dev the art of Amnesia also as freebie course. Isiliye...Dev himself doesn't remember ki kaunse no ki update se geet ka sach janne ke liye nikla tha...haha... now i wonder what maan will do to this Dev when the letter demonstrates his jasoos brain in front of maan...donno...whether maan will give him an opportunity for dev's brain demo...

dadi hamari secret marriage plan kar rahi hai...par jab maaneet aa gaye toh aacha sa reason bhi nahi de payi ki decorations kyu ho rahi hai...sab ke sab slow hai...dadi

dadi...kya kahu unke bare me...bechari...she has run out of ideas to tackle her pautha...finally she has ended up saying chandu's shaadi...

chandu is awesome...jab dekho chizen imagine aur assume karta rehta hai...maaneet ki shadi bhi nahi hui hai aur usne unki SR bhi karwa di band kamre ke piche...aur Mr khurana ko impress karne ke ideas leta hai would b Mrs khurana se...lage raho geet ke chandu bhaiya...!!

patha nahi...bechara Chandu would be able to impress maan in this FF or not?...maan is preoccupied with too much...he has to handle...Arjun, Dev..the list goes on...

if chandu is not able to impress maan in MMM...better luck in my next FF...haha...i won't stop torturing maan through this chandu


geet...haaye...kya ladki hai...seedha mandap mein land hui...lol...she is the 1 jub bolna shuru karti hai toh baat puri hoye bina khatam hi nahi karti...believes in 1 shot...uske action imagination ke baare mein jitna kam kaha jaye uthna hi thik hai...!!har chiz mein action ke bare mein sochti rehti hai...lagta hai skul mein ACTION ka skul bag aur skul shoes use karti thi...!!

uska deemag thoda kam chalta hai...par chalta hai...baki toh yaha sab ke deemag mein kisi na kisi chiz ki dhoon sawar hai...!!

OMG!!!!!! Nidhi dear, you have made out geet the Brand Ambassador of ACTION school bags and ACTION shoes...what an idea sirji...chalo ...let us use this in concept in the next FF...haha...

geet...haaye...kya ladki hai...seedha mandap mein land hui...haha...i killed myself laughing

wow...what a song for maan. it suits him very well.

keep rocking girl

Edited by tonyahk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
oh wow the very much senti one...
finally all the truths r out...
wondering wat wud b msk's decision...
pl cont soon yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was awesome ... well written ...

u write serious stuff also very nicely

143 buddy

Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: niddzz

4 tonya...: just random


geet : maan
maan: hmm...geet
geet: maan mein aapse kuch puchu ??
maan:geet agar mein mana karunga toh tum nahi puchogi kya ??
geet : phir bhi puchungi...
maan: geet toh phir puch kyu rahi ho
geet: woh kya hai na maan skul mein sikhaya tha ke take permission to talk wen sum1 is busy doin deir work...
maan: aacha...meri skul mein toh aisa nahi sikhaya tha..
geet: ajeeb baat hai...maan aap kaunsi skul gaye the??? waise chaddo maan mujhe kya karna hai...shayad aapki teacher batana bhul gayi hongi...maan aapko pata hai haamri skul mein na teacher ko jo bhi humko batana hota tha na woh sari chizen teacher ek ppr mein likh kar aati thi...aapki skul mein bhi aisa hota tha kya???
maan: hmm...geet meri skul mein bhi aisa hi hota tha..
geet : ab mujhe samjha aapki teacher ne aapko permission wali baat kyu nahi batayi..
maan : aacha ...kyu??
geet : woh teacher ne padhte padhe permission wali line miss kardi hongi...mein bhi padhte padhte beech mein se lines miss kar deti hu aur directly uske baad wali line mein chali jati hu..!!
maan : ohh...waise geet tum mujhe kuch puch rahi thi
geet : haan maan mein puch rahi thi ki kya mein aapse kuch puch sakti hu...woh mein kabse soch rahi hu par samaj hi nahi aa raha...
maan: haan geet pucho..
geet: thank u maan..
maan: thank u kis liye ??
geet : mujhe permission dene ke liye...woh maa kehti thi thank u aur sorry bolne ke liye hickichana nahi chahiye...
maan : aur kya kya kehti thi maa???
geet : appko pata hai maan...maa ne mujhe zindagi mein jo har mode par kaam aati hai woh sari sikh sikhayi...zindagi ki choti choti chizon mein khush rehna sikhaya...maa ne mujhe woh banaya joh mein aaj hu...
maan: hmm...waise tum kya puchne wali thi ???
geet : maan ...
maan : hmm geet ..
geet : maan mein puch rahi thi ki...
maan: haan geet pucho..
geet: kaise puchu ...
maan : geet hickichao mat...jo bhi puchna hai pucho...
geet :...hmm..try karti hu...
maan : geet jaldi pucho...
geet ...wohh...wohh..maan mein puch rahi thi ki ..ki..apko AK karna kisne sikhaya???
maan was drinkin water listening to geets slow motion qtn...almost chocks ...
maan : KYA ???
geet : maan kya nahi AK...woh kya hai na maan mujhe skul mein sab kuch sikhaya par AK kabhi nahi sikhayi...maa ne bhi sab kuch sikhaya par AK nahi sikhayi...aapko kisne sikhayi...dadi ne ??...mein bhi dadi ko bolu mujhe sikhane ko...??? waise maan sabko AK aati hai kya...chandu bhaiya ko aati hai...??? mein ek kaam karti hu mein vicky se puchti hu...ki mein kabhi bahar gayi hu ya jab mein ghar mein nahi thi tab maa ne AK sikhayi thi kya...???
maan : nahi geet...
geet: par kyu maan
maan: main hu na... mein tumhe sikhata hu...
geet : kya maan aap mujhe sikhayenge???
maan : hmm...
geet : sacchi
maan: hmm geet..
geet :waise maan aapko AK kisne sikhayi..??
maan : TONYA ne...!!!



🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

tussi chah gaye ho nidzz jee

ye AK to Tonya ne hi sikhaya hai hum sab ko bhi 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow super duper awesum update...hope the truth doesnt create any problems...finally all the secrets are gone:)
thnks for d lovely update and d pm:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
4 tonya...: just random
[/quote]
wow...i am 🤣🤣

geet : maan
maan: hmm...geet
geet: maan mein aapse kuch puchu ??
(wow geet! good manners. i am impressed)
maan:geet agar mein mana karunga toh tum nahi puchogi kya ??
(maan! woh geet hai...phir bhi puchoge. better say yes)
geet : phir bhi puchungi...
(haha...i told you na)
maan: geet toh phir puch kyu rahi ho
geet: woh kya hai na maan skul mein sikhaya tha ke take permission to talk wen sum1 is busy doin deir work...
maan: aacha...meri skul mein toh aisa nahi sikhaya tha..
(woh kaise school hai...maan beta! in which school did you study? waise bhi...if they teach also...will you listen to them? after all you are MSK na)
geet: ajeeb baat hai...maan aap kaunsi skul gaye the??? waise chaddo maan mujhe kya karna hai...shayad aapki teacher batana bhul gayi hongi...maan aapko pata hai haamri skul mein na teacher ko jo bhi humko batana hota tha na woh sari chizen teacher ek ppr mein likh kar aati thi...aapki skul mein bhi aisa hota tha kya???
(wow...what an observation geet)
maan: hmm...geet meri skul mein bhi aisa hi hota tha..
(acha...at least he has noticed that paper in teacher's hand)
geet : ab mujhe samjha aapki teacher ne aapko permission wali baat kyu nahi batayi..
(woh...kaise batayegi...ye tho MSK hai...hot hot little MSK ko dekhar teacher ne sab kuch btatana bhul gayi hongi)
maan : aacha ...kyu??
geet : woh teacher ne padhte padhe permission wali line miss kardi hongi...mein bhi padhte padhte beech mein se lines miss kar deti hu aur directly uske baad wali line mein chali jati hu..!!
(Geet! have you completed your graduation? waise bhi...who gave you the degree certificate)
maan : ohh...waise geet tum mujhe kuch puch rahi thi
geet : haan maan mein puch rahi thi ki kya mein aapse kuch puch sakti hu...woh mein kabse soch rahi hu par samaj hi nahi aa raha...
maan: haan geet pucho..
geet: thank u maan..
(wow...what a manners what a maaners)
maan: thank u kis liye ??
geet : mujhe permission dene ke liye...woh maa kehti thi thank u aur sorry bolne ke liye hickichana nahi chahiye...
(very good mom)
maan : aur kya kya kehti thi maa???
geet : appko pata hai maan...maa ne mujhe zindagi mein jo har mode par kaam aati hai woh sari sikh sikhayi...zindagi ki choti choti chizon mein khush rehna sikhaya...maa ne mujhe woh banaya joh mein aaj hu...
(hats off to mom)
maan: hmm...waise tum kya puchne wali thi ???
geet : maan ...
maan : hmm geet ..
geet : maan mein puch rahi thi ki...
maan: haan geet pucho..
geet: kaise puchu ...
(muu se pucho geet)
maan : geet hickichao mat...jo bhi puchna hai pucho...
geet :...hmm..try karti hu...
(what try??????...hey babaji! will she ever ask?)
maan : geet jaldi pucho...
(jaldi aur geet...maan you must be joking)
geet ...wohh...wohh..maan mein puch rahi thi ki ..ki..apko AK karna kisne sikhaya???
(ware wah...what a question!!! geet! have you forgotten that Maan is crazy about ACTION movies and he has almost done a P.hD in ACTION. he must have learned from those movies)
maan was drinkin water listening to geets slow motion qtn...almost chocks ...
maan : KYA ???
(KYA KYA? jawab do maan)
geet : maan kya nahi AK...woh kya hai na maan mujhe skul mein sab kuch sikhaya par AK kabhi nahi sikhayi...maa ne bhi sab kuch sikhaya par AK nahi sikhayi...aapko kisne sikhayi...dadi ne ??...mein bhi dadi ko bolu mujhe sikhane ko...??? waise maan sabko AK aati hai kya...chandu bhaiya ko aati hai...??? mein ek kaam karti hu mein vicky se puchti hu...ki mein kabhi bahar gayi hu ya jab mein ghar mein nahi thi tab maa ne AK sikhayi thi kya...???

