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Posted: 14 years ago
Monz - I am honestly speechless and though this comment deserves a long and elaborate reply I am too overwhelmed to say anything other than that I am extremely honoured by the praise you have bestowed upon me and even more so by the story you have shared - it's something that I will always remember.
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: mohini4u

babaji charan please 😆



Reserved ❤️🤗


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Baba chalo aaj ek kahaani (choti si) aap ko main sunati hoon. Moral of the story wali. 😛

In my growing years, I was very tight with my bua. She and I were big movie buffs. Idiot box se bhi hamesha glued rehte the. In fact we did everything together that was entertaining. Watching movies, shows, stage plays, listening to songs and analyzing them, reading short stories of the magazines and analyzing those. They were the golden days of my growing years. I never much liked reading novels because they required too much patience, neither did she. But she would find me small articles to read which we could derive some take-home value from.

She always told me, anything that involves providing entertainment to an audience, always originates from team work. It's not just actor's acting you watch on the screen, dancer's dancing, singer's singing, writer's writing! It is always a package. It's a team of people working together as a cohesive whole that makes the whole package entertainment worthy. Even if one works in office, no one person can ever get credit for the success of an entire project. So always remember the power of team work.

Yeh baat mere dil mein baith gayi. After that, everything I have absorbed as an audience, I have kept this in mind. Whether I understand the mechanics or not, I know there is always team work involved.

Hmm, back to the future. I coincidentally met you and started reading your stories. Then thought, this woman is so good at such young age, she should definitely try her hand on pursuing this as a career. Everything you have shown so far, I yearn to watch on the small screen. That's when I realized, if and when you become either a writer or screen play artist or a creative, you will always work with a number of people. Your final product will always be from team work. 😳

Moral of my long yappy story 🤔 for baba: No matter where life takes you tomorrow, this, here, today, in form of KYT and HD, what you've done, is create magic ALL BY YOURSELF. There's NO ONE ELSE in your team. Take this with you always. Remember this and be proud of yourself. No matter where you go, what you do, who you work as, this is the power of sheer dripping talent from you that will take you to new heights. And you will always know that you had more than enough talents and the ability to put on multiple hats, ultimately becoming a team of ONE. Keep and cherish this as your own personal treasure! And remember us fans, whose lives you have made a big difference in. I bestow my personal blessings on your talent from the bottom of my heart.😳

Okay okay, thoda senti ho gayi ha? Kya karun. Aap ki kahaaniyon ka asar hai. I don't know the ABC of story, screenplay, direction, cinematography, lights, action, camera.. haan bhashan dena bahot ache se aata hai 🤣⭐️. But when I read HD4 maine visualize kiya aap ki writing ke power se ki, inme se kaun kab kya karta hoga. Toh bas, is talent ko waste kabhi mat hone dena. Zindgi bhar sirf TY aur mujh se compliments leti rahogi kya? 😈

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Take... in another post later 😆


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .Preet.

awhhh he takes care of her SO WELL 😍😍

i just love him and his caring ways for khushi! 😳😳😳😳
and i love when he gets angry if something bad happens to khushi 😍😍
what a mast updatee jiii!! 👏👏👏

Hey Preet! 🤗
Thanks for the lovely comment!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

That was awesome Tina!!!!

I felt each and every emotion!!! I love the relationship between Arnav and Khushi...and I really hope it doesn't change to the negative because of a misunderstanding (fingers Xed!!!). Need to watch out for Mami.
Looking forward to the next update as always hun!!!

Thank you so much for the amazing comment Zeba! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Traxy101

Really nice chapter and story

Thank you so much! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ayesha786xxx

Uffttt these are ace!!!!! I want moree!! LOL

Thank you so much! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mohini4u

OMG - baba are you around today? 🤗

I finally get a chance to write a take on HD4 I am so excited I have soo much to say 😳
I am excited to read!! 😃
RESERVED!!! ❤️
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😲Yet another masterpiece! Romance, Comedy, suspense, tension, drama, aur action bhi😉! Waise aaj main apne hosho-hawaas mein hoon😆. Kahaani teen din pehle jo padh li thi na! 😛

😳❤️🤗

'Sambhal kar chalna, yeh dil hote hain naadan, dil se dekhiye Humari Daastan'

Aaj phir se aap ke bas is ek kaafiye ne kitna kuch keh diya ms. Galib😳! Ab yeh bataaiye, naadan hai jo dil, woh apne aap ko kaise sambhaal sakta hai😕? Ek taraf aap bol rahe ho dil ko sambhaaliye, aur dusri or keh rahe ho dil se dekhiye? Yeh toh lose lose situation wali baat ho gayi na🤔? Agar dil se dekhenge toh dil ko kaise sambhaalenge batao bhala? Aise hi confused karne ka irada tha na😈? Hamare dil ki apne aap se fight karva rahe ho aap baba😉 "Jazbaato ke saudaagar!" - Aaj ka aap ka official naam. It's all about give and take isn't it miss tinz? ⭐️

