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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
hey..
luved the part alot ..
so dey all r ene,ies ...
but i know dis enemyship will be converted into frenship ...
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awesome concept...yayyy...am so happy to read another ff from u...was missing ur ffs...this seems so interesting...me wondering wat could have hapened 20 yrs back that 2 best friends r now enemies...ailo...maan already smitten by geet...well this is bound to happen koz geet is just different...continue soon n thnx for the pm...
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u r back wid another great story i love u for dat muahha n a big hug 4r u loved there character sketch n part 1
update soon
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Awesome cncpt..
cntnue soon..
Add me in ur PM list..
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interesting & awesome concept
lovely character
brilliant start
love it
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Hi...thanks 4 da pm n congrtas on the new FF. read the update n caharcter intro...loved the concept...update soon n please include me in ur pm list
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that was an awesome start..
totaly loved it..
maan staring at geet's eyes
plz pm me when u nxt update
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lovely start... waiting 4 next part...
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Dat was a nice start...
so both families r enemies n they used to be best friends before...but a tragedy changed everything...hope geet n maan wil b able to change the enemies into friends once again...
maan felt something wen he saw geet's eyes...n he wanted to see the face behind that piece of clothe that was showing her eyes nly...
loved it alooott...it was awesome...
do update the next part sooon dear...cnt wait to read more...!!!
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Chapter Two
(Mela)




" Bro.. are you okay?" asked Sam as he looked at Maan who was driving the jeep. " I'm fine" replied Maan as he looked at his hands... the white fabric felt soft and comforting on his hands.

Sam sighed, " Bro.."

Maan didn't look at his brother... Maan felt like he was in a different world... a more comforting world unlike the one he was use to. There was some unknown comfort in that girl's eyes...

They reached the haveli and Maan parked the jeep outside. They went inside to find dadimaa pacing around furiously. She saw them and said, " Aap dono ko adhay ghantay pehle aana tha! kahaan ruk gaye!"

" Dadimaa.. woh zara bhai ko kuch kaam tha" said Sameer. Dadimaa sighed, " Bete... aisa mat kijiye" Dadimaa looked at Maan's hand and was about to say something until...

" Ji dadimaa" said Maan as he rushed upstairs. Dadimaa frowned, " Inko kya hua aur haath? kaisi chot lagi unko??" Sameer smirked, " Pehla Nasha..."

" Kya?" asked Dadimaa. " Kuch nahin... pehli meeting thi naa... aab dekhte hain kay kya hota hai" smirked Sam. Dadimaa frowned, " Acha bete.. yeh choriye.. jaldi se so jayiye..."

Sameer nodded and he left upstairs towards his room.


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The next morning, Veera came into Geet's room to find her sleeping deeply. The white curtains blew in the soft breeze, " Geet..." whispered Veera as she opened the blinds.

" Kya bhabhi... sonay do naa" whined Geet as she put the blanket over her head.

" Good morning.. chalo.. jaldi se neechay aaja.. Daarji tera intezaar kar rahe hain Geeto" smiled Veera. " Kya bhabhi.. unko bata dijiye kay unki rajkumari itna subah KABHI NAHIN uthti" whined Geet.

" Chal! Geet... neechay aaja naa!" said Veera. " Fine.. ek aur ghanta.. please?" asked Geet. Veera sighed, " Bata deti hoon.. agar daarji upar aagaye naa.. to teri khair nahin.."

Geet uncovered herself from the blanket and smiled, " Aap ho naa... mujhe bachanay kay liye"

Veera laughed, " Kamli.. jaldi kar"

Geet nodded and she went back to sleeping, while Meera woke up and went into the washroom..

*******

" Bhai... aaj ek mela ho raha hain" said Sameer. " Haan to?" asked Maan. " It happens in Amritsar every year bro... anyone can come..." said Sameer. " If you want to go... you can" said Maan.

" Bro.. come on, it'll be fun... lets just check it out no?" asked Sameer. " Sam.. bola naa... tum jao... mujhe koi interest nahin hain" replied Maan. " Bhai.. come on... " said Sam.

" Sam why do you want to go there? we have so much work to do" said Maan. " Bhai...our meeting is nearby... we can't check it out? we use to go there as kids" said Sameer.

Maan put his fork down, " That was then Sameer... this is now"

" Bhai... I promise only five minutes... thats it" smiled Sameer. Maan sighed, " Fine..."

" Great!" smiled Sameer. The men went back to eating breakfast and discussing about the meeeting with their clients...

