CRIME SCNE INVESTIGATOR..MJHT LAST CH.pg84...23/8 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
OMG!! Interesting concept!!
Loved your part 1!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
thanks api🤗
will read after exam😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
loved this part
liked mayank's character
4m next time i wont be there to comment due to exam
i'll comment late
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: chandu-mayu

fiza when will u update?

aay haay bary mazay arhy hain
2morow...pakka.,ek aur promo jasa update😆😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
loved da update fize jee
ACP maynak sharma...wow.

tc
loads of love
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
WOW is de only word dat cums 2 my mind after dis upd8
n ya m bck on IF n dis wz rlly a fatabulous upd8 api
Cont soon :)
love
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
ooo wow!!!...
mayank's introduction was awesome...
sooo loved it...
actually since long i wanted to see mayank as ACP...thanks for fulfilling that wish...
please continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88

Overwhelmed with ur comments…thnku..

Oki I know it was short ….zayada chilany ki zaroorat nhi hai…buhat baygar rekha hai mein tum sab ko….dekho…it was frist chp n I want to stop it there…this ff will have sum long n sum short parts but this was shortest no more promos..i promise tht..

Suja I cant beelive tujhy mayank mein ACP pratiamiyum…dekh rahy hain…BY god…suja tu itni bari nhi hoi….reham ker

Jo loog mayank ki enter se behosh hogay thy….un k lyan medince k intezam kerdiya hai can contct me…a know it's a bad joke…..

Nupur ki entrance next update mein….

Lov ya

Fizaaa

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89

CHAPTER :2

Reporter: ACP..sharam wht do u wanna say abt this murder….

Mayank: I can't say anything ..pls let me check the site….pls clear the site…..leave form here. Ur interfering in our work pls….

He enter the crime scne n found samrat already there ..he smiled in assurance n trust he had for him …

A man was lying straight with his hand neatly resting on his chest…n blood all over around him…..as if a circle was made around his body with blood……

Mayank was standing near body …he look around the body n found it was really neat…n strangely very beautifully rested in between the pool of blood…..

Mayank: anything u found samrat…

Benji: khoon bahri laassh…..yaar yeah itni subha kaun hai jo murder kerny ko niklta hai

Samrat: us ko pata nhi tha na k tujhy takleef hogi

Benji: aur nhi tu kiya ..mjhy tu yeah subha k office samhj nhi ata ..tu subha k murder….subha subha itna sara khoon….lagat hai us ko ketchup pool buhat passand tha

Mayank: he gave a glared to benji

Samrat: strange it is mayank…..its amazing the way killer has arrange the body like this…..look at here …he pointed at the piercing side…..he is killed by a sharp thing right at once penetrated here…..

Mayank: ya it is…its strange…mostly it is done by psychic murderer

Samrat: true…but he was strong…as no sign of struggle ..no injury apparently

Mayank: really…are u sure….. benji did u found any weapon

Benji: no….not at all….

Mayank: lets search the whole crime place…..take the photograph samrat n thn we send the body to our lab…..we need to work quick at this case

Samrat: ya I just need sum time….thn will do other in lab….

Benji: kyun kiya lash bhag jay gi….

Mayank: u take ur time…benji …im taking tht side…..n u take the other….search for everything …..finger prints…cloths piece…blood marks ..evrything…

Benji: search each n every corner ….even if there is dust it worth for the clue ..got it benji…..yes I got it…..comon mayank I have been working with u form 5 yrs….i know …lets strt

Mayank: uff ..he took his box of tool…where gloves ….

brushing each an very area .he strt collecting finger n foot prints….brushing n blowing the space…he took picture with tagging the area….n thn placed a selfon tape there n peel it off..

Benji: mayank….ring….

Sarmat: tu pehan lay

Benji: ek tu im straight …..doosra maray way admi se keraday meri engagement

Mayank: wasy bhi us maar hi jana hai tujh se milnay k bad

Benji: ji nhi …eek mein hi tu zinda hooo…yeah tu (samrat) dead man hai…dead bodies aur books is k elawa kuch dekhta hai is ko….aur ap maha shay….ap ko crime, crime scene n murder us k elawa kuch nhi dekhta…

Mayank: freez…benji…

Benji got scared n stand right there with one feet in air…..n mayank slowly proceed to it….smarat accompany him

Samrat: yeah kiya hai

Mayank: pata nhi…sumthng broken

Benji: aby tu collect kero na….meri kyun jan ly rahy hoo….

Samrt: rukh ja..zara hum dekh tu lay..asa hi rah benji tu

Beni: jaldi ker….

Mayank: chukled…..chor kyun tang ker raha hai…..he took it with forcep..n place it in the bag…..

Samara/: im done….

Mayank: ur done with body…..

Benji: chal ….dewarien chahan…

Samrat: took his side n strt searching for clues….

Tracing the finger prints on the fingerprint strip…..placing each dust n utensil in house as maybe the weapon of murder……they collected it n place it with them…..spreading the blood sensitive chemical tht even can indicate bloods marks after cleaned thy found the mark where the murder was done n thn the boby was dragged to near center n placed like tht……

He looked at the door n went outside …it was almost midnight…..he look around brush the door for finger prints …any sign of kick or break through….

Moving inside again he imagine the pathway …..from where he maybe entered….n took whtever they can….

Mayank: no sign of breakage

Benji: bell baja ker aya hoga…heloo I want to kill u

Samara: mayb spare keys

Mayank: sum1 who he knew….or atleast nt looking like a murder

Samrat: true as no sign of struggle to at the entrance…

Benji: im done….ek aur dafa mein brush mara tu mein mar jao ga….

Mayank: from past 5 yrs I have been listening to this …yaar yeah marta kyun nhi hai

Samara: 1000 loog mary gay tu yeah maray ga

Benji: saloo…tumhain tu bhoook lagti nhi hai..isnaan tu tum honhi….pls samrat mein kam se kam bhooka nhi maran chata….

Mayank: u guys goo…I will go on myself…..

Samart: now u strted …the case arrived n now urn t gonna sleep until u solve it …common mayank…it ur work

Mayank: its just not my work samrat….whn a person die or get killed…I failed as the claimer of there protector…n I cant sleep until I prove myself my conscious tht im fullflimg my duties perfectly……

Benji: chal bhai plsss…..yeah shahansha hai..andeheri raato mein

Mayank: benji tu maary ga aj

……………

Crime branch:

Commissioner: mayank it's a case of high importance

Mayank: sir evry case to me is of high importance

Com: I know tht….but u know he is Khurana….n there has high contacts with people….n home minster is pressurizing me for quick respond…

Mayank: I 'll do my bst sir

Com: I know…but to help u …im accompanying another person with u to handle this case

Mayank: but sir …y …I always had handle all my case incharge with myself

Com: I know mayank…officer is really competent n was handling our Mumbai crime branch….

Mayank: sir I don't like any1 interfering in my work//it change evrythng

Com: mayank….this in order…I want high quick results on it ……so pls…..

Mayank: sir….

Saying so he left the office ……..

Mayank: wht the hell….who the hell he is ..i hate people interfering in my work…throwing his jacket in his car he was stnding in full on anger…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
its awesome...

awww it has to be Nupur's entry...
bt i want an long update API asap
plzzz
n ya dont forget to post a long update of walking wid u dat u hv promised in 3 days...

May ALLAH bless u alwaysss...
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago

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