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Hi buddies,

Thank you so much for your beautiful comments. sometimes the 'like' button is not working. So please don't mistake me, if you don't find my name under your comments. your ghaliyas are welcome for not replying to your comments individually...lol...

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maan[st]:geet keh babaji plz tonya ka net ka connection chalne lage mei apni geet keh bagair nahi rahe sakta

Sorry dear...Maan's prayers have gone waste..😭 😭



Part 54

M: (st) In her excitement of becoming a bua itself, Geet has forgotten about me. When my Geet becomes a mother what will happen to me? she will ask me for sure "Who are you Maan?"

Maan smiles at his thought

(Maan! we all know the answers...when Geet becomes mother, you will become father. ...and if Geet asks, who you are, you can tell her "i am the Mr. of Mrs. MSK"...haha...)

Maan realises what he is thinking

M: (st) Maan! Geet ke baare me ye tum kya soch raha ho?

After a long struggle, Maan starts to do some office work.

Half an hour later...

@Maan's cabin

Maan is lost in his laptop. Suddenly he hears someone's shout "MB".

Maan lifts his head and looks up. Vicky comes running hugs Maan who is still sitting on his seat.

Vicky: MB!

After few seconds, Vicky parts from Maan

Vicky: MB! kaise hai aap?

M: (st) why this Vicky is reminding me of mom? whenever i see him, why i feel as if i am having some bond with him?

Vicky: MB! Now come out of your dream please

M: tum yahan kya kar raha ho?

Vicky: thank god

M: ?????

Vicky: i thought that this time also you would ask me who i am. Thank god. You didn't

M:...

Vicky: MB! I am happy that your memory is getting sharp

M: why are you calling me MB?

Vicky: Geet se puchiye

M: Geet kahan hai?

Vicky: oh come on MB. Are you really going to ask Geet about this? I was just kidding you

Maan is annoyed and again asks in a stern voice

M: Geet kahan hai?

Vicky: i and Geet came here together. Geet asked me to give this file in the reception. But i came directly to your cabin to see you

M: why did Geet give this file to you? where is she now?

Vicky understands Maan's restlessness and starts to tease him

Vicky: donno...she must be having some other important work

M: (st) mujse jyada important Geet ko kya ho saktha hai?

Vicky is enjoying Maan's tension

Vicky: OK MB. It is getting late. see you later

Saying this Vicky leaves Maan's cabin

M: (st) who is this Vicky? I must talk to Geet about him

Maan is lost in some thoughts.

M: (st) had Geet really come to office, she would have definitely come to see me. She won't go without seeing me. i think, Vicky is lying.

Maan decides to go out and check for himself. when he is about to get up...

G: Maan! are you here?

Maan's heart skips a beat. he sees towards the door and Geet is standing there. Maan could not believe his eyes. He utters her name softly

M: Geethhh!!!

Geet walks towards Maan with a smile on her lips. Maan could not control himself. He gets up from his seat and walks towards Geet.

G: Maan! you said na...you have some meeting. So i were searching for you in the conference room...

Maan comes to Geet and takes her right hand into his. Geet is surprised. Maan places Geet's palm on his heart as if he wants to convey his restlessness to her. Geet feels his heart beats and she looks into his eyes. Here starts the moment of Mahi...mahi eyelock. Both are lost in each others' eyes.

Geet's palm is still resting on Maan's heart

M: Geet! you told me na...you won't come. Then why did you come?

G: i have promised you na Maan!...i will always be with you

Maan is so touched by her words. he cups her face

M: Geet! why are you making my life so difficult?

When Geet is about to say something, there is a knock at Maan's cabin door. Maaneet both are moving away from each other.

Vicky enters inside..

Vicky: Geet! are you here? I was searching for you

G: haan Vicky

Vicky: Geet! it is getting late. shall we leave now?

Both Maan and Geet are looking into each other's eyes...

G: (st) why Maan is looking disturbed? What is bothering him? how can i leave now?

M: (st) chali jao Geet

Maan gestures Geet to go with Vicky. But Geet is lost in Maan

Vicky notices Maaneet's faces and he understands that something senti is going on between them. He tries to lighten the moment

Vicky: Geet

Geet is still in trance

G:...

Vicky: Geet!

G:...

Vicky has lost his patience

Vicky: Geet bhabi!