On the other hand, Geet wore a yellow anarkali.

" Wanna be my chamak challo.. oo ohh.." sang Geet as she got ready... Geet brushed her long brown hair that was down her middle back.. she put it to the side and tied the dori's at the back. She wore her silver bangles and earrings.


Geet crept down the stairs and quickly hugged Daarji, " Good morning Daarji"

Daarji glared at her, " Geet! tu kahaan thi! nashtay pe hum sab tera intezaar kar rahe thay!"

" Sorry daarji... woh na.. thora sa thak gayi thi!" smiled Geet. Daarji sighed, " Aaja.. " Geet walked into the dining room to find her mother and sister in law serving the breakfast.

Geet sat down and she saw Sid so concentrated in scribbling away in his notebook. Geet smirked... she reached over and pulled his ear, " OYE SIDD"

Sid looked to his side Geet and smiled, " BUAA!"

Sid dropped his pencil and smiled, " Aap kab aayi bua?"

" Abhi... kal shaam ko aayi thi.. tu homework kar raha tha" smiled Geet. " Bua not fair!" pouted Sid. " Whats not fair ladoo?" asked Geet as she took a paratha on her plate.

" You didn't get me anything from Delhi" frowned Sid. " Oye.. tu to mera favorite hain Sid... tere liye kuch naa laaon.. aisa ho sakta hain? I'll give it to you in the evening" smiled Geet.

Sid smiled his million dollar smile, " Thanks buaa "

" Chal.. nashta kar" said Geet. Sid went to his food and so did Geet. She began talking non stop about the crazy patients that she had to deal with in the past until her eyes went to the clock and then she remembered,

Geet took a deep breath and said " daarji... woh aaj mela ho raha hai.. Kya main aur Meera jaa sakte hain?"

Daarji frowned, " Kyun puttar...?"

" Woh naa.. mujhe churiyaan aur jhumkay lene thay" added Geet. Daarji looked at Geet, " Tu ne abhi pichle mahiney liye thay..?"

" Daarji.. choriye naa.. mujhe shauk hain" smiled Geet. Daarji sighed, " Theek hai puttar... par tu jaldi aajana.. and take a guard and driver with you"

Geet nodded, " Ji daarji"

Geet quickly ate the rest of her breakfast and she drank her glass of milk down with one breath. Rano looked at her with wide eyes, " Geet.. araam se!"

" No time maa!" said Geet as she put her glass down and she grabbed her bag and phone. Geet kissed daarji on the cheek and said, " Jaldi aajaongi!"

" Dehaan se puttar!" called daarji. " Daarji... aap Geet ko itni azaadi kyun dete hain?!" asked Rano. Daarji chuckled, " Woh meri chulbuli si Geet hain..aur usko hasta hua dekhna mujhe bohot acha lagta hain"

Rano sighed, " Yeh ladki bhi naa... har waqt shararat karti rehti hain"

" Choriye naa maa" said Veera as she fed Sid breakfast. " Tu naa.. kuch mat bol... teri wajah se woh bohot bigar gayee hain" replied Rano. Veera chuckled a little and everyone else went back to eating.

*******

Geet walked into Meera's haveli and yelled, " MEEERRAA SINGH RATHODD!" She asked the servants where she was and they said that she was eating breakfast in the dining hall.

Geet rolled her eyes, " And she tells me that I eat!"

Geet walked towards the dining room and she found Meera getting up from her place. " Meeraa!" yelled Geet. Meera turned around, " Geeto! tu kab aayi!"

" Good morning Geet beta!" smiled Kajjal. " Maa!" smiled Geet. Geet ran to Kajjal and hugged her hard, " Maa! kaisi hain aap?"

Kajjal laughed, " Main theek aur tum?"

" Apna kya maa... hum theek hain!!" smiled Geet as she broke out of the hug. " Oye Geetoo!" called Arohi as she came walking into the room. "Arohi bhabhi!!" smiled Geet. She went and hugged her hard, " I missed you all!"

Arohi hugged her hard, " We missed you too Geet!"

They broke out of the hug and Geet smirked, " Oye hoye... why are you glowing Arohi bhabhi?"

Arohi smacked her on the arm, " Chup kar"

" Kuch hua kya?" winked Geet.

Arohi widened her eyes, " Shutup Geet!" Geet laughed, " Sorry sorry... acha baba.. I won't tease you" Arohi blushed a little and then Arjun came walking in as he emailed his employees on his blackberry.