Ooo - I LOVE this nickname Monz! 😆

Khushi turned her back to the world to lock her doors, while Arnav looked around to ensure the wrongdoers weren't around to torment her😳. Khushi is locking the doors to her sub ordinary life in the hope to take a ride to her safe haven with her man. All the while being innocently oblivious of the troubles that lurk around her at all times, as she knows she is secure in the company of her man😍. Arnav, anxious to fly her away from this hellhole, exercises extra caution that she doesn't get hurt in the process😊. His shielding instinct surfaces his resonant anger towards those cowards who gang up on this one helpless soul, but the sweet echoes of her vivacity manages to snap him out of it. Beautifully rendered baba! You incredibly symbolized the locking doors, the glance around, clenching fists, and the bangles👏! I just couldn't resist bringing the bangle power back 🤣

I am once again astounded by the small symbolism you've picked up in HD! In my opinion, your analysis is more mesmerising than my writing! 👏

His gesture of support during the descend are representative of his oozing protectiveness towards Khushi. One can easily misconstrue it to be sympathy, care, and compassion instead of love, need, and passion. Khushi's presence is as much a need in Arnav's life as breathing air or eating food. His anger comes from his fear of losing her to the insignificance of the world, the fear of being left alone, fear of being directionless. His tightening grip and extension of arms around her are gestures witness of his innermost insecurities. We will later see these expanded when he is faced with and reacts to an abrasive truth that she may possibly not need him altogether. You nailed it Baba. My heart kept going Dhak Dhak, Dhak Dhak ❤️ the whole time.

Keep dhak dhak-ing Monz's pyara dil 😳 I'm glad you saw that no matter how strong I portray Arnav being - he too has his own vulnerabilities Smile

Kissi pe boj na banne ke liye apne aap ko cheezo ka sahaara de dena. It's so intricate babz. Let's just look beside the point you are really trying to make here for one minute and analyze it in a broader sense. Bacche jab bade ho jaate hai, maa se apni bimaariya chupaate hai. Why bother, she would worry unnecessarily. Pati apni patni se office ka stress chupata hai. Bhai apni behen se apni majbooriyaan chupata hai. Pyar ke boj ka mara har insaan apni shortcomings apne loved ones pe nahi laandna chahta. Khushi ka yeh reaction, yeh statement, kitna swabhavik aur natural tha! (wait don't swabhavik and natural mean the same thing? ROFL ) She didn't by any terms mean it sarcastically or obligingly. She said it so casually, without thinking ahead or behind. It was irrelevant that using support of mundane things was painful to Khushi, what was important was that she didn't want to burden Arnav with her life's miseries EVER. With that said, coming back to Khushi's specific case.. She has a condition that constrains her. She has more insecurities about it than anyone without her condition can even imagine. In this case, to boost her self-esteem, to ensure her self-sufficiency, she needs and craves to be independent. How can one imagine living with such a constraint and constantly fight an inner battle every day? Must be tough right? Why do I have a striking feeling that her condition had something to do with Arnav from their childhood days? Is that may be another reason why Arnav's reaction was so drastic? Could it be his guilt? Hmm just thinking along as I write baba.

Are you by any chance a mind reader Monz?? Or should I say antar yami 😆

By the way, their interaction was intense! His aggression, anger, sadness, frustration, helplessness were all too distinct. He roared like a lion at her, or at least that's how I imagined it when he uttered "Sawaal ka jawaab sawaal nahi hota Khushi." Dhak Dhak! Personally I adore every role a male lover plays in a woman's life. A protector, caretaker, lover, father, brother, child, self-proclaimed lord😉😆, and many such colors are filled in a woman's life when she enters a courtship with a man. In this very instance, I imagined him as a very cute but stubborn child on a tantrum alert unwilling to comprehend reason. And as unjustified as his behavior was, it felt equally adorable. This cuteness mixed with his manly strength made him so much more yummy. As I read through that dialogue exchange, all I wanted to do was pull his cheeks and go coochie coo on him😲🤪. And the way he asked "Tum ne kyun kaha ki tum boj ho?" pierced thousand daggers in my heart🥺. It was the sweetest thing on earth baba, sweetest thayng (Okay I thought I had my emotions under control today, may be not!!!)

