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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you so much for ur sweet comments...
So here i have for u... DOUBLE DHAMAKA!!!! 😊
 
I will be updating... 2 part in a go...
part 50 & Part 51 😃
 
*** PART 50 ***

both groups..searched more about d topic...from deir respective houses...
only to made deir way back...at around 11..having dinner togethre...

 
nxt mroning...

6:00am
maan was sleeping peacefully on his bed...holding geet dupatta tightly into his arms...
he did miss her...but couldn't meet her as her frnds were gonna cum...
last he could do was stare her photo nedlessly...rejoying deir moements when dey were in each other
s arms..sum time ago...
he couldn't stop watching her phot...smelling her dupatta..feeling her whole night...
he himself didn't know when he fell asleep...
his exersize morely skipped...thnx to miss.handa...
least he expected was...
dadi entered maan's room..to find d sleepy maan..wid a DUPATTA...
...
dadi started giggling...bringing maan back from his dreamland
maan in half sleep - dadi kya huva...still yawning...
dadi sat beside him - aap ko abhi tak nahi pata ke hum kyu has rahe hai...
maan made a questioning face...as he actually didn't know...y dadi was giggling...
dadi took dupatta from his hand...
he suddenly realized..he was sleeping..holding dupatta...
he avoided dadi's gaze completely...
as a embarrasing yet cute smile escaped from his lips..making dadi's day...
maan - dadi..please..stop it now...
dadi - humne kuchh bhi nahi kaha...maan..aap hi sharma rahe hai..
maan - dadi...m not blushing..please..aap yahan kya kar rahe ho..
dadi - humne kaha tha na ke ghar ja ke baki baten karenge...
maan dared not look at dadi..who was looking at dupatta...
maan took d dupatta n kept aside...
dadi - aap ne unse kaha...
maan - kisse...kya kaha...
dadi rolled her eyes - maan..usi ladki se...
maan - dadi..isme kehne ki kya baat hai..ye koi project hai..jisme discussion karne ki jarurat hai...
dadi put her hand on her forehead thinking.." i pity dat gal who vil b his..how unromantic..inhe to romance ka R bhi nahi aata..."
dadi - maan please..ye project..discussion..inhe jara baju me rakhe...aur dil se sochiye...
maan - dadi..i know wat r u trying to say...dnt worry dadi..usse pata hai...
dadi smiled - ok..1 good news...aur..kya wo bhi...
maan - dadi wo meri hai..sirf meri...
dadi - maan bete please...etni possessiveness achha nahi beta...uske dil me kya hai ye bhi apko sochna chahiye...
maan - mujhe pata hai..uske dil me kya hai..aur wo bhi jante hai ke wo sirf meri...
dadi - achha thik hai...hume uske bare me nahi batayenge..??..uska naam..parivar..
maan - dadi she is handa's daughter...
dadi smiled taking relief - handa's daughter...dats nice...wo bahot hi bhale log hai...
maan smiled...
dadi - aur..uski pasand..na pasand...
maan - mene uske liye dresses select ki hai..i didn't like her wearing short dresses...
dadi started to get litle tense now...
he was way tooo much possessive...literally too much...
how vil she handle his possessiveness...
hope she vil too love maan d same way he do to her...
dadi - achha hume kab milayenge...
maan - bahot jald dadi...
dadi - i vil b waiting son...
maan smiled...
saying dis dadi made her way out..as well maan freshened himself ..leaving for office...

...
while d day was not normal for geet...
11:30...
lec was about to end..when princi entered classroom wid 1 more person...
princi - students...dis is hameer...hameer rizvi...son of mr.sameer rizvi...
hameer gave a faint smile at everyone...
princi - he has just took admission 2day..i know its quite late...but he was busy wid sum importnt work..so i hope u vil all co-operate wid him...
all students gave a smile...
as well hameer made his way on d empty sit...