" Veerjii!" called Geet. Arjun looked at her and smiled, " Hey choti! how are you!"

Geet hugged him from the side and said, " Veerji... very bad!"

" Kya choti?" asked Arjun. " Aap sab mujhe kal dekhne bhi nahin aaye!" pouted Geet. " We will choti... we were just busy" replied Arjun. " Fine... " frowned Geet.

Suddenly, Meera's father came walking in and Geet smiled suddenly, " Papaa!"

Jai turned around and smiled, " Arey choti! aap kab aayi?"

" Haww! Meera... stupid... papa ko bhi nahin bataya?" said Geet as she glared at Meera. " Sorry!" called Meera. Geet went and hugged Jai, " How are you papa?"

" Good choti.. how about you?" asked Jai. " Theek.." smiled Geet.

" Acha papa.. main aur Geet us mele main jaa rahe hain..." said Meera. " Acha.. jaldi ajaana!" said Jai. " Thanks papa!" smiled Geet. Jai laughed, " Acha.. do you need a ride?"

" Nahin papa... I brought a guard and driver for Meera and myself" sighed Geet.

Jai laughed, " your Daarji does it for your good choti!"

" I knoww.. par" began Geet. " Acha bye papa.. bye maa.." said Meera. She kissed them on the cheek and dragged Geet out before she started asking anymore questions.

" Byee!" called Geet. The girls went outside and they filed into the car. A jeep followed behind their BMW and the girls and Geet whispered , " Okay.. plan is that we ditch that big munda and we go do what we want!"

" Agar woh lambu maana nahin?" asked Meera. " To Geet Singh Handa bhi kuch kam nahin hain" smirked Geet. Meera rolled her eyes, " You always manage to get us in trouble Geet!"

" Not always... just when you don't follow my instructions" replied Geet.

" Fine!" sighed Meera. They drove on for half an hour until Geet heard the music playing and she got excited, " Oye hoyee!! marjawaan! I can't wait!"

" Relax yaar!" said Meera. "Drive fast chacha jii!" said Geet. " Geet beti one minute!" said chachajii. Chacha jii parked the car outside the gates and the girls filed out of the car.

" Ek minute" said Geet.

She walked upto the guards that were in the jeep. " Bhaiya jii!" called Geet. " Ji madam?" said the man. " Agar aapko apni naukri pyari hain, to you are going to stay here and give me your phones" said Geet.

" Madam.. we have strict orders not to leave you" replied the guard.

" And I have the full authority as Mohinderlal Singh Handa's only grandaughter to take your phones and to make you stay in your jeeps" snapped Geet. The guards sighed, " No madam... hum nahin karsakte!"

" I promise you that you won't lose your job... " smiled Geet. The guards sighed, " Theek hain Maam.. par hum yahi hain..."

" Okay good and phones please?" asked Geet as she held out her hands. " Nikalo nikalo!" said Geet. She waited until they all took out their phones and Geet put it all in her bag.

" Good! and stay here!" said Geet. The guards nodded and Geet waved, " Bye!"

Meera looked at her surprised, " How did you do that?"

" Apni bhi koi setting hai naa!" smirked Geet. She grabbed her arm and they rushed into the mela...

*********

" Sam this better be five minutes okay?" snapped Maan as he tried to get reception. Sameer smirked, " Bhai.. seriously... "

" Fast.. and your time starts now!" said Maan. The two guys went in and Maan looked around impatiently while Sameer felt so good to recollect all his memories that he and his brother had in this mela.

There were bright colors... a bright atmosphere with loud music... Many families were enjoying the food, rides and the stalls. The guys walked in further and found many travelling groups to be performing.

" Bhai! do you want some gol gappe?" asked Sameer. Maan scrunched his face, " Uh... No.. do you know how unhygenic that is?"

" Bhai.. we use to eat it all the time! come on!" said Sameer. " No" replied Maan. " Fine.. just come with me so I can get it" said Sameer. " No.. you go ahead... or else I won't be able to eat dinner tonight" replied Maan.

Sameer rolled his eyes, " Okay fine.. one second"

Sameer went off towards the other stall leaving Maan to walk around himself.

He walked towards the middle of the grounds where a ferris wheel was and in front of it was a large ground where a lot of people were dancing to the music. Maan stood there and waited for Sameer.

On the other hand, Geet and Meera walked through the stalls and looked at the ones that sold bangles especially... " Oye Meera! I want churiyaan naa!" said Geet as she pointed to the large stall towards the middle grounds where people were dancing to the music.

