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Posted: 14 years ago
part>7

awesome update
too gud.
ye nupur ka number kaise aa gya???
its very interesting
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update.
interesting.
poor nupur...feel sorry for her.
i hope, everything llb perfect soon.
mayank was wrong...he shouldnt hve shout on her.
through nupur is a daughter of terrorist, but she is a loyal person...n a loyal officer.
i felt bad, when maynk raised his finger to her...n also about her blood.
he behaved very rudely to her.
poor nupur.
thanks for the pm.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update.
like nupur a lot
she's very stronge n perfect to handle this case.
bt i dnt understand that why mayank mayank still firm with his decision??
strange!! besically everyone knw abt nupur n sameer, except mayank...she dint hide anything to anyone.
so why mayank acted like stubborn????
like interrogation scene.
it was grt...like it.
she said she had no feeling for him...n mayank felt happy...thats good.
chalo kam se kam mayank happy to hua!!!
like nupur-sam-benji scene.
they r grt...sharing a awesome cute bond...true friends.
like conferance room scene...it ws beautiful.
lolz...poor sam...lolz
feel sorry for mayank...he dnt have anyone in his life...except his work.
thats y he becme very reserved.
very nice update.
this story gonna interesting day by day
cotninue soon
thanks for the pm.


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Posted: 14 years ago

Thnks a looot Guys ..lova ya for all the love and appreciation…here u o enjoy

CHAPTER: 10

Benji: so any progress in case

Mayank: not tht so …..

Benji: acha ya I forgot…kal ap sab arahy hain….

Nupur: kaha

Sam: aray humari behna ki sagai hai

Nupur: behan…

Mayank: oh God mein tu bhool hi gaya….tujhy koi help chaiyay

Benji: kitna acha doost hai tu…teri tu woh sab se ladli hai na….aur tu us ki sagai bhool gaya….

Nupur: koi mjhy batay ga kiya ho raha hai

Benji: meri behan ki sagi hai kal…n ur invited..u specially Nupur….

Nupur: ohh,,,,u have sister too….

Sam: han hum sab ki ikloti behan…

Mayank: mjhy se zayda naraz hai kiya..his face was showing so much of fear and guilt

Benji: kafi…

Mayank: mar gay….

Nupur looked at him ..mayank sharam worried abt sum1's anger…kamal hai

……….

Sam: Mayank mein ny tujhy forensic report send ki hai us ko check kerlay…..

Mayank: oki ..i'll

He was going through his email when his eye droped on n email …..

Smaeer khurana case report….was in subject

He opened this file with fear..as he knew this is gonna prove him more wrong….n sumwhere he will hate himself more n more….

Email…(wasy yeah emails per mjhy kuch zayda baatein nhi kerny lagi hoon ffs mein)

Oki back to story

" dekho bhi meri yaadash tumarhi tarha strong nhi hai….so mein ny jo bhi details thi case se related jo meray pass thi ..im e mailing u in report so go through it n if want u can we 'll discuss.."

Mayank: god…wht do u want ….i know I over reacted…n I m guilty…do u need to tell me evry moment…..

Saying so he open the attachment….

Suspect:1

Sameeers's ex fianc

Nupur Bhushan…..

Reason:

Jealousy, betrayal, money…..

Money: all of sameers money, his life insurance has been transfer to her by his parents….

N there in tht report a picture was attached …looking at the picture his breath stacked at his throat….

Flash back

Nupur: yeah picture achi hai ya yeah

Mayank: kiya farq parta ha

Nupur: lo ….suspect ki picture hai…kam se kam 50 60 saal tak file mein rahy gi ….izzat k sawal hai yaar….

Mayank: tum pagal ho

Nupur: pagal ki kiya baat hai ….wanted ….picture ….yeah achi hai

Mayank: nupurrr…he smiled n hited her head with file…had hai

At tht moment he thought she is joking, but she wasn't ….she has been so loyal with her work n he …closing his eyes he was pressing his head with frustration..n moreover he really wants to tell her he is sorry but he jst cant ….

