CRIME SCNE INVESTIGATOR..MJHT LAST CH.pg84...23/8 - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago
fantastic ff...pls add me to ur pm list...cont soon
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valiyah bb like k button dosroo k coment per nhi press kerna hota sirf...coment bhi kern perta hai...wapas ajao tu zara phir dekhit hoon tumhain tu

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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing Nice and beautifully written
I loved it
Thanks for pm
cont soon
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Mayank and Nupur investigating together .. Samrat checking the dead body in forensic lab .. 😍😍 .. Main behosh ho rahi hoon! 🤪 OMG! I can't stop smiling and blushing! 😳 Loved the whole update hun! 😃 MN conversations when they went to the victim's house again was FABULOUS!!!👏⭐️ Loved it to the core yaaar!!😃 .. So Mayank smiled hearing Nupur's silly talks!!! Good sign!!!😉 Precap sounds interesting hun!!! I think Mayank was informed about another murder or something like that!!!😕

GREAT UPDATE FIZAAA!!!!⭐️👏⭐️

Continue soon!!!😛
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--Ruchi-- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely,interesting part...well written👏
starting convo of benji-sam-nupur was hilarious..😆
I am loving this trio😛
anyways Mayur convo is also awesome...both investigating
togather and nupur is not so non-professional...she is having
intelligence ,like that 😃

I love the pace of FF...cont soon
love
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update..
motive kya hoga..muderer ka.. i really wonder?????
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing n a fantastic part
wanna knw wat happens??? suspenseful story...
do cont soon
love
Fiza...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter: 5

Mayank: WHT ..we r cuming

Nupur: wht happen

Mayank: a murder …

Nupur; wht..where

Mayank: we r going there …whom ur calling

Nupur: samrat…..cal benji

Mayank: don't tell me wht to do …I knw my work…u doesn't let me concentrate…not even the single case is solved an another murder….this not done

Nupur: wht ..oye mein ny kiya kya…..wht I have done….mein ny mara hai kiya …had hai…

Mayank: shut up n let me concentrate pls…

Nupur: fine…go to hell….

The city is haunted with murder one by other…7 days back sameer khurana was found dead at his house n now …rajveer sigh..the popular model, acter n heart throb is found suspiciously dead at his apartment..police has nothing to say..it seem the greates ACP mayank Sharma is falling to stop the on going murders in city…we will get back to u with other details…this nikila rao..the news…

Smarat: hey guys….

Nupur: tu kiya jet mein aaya hai….

Mayank: glared….wht happen…

Samart: no weapon , no wound, the way his body is seems like poisoned…

Nupur: thnk God we know sumthing …but

She was looking at keenly …am I looking at wht u all are

Nupur: Mayank side mein aao

Benji: side mein….crime scene per wht u guys are thinking hmm

Mayank: shut up benji…wht happen

Nupur: cum here

Mayank: OMG….freak

Samart: kya hai

Nupur: his position

Mayank didn't notice it n thn he move forward to have a closer look and found she was absolutely right..samrat to stood up to look at the body ….

Benji: she is right

Mayank: its in same way

Nupur: only the blood marked with square…nt circle….but the body is neatly placed in the same way….Samrat forensic…im sure we will not find the name of poison

The man was lying straight, his hands neatly placed on his chest…within the pool of blood..just like the previous murder..the shape was only square

Mayank: don't doubt on him

Nupur: im not doubting on him but on the killer

Benji: mayank sum how she is right…..if he is serial killer it will b hard t find clues…thy way he is perfect at first….

Mayank: search the area till death….we must find a single clue…may be the stupidest thing…samrat need the forensics ASAP…

Samrat: don't worry ..let me chk the side

Nupur: leave the side sami go for the forensic compare bth case we need ur keen help…as u r the only person can dig the clues..pls

Samart: oki sure….

Benji: oki the shape is similar lets see wht else

Nupur: benji….its nt the similarity we r hunting for

Mayank: kya pata kisi ny yeah murder humain disguise kerny k liyan plan kiya hoo…thn

Benji: matlab yeah serial killing nhi hai

Nupur: most possibly

Benji: abhi tu tum log kuch aur kah rahy thy…..ajeeb ho dono….wasy tum do ek jasa kasay soch saktay hoo…..do dil ek jan tak tu suna tha….do insane ek deemag…wah….he said dramatically

Mayank was abt to kill him..n nupur showed a puch to him

Nupur: kam ker….

