CRIME SCNE INVESTIGATOR..MJHT LAST CH.pg84...23/8 - Page 13

i thimk its nupur who is entering

new ff frm u fiza...wow

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part 2:

Hello guys..next chp..thnks fro ur love..i know im nt rplyin it not at all means tht urn t comenting..pls its just the lack of time… request..as its almost evry day update.pls don't leave post reserved …pls…..n ya Ridi…here is ur medicine…nupur to make u realize mayank per sirf woh drool kersakti hai

CHAPTER:3

Entering his area of work he threw his gun n cell on his desk

Samrat: wht happen

Mayank: now sum1 is gonna help me in the case….help..mayank Sharma….

Benji: yeah kaun badnaseeb hai bhai….bechara

Samart: bechar nhi bechari….

Mayank turn to him more in disbelieve….

Mayank: larki….wht the hell…now a girl is gonna handle a murder case….gun tu uthti nhi un se …wht the hell…aur tujhy kasay pata

Samart: Commissioner told me….

Mayank: n u didn't find a need to tell me tht im being welcomed in a hell

Smart: kyun k I know u would react like this…aur mjhy kal kafi dair se pata chala…I was going through my emails whn……

Mayank: I don't need any bodys help…..i have always handle my case ..by my self….its my case….

Samart: us k anay to day ..mayb she is competent..

Benji : just imagine….a hot girl…

Mayank: benji ….get a grip

Benji: any tu do …I'll get a hold …

Smart chuckled in disbelieve n get back to his work

Benji: suno tuu….hot girl in short skirts n short trendy hair cut…..

A girl was drying her long hairs black hairs…..she look through her closet ..n took out a pink top with blue denims….getting dressed up ..she tied her hairs in a bun….she looked at her in mirror n passed a flying kiss to it

Girl: not bad sweet heart…how u mange to look s cool everyday..correction hot my dear..…she winked n took n went out ….

Benji: cumig out of the house with her trendy bag n keys n a long car she settle her self….driving in attitude ..or my b ordering her driver ..driver car nikaloo…

Reaching out the house she hitted her head….

Uff bolakar…keys k baghir car chaly gi kiya….she went inside n took her keys n found her cell also beside it…..

Mayank: pink scotty ..per arhi hogi

Getting inside her sports car she started her journey to her new office….it strt drizzling n she opened her cars roof to make the droplets drench her….she thn stoped the car….racing out she found children palying pito( a game played with 7 pieces of stone n a ball..) ….she hurriedly join them…..n took the ball in her hands aiming to the pieces …n hit it in first attempt…jumping with joy she rush to collect the piece

Mayank: 9 bajy any wali thi…its already 9:30…..he said sarcastically…n she is so competent

Samrat: stop getting annoyed conc on case….

By chance she got a look on the watch…..OMG…she wave kids bye n rashed to her car n drive furiously….

Mayank: samrat im not annoyed yaar…u know I hate people interfering….

Samrat: tu mein kiya hoon ..mein bhi tu kerta hoon

Mayank: tu dost hai yaar….per u never interfere in my life neither in my work…..but this abt taking decision …how I can ask sum1 before deciding abt my case…

Girl: our case …mr sharam

The trio turned n there mouth where hanged…..

Mayank's precipitin n his irritation raised more after looking at her…samrat shocked his head in disbelieved n patted mayanks shoulder…n benji was looking at her just mesmerized n was suppressing his laughter whn he foound mayank almost abt to cry at his fate…

She was whole wet n in some part where also having clay….her hairs were half opened n messed ….she was looking a complete a messy, non serious , n for mayank defiantly not competent girl….

Ma'am ap k lyan

Girl: thnku…

She took the towel from the PA…n open her hairs n dry them spreading sum water droplets on mayank face tht made him more irritated..

Mayank: if u have not yet recognize this office…not ur bath room

Girl: no mr. shrama I have ….drying hairs is prohibited in office….in wch book of rule it is wrten..han..

Benji turned his face n chukled…for the first time sum1 dare to answer mayank sharam

Mayank: listen ms…wht evr

Girl: oye helloo……the name is bhushan ….nupur bhushan

Benji: bond… james bond…

Nupur: she fwd her hand for a tag…thts so right…BY god yaha intelligent loog hain

Mayank galred at benji n he took his hands off….n she move fwd pushing away mayank touching her shoulder with his…making him more irritated …one by the touch …two by wet touch…aww..i just hate …was his expression

Nupur: agr ap sab k x ray meray uper khatam hogaya ho tu kiya u'll introduce ur self with me…..