" Chal! I want some too" said Meera. The girls ran towards the stall and started checking the bangles. Geet tried on every color and style..

On the other hand, Sameer came walking in with a bag of peanuts in his hands. " Bhai...I think I opted for some peanuts instead..." said Sameer.

Maan turned around and then he was about to say something until he saw Geet again... in the stall a little bit away from them.

Maan didn't reply to Sameer but he looked on at Geet...

He was absolutely awestruck by her. She was absolutely beautiful... Her long brown hair rested down her back and her eyes were that same emerald green that he saw yesterday night. Her skin was fair and absolutely flawless...her lips were a soft rosy pink... Her smile was so innocent... so beautiful.

Maan wondered if he was seeing things.She looked like an angel to him... he had never seen a girl like her before. No woman managed to capture his thoughts and his eyes so quickly before... and this girl did it in the first time? Who was she? What is her name?

" Bro... hello? Im talking to you... where are you lost?" asked Sameer as he waved his hand in front of Maan's face. Maan didn't even flinch... his eyes were glued to something in front of him.

Sameer frowned and he turned around and then he knew exactly what Maan was looking at. A small smirk appeared on Sameer's face and he said, " To yeh dekh rahe thay bhai saab"

" Lage raho bhai.. lage raho..." said Sameer as he looked at Geet... But then... his eyes darted towards Meera who was standing beside Geet. " Who is she?" thought Sameer as he stepped a little closer to see Meera.

Then... if you had assumed that Maan was staring... then Sameer was no less. He couldn't take his eyes off of Meera... her smile.. her calm eyes... and long dark brown hair that was down her back...

Sameer and Maan looked at Meera and Geet who were giggling amongst themselves and trying bangles on. " Chal Geet! payal leni hain naa!" said Meera. " Chal!" smiled Geet as she grabbed her arm and they went off towards the other side.

Maan and Sameer snapped out of their thoughts and Sam smirked, " Let's go bhai"

Maan looked around with a guilty expression... but he said, " Chalo"

Maan started to walk on and Sameer frowned, " Kamaal hain... I thought he would stay because of that girl! and if he stayed, then it would give me the chance to look at her friend!"

" Abhi dekhta hoon" smirked Sameer. He walked on behind Maan and Maan said, " Chote.."

Sameer looked up, " Ji bhai..."

" Agay chalo" said Maan. Sameer nodded and he walked up with Maan. Sameer looked at his brother's eyes that were clearly looking for someone... and that someone was that girl at the sarhad... and at the stalls.

" Lets go from there" said Maan. Sameer was about to say that the exit was on the other side... but he understood... clearly Maan was looking for the girl. " Wah bhai.. wah..."smirked Sameer.

Maan's eyes were furiously searching for a glimpse of Geet... The guys walked through the stalls and then Maan spotted Geet. She was trying earrings on and shaking them a little to see if they made a noise.

Geet had her usual laugh and smile... Maan was mesmarized... He couldn't take his eyes, mind and heart off of her now. Geet turned around and so did Meera... Maan and Sameer walked behind him as they giggled amongst themselves.

" Bhai... are you looking at that girl again?" interrupted Sameer. Maan snapped out of his trance and glared at him, " No I'm not... lets go" Maan walked faster and Sameer almost had to run to catch up to him.

" Wait bhai!" called Sameer. Maan purposely ignored Geet's presence and pushed past her. His arm hit her shoulder and she dropped her bags on the floor... people stepped on her bangles and payals...

Geet stumbled a little and Meera grabbed her arm to help her regain her balance. " Oye!" called Geet. " Oye hero! excuse me! aakhein hain ya button! dikhaye nahin deta kya?!" called Geet.

What made Geet angry is that he didn't dare to turn back to say sorry. He looked like an educated man with his attire... but he acted so rudely!

"Abhi dikhati hoon... usne Geet Singh Handa se panga liya hain... apology to main lekar hi rahongi! haye rabba he even broke my bangles and payals!" snapped Geet.

" Leave it naa Geet... khadoos is never going to say sorry!" said Meera.

Geet gave her bags to Meera and took her heels off in order to run after him. " Kya kar rahi hain tu?" asked Meera. " Usne Dr. Geet Singh Handa se panga liya hain Meera! koi aisi vaisi ladki se nahin!" snapped Geet.

