CRIME SCNE INVESTIGATOR..MJHT LAST CH.pg84...23/8 - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
amazinggg
nupur entry bahut amazing hai :D
superb updtae
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Posted: 14 years ago
had beeen missing this nokjhok so unique to this couple...
awesome loved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update fiza didi...loved nupur's entry and mayur's fight... its gonna be equally fun nd thrilling...
awesome update...
pls continue soon...
love u soo much..
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Posted: 14 years ago
What an entry yar
Mayur fight was superb
Dekhta han dono ma sa kon bachta ha
Thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
ROFL

Sheesh

Amazing

Loved it

Cont soon

This is turning out 2 be awesum
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nupur's intro was superb..
I can assume hw mad Mayank is with Nupur nw..😆
hope that u turn this anger into luv soon😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter: 4

Oki as it's a quick ff assume they have been working for sumdays together now as I am not paying much time in developing relations ..n ya soory I have no time to chk tu pardon errors..oops n a bear hug n thnks to u all

Things have finally strt settling up between the two best..as Mayank was more patient finding Nupur not so professional but even not non professional, sumhow he knew she has her way of working and Nupur was now ok working with this khadoos as benji n sami were making her time soo good…but she never left a chance to irritate Mayank sum how she enjoys doing so…the frown, tht anger is worth the efforts puted in

Benji n nupur were chatting an enjoying..

Nupur: pata nhi kiya hua hai

Benji: tum us ko jhora na nhi chaiy tha…u left n he died

Nupur: benji its nt a joke….he was really a good person

Samrat: soory for hurting u but yeah asay hi hai

Benji: u have feelings for him

Nupur: matalb tu maray ga tab bhi sam yeahi bolay ga …does it mean u n sam…sorry samrat is to big for me so sam,,….han tu is k matlab tu aur sam are couple kiya

Sam: oh pls…..

Benji: chi,,,mera koi caliber hai

Nupur: han yeah bhi hai..tera caliber sorry sam mein ny tumhara caliber kyun gira diya

Benji: not fiar…

Samrat: thnku..laughed

Nupur: wasy yeah boss kaha hain..late woh bhi 2 min aur 4 sec…..

Benji: starnge

Mayank: sorry ..le

Nupur: u shud be.. ur late

Mayank: I know ….n I apologies

Nupure: apology se 2 : 5 sec wapas nhi asktay

Mayank: am I reporting to u ..tht ur maintain a record of me

Nupur: am I reporting to u thts why on my first day u were maintaining a record on me….

Mayank: forget it….yes samrat go on

Smarat: maynak I could'nt found anything around the wound neither in his blood…..

Mayank: how can be it possible…..anythng in his blood

Sam: chalo I'll show u

Reaching the forensic lab he uncover the body…..

Sam: see this around his neck….its has no septic, no metal pricking after effects….

Nupur: n its nt even a perfect sharp hole

Sam: right….he has forced sumthng in it

Mayank: means is was tourcher n kill

Sam: nt exactly…this area is to sensitive….if u gonna make sumthng In the person die within I min…

Nupur: she raised her hand n put near it ….like tht..sumting goes in at between 180 n 90 degree angle..n right at the vein..

Mayank: perfect…means he can b a professional killer to…

Sam: but the problem is tht …finger prints or shoe marks found are of him or his gf…n she is out from past month

Nupur: she is cumiing back with few days…I talked with her father today….

Sam: oh thts gr8…u shud go to her ..

Nupur; n wht abt the wrist wound

Sam: its after he killed him

Mayank: just for the sake of blood….

Sam: ya….he cut it deep n made a pool of blood around

Nupur: but it has mark of metal

Sam: yes it was the butcher's knife …n he didn't clean it …it was lying beside him whn we found him dead….

Mayank: but it isn't used in murder

Sam: no…its flat n poited from the edge…but wht has killed him must be round n pointed

Mayank: wht..round n pointed….like a nail or suthning

Sam: ya but no metal…..

Nupur: sharp plastic, glass

Maaynk: cant be, he died within a min …

Sam: n plastic cut …n needs to be penetrated with force…so its pathway in side body is always leave edge n broken skin…tht isn't here

Nupur: n glass will leave a part of it inside….thn kiya…us ko dekha aur woh maar gaya…..

Samrat: ….just residue of spice spray in his eyes…..

Nupur: so he was dead of wht..the cut at his at wrist or neck

Samrat: neck…..its older thn tht of wrist…..

Nupur: I want to check the crime scen again……

Mayank: evry detail is there in the file…..

Nupur: mayank ..mayb u have missed any thng ….we can check agin

Mayank: I cant miss anything ..samhji….

Nupur: oki u stay here im going with benji….

Mayank: kyun akelay nhi ja sakti …..lol

Nupur : oh helloo….i can mange on my own..now u don't dare to cum behind me…

Mayank: oh hello….im not dying to …go ahead

Nupur: I am ….bye.

Next day..She went to the place….n open it …strange kind of emotion arose inside her…with shivers in her hand she opened the door…the sequence written in the file she was imagining n enter…

First she looked around the nob no sign of brakeage …tht mean maybe he knew him..entering inside she was keenly observing ervythng…..

Nupur: if the killer was a know person ..he would'nt have struggled….but the strugled can be in fear and pain of spice spray…the pool of blood …seems he was enjoying the way he killed him…..this spece spray is sumthng thts bothering me….y to use it..such an old fashion killer

Mayank: y

She almost jumped from the place…n passed a angery glared at him

Mayank: oops ms.bhushan got scared…

Nupur: shut up….