Smarat: kya hua….agar kuch galat kiya hai tu man lay…is mein bora kiya hai

Mayank: kya….

Samrat: yeah tu tumhain hi pata hoga…sorry nhi bol sakta tu ..cheezo ko by work normal lay aa…wasy is waqt woh forensic room hai…..

Mayank: kaun..

Samrat: Mayank…mein tujhy buhat achay se janta hoo…dont fight with ur self this time….go for it…plsss…uth ja….in 2 mins..n thts a order

Mayank: he smile..thnks…

…..

Finding sum courage he sneak in the forensic room…the sight infront was amazing…she with gloves n 20 utensils ….sleeves up till elbow…hairs in high bun…n pencil in hairs…she was looking cute

Mayank: may I join u '

From tht day of there fight it was the first time he tried to talk with her…it was surprising for her though…she knew he was feeling guilty the way he was avoiding her , trying nt to face her…trying to say but than want away, avoiding company

Nupur: ya sure…after all its ur case to MR.sharma

Mayank: can u pls call me Mayank

Nupur: I told u I want only professional relation

Mayank: its too late for tht…..n u know u ur not just a professional person in my life….wht r u doing

Nupur: han….she was surprise n was findig meaning behind his words…but it was difficult to find anything in his nt to speak expression…

Mayank: in k sath kiya ker rahi hoo

Nupur: weapon find…thy r all round n pointed ..i have used 7 of them put all prints are cuming so clean….

See….she put infront the picture she took after piercing the fake body….to get the duplicate prints….so tht they can match it ….

Mayank: lets try all….wasy it's the strangest way of piercing I have ever seen…..

Nupur: she took one utensil n put it through the neck…talking the picture ..mayank took it for developing

Mayank: u by the time carry on with other….i'll get these…

Nupur: I can do it myself

Mayank: its my case to

Nupur: oki…

She was talking one in her hand ..n she was moving her hand up…whn her lab coat stacked with the table n she droped it on her other hand…

Nupur: ahhh…moan slightly

Wch was quite audible for him…he rash to her …her plam was bleeding to much

Mayank: kya kiya..had hai Nupur…koi kam thik se nhi ker sakti tum ….

Nupur: mei ny kiya kya..woh khud hath per gir hai….

Mayank: tu arm se kerti tu nhi hota na…deep cut jata tu….wrist per bhi gir sakta tha…uper se kisi ko bina batay akelay yaha hoo…had hai….bhar aao….

Nupur: mein kerlo gi

Mayank: chup chap chalo …samhji

He took her to room n did the frist aid….

Nupur: thnks

Mayank: kaha ja rahi ho…u need to have tetanus ….yeah metal piercing hai shayad

Nupur: mein khud kerlo gi….u pls don't bother

Mayank: Nupur u cant ..its ur left hand tht is damge…n ur lefty….how can u do it

Nupur: I can….

Mayank: hilna nhi yaha se smhji…he said in ordering tone

Mayank: samrat….kaha ho

Samrat: kiya hua ..evrythng ok

Mayank: Nupur bhushan k hotay kcuh thik ho sakta hai….hath cut hoa hai…madam ko mjhy se help layni nhi hai…ja us ko inject ker….

Samrat: chukled…acha relax ker tu…mein kerta hoon

Kiya kya ms bhushan ap ny

Nupur: kuch nhi….chal yeah injection laga

Sam: chal yaar tum dono …engagement k lyan late kero gay…

Mayank went inside her cabin to placed the prints she took…n saw piles of file all over…

Mayank: kaha rekho is ko ab…..

He thought of placing it at side but loking at the mess he thought of placing it in between the writing pad in front of her chair

Opening it he just cant resist too read whts written ……with cartonic pictures the profile of all three of them was written…..

Samrat: cool dude, Mayank k sath zayda raha hai is lyan thora khadoos hotay hotay bach gaya..actually benji ny baja liya….a very nice human being , perfect balance of intelligence n looks..with the heart of gold…..and such a sweet friend to hold on with…

He smiled yes she is absolutely right

Benji: ohi mera sweet heart hai yea.h ….janu bacha…..full on masti …pata nhi abhi tak akela kasay survive ker raha hai yaha…but by God meray survival k wahid reason..caring, loving..such a great scnce of humour, and a very strong person too.