Sameer saw the interaction and he looked a little scared, " Oh no... yeh ladki to full on fighting mood main hain... agar bhai se panga liya to pata nahin kya hoga!"

Sameer tried to catch upto Geet but he was cut off by Meera who ran in front of him... " Hey wait!" called Sameer. Meera stopped and turned around, " Ji?"

Sameer stopped and caught his breath, " Um... I think you just saw what my brother did... please tell your friend that Im sorry on behalf of him... she looks like shes going to rip his head off"

Meera rolled her eyes, " Woh to karegi... aap mujhe kyun keh rahe hain... jaa kar Geet se kahein! aur usko rokein!"

" Mere saath chalo!" said Sameer. He grabbed her hand and she looked at him with widened eyes, " Eh! excuse me! haath kyun pakra!"

" Will you shut up and come?" said Sameer. Meera opened her mouth wide, " Did you just tell me to shutup?"

" Yes I did! congratulations!!" added Sameer sarcastically.

Meera narrowed her eyes and she smacked his hand quite hard off of hers, " Get your hands off of me"

Sameer let go of her hands and rubbed the spot in pain where she smacked. " Ouch man... tum ladki ho kya?"

" Haan ladki hoon! aapko koi problem hain kya?" snapped Meera. " OKAY MERI MAA... can we please go get my brother and your best friend?" said Sameer. If this girl was a handful... He wondered if Geet was even worse.

" Lets go!" said Meera. They ran towards Geet who was storming towards Maan. Maan stopped and looked around, "Chote... Chotee" called Maan. He turned around and saw the same girl storming towards him.

Except that she looked very angry.

Geet walked upto him and said, " Oye! dekh kar kyun nahin chalte!"

Maan narrowed his eyes, " Excuse me?" Geet's eyes widened, " Aaap?!"

" Haan main... aur tum?" added Maan with sarcasm in his voice.

. Sameer and Meera caught up behind them and both said, " Oh no!"

" Listen... I have no time to listen to your rubbish okay? snapped Maan.

"Oye hero... there is something called manners that you use!" snapped Geet.

" Oh thankyou mother for reminding me!" added Maan sarcastically.

" Excuse me?" snapped Geet as she stepped closer to him.

Maan looked into her emerald green eyes that were lined perfectly with kohl... her eyelashes were long and absolutely perfect. Maan could see the liveliness in her eyes... the thousand of emotions were playing in her beautiful eyes...

" Aapne Geet se panga liya hain... apology to main lekar jaaongi! meri churiyaan tod di... aur mere payals saare ganday ho gaye hain! sirf aapki waja se!" snapped Geet as stepped back still holding his gaze.

Maan snapped out of the trance and said, " Me and apology? by the way... you are talking to Maan...Thakur Maan Singh Khurana"

Geet widened her eyes, " Oh yeah?..."

Sameer and Meera were standing there afraid of the fight that was going to errupt. " Oh he is so going down..." whispered Meera. " Bhai... just step away from her... please?" whispered Sameer as he covered his face with his hands...

Geet raised an eyebrow and gave the most meanest look, " Listen, if you hold that much pride... and that much arrogance... then you'll never get anything good in your life... remember my words Maan Singh Khurana!"

Maan smirked, " Really now?"

" Of course... and you just picked a fight with Geet Singh Handa!" snapped Geet. Maan's eyes widened... Sameer's eyebrows went up, " Oh no! shes a Handa.. Bhai! it'll be bloodshed... lets go!"

" You're a Handa?" asked Maan. " And you're a Khurana?Woww! I thanks for the introduction!" added Geet sarcastically.

They both looked at eachother with pure anger and hatred. " Daarji was right! no one should ever trust a Khurana!" snapped Geet.

" And daadajii was right... no one should ever respect a Handa!" snapped Maan. " Oh don't you start with me Khurana... I swear... I don't even need guards to take care of you!... I can do it myself!" replied Geet.

Maan let out a sarcastic chuckle, " Btw.. tum ek ladki ho..."

" Ladki hoon, par tumhe ladke ki tarah sabak sikha sakti hoon!" snapped Geet.

" Oh no! we have to end this before a fight breaks out!" said Meera. " Lets go.. you handle your friend... and I'll handle my bro" added Sameer.

They walked towards Geet and Maan who were looking at eachother straight in the face... Not a single line of fear across their faces.

" If you're really a man... then hit me" taunted Geet. Maan's blood was boiling...

Meera grabbed Geet's arm and pulled her away, " Stop this Geet! lets go!"

