CRIME SCNE INVESTIGATOR..MJHT LAST CH.pg84...23/8 - Page 27

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mulan.

OMG! wht an update!!!!!!!!!! 👏 specailly the end!!! i know yar i have to catch up on the previous parts but i thought atleast i should coment on how amazing this part was!!!!! dont foregt to pm me!!! and tired soul should get some rest plzzz!!!!!!

OH a surprsie to cya here
thnku so muchhh dear...lovly to cya at my writng...
..hehe...thnks fro ur last line...i wish ...but sunday is here so hopefull rest
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Posted: 14 years ago
interesting updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arjun-forever

WHAT????

this is an interesting twist...
intriguing...
love it...
continue soon...

i hope its intresting
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 18anila1

wow api

loved it itne sare day to update
bt aap """WALKING WID U"""" kab updare karogi
plzzz want an update asap plzzz

thnks dear for liking it
n i really love tht u love walkin with u tht much
but i'll apprciate if talks abt walking with u remians at tht froum
n abt tht i have pmed u ...sorry abt the delay ...but hopefull before ramzan im planing to atleast complet the wedding
thnku

Originally posted by: aancchal

intresting point comes inthis case...

thnk u ..i hope u found it intresting

Originally posted by: preety88

fabulous update...cont soon

thnks for comenting ...😆...
thnks for the other favour tooo
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gopi06

interesting updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm

thnks dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
fabulous update
luved mayank concerned towards nupur...and samrat-benji convo was really hilarious...
the end was shocked n interesting too
plzz cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nupur's no., how is it possible? I'm hell confused, n benji kiss wala dialog was so awesome lolz, update soon plz, my heart beat z vry fast nw lolz
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Posted: 14 years ago
fiza yeh nupur ka kya chakkar hai?
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG😲
I hope Mayank doesn't suspect on Nupur😕
Great update anyways!👏
Benji's dialogues are always superb! Makes me laugh too much!😆
Nupur's bindaas attitude is also kaabeel-e-taareef..😛
Superb update!⭐️
Continue soon!😊
Love..
Bidzy❤️

P.S.- Aaj errors nahi the..😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Oki to ur luck, sum1 who has read the error has also reveal the story so I need to update it, else it will spoil whole of my efforts, so here is the next part, the error was tht with chp 6 I updated chp 7 and 8 too..sop 4 of u get to read the whole updates, n I ask them nt to reveal it to other readers…..here u go the next part

CHAPTER: 8

He went through sameers phone record of last 3 months …her number was again n again was there ….not only tht they were nt formal talks ….the minum call length was 8 mins…n max to 45 …..he was fuming with anger…betrayal …she betrayed me …me…she hided such a big thing for me

He called his personal informer….

I need evry detail of nupur bhuhan…yes ACP nupur bhushan…in an hr….us k past present future, personal professional life sab…..ASAP…I have an hr…..

Yes sir

He look through n highlighted each time she called him….he was furiously tapping his pencil on table n through it on the wall

Mayank: I was right …I was dam right abt u …u don't deserve my trust ..why the hell I was trusting u so much…

He received a parcel…opening it…...the details he found made him just not angery …sumthng was paining too…don't know why but it was to much to be on quite..

Mayank: taking his phone….nupur at bureau …right now

Nupur: abhi mayank

Mayank: yes MS bhuhan abhi …any problems

Nupur: nhi ..i am cuming…

He slammed the phone….if sum one can see him knows tht he is gonna kill sum1 tonight….

Nupur: is ko kiya hua….itnay ghusay mein kyun tha…Ya khuda bacha layna ..is khadoos k bhi kuch pata nhi hota …..

………

Nupur she knocked

Mayank: com in

Reaching inside she saw him siting on table n the blade gaze he was giving her …she knew sumthning was terribly wrong

Nupur: kiya hua mayank

Mayank: MS bhuhsan…..have a look…he forward the phone history to her..

Going through it she found nthing so special…it wasn't in her dreams tht wht he wants her to notice is so imp for him

Nupur: wht…

Mayank: wht…whos no is most on his phone Ms bhushan

Nupur: me…so wht

Mayank: so wht …am I know y

Nupur: wht y…we were frinds ….n .

Mayank: abhi bhi jhoot….cause he was ur fianc..dam it….

Nupur: han tu.aur mein jho..

Mayank: tu tum ny yeah mjhy bata na zaroori nhi smahja

Nupur: kya tumhain yeah baat pata nhi thi…she was surprise…yeah tu sab ko pata hai…..