Both Maan and Geet are shocked. Vicky also realises what he just said

Vicky: (st) OMG!! I have called Geet as bhabi in front of MB. Ab kya hoga?

G: (st) hey babaji! Ye Vicky bhi na? now what is the need to call me bhabi

Maan is looking at Vicky suspeciously. Vicky and Geet are looking at each other and wondering how to cover up the issue. Vicky winks at Geet and she picks the clue. Both are starting their fake fight so as to divert Maan's attention

M: Vicky! what did you call Geet?

Vicky: Geet

G: haan bolo Vicky

Vicky: uff Geet! ...i am not calling you yaar. I am just telling jijaji, how i called you just now

G: jijaji?

Vicky: agar tum meri didi na, my MB is my jijaji. Hena?

M: MB matlab kya hai?

Vicky: MB?

M: hmmm

Vicky: Geet! ye MB ka matlab kya hotha hai?

G: Vicky! are you asking me?

Vicky: hmmm

G: kyun?

Maan is silently watching the silly fight between Geet and vicky

Vicky: because...you are the one who is MB's wife

G: no Vicky! You have to say the meaning of MB

Vicky: kyun?

G: kyunki...you are the one who is Maan's brother

Geet realises what she just said and she bites her tongue

G: (st) hey babaji! Ye maine kya bol diya?

Vicky and Maan are shocked. Maan looks at Vicky

M: (st) what Geet is saying? is Vicky my brother? How could it be possible?

Vicky: (st) ye Geet bhi na? instead of solving the problems, she is creating new ones

Geet tries to do damage control..

G: wo...mera matab hai...vicky! you are the one who is Maan's brother-in-law

Maan looks at Geet. she avoids Maan's gaze and starts to divert the topic

G: chalo my chota bhai! now tell what is meant by MB

Vicky: no never...i won't tell

G: i too wont tell

Vicky: i too won't tell

G: you won't tell na...teek hai. hereafter you don't call him MB

Vicky: you don't say that

G: teek hai. i won't say

Vicky: wo nahi Geet

G: phir kya?

Maan has lost his patience and he shouts

M: stop it

Both Geet and Vicky are going mute and they are scared that Maan is going to ask them something about this "Geet bhabhi and Brother" issue. But Maan has almost forgotten about the core issue. Now he wants to stop their fight.

M: this is my office

Geet and Vicky are repeating after Maan as if they are taking some Oath

G: This is my hubby's office

Vicky: This is my MB's office

Maan gives them a stern look and continues

M: i am the MD here

G: My hubby is the MD here

Vicky: my MB is the MD here

Maan again gives them an angry glare

M: i don't like any one creating trouble in my office

G: my hubby doesn't like anyone creating trouble in his office

Vicky: my MB doesn't like anyone creating trouble in his office

Maan is more annoyed

M: now i am going to throw you both out of my office

G: now my hubby is going to throw us both out of his office

Vicky: now my MB is going to throw us both out of his office

M: chup

G: my hubby says chup

Vicky: my MB says chup

Maan has lost his patience. He literally grabs the wrists of both Geet and Vicky and drags them out of his cabin and shuts the door on their face.

M: (st) Geet's entire family is crazy. Donno...who brought them up like this

Suddenly something strikes his mind

M: (st) ye family kaise? how come Geet has two brothers? Who brought up Geet? Geet told me na...she had became an orphan at the age of 3?

Maan curses himself for having termed Geet as an orphan

M: (st) as long as i am alive, how come Geet could become an orphan. Geet! i will always be with you and i will be everything to you. it is my promise

Maan realises that unknowingly he promised Geet that he will always be with her.

M: (st) ye maine kya kardiya?

Outside Maan's cabin...

G: Vicky! Why did you call me bhabi in front of Maan?

Vicky: oye Geet! front or back...kya farak padtha hai yaar? You are my bhabhi. That is it.

G: control youself Vicky! If Maan comes to know about you, then what will happen?

Vicky: teek hai yaar! Hereafter i'll be more careful. Waise bhi...why did you tell MB that i am his brother

G: hereafter i tool will be careful

Vicky: hmmm...Now let us go

But Geet didn't feel like going, leaving Maan in such a disturbed state

G: (st) Maan was so upset. Now how can i leave him at this condition?

Vicky: Geet! chalein?

G: wo Vicky...

Vicky: kya hua?