" Meera NO... usko ek sabak sikha kar jaaongi!" said Geet. " Darr gayii?" added Maan as he looked at her with triumph. " NEVER" yelled Geet. Meera pulled her away and Geet was yelling out all the curses and swear words towards Maan.

Sameer pulled Maan away, " Bro.. ab ho gaya.. lets go..." Maan rolled his eyes, " Geet Singh Handa... yeah right!"

" Bhai! just leave it alone... please" pleaded Sameer. " Lets go... this mela was crap anyway" said Maan. They all disappeared in opposite sides of the mela...

*******

"Pagal to nahin ho gayi! this is was going to be bloodshed if veerji or the guards saw you talking to Maan!" snapped Meera as the girls exited out of the mela, towards the car.

" I don't care! That Khurana has way too much ego and pride... someone needed to break it one day or another!" replied Geet. " Geet! this could have been bad! you are lucky that veerji or the guards weren't there!" said Meera.

" Aaggh! sadu khadoos dusht dhanav... egotisicle devil!" cursed Geet. They got to the car and the guards started the car and said, " Maam.. kuch hua kya? aap bohot ghussay mein lag rahi hain"

Meera turned to them, " Kuch nahin... bus kuch kooh gaya tha madam kaa... iss liye ghussa hain"

The guards looked at one another, " Ji.."

Geet got into the car and so did Meera. " Itni jaldi aagayi beti?" asked chachajii. " Chacha jii... chaliye.. Geet ko bohot ghussa aaya hai" warned Meera. Chacha jii nodded and Geet crossed her arms and began mumbling curses at Maan again.

Meera sighed, " Geet... ghussa chor... ho gaya so ho gaya naa"

********

" Bro.. ho gaya so ho gaya naa? kuch nahin hota... she is just a stubborn and spoilt girl" said Sameer. Maan drove the jeep furiously and ignored Sameer. " Bro.. please.. ghussa choriye..." added Sameer.

Maan didn't say a word and only looked ahead.

Sameer didn't even try to say a word to him... He sighed and look on ahead...

********

The girls reached home and Geet filed out of the car with her bags and shut the car door extra hard. Chacha jii frowned, " Meera Beti.. Geet beti theek hain?"

" Haan chachajii.. woh theek hain par ghussay main hain" said Meera. Chachaa jii understood and nodded. Meera filed out of the car and shut the door behind her. She ran upto Geet and followed behind her into the haveli.

Geet walked past Veera who was in the main hall. Meera followed behind her until Veera stopped her, " Meera... idhar aa"

Meera stopped and she turned around and walked towards Veera. " Ji bhabhi?" asked Meera. " Geet ko kya hua?" asked Veera. " Ghussay main hain aur aap hi uska ghussa thanda karsakti hain" said Meera.

" Kyun kya hua?" asked Veera.

" Upar chaliye mere saath" said Meera. Veera nodded and she went upstairs with Meera. They walked into Geet's room to find her pacing around mumbling something.

" Geet.." said Veera. Geet stopped and looked at her, " Ji bhabhi?"

" Kya hua... Meera keh rahi hain kay tu ghussay main hain?" asked Veera. Geet glared at Meera but Meera ignored it, " I'll tell you bhabhi, but promise to God that you won't tell anyone"

Meera shut the door and locked it. Veera frowned, " Meera.. kya hua tujhe?"

Meera sat Veera down on the bed and sat beside her. " Bhabhi... promise first" said Meera. " Acha promise.. kya hua?" asked Veera. Meera told her about the encounter with the Khurana brothers in the mela.

Veera's eyes widened, " Kya?!"

" Idiot.. moron.. dusht dhanav" snapped Geet. Veera looked at Geet and said, " Yeh kya kar diya tum dono ne! tum log ko pata hain kay kya ho sakta tha!"

" I don't care... usne Geet Singh Handa se panga liya tha!" snapped Geet. Veera stood up and she grabbed Geet's arm, " Tu jhansi ki rani banti phirti hain Geet... par tujhe andaaza hain kay kya ho sakta tha!"

Geet looked away stubbornly. " Geet! listen to me! Don't ever try to fight with him ever again!" snapped Veera. "LOOK AT ME" hissed Veera. Geet looked at her sister in law that was clearly worried and angry.

" Ghussa chor... aur yeh sab bhool ja! agar maine suna kay tu usse phir se laari to dekhna tera haal kya hoga!" said Veera. Geet sighed, " Bhabhi its not fair! usne mujhe dhaka diya aur sorry bhi nahin bola!"

