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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update
luved the foresome n their convo
wow!!!!!nupur chase dat goon without gun n get hurted...aweee poor baby, bt our mayank hero was there to help her...luved mayur sweet moment...n luving n the way u write
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
this FF is becoming more and more interesting...
i am loving it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fiza ji- ap +apki talent mujhe diwana bana diya
BY GOD- ap aisa story kaise likhte hai- u r very intelligent hun...
i loved the way iu r progressing ur srory...
hmmm yaat the murderer is very witty... pata nehi ye do murder ek he admi kya ya dono alag alag hain

hehehehehe nupsand benji were in full nautanki mood.. in dono ki comedy acchi lagti hai]
mayu was sadu as usuall.. but i loved his concern for nups... hmmm nups kliyepereshaan tha.. baat kya hai???? kahi kuch kuch nehi tou ho rahe hai na????lol lol lol

fiza u presented here our bubbly very strongly.. r a usne itni himmat jo dekhayi.. i really loved nups here... bate kuch jaida bolti hai.. but she is very talented...maynk is par tou fida ho rahe hai..lol

amazing update janu
fantastic
lovelyyy

keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: valiyah27

Fiza yaar Faru ka kuch karo..din ba din uski halat bat se batter hoti ja rahi hai..pehle se hi pagal hai aur ab to khatra badh gaya bechari...usey dual identity ka bhi bimari lag gaya🤪🤣...dekha khud ko fiza fiza kehti phir rahi hai...fiza bankar sabko reply derahi hai...very dangerous ab aagey kya hoga...yeh tumhare FF mein murders kahi uska hi kaarnama to nahi😎...kya pata raat ko FF killer ban kar ghumti hogi aise paglon ka koi bharosa nahi🤔 ...kuch treatment suggest karo pagalpan akhri stage par hai🤣🤣...!!!



bapre bap- vally itna bada analysis- wo bhi mujh par

BY GOD- mera itnesare qualties ho aur main nehi janti hti..
dekho valley= main bilkul thik ho- mera demag,akhen sab kuch thik hai...main pagal nehi hu...main fit n fine bahuthe cute sa ek girl hu..:D tum mujhe pagal kyun banana chati ho???? maine tumhara kya bigara hai...????? tum mujh par kiss janam ka badla lena chati ho... fizu i m in denger... mera jaan khatre main hai...plztu kuch kar.. bacha le mujhe ... valley mujhe maar dalegi...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thnku so much for ur love. Those who r asking for walking with u ..it will b updated but nt this week as I am on n off u all know..this ff is already written so being updated , abt the error sum1 asked…tht I will tell u in next update..it wasn't a error it was blunder from a hell tired soul…n tht was me..

Chapter: 7

Mayank: chalo I'll drop u home..u need rest

Samrat was abt to enter his car whn turned back to see Mayank, shocked surprised ..n wht not ….

Nupur: mayank….i thnk I need to go office first..we need to interrogates thm…asa na hoo woh ya tu khud ko kuch kerlay ya sum whn can harm thm ..

Mayank: I'll handle it ..u need reest

Nupur: pls ..i m fine…yaar sirf muscular truma hai….im nt shot…is se zayad bori halat bhi ho chuki hai..islyan I know how to handle pain..dont worry

Mayank: oki….

Samrat was silently listening to conversation….couldn't hold himself he dialed benji 's number

Benji: aray meri jan mjhy itn miss ker rahi thi..

Samart: mayank ny nupur se kaho mein tumhain ghar chor do..kam maat kero u need rest

Benji: kya..kya ..kya

Samart: yeah 3 daafa kyun bol raha hai

Benji: impact acha ata hai trps bhi bharti hain……nhi yaar it cant be Mayank...saying this to girl..thn tht even to nupur….mein arha hon…yeah ithiassik din mein miss nhi kerna chata…

Samart: lol….islsyan tu tujhy bata ya…tujhy nhi lag raha kuch badl raha hai

Benji: us ko kuch mat bolna warna sab ulta hojay ga…keep me update..wah wah….

Samart:..lol..bye tc..

Benji: ek kiss bhi pls Janu

Smart: benji pls…sudhaar ja…yuck

At bureau

Mayank gave a tight punch to the shoter….

Speak up else I can go more worse thn tht….

Shoter: im telling the truth we r given money to shot randomly on bth of them just….

Mayank: who paid u

Shooter: I don't know we received just the money n call….

Mayank: no…n ur phones….

Shooter: I don't have….