Mayank Sharma: reading his name, he gulp down a lump..

ufff…SADUUU…..he frown…khadoos….hain sitary kuch nazar aty hain kuch…actually pagal hai….jo hai woh dekha ta nhi aur jo nhi hai …woh cheehik cheeik ker sab ko bata tan hi…frowned in surprise..

Ghusa kerta hai kisi per…..jab buhat kisi k lyan worried hota hai….gun k bhagir kyun gai tumhara kuch nhi hosakta…..his expressions changed ..

Naraz hota hai…jab kuch samhj nhi ata k kiya keray…….yaar tum loog conce nhi ker sakty..ek case solve nhi hoa abhi tak…had hai

Jab buhat tired ho tu zoor zoor se eyes blink kerta hai……his surprise was increasing, n his heart was feeling a soothing feeling as sumhow sum whn was caressing it delicately with utterly soft hands

Jab life se thag jata hai tu ankein band kerlay ta…..mjhy rest ki koi zaroorat nhi

Per pata nhi kyun …kuch nhi khata…his silence may hurt him…his silence can leave him all alone….pata nhi kis se daar ta hai…..

He smiled looking at the description of his own personality seems like he was standing in a mirror….even tht doesn't present his inner fear…..tracing her word he was looking surprised tht how cum sum know him tht well…..he always knew tht nobody is gonna understand his silences but maybe he was wrong….he was reading it nth time ….n eveytime it was givng him so much of peace..n his smile was getting wider n wider…..

He looked out side n laughing n enjoying figure was going along with samrat…the only thing he can say right now was

Thank U

………….

NM: kya baat hai…date per ja rahi hoon..hmm

Nupur: mom pls…benji ki sis ke engagement hai aj shayd

NM: oh han…aur Mayank se baat hoi

Nupur: mein kyun baat kero…galti us ki hai…try ker raha hai..kernay do us ko bhi pata chaly mein Nupur bhushan hoo

NM: Nupur…mazak ek taraf….but beta woh shayad kah nhi pay…dekho jab koi buhat muskil se kis per trust kerta hai tu woh kisi k bewaqufana(silly) baat bhi chuphany per asy hi react kerta hai….so be humble…

Pating her cheek she left…..

Nupur: why shud I be humble…khadoos

Dressed in light pink colour long shirt with churi daar…with light jewelry n tradional makup…she enter benji's house…to stunt sum1 who never thought she can be like tht…his face cant hide his surprise…..his eyes expressed his adore….n his lips twitched in praise…

Benji: uffu..qayamat ..hai aj tu

Nupur: mein tu her roz qayamat hoon..adab

Benji: ur looking so beautiful yaar…

Nupur : wasy tu bhi kafi handsum lag rah hai….sami dekh ker gaya ..sharing a high five

Benji: acha mera ek kam kerday pls…uper meri behan..hai…pls us ko dekh lay…I cant be her sister na pls

Nupur: sure yaar ….

She proceeds up stirs n opened the door to have n such an adorable n surprising sight….

Mayank: sorry..he was holding his ears.n his head was bowed down

She chuckled looking at him like tht….mayank Sharma like this ..waooo

Suhani: bhai yeah buhat galat baat hai….tum ny kaha tha tum meri shadi k yashchopra wali banao gay….aur tum aj aray hoo….

Mayank: SU tjhy paa hai na kam kuch zayada hai…aur to be very hoenest…mein shyad kuch zayada hi ulaj gaya tha …I forgot

Suhani: bhai..tum ..tum bhool gay….sab thik hai na

Mayank: han baba…aur teri shadi yash chopra wali se bhi zayada grand hogi

Suhani: yashchoper k ek bhi film dekh hai….she said crossing her arms

Mayank: nhi…..koi hero hai..kiya..he said surprised

Suahni laughed n nupur joined her too….to wch both of them turned to the door

Nupur: just imagine yashchopra hero…..