" Stop acting childish Geet!" said Veera. " Par bhabhi!" argued Geet. " CHUP" snapped Veera.

Geet shut up right away and looked down... Veera sighed and put her hand Geet's cheek, " Geet... things are so delicate... please aisi ghalti kabhi mat karna and I don't care whose fault it is... "

Geet looked up and said, " Fine..."

" Ghussa chor.." said Veera. Geet sighed and nodded... " Chal.. aaja mere saath" said Veera. Veera sat down on the bed and Geet sat on the floor and leaned on Veera's knee.

Veera stroked Geet's hair, " Geet... you're heart is in the right place... but things are delicate... you should be thanking God that your brother or grandfather were not there!"

" I know bhabhi... but woh itna khadoos kyun hain? ek sorry to bolna tha!" said Geet. Veera chuckled, " Sab tere jaise nahin hotay Geet"

" Ghussa kam ho gaye jhansi ki rani? main jaaon?" asked Meera as she rolled her eyes. Geet laughed a little, " Jaa...warna papa tera bohot bura haal karenge" Meera nodded and she hugged Geet and Veera before going.

Meera exited and Geet only sighed, " Bhabhi... koi mujhe batata kyun nahin hain kay 20 saal pehle kya hua tha?!"

Veera stiffened and she said, " Geet... tujhe bata diya gaya tha naa?"

" Bhabhi.. please asliyat kya hain... im not a little girl anymore" said Geet. " Geet.. tu itni ziddi kyun hain?" asked Veera. " Bhabhi batao naa" pleaded Geet. Veera was about to say something until she heard Tej calling her.

" VEERAA" called Tej. Veera jolted up and Geet stood up as well. " Aaati hoon tere paas.. ek min" said Veera. Geet nodded and Veera ran out of the room saying, " Ji aayi!"

Geet sighed and she looked underneath her bed and took out a small box. Geet shut the door and made sure that it was jammed so no one could enter her room She felt like being left alone

She sat down back on her bed and Geet sighed, " I miss you papa jii"

The only thing that would calm Geet down would be seeing her fathers picture and talking to it. Geet took out a photo of her father and said, " Papa ji... I miss you so much... where are you when I need you the most?"

Rajveer Singh Handa was quite the kind man... he was tough in the exterior when he was handling business, but he was soft for his family.

Geet ran her fingers along the picture and tears started to brim in her eyes... " Papa ji..." whispered Geet. Hot tears rolled down her eyes as she shakily said, " Aapko pata hain kay mujhe itna ghussa aaya tha... I wish you were here to tell me to calm down..."

" Papa.. sab kehte hain kay aap accident main maarey gaye thay... par mujhe pata hain kay aisa kuch nahin hua tha... " whispered Geet.

Geet started to softly cry... " Papa.. ek baar aajayiye naa..."

Geet cried for a few minutes until she laid down and slowly fell asleep with her fathers picture in her hands.

Meanwhile, Veera knocked on her door and said, " Geet.. darwaaza khol"

She heard no reply and Veera got worried, " Haye rabba... yeh ladki kuch kar naa lay!"

Veera ran towards her room and found Tej just exiting. He looked at her with a frown, " Kya hua Veera?"

" Woh ji.. woh..." began Veera. " Bol naa!" said Tej. " Geet.. " said Veera breathlessly. Tej widened his eyes, " Kya!?"

" Uska kamra band hain aur woh bohot ghussay main thi... zara aakay dekhiye naa!" said Veera. " Aaa mere saath!" said Tej. They ran towards Geet's room and Tej said, " Woh ghussa kyun ho rahi thi!?"

" Pata nahin" lied Veera. Tej tried to push the door open, " OYE GEET.. DARWAAZA KHOL!"

Suddenly, Rano and Daarji came running behind them, " Tej! kya hua!?"

" Geet ne darwaaza band kiya hain... aur woh bohot ghussay main thi" said Veera. " Darwaaza KHOL TEJ..." yelled Daarji. Tej tried to push the door open until Veera said, " Ek minute jii... chabi lekar aati hoon!"

" Jaldi jaa!" yelled Tej. Veera ran into her room and she grabbed the bunch of house keys that Rano had given her. Veera gave it to Tej and they tried opening the door with many of them.

Until, they finally got the right key and they tried to open the door. It was jammed. Tej pushed the door open with all his power and found Geet lying on her bed sleeping... Daarji pushed passed them and went to Geet's bedside.