...
aftr lectures...

group was enjoying deir food chating in canteen..
while hameer made his way to d grp...
hameer to geet - heyy..m hameer...u..?
geet - umm..m geet..hi...
ranbir - hi..dis is ranbir...y u took admission so late...
hameers didn't pay any attension to ranbir's single word...n continued...
hameer - nice name geet...m throwing a party 2night...at ville-disc..wud u like to join...
ranbir as well d group didn't like his attitude...
while geet too felt odd wid his gaze..which was not normal..more of lusty...
geet gave a faint smile - umm..i really cnt..i hav sum other works..sum other time...
hameer didn't like her rejection...
he moved a bit closer - cum on..i mean..u can cum wid ur group...u all r invited..dont spoil d mood...
mayank - we really cnt hameer...btw..nice to meet u..we shud take a leave now...
hameer didn't move.. - cum on geet...now we r classmates...its just a party...cumon guys...ok..i vil keep party at home..now please..dnt say no...for me..please...
...
group find him..too ziddy dan a normal person...like a spoil brat..or sumthing else..
all looked at each other...
no1 wanted to go...
nupur - actually hume project work karna hai..dats y..hum chahkar bhi nahi aa sakte...thnx btw...
hameer - ohh project..can i b a part of ur project..as of now..i really dnt hav any group..so can i join u all...
all gave him an unwanted smile..
dey couldn't say no directly..dat vil b rude...
geet - actually we r already 6..n d limit for project is only 6..sorry...
hameer gave a evil smile - dnt worry about it..i vil talk to princi..dat means i m in...
nisha - no..u cnt..its alwz been we 6..so we r really sorry...
hameer - umm...okkk..but atleast u can join me for party...
geet rolled her eyes..
" is he mad..ek baat kahi baat samajh nahi aati kya isse...10 bar bola we cnt still...bloody dumbo.."

...
hameer took deir silence as yes...
he immediately handed over 6 invitation cards in geet's hand..rather touching her hand..he took leave without letting anybody speak anything...
...
geet didn't like his mere touch...she felt sumthing odd..sumthing she couldn't name..
all gave each others a weired look...
n blabbered in1 go...
OUGGHHH..IRRITATING !!!!!!!!!!

...
while going at a small distance..hameer hav a weired smile on his face as he looked at geet...
"u hav to geet...u hav to..."...thinking he made his way out..

...
d moments geet reached her room...
her mob rang...
geet got excited noticing its him...
geet - kahiye...
maan - pehle darwaza to band kar lo...
geet shocked..how did he know dat i reached bedroom...oughhh..he is impossible...
geet locked d door...making her to bed..rolling...
maan - blue dress me achhee lag rahi ho...
geet blushed - sirf achhee...
maan smiled - ok..bahot achhee...
geet puted her lips - sirf bahot achhee...
maan naughtily - haan...
geet fumed in anger - i hate...
b4 she could complete her sentence...
she found herself in air..hanged in two strong arms..wid a familiar scent burning her skin...
her eyes widened..n den..filled wid happiness n excitement...
its him...
how is he here...
at dis time...
ohh god...
wat is he doing...
mujhe god me kyu uthaya hai..mujhe chalna aata hai...
hmm...strong muscles haan...my mr.muscle...
par mujhe kahan le ja rahe hai...
she just stared at him wid 100 of thoughts running in her mind..while geet immediately snaked herself around his neck..holding him tight...
he smiled..
as he made his way...to b balcony...
putting her down...
she came back to conscious...
maan - aise ghoor ke kya dekh rahi ho...
geet immediately relaxed her eyes...
geet - aap yahan kaise..aur wo bhi is waqt...koi kaam dham nahi hai...
maan - kaam dham to hai...par ms-hello-i-can-walk ne abhitak khana to khaya nahi hoga..to mene socha ke kyu na ek achha sa romantic lunch ho jaye...
...
GEET FELT LIKE GIGGLING...
BUT SHE AGAIN CONTINUED..PUTTING ATTITUDE ON HER CUTE NOSE...
geet - ohhh..to isliye aap yahan aaye..haan haan..humari to kisi ko yaad aati hi nahi...
...
maan spined her round in a jerk..making her back stick his chest...
her back just hit his chest..not letting any gap cum in betwenn...
geet alwz loved him being dominant..just wid her...
maan whispered in her ear - tum waqt pe khana kyu nahi khati...
while his face..breathed all her scnet in..making himself addicted to her smell...like a drug...
she felt goosebumps in her neck..as his face..entered in d hollow of her neck..making maximum space required for burrying his face inside her hairs..kissing her neck gently yet seductively...
she just whispered - maan...as her body started to melt..in his intoxicating smell...
he was too way passionate to handle..she thought...
he again whispered - tum waqt par khana kyu nahi khati...haan geet
she smiled loving his different way of showing care...
geet - aap ne kyu nahi khaya...
he smiled..burrying himself more n more into her...brushing his face like giving life to himself...like his skin was dying to touch her skin...just stay sticked..or it vil die...
...
maan - " i vil not tolerate dis carelessness again wid my mishty..."
she just loved dose words...
every time she sees him...
she finds a new maan...
sumtime angry...
sumtime lovely n romantic..
sumtime like frndd...
sumtime possessive
sumtime too mature...
sumtime like akid..
sumtimelike a lover...
she loved every maan...she loved pampering his every emotion...so did he...