The sound of sum steps made them look at the direction of window…with flick of second mayank hold her from wasit n stretch her towards him…she was stunned at his action..but he hided themselves behind the cabinet…n ask her to be silent…she looked at the side as he was too close to her …n she wasn't liking it at all…n mayank's eyes droped on her…n he was actually looking at her ..so close so near…...this was the time when he realized how close he was stnding to her…he was holding her so strongly….too protectively….feeling soo awkaward at his own gesture..he slided his hand off her waist….when they agin heard the voice….tht he thnk as distracted his own mind , was questioning abt wht he was doing ….

But with the view in front of them thy looked at each other shocked till death…n than broke in laughter….

Nupur: OMG mayank….its a rat..uff…..

He too join the smile n shock his head in disbelieve….n thn got sumthing

Mayank:…forget it..he become serious realize wht he was ….enjoying the moment ?/….

Nupur: she was surprised at his sudden change of mood…khadoos …he even regards smiling whole hearty….wasay mayank…muskarany mein koi saza nhi hoti ….

Myanak: wht ..he looked surprised

Nupur: han …God has given u teeth …n ya there..sumwhere there

He moves back as she move fowaard towards her…he was not liking the way she was too frank with him…it disturbs him.

Nupur: idher..kahni I saw dimples…

He twitched his lip in fake irritation …as he was feeling embarrassed at her sudden complements tht were cuming too rapid…

Nupur: kafi cute lagtay hoo….zayada muskarany ke zaroort nhi kam kero

Myanak: mein koi nhi muskura raha hon..tum hi flirt ker rhi ho jab se

Nupur: oh helloo…mein flirt woh bhi tumhary sath…mera deemag karab hai….deevar se sir nhi maarti mein…mera khoon buhat precious hai….

Mayank: are u done with the side…

She was looking around the kitchen ..opening the fridge…n looking around keenly

Nupur: where is his room..

Mayank: up

Nupur: lets chk it ….

Thy went around n she found a picture

Nupur: his girl friend…..

Mayank: ya….

Nupur: she seems to be so sweet..can she kill

Mayank: u cant b judgmental from a picture nupur

Nupur: but she was believe to be so much in love with him…look at this picture…thy look so much happy

She was looking at the picture with so many emotions tht almost surprise mayank…for the first time he saw a girl in her…she Is not at all emotional…never react seeing dead bodies blood, even rats..but than reacting to a love story .…sumhow attached with the person….girlish

Mayank: common…we cant be so emotional for a suspect..

Nupur: ya I know….rest in peace..she said n put it back

Mayank: ur done with site

Nupur: ya I am done…but seems like we r missing to many thinks

Mayank: it because we cant find anything on abt the case….no weapon…moreover it strnge..we cant find anything form crime scnce….

Nupur: wht abt motive….he is young rich

Mayank: girlfriend….

Nupur: family or sibling for money….

Mayank: thief

Nupur: cant be no robbery

Mayank: how do u know….

Nupur: u told me…sahi baataya tha na …..

Mayank: if u don't trust …before he can complete

Nupur: nhi..dramticlally ….tum per tu mein khud se zayda trust kerti hoon..By God…

Mayank: tum khabi serious hoti ho

Nupur: nhi…I belive if u take life too seriously..u don't get out alive..

Mayank: u never get out of life alive….he laugh pitfully…..

Nupur: but atleast I want to die smiling…log jab meray funeral per aay tu mjhy dekhay tu they cant stop smiling…rembering my jokes…mein sooch rahin hoon..yeah last dress coat

Mayank: joker k rekh layna …buhat suit keray ga…

Nupur; aur tum jangaaz khan ka..buhat suit keray ga…

He couldn't help but smile at her foolish ness….she was single pices he said in his mind n shocke his head in disbleive tht he has to work with her on this case..tht the way things are going ..it seems gonna take longer time thn need

Nupur: oh helloo silence n all…meri booraiyan deemgh mein khatam hogai hoon tu …kuch plan sochy

Mayank: kasa plan

Nupur: movie per ya date per jany ga

He turned around in shock

WHT

Nupur: no way im nt at all serious….case solve kerny k…can u ask sumone to arrange his cell no …tracing lets talk with his nerigbours…

Mayank: I have already done….lets talk to them

They went around the neighbor n only information they got was tht around 7 in morning the heard his door bell rung thrice or four times…else neither they heard any scream or anyone moving out….

Nupur: hey we r from crime branch..can we have a min with u

Mayank: just cant get it how much so clean it can be…higly strange….

Nupur: per asa kya ho sakta hai …just k residue wound se na milay….lets go to head quarters n mark the details we know…maybe we get sumthning…..

Mayank: but weapon or motive sab se important hai…us ki family se baat ..we need to do it

Nup;ur: I meet them in his funeral….his mother is in shock is nt at all speaking…..n his father said he came here after a fight as he broke his engagement for a low class girl an settle here with tht girl

Mayank: u went to funeral n u didn't told me …he was surprised n hell angry….so ur hiding details so tht can prove me done

Nupur: at tht time I didn't knew im handling the case…n im nt at all hiding anything …I went to funeral because I know…

Ring ring

Mayank: wait….a min

Wht ….he screamed….we r cuming

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
m so happy dis time me FIRST...😆
thank u api 4 d quick update
loved it...
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice and long part well written...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow
i am really loving the pace with which the FF is developing...
waiting for the next update...
waiting to know what happens next

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