He peered over and saw Geet sleeping with a tear rolling down her eyes. Daarji sighed... he sat on the side and then his eyes darted towards the picture that she clutched between her fingers.

Daarji took it softly from her and she moved around a little. Daarji's heart fell... Geet was clutching her father's picture...

Rano came walking upto him and she saw the picture... A tear rolled down her eyes... Tej put his arms around his mother and said, " Maa... Geet hum sab ko zaroorat hain..."

" Bechari.. hum sab usse sach chupaate hain kay woh kabhi dukhi na ho" said Veera. " Geet ko batana hoga" said Rano coldheartedly. " Teri tabiyat theek hain kya Rano?" asked Daarji.

" Daarji.. main theek hoon, par main apni bachi ko aisay nahin dekh sakti!" whispered Rano.

" Thand rakh Rano.. thand rakh.. kuch nahin hoga" said Daarji. "Chaliye maa.. aapke kamre main chalte hain" smiled Veera

Rano nodded and she walked off with Veera and Tej put his hand on daarji's shoulder, " Sonay dein usko..."

Daarji nodded and he got up. He put the picture back near her and put his hand on her head softly, " meri bachi..."

" Pata hain Tej puttar? Rajveer ne mujhe kaha tha kay main Geet ka khayal rakhoon... apni beti ki tarah.. tere papa ne mujhse vaada liya tha kay usko koi dukh.. koi ansoo naa aaye... uski har khwaish poori ki jayee...aur main abhi uska aakhri vaada poora karta aaya hoon puttar.." whispered Daarji.

Tej smiled a little, " Ji daarji... "

" Chal.. Geet ko sonay dein..uska kal pehla din hain naa... hospital main" said Daarji. Tej nodded and left with daarji out of Geet's room.


*******

Maan laid in his bed that night thinking about what had happened these two days... no matter how hard he tried... he couldn't stop thinking about Geet. Her beautiful eyes... and chulbuli attitude made him smile a little.

Maan's beautiful dream was broken into pieces when he remembered that he has no right to think that about her... they were enemies... their families were enemies...

Maan took a deep breath and he looked at his hand that was healing..

Her soft tone kept ringing in his ears... The concern showed in her eyes when she said to him, " Don't ever put your hands on those ever again... warna infection bhi ho sakta hai"

He looked at the cloth that was put on his side table... the pure white silk was stained with his blood... He touched the cloth and felt its warmness again...

He remembered her beautiful face... the liveliness and joy in her eyes... She looked so cute when she was angry... A total Jhansi Ki Rani. But there was a sky and ground difference between the girl that he saw at the sarhad and the girl he talked to at the mela. The concern in her eyes when he got hurt captured his soul...

He snapped out of it suddenly when he heard his door creak a little. " Maan.. aap soo gaye?" asked Dadimaa. Maan quickly put the cloth away in his drawer and said, " Aayiye Dadimaa"

Dadimaa entered and Maan turned the lamp on.

Dadimaa sat on the bed and said, " Humne suna tha kay aapko choot lagi hain?"

" Main theek hoon dadimaa" said Maan. " Haath dikhayiye" said Dadimaa. " Dadimaa... Im fine" replied Maan. " Haath dijiye!" ordered Dadimaa. Maan sighed and he showed his hands.

" Maan... yeh kaisa hua?" asked Dadimaa.

" I accidently brushed my hands against the barbed wires" replied Maan. Dadimaa frowned, " Kyun?"

Maan didn't want to tell her the reason...

" Kuch nahin dadimaa, maine alcohol laga diya tha.. its fine now" replied Maan. Dadimaa nodded, " Acha bete... kal aapko Sanjeevani jaana hoga, kyunki aapke dadajii ka appointment hain specialist kay paas...aur hum saab ko hona chahiye"

" Ji dadimaa" replied Maan. " And the top doctors of Sanjeevani will be lookiing after your dadajii...and we have the best cardiologist from Delhi living here to look after him!" smiled Dadimaa.

Maan nodded, " Ji.. kal subah ko appointment hain..."

" Ji Maan" said Dadimaa.

" Okay... " nodded Maan. Dadimaa sighed and smiled, " I heard the doctor is the best!"

" I hope so... " replied Maan. " Acha bete, aap soo jayiye" smiled Dadimaa. She kissed him on the forehead and she exited the room. Maan turned the lights off and went back into bed.



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