...
her heart missed a beat..as his hands snaked her waist tightly...never to let go...
dey were standing in d balcony...
no1 cared about anything...
maan himself didn't know y he took her to d calbony..he would hav talked to her all dis in room also..den y he brought her in balcony...all he knew..was his heart commanded him to pick her to balcony...
to experince a new flavour of love...
but was was it...??

spoilers : d new flavour...???wat can it b...??..think think

 
 
 
*** PART 51 ***

her heart missed a beat..as his hands snaked her waist tightly...never to let go...
dey were standing in d balcony...
none of both cared about anything...
maan himself didn't know y he took her to d calbony..he would hav talked to her all dis in room also..den y he brought her in balcony...all he knew..was his heart commanded his to pick her to balcony...
to experince a new flavour of love...
but was was it...??

while geet didn't ask him even once..y he took her here...
she never asked him question..
coz she knew..he can never do anything wrong...
all he could do is just for her good n good...
he is hers...alwzzz...like he possessed her...forever n ever...

...
geet felt sudden chillness in her waist as maan's hands traveled back from her waist..to meet her hands...
...
maan's fingers ran slowlt through her finger making his way from her milky white skin...seducing her...
both encircled deir fingers into each others holding tight..never to let go...

*
[kind of titanic scene..but sum changes vil b dere...for vidualisation u can think of titanic scene...]
*

d moment deir fingers met..dey melted into each other...
deir mere touch could make dem die for each other...
maan stood exactly behind her...
while geet rested her back on his chest comfortably...
both were totally lost into each other...
both really didn't understang y dey made position like dis all of a sudden...
neither dey wanted to know...all dey knew was dey r wid each other n dats more dan enough to make d moment special...
to enjoy a very new flavour of deir love...
...

as dey mutually looked up at d sky to meet dose black clouds which were slowly hiding d sky behind him...holding each other tight...
a sudden drop of rain fell on her lower lip..which didn't go unnoticed by maan...
he captivated d drop in his gaze...who sat comfortably on her lower lip...
maan didn't like it...
no1 has d right to touch her other dan him..its only him..on1 else...
how dare d drop touch her lip...
...

d music started wid beautyfull rythm...

*
[ for visualising dis scene more lively..play d song *hum tum* from movie *hum tum*..n read while lisening to dis song...u vil feel dose emotion i has put in dis scene...]
*

dere faces were few millimetres away from each other..
like both could see every inch of each other..even d tiny wrinkles of her lip was clear to his eyes...
his gaze shifted from her lips to her eyes..who were differently looking into his eyes...catching him into d unbreakable gaze...
he founf sumthing different..like an hidden submission of her...
he never doubted she could ever say NO to him for anything...
neither did she...
he kept looking into her eyes...