I told you before as well never keep your emotions in control when you reply to my FF!!! I'm glad you liked Arnav's pretty intense reaction. The sole purpose of this part was to convey his view of their relationship which at times will be completely different to Khushi's - something which I will bring to the forefront more as time goes on 😃

Moving on.. the guilt trip bit was awesome👍🏼. The inner child and the inner guardian were both on full swing. He was assertive, yet innocent; deeply hurt yet deeply in love. There was a glaring disparity between his emotional waves. It was very endearing I swear☺️. Mera yahaan baithe baithe yeh haal hai I can't imagine bechari Khushi ka kya hua hoga❤️. Her expression was aptly described by you Tinz. And still you weren't ready to give our hearts a breather just yet Ms. Baa Baa! You continued the rapport as Arnav got irked again at her saying sorry to him. He has no reservations about exerting his inherent rights over this woman and it's so far a treat to watch😳 (read/visualize).

I'm glad you enjoyed this part monz! Haha - I'm never going to let your dil stop doing dhak dhak 😆

The next statement from Arnav was very interesting. Haq bhi jata raha hai aur farz bhi. Gussa bhi dikha raha hai aur zimmedaari bhi. It's very enthralling indeed. As a recipient, I would be thoroughly confused whether to believe he is using his right over me or his duty? Here I feel you are establishing some form of suspense. I still suspect it has something to do with how she got hurt in the first place. Well established baba. Keep us gripped. (I know I know, you'll probably say you didn't see it or think of it that way. I'm going to stop believing you from now on😆!) By the way it created scorching impact when he said "Mujhe apna farz kissi se nahi baatna, deewaro se bhi nahi."🤢

I wanted to show Arnav's slightly more mature side through this part. Arnav seeing Khushi as his responsibility stems not only from his love for her but also from something which will be revealed later 😉

Phew! Finally itni intensity ke baad some romantic relief☢️. Besharm back to his besharmi making Khushi blush and all, with his charm. Loved the character consistency in today's episode, on all of them.

I thought some romance shomance was needed 😳

"Bitiya aap ki tasveer ko hi deedar kar rahi hai aur baatein bhi usi se kar rahi hain!" Haaye😍! Daggers on Dhak Dhak. "Acha?" said Arnav Singh Raizada and Mohini went flatlined🤢. I could imagine the seduction with which he must've uttered that one word.

NO NO - come back to life Monz!!! 😆

Here comes the matter of the material that Khushi so eagerly wishes to dodge. Again Arnav put her in an awkward position. But this time, Kaka's presence was a blessing in disguise. Have I loved this kaka from the first episode or what😎! Love you cool Kaku. You are a rockstar👍🏼. Keep up the good work. You didn't succeed today but you will, one day very soon. Kaka's sarcasm is too cute😳. Kaash kabhi aise kaka screen pe dekhne ko bhi mil jaaye (Nakul ki yaad diladi - if you know who that is)!

I'm glad everyone seems to be liking Kaka so much! Shayad aage jaa ke unhe zyaada footage deni paregi humein 😆

You ended in such a dreamy state as Arnav stood there mesmerized by the mere sight of his HOME. Aap ke kya kehne👏!

Kya kehne? 🤣

Another blazing episode ms. Jazbaato ke saudaagar. Hats off! You NEVER disappoint. 😊

I have to say that you (and Vodku) also never fail to dissapoint me with your AMAZING comments!!
❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
A song I heard yesterday and couldn't help but dedicate to "Hamari Daastaan"

I couldn't have chosen something better myself 😳

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KFZwqsgnYo4

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvi7884

aww part three is so nice

ArHi understand each other so well...they can't hide anything from each other😍
Oyyieee Mami is soo mean :(
Lol Arnav teasing her's soo cute..and she's blushing so much..hayye...and ek wink se hi ghabrajati hai? O_o toh agar Arnav kuch aur karega toh... *Faints* lol

Oh ho - don't faint Suvi!! 😆
Thanks for the lovely comment! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -vodkatiny-

BAHUT HO GAYA HIDE AND SEEK ... YES I AM SCREAMING AND SHOUTING ...

I WANT WANT WANT THE NEXT PART ...

BABA...

WHEN IS IT COMING ???




P.S: i miss you 😎

Awww - I've missed everyone too!! 🤗
Next part kal ayega! Promise! Unless something unforeseen comes up! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: queenofhearts01

🤗
❤️
(seeing as certain words have now been banned from my vocabulary...😆)

finally i see you listen to me ... 😳😳🤗🤗 good baba, sweet baba aur cute baba ...😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
main everyone ki nahi ... apni baat kar rahi thi ...😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 i have realised being good samaritan doesnt help .. so me going to be selfish ...😉😎

Originally posted by: queenofhearts01

Awww - I've missed everyone too!! 🤗
Next part kal ayega! Promise! Unless something unforeseen comes up! 😃

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