CRIME SCNE INVESTIGATOR..MJHT LAST CH.pg84...23/8 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
wow
aussum concept
pls continue soon
n thnx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
continue. I love the concept. Very interesting.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Fiza ur starting another ff
congo 🤗
do u know what...i like detective stories
so con soon and do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
😃😃😃😃 hey i loved the concept...
always wanted mayank as a cop!!!...supercool...
but i dint understand about nupur...
looking forward to samrat and benji too...
please update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
dats so gr8...loved da concept fiza
gud work fari

tc
cont soon
loads of love
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
i edited my comment on pg 1...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
amazing concept n cs
eagerly waiting fr the update

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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

Hello guys

Hourened by ur coments ..thnku soo miuch

People who have ezams conc on tht ..stroy yahin hai…read later….

Thnks evry 1 without delay here is next part

Lov ya

Fizaa

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

Chapter 1:

It was a cold a cold beautiful morning….the sound of birds and children echoing in the air….peaceful n serne

Din dong

A man in deep slumber …..heard sum1 on his door….he move to his bed side to chk the time …it was just 6:50 in the morning……with lazy head he move out of his cozy bed …

Wht howz so early in mornig

Ding dong

Have peace yaar…..cuming…

Ding dong

Wht the heelll

He opended the door…n ahhh…..a spice spray was spryed in his eyes

Who are …wht the hell u have done…wht do u want

Ahhh..h erisved a kick which made him lye down

Im ur care taker….the other person answered….

Wht r u doing ..why why……..ahhh….

He reveived another kick in his stomach…..

No pls no pls wht are u doing …

He slided himself away n try to run from the place…..but he was dragged from colllern was throwng on floor…….

The person raise his hand high in air n penetrate a fine gadget through his neck….a loud scream …the birds fly far with fear…..

The mornig was diped in blood…all over around him

………….

Move aside….pls movie aside…urn t allwed to enter crime scne…….

Call him…..he is gonna handle this case

The most strangest thing happen this mornig…as sun rise welcoming a beautiful day….mr sameer khurana's life was darken by sum1…he was found dead in house this mornig….police has sealed the whole area and not ansering any1…this is a huge matter…khuaran is one of the richest families of delhi…wht can be it….a matter of money, rivaler, or simple play…..we will keep u update …this ankita mishra..the news…………

Clean the area from people ..ACP is cuming…from crime branch

Wht ….ACP of crime branch ……do the proper arrngment ……he is not gonna spare anything…..evrythng shud be perfectly done….

The ring of the cell made him look beside him….

Man: yes….oki im reaching in 30 mins…..

Removing sheets from his perfectly tone body …he stretched his arms n crunch his neck..caressing it with his warm n strong hands..to shrug off the tiredness…..reaching inside the shower..he open the shower n warmth his body with hot water….within 5 mins ..he was stnding in front of mirror drying his hairs…n buttening his shirt..leaving the top most …make him look more hot n irrestibile……

He took his cell n car keys n rash down from his luxurious apprtment…..

Man: smarat I want u to be in the crime scne right now

Samrat: oki…im cuming in 20 mins……

Man: n ya do bring benji with u ….i have called him but …he is not ginna wake up before 12….i want him on spot to ….

Samrat: ya sure….

Man: I hope u 'll collect the important things before I reach

Samart: u trust me ….n don't ask

Man: I tust u more thn any1 in department…..

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Evry1 stod strifaght …s**tes ..sir …he move his hand to respond to the respect they are showering…..he was moving fast n ignoring his surrounding ..people going in wao with him …he is use to ..to it….nthing effects him.he is too focus to make him lack his concentration….

He is man in his late 20……a man of deginity persona…..ethics n belives…..truth n righteous he worship….law for him is GOD…..

ACP…Mayank Sharma….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Fizuuu

yaar- update bahut bara hogaya-thoda chota karle...😡😡😡

u lazy girl- why did u update a small part???😡

but jo bhi ho- ur update was superb hun

totally different-- u started it with a crime- wo bhi murder... By GOD ...u've beautiflly describe this scene... hmm So our handsome hunk ACP mayank sharma will solve this case... Hayeee i m totally fida over him... fizu mujhe sambhalo . i alwz wanted too see maynk as ACP..😍 and now u fulfilled my wishhh

tahnk u so much januuu🤗🤗🤗

u r best and superb
loved ur update a lot..
BY GOD- u r so talented yaar... mera dost jo hai.. itna talent tou hoga he...🤣

now i m waiting for next update
do update soon

love ya❤️


Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago

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