Mayank: ms bhushan mjhy yeah baat kasay pata hogi…ab ny tu takleef ki nhi mjhy batana ki…na k yeah k tum is ki family ko itni achi tarha se janti hoo….hum yaha paglo ki tarha us k closest relative ko jana chahty hai ….n see …she is right in front of us

Nupur: mayank yeah baat news walo tak ko pata hai…benji sam ko pata hai…us din bhi mein ny tum se kaha tha k mein us k funeral mein gai thi …..

Mayank: jhot maat bolo nupur ….benji aur samrat ko beech mein maat lo

Nupur: u have no right to shout at me MR.sharma..aur mein jhoot kyun bolo gi…

It was height now….a) she doenst know wht she has done wrong…b, he was shouting so loudy n tht so in office …c) he is nt ready to listen…man this is it…who the hell he is to behave as she was his property …..

Mayank: acha ….oops sorry …aps interrogate kerny k lyan tu warrant niklwana paray ga…..tum ny itni bardi information chupao aur elzam bhi mjhy per laga rahi hoo…..

Tum ny kisi ko yeah nhi bataya k woh tumhar lover boy tha…aur sab se zayada qareeb se tum us ko janti hoo….so close hai na

Nupur: wht so u want to say …aur woh mera sirf fianc tha…n if u have missed tht information its not my fault …thts ur fault…..tumhain ny agar meri report chk ki hoti tu u would have know it ……

Mayank: mein kisi ki report nhi chk kerta….

Nupur: acha..u missed a detail..so u must need to

Mayank: nupur dont point my work ..dnt u dare do tht

Nupur: tu tum itni dair se kiya ker rahy hoo…kamaka mjhy elzam day rahy hooo….jo cheez sab ko pata hai ……woh tumhain nhi pata nt my fault…..aur mjhy tu yeah samhj nhi arah is mein issue kiya hai…..

Mayank: issues…I'll tell u issue……the biggest suspect of the murder is his personal relative …his ex fianc or his current girl friend…aur woh yeah baat chupati hai

Nupur: stop it mayank Sharma…..ek aur lafaz nhi bs…ja ker apny collogues se pocho…aur mjhy interrogate kerna k lyan warrant nikal waoo…ab tu tum ..mein suepect hon….n I have marked tht ..mjhy tumhai kisi bhi cheez ky baray mein jawab day ny ki zaroorat nhi

Mayank: jawab tu tum ko dayna par ga…..aur asay tu react kerna tumhari blood mein hai

Nupur: MAYANK

Mayank: kyun yeah tu kisi ko nhi pata hoga …tht ur a daughter of terrorist …han

Nupur: mayank…..mein apnay ap per shrminda nhi hoon….aur yeah meri personal life hai…I am a suspect n I know tht , if u want to arrest charge whtever, proof lao ya warrant niklwaoo…mjhy tu samhj nhi araha tumhain problem kiya hai…aur tum kis baat per itna ghussa horahy hoo…..ab se u n me , strict professional relation maintain keray tu acha hai…..it better for u n me too…..

MR..sharma do u want to talk on case …else I don't have time to discus rubbish

Mayank: he tuned around to show his back….

N she left the place n bureo too……

He tuned again back but find her on where there…holding the files in his hand he threw it on floor…

He was dam angry n tht to on wht he didn't knew….

…………..

Standing in her terrace she was watching the the clouds spreading the blessing of God on earth….it seems so clam..n thn so clean…as the water droplet stop drenching everything tht was present in front…they leave a clear, pure, un tanned pictured of world infront of us…she moved out to drench her self in rain to….

Soon the rain stoped n she looked from top to bottom to herself…..the only thing she was finidng was is she has washed out all the traces of her past from her …she looked at her hands n laughed pitfully…..no the red fate running in her blood …she cant change tht ….she knew it can….

She has sumhow has strt living with the fact whose name is attached to her…she has made her place in this world fighting with every difficulty n evry hurdle came in between…she has faced the stone cuming on her face…she has stoped moaning on the pain n blood oozing from her….her heart …..

Its not new ,

But today sumhow it hurt more…He said ..she just cant belive a person she respected so much n sumhow had his own special place in her heart but today he has crossed every limit …y he was behaving so …y ..she has no answer

Stnding infront of his office window tht so late in night…he was recalling evry word of his wht he said…n hatred n anger was increasing inside him…but this time for bth of them…he cant just get out of the fact she didn't told him…she was his fianc…sumone was there in her life so much important…n ..she….n tht other his last words…tht he never ever wanted to say nor it ever has effected him doubting her loyalty ….but wht made him say tht….was unknow ……

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago

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