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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

ya nupur ko digest karna thora difficult hey...par humare ACP mayank ko difficult kam hi toh pasand hey na...lolz

so true😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: valiyah27

Fiza yaar Faru ka kuch karo..din ba din uski halat bat se batter hoti ja rahi hai..pehle se hi pagal hai aur ab to khatra badh gaya bechari...usey dual identity ka bhi bimari lag gaya🤪🤣...dekha khud ko fiza fiza kehti phir rahi hai...fiza bankar sabko reply derahi hai...very dangerous ab aagey kya hoga...yeh tumhare FF mein murders kahi uska hi kaarnama to nahi😎...kya pata raat ko FF killer ban kar ghumti hogi aise paglon ka koi bharosa nahi🤔 ...kuch treatment suggest karo pagalpan akhri stage par hai🤣🤣...!!!

bs yaar kiya kero faru per a ker tu meri doctory bhi kisi kam ki nhi...yeah case kuch ajeeb hai...us k pc karab hai warna is k woh tumhin khud jawab dayti😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

HELLO GUYS , SOORY FOR TOUBLE, BUT HIS TIME I DID WHT I WAS MISSING TOO MUCH, RPLYD TO U ALL. SO LOV YA , THNKU , TOLEREATE READING

Chapter: 6

Benji: aray wah don sath sath

Nupur: han woh raaat ko

Mayank: anything u find Samrat..he cuted in middle

She looked at him ..n thn sadu…pagal…ajeeb hai ….raat k kya hum date per thay uff….

Samrat: yes…cyanide poisoning

Nupur: gr8 ..

Samrat: bad news….source of cyanide is strange

Nupur: lo

Mayank: matalb

Samrat: matlab im trying to find out but yeah natural source k hai

Nupur: matalb yeah food

Samart: correct…yeah food poising hai simple…no murder

Mayank: samrat wht rubbish we know it's a murder

Nupur: but murderer ny baray arms se is ko acceident k nam day day na hai….

Mayank: yeah hai kaun…he is dam intelligent….

Nupur: us ko paat tha im solving case tu koi caliber k hi aay ga na

Mayank: nupur ..pls…

Sam: aao let me show u the body

Nupur: OMG….look at him…kis k lal kya neela peela hogaya

Mayank: he look up to God for help..n forced his lips nt to curve in a smile wch he failed..

Sam: nupur..he to smiled..han he is blue…see his skin had full on detoriation of cyanide posing…

Looked at the biopsy of his liver cells…they clearly show tht thy r being filtering poison..

The body fully show sign of hypoxia….low oxygen …cyanide attacks the oxygen carrier….so u can se k

(The whole body was showing spot blues….n tht n whn looked at the cell in microscope ….the blood showed they dyed of lack of oxygen…thn the blood sample were positive for cyanide )

Benji: yeah laal neela ho chuka hai…

Mayank: hey ..cut at the wrist

Samrat: n tht so with a butchers knife

Nupur: matalb…

Mayank; u were right..it can be serial killing…

Nupur: but phir Mayank in dono mein motive k bhi koi connection hona chahiy….

Maaynk: han yeah tu hai…

Sam: wasy mein bhi yaha…he said mischievously, as thy were just talking to each other

Nupur: tu…hum yaha kiya romance ker rahy hain..

Mayank hit his head with hand n spread his hand with frustration on his face

Mayank: tu kis ko cher raha hai

Sam: im so sorry …never will do tht agin….meri galti

Nupur: so aging the pool is from wrist wound

Mayank: but yeah tu poison k case hai tu is mein itna wait kera us ny

Sam: han us ny thora wait kiya…u know he didn't need to ..its fast acting poison…thts why if u notice before crime scene was cleaned

Mayank: blood change colour

Nupur: yaar yeah ghoon bhari lassh k case tu kuch ajeeb hi hogaya hai…

Nupur: oki to conference room…abt bth murders…

The first muder

Mayank: time

Samrat: 7 in morning

Nupur: weapon

Benji: unknow..

Nupur: motive

Mayank: parent reviler..money

Benji: strange

Smart: the shaped pool of blood

Mayank: find at crime scene

Samrat: all finger prints of relative or the person himself……girl friend missing..butcher's knife

Nupur: a strange point

Benji: oye we found a ring at crime scene

Nupur: ladies??

Mayank: ya..can be of his girlfriend

Nupur: so we need to locate her..problem yeah k sameer k elwa kisi ny bhi nhi dekha us ko….ab hum kya kis baba se pochy

2nd murder

Nupur: time

Mayank: 2 pm..in noon

Benji: weapon….

