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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Fizza
Just read Both part 7 and 8
Wonderful
OM God mayank misunderstood Nupur
thats ver bad yar
hope every thing will be fine soon
thanks for Pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Pardon errors, as im sleepy soul again...

CHAPTER: 9

Morning:

Smarat: hey guys

Nupur: hay sami….hows benji

Samart: he is fine will b discharged soon

Nupur: good…cya

He looked at her she left for her cabin …oki..he thought n proceed to mayank's cabin

Watching him like tht he knew sumthing happened

Samrta: tu phir ghar nhi gaya

Mayank: he open his eyes n passed his finger in hairs…..bs kam kertay kertay yahin ankh lag gai….

Smarat: ur ok..

Mayank: ya mjhy kiya hona hai…smarat

Samrat: hmm

Mayank: mjhy sameer ke family ke information chiay tujhy pata hai benji ny kaha rekhi hai

Samrat: yaar best yeah hai k tu nupur se poch lay…after all she was his ex fianc..he took a deep breath at samrats words ….she knew almost everything abt him …n his family n if u want to interrogate them go with her ..it will help

Mayank: tumhain pata hai k she is related to him

Samrat: ya..i mean evry1 knew abt it ….we have discussed with her so many time…news mein bhi aya tha..k its nt right tht she handles tht case…kyun tujhy

Mayank: nthing …u can leave

Samrat: kuch hua hai

Mayank: nhi…pls…

He asked him to leave but he knew him very well to trust his "nhi" in his question…

Maaynk: so tum handle ker rahi thi na news n press ko…tab bhi tum ny realize nhi kiya k mhjy kasay pata hoga…I did nting wrong yesterday ….she hided it from me purpse fully….

She was completely engrossed in her work..she looked out side her cabin …n found him near the coffee bar…blinking his eyes n pressing his neck…

He didn't went home whole night but than y….is he regretting wht he said…concentrated nupur it will never effect him tht he hurt sum1 or not …just forgot it…n do ur work….u need to prove him ..ek terrist ki beti bhi honest hosakti hai….

She looked down thn thts whn he turned to look at the cabin n found her busy with her work….he look for sumtime at her with unknow feeling n blankness in his eyes n thn without collecting coffee he left to be inside his cabin as he found tht place more safe from her …

…..

Thy were fanatically hunting evrythng ..n thn tht day sameers girlfriend arrived at bureu….nupur ask sam to take her to interrogating chmber

Nupur: sam Mayank ko inform kerdo…..

Sam: yaar tum kerdo im on call..e showed his cell

With irritation she reach his cabin..n knocked

Nupur: mr. Sharma..smaeers girlfriend his here..if u want can join ….

Mayank: I m cuming…mr sharma…ah tht was hard to tolerate

Reaching the cabin ..she stood at the door for sumtime…she knew Priya very well n meeting her like tht she never thought…last time she meet her was at the day whn her engagement broke n she wished the best to her n she was hugging her with so much of happiness n thnks …

Closing her eyes she composed herself n reached ….

Mayank saw a strange vulnerability in her today…maybe she was in love with him…how hurting it would be for her to work on this case..she sumhow looks fragile to him today…n thn whn she composed herself…she was rock solid agin…sumthning he didn't likd…its always didn't necessary to be strong…

With a reflex or as if his heart over cum evrythng at the moment ..as evrythng was less important thn to do a gesture for her…he forward his hand n put it on her shoulder slightly preesing it in assurance….

She looked back with a surprise but as soon as she saw him everthng was fresh agin…lets go she said removing his hand…

He again hated himself for wht he did just now

Nupur: priya ..she sofly said

Priya look up to her n huged her tight…sobbing bitterly on her shoulder…she patted her back n make her sit offering a glass of water

Nupur priya im sorry I need to do this …but I want to ask many thngs..we need to get to sameers murders..haina

Priya: she nooded in yes….its ok nupur…its because of u tht press n evry1 is not bothering me ..thnks for all the support….