" sanson ko sanson me...
...dhalne do jara...

she felt an increadable in his gaze...like it can see through her soul..
she didn't dare to break d gaze...as he captivated her in his gaze...
hmmm
hmmm
la la la la la la la la laaa

both kept looking at each other...
maan eyes were continuously looking at her lip...while geet's eye kept looking at hi eyes...

sanson ko sanso me
dhalne do jara

dhimi si dhakan ko
badhne do jara

a sudden jealousy wid dat drop ran through him...
d current passed through her spine as he started to decrease d distance between deir lips...
he stared her lips closely...d luscious rosy lips wid pink gloss...which were shaking..wid a soft smile curled on it...

lamhon ki guzarish hai ke...
...pass aa jaye...
hum...
...hum tum
tum...
...hum tum...

deir heartbeats started increasing faster n faster as d distance between deir lips kept decreasing...
deir fingers tightened into each others...like d fear of loosing each other even for a second thrilled dem to death...

ankhon me humko...
...utarane do jara..
bahon me humko...
...pighalne do jara...

she wanted to lost herself into his deep dark peircing eyes...
d way he did very easily...
she wanted to get crushed into his strong arms...
like every single bone of her vil get alive within him...

lamhon ki guzarish hai ye
ke pass aa jaye
hum
hum tum
tum
hum tum

she stepped a step back to cum more close to him from back..if dere was any space possible...
his heart throbbed erraticaly as her back sticked into his chest...
like she felt impossible to cum out of dis passionable moment...

...
suddenly everything became silent...
only sound playing were deir uncertain heart beats...n...

...and...

d strong clouds who were fighting wid each others making terrible sounds making her dig her nails into his skin..bleeding it...
...
he didn't care about it...wat effected him was her litle scary face due to dose horrible sounds...
he looked staright to her heart consoling it not to get scared as im here...
...

d urge to feel each others lips..started increasing dangerously...

...
dat drop which was resting on her lower lip..rolled down...as it got scared wid maan's danerous look at him..how dare u touch my geet's lip...?????
...
d moment d drop left her..maan felt satisfied..but still he wanted to wipe off dat litle touch which was still on her lips...
...
dey were mere inches away from each other...

maan was about to close dat tiny gap...
...
a big cloud roared..making dangerous sound..breaking d silence into pieces...

...
n d thrilling rain started...
it was just a sec..
n dey were totally drentched into d rain of love...
like nature too loved d moment like anything...
nature wanted dem to feel d moment like never b4...

silvate kahin...
...karvate kahin...

fail jaye kajal...
...bhi tera...

both were totally drentched in d rain of love...
dey could feel d heat exchaning between dem..wid d shivers of clod rain...
a deadly combination...
deir clothes were wet..but deir hotels were burning in heat..
maan could feel d shivers on her shaking lips...her body wag getting curved into her wet clothes..which were exposing d shape of her body...
as his gaze ran slowly to her eyes again..he could see litle spoiled kajal..at d corner..due to d continuous watering getting pured on dem...

nazaron me ho...
...guzarata huva...

khwabon ka koi...
...kafila...

 

geet could feel dat urge in his eyes..like d time has stopped..n moment vil remain forever...like never to end...
like she could see a special layer of dreams..non-ending wishes..which were filling into his eyes..dreams of deir love..deir togetherness...beinng each others forever...
her eyes too filled wid his dreams..like she was living his dreaming..

zismon ko ruhon ka...
...jalne do jara...
sharamo haya ko...
...machalne do jara...

deir lips were dieing to touch each other...like d fire was burning dem from inside..only d touch of each other could same dem...
like dey wanted each other..to break all d barriers of blush n shyness...to feel dose goosebumps...full heartedly...

god knows..for how long..dey were standing in d same position...
completely lost into each other...
n d rain was pouring completely..making dem experince a new flavour of love...
feeling d love under rain..omg...wat a feeling...
deir hearts stopped wid just d thought...
how special d moment was..
dey could dei 100 times..for dis single moment..to b wid each other...
...

lamho ki guzarish hai ye...
...paas aa jaye...
hum...
...hum tum...
tum...
...hum tum...

deir wet bodies..started to get colapsed into each other...
as deir lips were sticked on d dangerous place just an inch away from each other...
dey felt like dey heart vil explode any moment..
d moment had passion..desire...
even d clothes..didn't matter anymore...as dey were totally wet...dey didn't cum in any use to dem to hide anything from each other..neither dey wanted...