Staring there search agin found lost of finger prints and foot prints, no sign of blood mark except the pool in wch the dead body was lying….it was late night whn nupur screamed

Nupur: wao..beautiful…

Mayank: wht…evry1 looked at her surprised

Nupur: girls bracelet….

Maayank: where…

Nupur: where kiya here…I put it inside… lab ja ker dekhna…abhi nhi dekho gi….

Maaynk: forget it…..

We r done….after wht 3 days they finished collecting every imp thing from crime scen…n now it was hell late in night…

Benjji: done…

Mayank: me to..lets go….

Moving out the wish each other good night n benji left

Mayank: good night

Nupur: helloo…I don't have a car…aur is waqt mjhy koi public transport nhi milay gi

Mayank: kyun tumhari car kaha hai

Nupur: abhi tak sanction nhi hoi….

Mayank: oki..as if I have any other choice…chalo I'll drop…

They strt there journey to her home….an rain strt to pour done…

Mayank: oh freak

Nupur: I knew it …I so hate rain…agla dialogue yeahi hoga

Mayank: he looked at her with anger….ji nhi I love rain ….he slight show an expression of calmness….

Shoked surprise n excited

Nupur: really..yeah kamal hai

Mayank: …he didn't answerer...but its getting difficult to drive…per thnk god ur home is almost there…here u go…

Nupur: thnku…but ur home is too far away…..andar ajao jab baraish rukh jay to chaly jana…

Mayank: feeling akward at her offer..n tht so sudden..n unexpected ..he was vert reluctant to except the offer

…no its ok I'll mange

Nupur: mayank…stop being stubborn..im nt offering u as im home alone..n she winked

He was stunt at her boldness n thn showed an expression of disbelieved n thn tht he didn't mean tht

Nupur: I know u didn't mean tht but I just cleared ur apprehension

He lookd more surprise .wht she is reading my mind…forget it

Nupur: meri maa ghar per hain…tu tumhari izaat mehfoos hai..han per maa se mein nhi bacha sakti…..she laughed n he smiled

Mayank: nupurr….tum maa ko bhi nhi chorti.had hai

Nupur: acha ab nagairy band kero..n cum inside….

Mayank: thnks….he came with her

N she rung the bell

A lady very young seems just like an elder sister open the door

NM: hello sweet heart

Nupur: hello jani…dekho tumhar liyan guest lai hoon

Mayank: hey..

NM: hello beta…common in

Mayank: beta…mayb her sister is much more decent than her….thnku…

Nupur: mayank she is my mom….n mom he is mayank…barish buhat hai tu I ask him to stay over here….sharif hai tumhain koi khatra nhi

Mayank: MOM.,.he spontaneously said..almost scream

Nupur: han tu….itna surprise kyun horahy hoo…sab ki hoti hai..is mein new kiya hai

Mayank: I thought she is ur sister

Nupur n NS shared n wired expression crossing there arms around there chest the looked at him in dramatic way…SISTER ahhha ..thy said …he was getting n embarrassed n was sumhow feeling shy…stuck in two ladies..who were pulling his leg so neatly..

NS: tum tu kah rahi thi shareif hai

Nupur: meray sath jab tak tha jab tak tu tha…..ab lagata hai tumahin dekh ker

Thy both laughed\

Nupur: tum meri mom k sath flirt keratay hoo…

He was hell embarrassed it just was what he felt n blurred out

Mayank: im sorry I did nt mean that

NS: what that I look like her sister…tu tum waqi flirt ker rahy thy

Mayank: nhi I mean …mein flirt nhi ker raha tha…I was serious …sorry I didn't thought like ur her mom…

He said so cutely the NS can't resist but lovingly spread her hand on his face

NS: it's ok beta…mein sirf mazak ker rahi thi…I can read honesty in ur eyes….nupur is ko towel do….n u go n change warna pori raat ur goona sneeze….

Nupur: yes mom

Strange nupur kis k baat tu ek hi bari mein maan lyati hai…wah miracle…mayank thought….

NS: beta dry urself n take rest …u must be tired…u seems to be ….