Nupur: u called me ur friend ..n thn ur thanking…priya when was the last time u meet him

Priya: the night before the murder…I was …I was there with him….in his house…we were celebrating our love…it was the like sum days u n sameer broke up n thn I meet u clearing my guilt's…I though ur too a girl must be in love with him

Nupur: I told u it was complete arranged I have no feelings for him

Mayank: sumwhere he liked her confession ..so it must nt be hurting tht much to her…moreover she never belonged to any1……..

Priya: we spended whole night together…n thn I left at 5 in morning …I have a flight to catch…need to go to mom n dad to inform thm abt sameer…tht we want to get married..u know (a smile appears at her face) he was saying first get married thn go…u will nt return back….dont know why he was sounding so vulnerable tht night as if he knew it our last night..it become..i returned but see he is nt there ..nowhere….

Mayank: y u were nt there at funeral

Priya: his father didn't let me see him last time…he said I killed him for money…

Mayank: u know ur a suspect

Priya: I know but I have anything materialistic of him with me…...i just have him with me..nupur has been his ex fianc it also make her a suspect why just me ……

Mayank: nupur is handling the case priya n u cant say anything against on duty officer

Nupur: mayank…she stoped him as his voice was harsh n rude…..priya do u suspect any1

Priya: his father..whn he told him tht he is marrying me nt u ….he said he will kill him n nobody will get to know…

Nupur: thnks priya..if I'll need ur help I'll call u again….take care

Mayank: gr8 father say she killed his son, she says father..dam it

Nupur: priya cant kill her

Mayank: just because she is showing her vulnerable side ..doesn mean it…she so neatly said tht u killed him …wao n ur protecting her….why u turst people tht so easily

Nupur: ya sumtime I thng why I do so easily…she said with question in his eyes looking into his….n im nt saying because she was sounding vulnerable… she is blood phobic…

Mayank: how do u know….oh wrong question u must be knowing evrythng abt her n his belongings….his tone was complete mocking

Nupur: ya ofcource Mr.sharma…I must me…sumwhere I was at sumtime belongs to him….she said with sharp expression in her eyes tht was sumhow hurting him too much….he didn't like wht she said abt herself

Aur han yeah bhi bata do ..woh insurance ke amount sameer k parents ko transfer hogai hai…aj hojay gi…..

N I know she is blood phobic cause at one time I saw her reacting way to much at a small cut at her hand….today I talked with her family doc…he told me….

Mayank: ok…he said n left form there….

Rashing to his cabin he shut the door n stnd near the window….he was not at all liking the way she is talking to him….

Mayank: did I mean tht way of belonging….how can she say tht….forget it Mayank just concentrate …...why the hell…she is effecting u ..she is no one …..

He was sitting in conference room n was going through the details making a flow diagram of evrthng….

PA: sir coffee..

Mayank: rukh do….

He placed two mug of coffee…..

Looking at the mugs the only thng he can remember was the togetherness ..the time thy spended with eachother….she always use to cum at his cabin or at conference room n thy always together the use to enjoy the tea time

Nupur: yeah time rest k aur enjoy k hota hai ..kiya tum loog apny apny cabins mein chay peetay ho….

He left the place asking PA to gave his coffe in his cabin….

Evrythng Is not tht simple..n running away from wht he did is not at possible…he knew he is wrong …..but cant say it….he want to join them ..he was feeling alone….he can see sam n benji in conference room…just like always enjoying evry bit….but he was reluctant ….relectant of facing her…

Sam: Nupur kya yaar…tum ny hi addat karab ki aura b office mein hoon…ajao conference room mein …tumahry liyan surprise hai

Nupur: kya …..benji…she shouted

Sam: yes…

Nupur: oh gr8..

She rushed to conference ….n hugged him

Nupur: so good to cya yaar…kasa hai tu

Benji: im perfect …miss u all so much …..