...

chhulo badan...
...magar is tarah...

jaise surila...
...saaz ho...

to his most lovely surprise...
geet herself broke d last barrier..slightly sliding her luscious rosy pink lips on his M shaped lips..just a mere touch..just a mere brush..not even a kiss...but a softest yet most dangerous touch..n she pulled away to meet his eyes...
maan froze for a moment..couldn't gain wat just happned...dose deir lips touc each other..or he just dreamed..d most beautifull dream of his life...
he searched into her eyes..getting d ans...dat yes...dey did touch each other..just a sec b4...
his heart stopped beating...so did her...
his happiness..her happiness crossed all d limits...
which was totally visible in deir eyes...how much dey liked dat mere touc...dey felt complete..like dey finally found d lacking feeling of deir heart..yes..dey did find...
...
d rain also enjoyed d unforgetable moment...
started raining more heavily..pouring all d blesses on d cuple...
giving dem reperincing dis new flavour of deir love...LOVE IN RAIN...or rather say...RAIN OF LOVE ?

hum rahe chhupe...
...teri zulf me...
kholo ke aakar...
...aazad ho...

maan couldn't control his heart...
d thought dat deir lips just touched each other..was making him insane..wanted dat touch again...he felt as if he vil die if she leave him...
d thout scared him..wat if sum1 vil snatch her away from him...
NO...NEVER...!!!!1
he closed his eyes..burrying her face inside her open hairs...filling his lungs..wid her smell..threwing out all d fear..feeling secured inside her...
...
geet could feel dat fear in his touch...
she took her hand closer followed by his hand...breaking dat position in which dey remained for how long time dey demself dnt know...
...
his hand snaked over her waist...making himself secured inside her..as well making her secured in his arms...
his face brushed inside her hairs...making her insane...

achal ko sine se...
...dhalne do jara...

shabnam ki bunde...
...fisalne do jara...

due to d continuous brush...
her dupatta slipped down from her neck...making her whire milky skin visible to his eyes...
geet's heart missed several beat as his lips moved from d scalp of her hairs..to her neck..brushing gently yet seducingly...
he could hear dose irregular heart beats of her...so could she...
slowly n gently..his hand encircled her waist fully..ecxhaing his hands..over her waist..grabbing her fully into him...
her hands encircled over his...
geet's half closed eyes...closed fully..as his brush changed into damp kisses...
geet could feel his touch on her exposed skin of neck n back...
like he was slowly licking dose drops of water which were continuously falling on her..rather touching..he wanted to drink each n every drops dat touched his geet...he could even leave dat single drop which touched his geet...wat if sum1 else touch dat drops..no no...he can never let dat happen...
he sensuously kept drinking all d water from her neck..dat kept pouring...
...

lamhon ki guzarish hai ke...
...paas aa jaye...

hum...
...hum tum...
tum...
...hum tum...


his lips froze at d place when he heard dat most sensual moan "..maan..." from her shivering lips...
dat bring him back to his senses...
he just couldn't stop filling great..like his heart felt complete...
every time he touched her..he felt it...
he could feel dat blush n smile on her soft pink lips...
how much he wanted to touch it..he cnt even imagine how much...
he loved it so much wen she taking in-charge touched his lips...

...
he slowly did let go her skin from his lips...
n watched her closely...
her hands..dose were snaked over his..her eyes..which were closed in anticipation..loving d moment...her body which was sticked to her dress n den to him..her hairs dose were litle messed up..ok..he messed it..he smiled...
...
he again looked at d sky...
which was still raining..but slowly compare to b4...
ohh goddd...
wat a beautifull moment dey just shared..wish he could save it in his heart..wish he could stop d time ti live dat moment again..
all he could was jusy relish dose moment again n again..but he could not bring dat time back..he wished he could

SPOILERS : guess????

 
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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
both parts r simply superb...maan & geet passionate moment is described very nicely...cont soon...thanks 4 pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update... loved both the parts
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome as always...
love it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...pyaar ka pehla  monsoon... lvd it bt i think dadi is rite abt maan being overpossessive n i dnt like dis new guy...
do update soon...n pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb updates...loved 'em !!
👏👏👏👏
Plz cont soon...
Thnx soo much for the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ...part
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update..
cntnue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing dear but not fair i thought maan will complete the kiss .plsss update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome all parts 
loved it 
passionte kiss 
pls this new guy not good keep away from geet 
geet should tell maan about the hameer