Nupur: poison…..food poison…..

Samrat: motive….

Mayank: unknow…maybe a super start reviler..

Nupur: Mayank sirf dhushmni talash ker raha hai…hahah….

Thy all broke in to giggles….nupurrr…in chorus

Han tu I am saying na solid reason it can be..strange

Samrat: again the pool of blood but this time square …..

Mayank: oki guys…I want all of three to spread…talk to sameer n rajeever's family friends evry1 in detail..we need to find motive….

Nupur: two..we need a suspect, a weapon, sumthning sumthing related to murder….oki lets go.

Mayank: bst of luck ….

Spreading through out the city they all talked to evry1 but some how thy didn't get anyone so important as for clue….

PA: sir the cell sheet of sameer…n rajveer

Mayank: thnks….

Looking down the sheet he find a number tht ws common in both of there list….n to his surprise it was the alst person thy called for before the murder….

His cell ring distract him….ya nupur

Nupur: mayank no progress yaar ….is rajveer ek tu itny affair hai k is ki friend, girl friend aur boy friend se agar mein ny baat ki tu bygod mjhy ek aur janam aur layna paray ga….

Mayank: nupurr…seedhy bolay k u want my help…tauntingly

Nupur: ji maha shay ..pls yaar yeah divide kerlo

Mayank: agar na kero tu

Nupur: mayank…pls na

Mayank: ms bhushan asking my help oh my God

Nupur: yeah tum meray sath rahty rahty itni nautanki….benji…she scream

Mayank: nupur …his smirking face turned to fear…wht is tht sound

Nupur: mayank its sum1 shooting on us….mein benji ko backup day ny ja rahi hoon…bye

Mayank: tell me the location dam it…nupur speak up

She just told him near area n put off the cell…reaching to help benji…

The goon were shooting rapidly on benji n nupur….on the other side mayank drove as fast as he can to help them up…God knows but he was fear sumthning today..he has faced worst situation but sumhow her trembling voice was making him weak….i hat girls in this job thts y…cant thy just take care of themselves…God….

She came in front of benji n helped him in shoting the goons down….benji was shooting form the side of car when his arm got

Benji: AHH…shot ..right at the shoulder….

Nupur: benji..she removed her scarf n tied it around his arm….benji here have this gun im going after them…

she run towards the goon n he was running infront of her...he by pass a car n she got hit by it holding the bonnet she jump the other way n kept chasing him…he was running between the shps of cloths …spreading everything for her hurdle….she was jumping n moving protect her self from stoping them….sliding on her knee she hited him on his feet ..he got misbalanced but didn't stop n kept running…

She was abt to grap him whn a rashed car hit her ….

Mayank: NUPUR….he screamed….n took her off her feet colliding with the car he fall on road with Nupur on top

Mayank: nupur.. hold her from shoulder….

Nupur: mayank woh bagah…she looked tht the way…crap….they went away

Mayank: ur ok…

He was still holding her on him, dam caring abt his position…

Nupur: ya ia m..benji..she looked at him shocked….leave I 'll stand by my self..he is shot…go for him

Mayank: ur cuming with me…he is going to hospital…samrat with him…

He moved her off hin leaving her shoulders tht he was tighly holding..offering his hand he made her stand, as she was injured…

Mayank: can u walk

Nupur: standing up she droped her weight on him n he caught her tight…nhi mayank…dramatically…mein ek kadam bhi nhi chal saktti..tumhar saharay k bagir..she smiled mischievously looking at him with hand resting in her head, with one eye open…..

Mayank: he looked at her n thn got her…push her away…bulkily thik ho tu….

Nupur: han tu tum poch hi asay rahy ho….hindi film k hero ki tarha mjhy kya utha ker lay jaty ….she laughed …n he looked at himself inside he was'nt even minding this too…as he can see she was in pain to much of it….n tht so was effecting him…..

Maaynk: if u cant walk I can do tht to…he cam close n said looking in her eyes…

Nupur: i…I …I can walk..just ..just need support…she said with fear n n innocent

Mayank: sure…he smile….

Nupur looked at him …wht I saw he smile ..he smiled at me…oh my god…faint…control nupur…

Placing her arm around his shoulder ..he slided his hand around her waist pulling her close to him n almost holding her whole wait on himself…almost carrying her in his arms…..opening the door of car he placed her as she moan in pain….