G: i have some work here. you go and i will come after an hour

Vicky: but Geet you only said na we can go home after giving that file

G: but Vicky i have one more work. Ab tum jao

Vicky: teek hai. i'll come after an hour and pick you up

G: no Vicky! I'll come by taxi

Vicky: thank god! You didn't expect me to come back after an hour

G: tum yesa kyun bol raha hu?

Vicky: i have to watch Cricket match. If i come to pick you up, i will miss Dhoni's batting

Geet smiles

G: Vicky! Tell bhabhi not to be angry on me

Vicky: ok Geet! take care

G:hmm

V: bye Geet

Vicky leaves

Geet turns to go inside maan's cabin...

Hey buddies!

Hope you liked the update.

I will continue in few hours...143 guys...Tonya

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...loved it...my stomach is paining from all the laughing i have done while reading ur ff...seriously loved geet-vicky -maan interactions in the office...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Awesome
part
loved it
geet and vicky bonding awesome
tonya 143
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Posted: 14 years ago

hi tonya i m angry with u tumne maan ko bahut pareshan kar diya hai

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Posted: 14 years ago
superb
wowww
mb means mann's brother
what an idead
really superb
and he called her babi
great...hope soon mann reveals his heart
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Posted: 14 years ago
haye rabba... maan ka bhai vicky bhi geet jaisa hi ban gya🤣... i m wondering how is maan going to andle this crazy family raised by his mom😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
great pARt dear!! waiting for next one!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Buddies,

Thank you so much for your beautiful and lovely comments. here is today's second update...

@maansee

Hi tonya i am angry with u tumne maan ko bahut pareshan kar diya hai

Hey maansee! Please don't be angry with me yaar. Maan is the one who is troubling himself as well as others without confessing his love to geet. i think, he deserves this. so let me give him some more troubles for 2 more days, then he himself will go and confess to geet...btw... Confession is coming soon...hope! now you are not angry with me.

Part 55

When Geet turns to go inside maan's cabin, adi comes there.

As soon as adi sees Geet, he starts to run. But Geet has noticed adi and she calls him

G: adi sir!

Adi is running non-stop

G: why adi sir is running like this?

Geet starts to chase adi

G: adi sir! Rukhiyena

Adi runs and hides behind Pinky

Adi: pinky! Mujhe bachao

Pinky: kya hua adi?

Adi: the troublemaker is chasing me

Pinky: troublemaker?

Adi: haan! Troublemaker...yaani Maan sir's secret wife

Pinky: is she really DD's secret wife?

Adi: pinky! It is a long history as well as hot current news. I will tell you later. now save me from her

Geet comes there and notices adi behind pinky

G: adi sir! Saamne ayiye

Adi: nahi aaunga

G: ab saamne ayiye adi sir, warna...

Adi comes infront of geet

G: kya hua adi sir? Why are you trying to avoid me?

Adi: geet! i am not trying to avoid you but my troubles.

G: troubles?

Adi: ji

G: maine kya kiya?

Adi: Geet! you only changed that secretary advertisement. Hena?

G: wo...wo...

Adi: bolo geet

G: haan adi sir

Adi: you know what ...seeing the lady candidates, Maan sir got so angry and he almost fired me. it is all because of you.

Geet feels bad

G: i am sorry adi sir

Adi: koi baath nahi Geet. par dubara yesa math karo.

G: Didn't you tell Maan that i am the one who changed the advertisement?

Adi: no geet

G: kyun?

Adi: Geet! tum bohat achi ladki ho. i am so happy that you are Maan sir's wife. I didn't want to create any problem between Maan sir and you. that is why i didn't take your name

G: thanks adi sir. But i have a doubt

Adi: kya doubt geet?

G: if you are so concerned about maan, then why are you giving live reports about him to dadima?

Adi is shocked

Adi: geet! do you know about that?

G: hmm

Adi: Geet! i respect and love Maan sir. I want to see him happy. I am happy that maan sir married you atleast secretly. But for how long you both can live secretly like this?

Geet is shocked

G: (st) kya? i and maan are living secretly?

Geet feels like telling adi that she is staying in the mansion. but Maan's words comes to her mind "Geet! no one from the office knows that you are staying in the mansion. i don't want anyone to know that you are staying with me". so geet keeps quiet

Pinky; kya? DD and geet are living together secretly?

Adi: haan pinky! They are living somewhere outside the mansion. dadima did not know anything about this

Pinky: but why they are living secretly?