(OMG!!!!! ye geet kaise besharam ladki hai. She wants to include AK in the school syllabus. hai rabba...i have heard about activity based learning...but ACTION learning ke bare me now only i know...is desh me kya ho raha hai babaji!!!)
maan : nahi geet...
geet: par kyu maan
maan: main hu na... mein tumhe sikhata hu...
(hayeee...how romantic..)
geet : kya maan aap mujhe sikhayenge???
maan : hmm...
geet : sacchi
(geet! you still doubting him. before doing P.hD Maan did MA degree...wonder what...Master of ACTIONs)
maan: hmm geet..
geet :waise maan aapko AK kisne sikhayi..??
maan : TONYA ne...!!!
hey Nidhi...now i am officially dead...heart attack...i didn't expect this at all

here mom and dad are giving me a weird look. i am having a hard time in controlling my laughter. if my parents come to know that i taught AK to maan, they will kill me for sure. they are still believing that i am good girl...lol...

keep rocking dear


hey Nidhi...i have edited part 69 of MMM and included the link of your post.

so senti cum funny combo pack for readers...thanks dear...such a freaking hilarious post
Edited by tonyahk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: niddzz

tonya i think khurana khandan mein na HUM TOH SLOW HI SOCHENGE naam ki beemari hai...!!! babji inki madad karna...!!!!


geet brand ambassador of ACTION company...now its mah tym to roll on the floor laughing...!! lol...good 1 tonya...!!!

chalo ...mujhe future mein aur ek FF dikhayi de raha hai tonya ki taraf se...meri door door ki drushti dekh rahi hai ki tonya ek aur zabbardast ff likhne wali hai maaneet ke liye...geet ke CVs ne bola tha DREAMS DO CUM TRUE...!!!😃 😃



kya? Khurana khandan mein HUM TOH SLOW HI SOCHENGE bimaari hai?

but Nidhi, i thought that they all have HUM KABHI NAHI SOCHENGE bimaari...🤣

chalo..may be they are in the early stage of the disease

intially HUM TOH SLOW HI SOCHENGE...when it matures the disease will turn into HUM KABHI NAHI SOCHENGE. hena Nidhi?


next FF...
thinking to write a funny SS..."Pyar Hua".
but donno...whether my training will give me time to write it or not?
Edited by tonyahk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update. nidhi's post was 2222222 hilarious. jst loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update...so finally the mystery is out ...
please continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
at last geet's truth is out😊 ..I wonder if Maan will spill his heart out in the next one..
Thanks for the nice long update, Tonya...

Loved how you handled the whole confession thing without any misunderstanding😊 For a sec thought that Dev will play around with Maan's emotions.. great buildup there..

The past incidents and the relationship of Karan, Geet and Nandini was so simple but the way you built up the suspense is commendable... Kudos babe👏

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