Sam: acha u missed us

Nupur: jhota ..ek call bhi nhi ke

Benji: kya kero agar call kerta tu tumhari craving itni bhar jati sam k mein khud per control kasy kerta meri jan

Sam: benji hat ja yaha se ..tujhy pata hai mjhy tera yeah mazak bulkily pasand nhi

Nupur: yeah mazak hi hain na….sam tu us ki feelings ko kyun nhi samhjta

Benji: hain sam dekh….yeah bhi mera pyar dekh sakti hai per tu …..

Sam was making a disgusting face whn holding there laugh was extrmly difficult…sam rushed to the other corner of conference table…n thts whn benji n Nupur broke into to laugh…

Nupur: samrat had hai …yaar tu bhi na

Sam: abay itni sincerity se koi mazaak kerta hai….

Benji: yaar sach mein ghar per tu yeah sab kaha maza…..aray Mayank kaha hai…

Sam: cabin mein…

Benji: kyun us ki coffe tu yeah rahi…us ko bula ..rukh I'll call

He dialed his extension …

Mayank: cuming …..

Benji: is ko kiya hua hai..itni behass kyun ker raha hai..na anay ki….

Sam: pata nhi pora ek week hogaya hai aur is ko deemgh karab hai….na ghar jata hai ….na sahi se baat kerta hai….

Benji: ghar ke baat maat ker yaar….woh wasy bhi kaha ghar jata hai…..raat mein hi jata hai sony …kiya farq parta hai ….wasy bhi us k ghar per kaun hai….

Nupur: kyun us ki family

Sam: no family ….dont know abt his father ….he had a mother but she died during his student life….i thnk us waqt hum high skool mein thay….aur woh wahid insaan tha jis se woh baat kerta tha…woh bhi buhat kam

Nupur: tum us k sath skool se ho…he noded in yes…..tu woh hamesha se asa hi hai

Benji: han…per hum se khabi nhi bhaga …..aj kya hua hai

Sam: woh pareshan hai…kuch hai ji us ko buhat disturb ker raha hai….aur bolay ga woh kahbi nhi….

Mayank: han benji kya hua

Benji: kya hua …yaar tu kya hua…..mein itny dino baad aya hoon

He smiled n hugged him

Mayank: welcum back….

Benji: chal aay yaha bhait ….wasy Nupur yeah tumhar idea buhat acha hai …..

Nupur: kaun sa….

Sam: sab k sath kam kerny k …..its more simple n enjoyable..haina Mayank….

Mayank: hmm…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u APIII
it was nice update
bt i wish ke ab Nupur Mayank se aur naraj na rahe ab maaf bhi kar dein ussey...
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb part
mayank is feeling Guilty
Hope They will sort out their problems soon
thanks for pm
cont soon
Edited by DhanakZ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

mind-blowing update Fiza

hope mayur solve their prob soon loved confo between sam nups n benji
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Posted: 14 years ago
hmm everyone know that nups was sameer's fiance except mayank...
so nups was right- she didnt hide anything.. it was mayank who misunderstood her...whats wrong with Mayank???? he was still strict in his decision. he thot he didnt do anything wrong with nupur-Damn it...But i loved Nupur She was too strong and perfect to handle d case.. i really loved her...

Mayank thot nupur loved sammer but he was wrong... when nups said that she had no feelings 4 him- mayank felt good- Why?????

loved the interrogation part of mayur.

wow su nups was enjoying her work with benji and Sam. they were sharing a cute moment.. loved d frship of this trio..but mayank was not there. he was looking at them .. So finally mayank realize that he was wrong but still he didnt confess it- ye tou pura ki pura sadu hereh gayi

very beautiful update- hope myur ki jaldi patch up ho jaye
thank u so much for ur frequent update.
waiting for next part
TC
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update didi...
loving the cold treatmeant going on btw mayur.,,,,,
samrat and benji are too sweet,...
loved the update..
pls continue soon..
love you soo much...
tc...
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Posted: 14 years ago
ya mayank sorry bolke sab kuch thik kyun nehi kar leta...
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely and amazing update, totally loved it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update Fiza..
Mayank is feeling possessive abt Nupur..he has fallen in luv with her..
and the mystery is really thrilling😛

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