He hited him agin in frustration

Nupur: mayank leave him cum out

Mayank: dam it

Nupur: so it was just way of

Mayank: removing ur concentration …..who u were interrogating tht time

Nupur: his ex girlfriend ..recent tht is….the last breakup he had….i was abt to meet her….n thn this happen

Mayank: go n talk to her ….ya choro I'll

Nupur: mayank pls behave normally with me…im fine….i'll go to her ..need to have appointment for tht

Mayank: appointment .?/

Nupur: she is a big celeb..u know….she said dramatically

Maayank: I know

Nupur: ohh….phir tu tum hi jaao

Mayank: matlab……

Nupur: matlab she is tooo hot n pretty …ab mjhy pata chala tum kyun jana chaty tha…sory I dam got it late ..go on ..

Mayynk: nupur…..he said in irritation

Nupur : seriously myank…pls gonon….choclates lay ker jana

Mayank: shut up….go home ..tumhari car agai hai

Nupur: chalo shukar tumahri jan jhoti….bye cya 2mrow

Mayank: bye….tc

……….

Call..

Nupur: mayank I met his gf…

Mayank: ya thn wht she said…..

Nupur: nthing special…he was cheating on her tths why she left him..talking to the other girl..she was full on dram…4 dabay tissue k khatm kerdiaya …boli sirf I really loved him nupur…I realiy did…mimic her..

Mayank: chukled…..so wht do u thnk

Nupur: na.these girls r nt intelligent….to cosmopolitan…but his manger n he had a fight on money matters….n he is vey calmly answering evry question…2 he was the last person seen with him….

Mayank: so we have a suspect..

Nupur: yes ….but he said he was at bar at time of murder

Mayak: in morning??////

Nupur: ya for sum shoting arrangements….n he has a alibi too

Mayank: gr8….chalo u carry on im at sameers case

Nupur: oki…han per ek cheez hai

Mayank: kiya…

Nupur: us ki gf k khana hai k thy were engaged but he broke tht for the new one..

Mayank: is se kiya farq perta hai

Nupur: Mayank..sameer bhi enganed tha

Mayank: aur us ny bhi kisi aur k lyan…nupur r v going in right direction..as tu nhi hai koi humain distract ker raha hai

Nupur: ho skata hai..islyan I thnk tumhar idea better hai…tum sameer aur mein rajveer k case k handle kerti hoo…per ajeeb baat hai …humain suspect bhi tu nhi mil raha …sab buhat neatly cleared hai….

Mayank: hmm.its the most irritating aspect of this case….asa lag raha hai..jasy from 2 mths there is not a single clue…..chlo keep me updated..bye

Nupur: byee byee…sayonara….allah hafiz

Mayank: nupurrr…..

With a smile he looked at his phone..n ptued it back "pagal" ….his smile for sumtime was on his face beautifully expressing developing calmness inside..

………………………….

After talking n going through loads of details the only suspect he could find was sameers ex gf n current or his father in ego….

Blinking his eys various time he looked down n found the sheet 4 days back he got whn benji was shot….

He took bth the sheet n start marking the very frequently dialed nos…

To his surprise in sameers list there was a number sumhow of familiar with him….he was hiting his head n try to remebr where he has seen this number..but he couldn't just recal…

At the same moment his ceel started to rung

Whn he looked at his ceel it was same no…he looked shocked surprised…to dead …he looked an compared each n evry no in disbelieved…he could belive this n sum how did'nt want to belive

This no according to the caller's id belongs n was flashing the name on his cell as

"NUPUR"

In state of shock he rested back at his seat forgetting his ceell was rining again na agin….this cant be

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lalalalalala- yeee i m d best
i m d best
koi heroine yaha(its me)
koi zero yaha(maha, valley)
koi star haui(again me)
koi bekar hai(maha, valley)

main kon hu
tumse main kya kahu
hais saach tou yeee dostooo
i m d best i md best i m d best...lol lol lol

baas baas bahut hogai mera drama now coming to main point

fiza - janu tujhsi great ho
kya update kya-veryyy nice and interesting...


loved sam benji convo
and my mayur were awesome as usual

superb update sweetu
loved it to d core
muahhh -special kiss...LOL LOL LOL
take care
love ya



Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
faria ki bachiii...😡

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nupurrr...😲 😲 😲 wht is ths fiza...???
whts going on.../??by god m dam confuse now...

is she a frnd or officer or wht...???😲
mera mind distract hugaya hai...
itnai mazey se padh rahi thei aaur ab yeh...😕
waisey benji ka vo kiya kiya kiya kehna ...😆😆😆 trp badhti hi...love dit...😆😆
pls update soon... nai tu soch soch k demagh pak jayei ga...

Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
intresting point comes inthis case...
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Posted: 14 years ago
nupur? how come?was she a friend or something? but she didnt say so!
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Posted: 14 years ago
oye hoye Fizu kya hum bata de roshnee ko ki Y nupur bolo bolo😆...!!!

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