She immediately closed her eyes to get back to herself….his clossness is dangerous….very much…he has sumthng hypnotic in him…stay away …her mind warn…

His point of view abt her was changing sumthing towards her from him was changing..she was no ordinary girl who scream on side of cockroach…….she can bear such pain n act brave…can hold herself protect herself n her collogue..she can fight n stood by the best with shoulder to shoulder..

Now n thn he checked her ..she has placed her head back..he came fowrd n pulled the leaver….making the seat in lying positon to comfort her

Nupur: she looked surprised almost feared at sudden pull of lever …looked at him irritated when he chuckled she smiled n said..thnks..

Reaching hospital….she was given treatment whn he left to see benji as he was in OT…samrat came to her

Samrat: how ru

Nupur: perfect

Samrat: wah kya perfection hai…hath per bandage..kneee be complete scratched…. Aur I think back mein bhi kafi zoor ki lagi hai

Nupur: ha yaar…car wala lagta hai mjhy dekhny mein itna masroof the k brake ki jaga accelerator damba diya…aur phir hoga dahram dhorrom….

He shared a high five

Nupur: ouch

Samrat: sorry ….

Nupur: hows benji

Samrat: in OT

Nupur: crap man..i hope he is fine

Mayank: he is fine ..shifted to room

……

Nupur: yaar tum ko holiday chiay thi tu pehly bata daytay…yeah goli khnay ki kiya zaroorat thi…

Benji; mein ny soch hamesha newspaper..why u guys always appear….let me be page 3 celebrity…giggled …..u fine

Nupur: yup

Benji: any1 caught

Nupur: ya the one u shot is dead….n one I shot is at bureau

Benji: n one u were chasing

Nupur: woh bhag gaya…n I didn't have gun k I can shot him..he was just n inch away from me yaaar

Mayank: he turned to her in surprise…she is surely mad….are u mad or wht..tum un ko bagair gun k chase ker rahi thi..deemgh karab hai tumhara..he was hell angry

Nupur: ohh hello….mein tu phir cover lay sakthi thi…benji ko waha bagir cover k without bullets chor dayti

Mayank: tu us ko bullet bhi day sakti thi….

Nupue: han yeah tu mein ny socha hi nhi..(thinking)…kya farq parta hai ….im fine na

Mayank: kuch ho bhi sakta tha nupur…this is such a careless behavior…had hai

Benji: ek min bhaiyo…sab thik hai na…relax mayank

Nupur: yup…wohi tu…u take care…u .need rest..n ya come back soon…warna mein maar jao gi….in do sadu k sath

They bth looked at each other n thn cant hold ther laugh….n sami to join them with Mayank only smiled n left saying get well soon to benji..n soon nupur to left to attend the call

Benji: yeah kiya tha..mayank ko kiya hoa….

Samrat: I don't even want to thng abt this….

Benji: nazar rekh indono per..khas ker mayank per

Samrat: kyun

Benji: tu jnata hai na us ko

Samrat: han …woh apny kareeb kisi ko bhi nhi any day ga …aur agr us ko zara bhi shak hogay k woh abhi kiya ker raha tha …tu

Benji: tu khama ka….nupur will suffer

Samrat: yeah kab sudharay ga….

Benji: pray….shayd ab

Chal tu get well soon…bye

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update..im glad benji and nupur are not seriously hurt...cont soon
Edited by preety88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
How many of u have read the error...do press like at his coment
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb mind blowing update dear
really amazing
So in Between mayur Some thing is cooking
great
A very well written story dear
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh glad that nups n benji r fine now nupur she so brave she was chasing the men without a gun 😳 n mayu helping nupr was lovely loved sis
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update Fiza..
Aww Nupur is so brave.. Chalo now Mayank's opinion about a girl handing a murder case has changed.. That's good..
Thank goodness Nupur and Benji are fine now..
I can totally imagine Mayank fearing for Nupur's life and then he helped her.. Aww..
The gang scene is awesome as usual..
But at the end, yeh Samrat aur Benji kya baat kar rahe the? Nupur will suffer n all? Kuch samajh mein nahi aaya yaar..
Anyways, update soon and please apne errors theek karna agli bar.. hehe..
Take care.. Lots of love..
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Posted: 14 years ago
yayayaya..Nupur chasing a man part was total amazing...
she is so brave😃
and now Mayank's opinion is also chnaged😛
Thank God!!
keep updating
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Posted: 14 years ago
An action packed update!!
Nupur is so brave to chase the assailants without any weapons..and mayu becoming concerned over her injury...really sweet..finally he's getting affected by someone else..now that's really a progress...cont soon😛


P.S:What error were u talking about??do tell us in the next update

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