Mayank: no im fine

NS: aur han yeah phone rekha hai..call ur family n tell ur not cuming home tonight ..i know tum aj kal k bachy never feels like doing so

Saying so she left

Mayank: I don't have any1 who must be waitng no mater im feeling like tht or nt ….saying tht he rested his head back..

he was tired ..tired of working all day…tired of himself..tired of having nthing else to do…tired of being alone..nthing to look for nthnng to wait for…..nthning to struggle for…..nthing to fight for ….

Looking around the house he found a beautiful picture of her n her mom, in most cutest expression…a smile appered on his face, such a blessd family with no worries….

Nupur: yeah lo coffee…tum bhi kiya yad rekho ga

He look upto her…she was grining …strange wibe she has around her …juvenile, masti,, nautanki..giving reason evry one to smile

Mayank: thnks….he look down…concentrate mayank..

Nupur: mayankkk…aj tu mein ny kamal ke baat dekhi

Mayank: kyaaa…he can guess her teasing tone by know..it has been a moth of them working together n now he know whn wht is cuming his way

Nupur: larkiyan tu flat hai tum per…hey mayank…OMG mayank…woh dekho mayank

Kiya baat hai Mayank …hm hm..she was doing th with full on nuatanki style…mimicking them

Mayank: kya faqr parta hai..

Nupur: wasy in short tumhain kis se farq parta hai….comon mayank larkiya tumhari deewani hain

Mayank: tu…lagata tu asa hai jasay mjhy buhat achy se janti hai….bilwaja mein itna time waste keti hai…aur koi kam hi nhi hai..aur humain bhi kam nhi kerny dayti

Nupur: now pls..thy don't influence ur concentration…wht I have seen u nthing stops u

Mayank: oh mine …Ms bhushan is complimenting my work….thnku ….flirting ..ha

Nupur: hello im nt flirting….jab se milay ho tum meray sath flirt ker rahy ho..pehly crime scne per …he was surprised thn got embarrassed…thn now with my mom…aur mjhy per elzam ..uff kiya zaman agaya hai….wasy mjhy sahk tu pehly hi tha ..per yaqeen hogay …tum mature woman mein interested hon..haina tumhar zamany ki….but mom…

Mayank: nupurrr…shut up mom k baray mein koi asa bolta hai…had hai…n ya pls...baat maat talo tum ny meray kam ke tareef ki

Nupur: ohh heloo…im not…..mayank insaan ho..why u work so much…I mean don't u need break

Mayank: no…wht for

Nupur: what for…to rest ..to enjoy..to live ur life

Mayank: this my life…my work is my life…

Nupur: in sab k bhar bhi zindagi hai…

Mmayank: meray liyan nhi hai..he said sternly n moreover coldly

Nupur: khadoos ho….tumharay sath tu koi larki nhi rah sakti ….God

Mayank: dekha….i know thn why u stupid girls try whn u know nthing abt the person….

Nupur: tu hamesha se asay ho ..yeah ACP k Bharam(attitude) hai yeah….

Mayank: tumhain kiya peoblem hai…agr larkiya mjhy se impress hain….ohh I see I didn't see a bot drowling over u …jealous

Nupur: oh hello im not..Mumbai aao…..crime scne per mjh se pehly meray chany waly pochtay hai

Mayank: so Mumbai police I sso late…..

Nupur: han hindi films se impressed hai….

She said dramtically ..thy lookd at each other n laughed ..though nupurs were audible n mayank's were whispered…..

Mayank: so loads of boyfriend haan

Nupur: splitting coffee…ek bhi nhi…mom ny zabardasti engagement ki thi ..wh bhi nhi bachi…chukled

Mayank: kyun…

Nupur: yaar mjhy bardasht kerna itna assan nhi ..phir there is loads more attched to me that's difficult to digest…

Sensing things changing to too much seriousness

Mayank: Nupur..can I have some peace…n can u tell where I can

Nupur: she shocked her head..ya ..tht way...

He left ..reaching to the door he turend….

Mayank: good nght… thnks for coffee

Nupur: she smile good night….khadoos….

Sorry for errors..thnks for reading n loving it …..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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wow Fiza another superb update...
I think these two murders r related 😛
some psycho-killer🤔
anyways loved Mayur convo😛
and benji is too funny...
loving their work as team😃
do cont soon...

love
ruchi❤️
Edited by --Ruchi-- - 14 years ago

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