Samrat: hey im samrat forensic officer

Benji:: benji….assistant at ur service ma'am

Nupur:oh gr8 ..matlab mein yaha maroo gi nhi kuch zinda loog bhi hain

Mayank: I m

Nupur: pata hai……well without wasting my time will u brief me at case

Mayank: ia m wasting time..Ms bhushan if u haven't realize I may tell u ….ur late an hr late…than from past half an hr ur drying ur hairs ..playing along the office…one thing I tell u ..my work is the most important…..n I don't tolerate a mistake..a mishap…..got it….

Nupur was shocked n was angry the way he was talking to her

Nupur: mr sharma I m nt ur assistant ….B.. no body no body dares to talk to me like tht…u better perform ur duty ….n tht is u r duty ….u need to cooperate with me samhjy….zayada akar dekhny ki zaroorart nhi…yeah case mera bhi hai samjhy aur tumhai meray tareeqay se bhi case ko dekhna aur samhjna paray ga….aur agar tumhari zaban ko bolnya mein takleef hoti hai tu mjhy file do day

Mayank: acha tu tum ko parhna aaty hai na…tu jao shelf mein se parh ker file nikal loo….

Bth left n she went near the cupboard n took out one file by another n put on table tht was of Mr.sharma.. he was looking at her n his irritation was growing up…..

Nupur: aay bagwan…yaha tu 1986 ki case file bhi rekhi hai..had hai…itna kabara .

Mayank: this nt a trash…

Nupur: this mr.sharma…agar ap chaty tu is ko soft copy ker k ..rekh sakty thy ending report itni bari nhi hoti

Mayank: 1986 ka case mera hoga

Nupur: she lookd from up to down…..lagtay tu tab hi k hoo tum….

mayank wasn't listen to her……he went to the cupboard

nupur: shakal se tu tum 1970 k lgaty ho …aur herkatoo se 1900 k….aur kapro se….

he turn around n glared at her ..taking a file out….

Kaproo se tu tum dev annad k type….

Mayank: mein ny tum se apny uper khata likhny ko nhi kaha ta

Nupur: correction mein lik nhi rahi….bol rahi hoon….samjhy

Mayank: whtevr ..yeah file hai parho lo

Nupur: itni moti file case strt hony se pehly tu baad mein kiya hoga….

Benji: case khatam hotay hotay

Samrat: in dono mein se koi ek zinda bachy …

Benji: ya,,,,, mayank ya tu khud khushi kerlay gay ya phir is ko qatal kerday ga….thy laughed …..

Nupur: kya yaar akelay akelay joke per hassana acha nhi….yaar mjhy bhi tu batao….

Mayank: tu yeah file read ker rahi hoo ya nahi….

Nupur: yaaar tum hi brief kerdo na ..itni moti file kaun parhy ga….pls…tell me the important points..thn I'll do it …in peace….

Mayank: ok….as he has no more energy to waste on her…..

To his surprise she was listening him carefully and her questions an concern were very valid….

1st 1 to comment hehe...beautiful update...
Pink scotty! rofl..loved mayank's reaction...update soon

Smarat new that the new officer is a girl.. but he didn't tell it mayank..and that's whu maaynk was angry on him.. he wants to handle this case in his own way…. And now he doesn't want to take anybody's help- specially from a girl.. lol lol … Mr. Mayank- don't ignore ur new colleague .. u don't know hoe smart is she..??

OMG I loved nups entry // it was totally nupurish style… hehehehhe she was playing pito(in our country its know as shaat chara) with the boys. And she enjoyed it a lot… lol

First din he late…. By GOD mayank got another excuse to blame her that she was not suit for this case….finally nupus entered in office…the trio were shocked to see her- bcoz she was totally drenched in water..awww I loved the scene where she opened her hairs n dry them by spreading sum water droplets on mayank face ..lol it was so cute nad beautiful scene… hayeee..

I loved the whole convo among nupur, mayank and benji

I've enjoyed the whole update…..

It was amazing

Excellent update Fiza

Fantastic

Keep it up

nupurs so irritating! feel sorry for mayank.

so the fight has begun, and ist fight was lovely😳