Mayank wht so funny

Suahni: bhai woh producer hai…aur he is above 65….

He was holding his smile but couldn't held it as bth the girl was laughing at him loud

This time he has a closer look at her…true she was looking amazingly beautiful..suhani was surprised at his brother 's look…he never observe a girl like tht..unless she is a suepect….n tht thought made her smile wider…

Nupur: hay suhani..im Nupur

Suahni: oh tu ap Nupur ho…bhai ap ki buhat baat kertay hain…thnks for saving him

Nupur: oye woh mera dost hai ….u need any help

Mayank: suhani. Im leaving…tc…jhadi ajao neechy…warna woh uper ajay ga

Suhani: nhi aay ga ..us k pata hai ap ho yaha…ap ki maar us k aj bhi yaad hai..

Mayank: acha hai yaad rekhy woh..dont mess with my sis in life ever…

Suhani: bhi tum bhi

Suhani: chlo bhai k bad mein bhi tareef ker dayti hoo….ur looking so prtty

Nupur: tumhain kasay pata benji praised me…thnks anyway

Suhani: mein Mayank bhai ki baat ker rahi thi….asay maat dekho….agar bhai kisi ko do baar uper se neechy dekhy tu is k matlab hai koi tu baat hai

Nupur:she smiled… bulkily apny bhai..yani benji per gai hai….

They bth chukled…..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it alot

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loads of love
Edited by cutiepie12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago


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Fiza,
very nice update.
amazing!
loved it.
like nupur a lot...d way she mentioned a professional r'ship with mayank...ws really very nice.
its good that d misunderstanding has been cleared.
like samrat a lot... when he was trying to make mayank understand of his faults that he should say sorry to nupur.
very nice scene.
foresic scene was very nice.
mayank ws too worried for her cut!
something changing!!
nupur ws so sweet...hw sweetly she wrote detail of trio.
she's a very gud observer...d way she wrote theri detail...it seems like she knew them since ages...like it...mayank's full cs ws here...n with reaction...this scene ws emotional ... mayank ws touched
mayank-suhani convo ws very sweet.
awww...he holding his ear n apologize ...very cute!!
i can imagine it.
lolz...nupur ws enjoing this side of mayank...n mayank ws really scared of suhani...lolz
lolz...raj ko mayank ki maar yaad hai!!! lolz
accha hai...wo kavi suhani ko tang nhi karega.
i ws burst out whn mayank asked if yash chopra is a hero!!
it was hilarious.
i ws trying to imagine yash chopra is a hero...n immediately rofling
i cant stop my laughter.
awww...mayank mesmerised by nupur's beauty.
ab to mayank gya!!!
bt i still waiting for his sorry.
awesome update.
continue soon
thanks for the pm.

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow this was super awesome update...
suhaani's role was amazing...
when i read mayank's description written by nupur...i really became emotional...
continue soon...😊😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it lodsss APIII😃

hey API """Anilaloves arjun""" is also my id dats why m only posting my comments wid dis id hope u didn't mind dat why Anilaloves arjun is nt posting any comments sorry api...
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hope they become totally normal again.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Reserved!! :D

*Edited*

The last two updates were amazing Fizaaa!!!👏👏
Finally Mayank realized that he misunderstood Nupur!! Thank god!! 😃
Hehe Nupur Bhushan is not gonna forgive him so easily!! That's the spirit!! 😆
Nupur's description about Sam, Benji n Mayank was very sweet!! Mayank's description by her made me smile n a bit emotional too!!😳
Mayank-Suhani's convo was super-duper sweet!! Aww i can imagine Mayank holding his ears n apologizing!! How sweett!!☺️
Nupur was enjoying this side of Mayank!! 😆 Mayank asked if Yash Chopra is a hero made me burst out!!🤣

Overall, awesome updates!! ⭐️⭐️
Cont soon!!😃

Love,
Bidushy!! ❤️
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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