Adi: i think maan sir is feeling that dadima may not accept geet as her daughter-in-law

Hearing adi's imaginations, Geet is having a hard time in controlling her laughter.

Pinky: why should DD feel like that?

Adi: pinky! I will clear all your doubts later.

Adi: Gee! If i keep on informing something like this to dadima, soon dadima will understand how much maan sir loves you.

Geet smiles

Adi: then dadima herself will ask you to come to the mansion. after that you and maan sir can live in the mansion itself, without the fear of getting caught. That is why i am doing something what can i do in my capacity

Geet is so touched by adi's concern

G: (st) how much adi sir thinks about maan and me? ye bohat acha insaan hai. hena babaji?

Adi: geet! kya soch rahi ho?

G: kuch nahi adi sir! Ab aap mere sath ayiye

Adi: kahan?

G: ayiye adi sir

Geet takes adi to Maan's cabin. adi is scared to go inside maan's cabin

Adi: Geet! i won't come inside

G: kyun?

Adi: few hours ago only i escaped from this lion's cage

G: kya???

Adi: ufff...mera matlab hai...Maan sir's cabin

G: chup

Adi:...

G: ab ayiye mere saath

Geet and adi enter Maan's cabin...

G: Maan!

Maan is surprised again

M: Geet! are you still here? I thought...

Maan notices adi and he stops in the middle.

G: Maan! i want to tell you something

M: hmm

G: i am the one who altered the secretary advertisement. Not adi sir

Maan is shocked

M: kya??? tum?

G: ji

Maan gets angry and he asks adi to leave the cabin

M: adi

Adi: ji sir

M: you can leave now

Adi feels bad for Geet

Adi: sir...Geet...

M: haan! Main jaantha hu ki ye geet hai. ab tum jao

Adi: sir..wo..

M: adi! tumne suna nahi maine kya kaha? Ab jao yahan se

Adi leaves silently

Maan comes close to Geet. she is scared

G: i am sorry Maan

Maan holds Geet by her shoulder

M: Geet! i don't like anyone who mess up in my office work. Samji tum?

G: ji

M: why did you alter the advertisement?

G: wo...wo..

M: bolo Geet

G: Maan! mujhe maaf keejiyena

M: maaf?

G: hmmm

M: kabhi nahi

G: what are you going to do now?

M: until, i get a new secretary, you have to work as my secretary

(OMG!!!!! This MSK is too smart. He is planning to keep geet with him for 24X7)

Geet is shocked

G: kya?

M: hmm. Now onwards you are my secretary

G: Maan! i am the Managing Director's wife. How dare you to appoint me as a secretary?

M: stop it geet. Now come and attend the interview

G: interview?

M: haan!

G: why should i attend the interview? You yourself have already appointed me as your secretary na?

M: geet! there are some company rules. I can't appoint anyone as my secretary without conducting an interview

G: teek hai. what if i fail in the interview?

M: koi baath nahi geet. You are free to fail in the interview. Then also you will be my secretary

G; then why should you conduct an interview in the first place?

M: i told you na...company rules

G: ye kaise company rules hai?

M: chup

Maan drags Geet towards his table and makes her sit on the chair opposite to him. he goes and sits on his seat. Geet tries to get up from her seat

M: Geet! don't dare to get up

Geet again sits down

M: shall we start the interview?

G: Maan! ye aap kya kar rahe hai? i am already working as a secretary in another office

M: resign that job

G: kya?

M: hmmm

G: no Maan...

M: chup

G:...

M: now let me start the interview

G: i am not accepting for this interview

M: Geet! you are the one who spoiled the advertisement. So you have the moral responsibility to serve as my secretary. Samji tum?

Geet tells under her breath

G: i should have left with Vicky

M: kya kaha?

G: kuch nahi?

M: now let me start

G: hmmm

M: what is your name?

G: Geet Maan singh khurana

Maan hides his smile

M: (st) how sweet!!!

M: how old are you?

G: i am not old

Maan rolls his eyes

M: teek hai. what is your age?

G: 24

M: 24 means? 24 months or what?

G: nahi...24 weeks

Maan smirks. Geet smiles

Maaneet both are starting to enjoy the Q&A session

M: are you married?

G: ji

M: what is your husband's name?

G: Maan Singh Khurana

Maan smiles to himself

M: do you have kids?

G: (st) acha maan! are you teasing me? now let me show you who i am

M: geet! tum chup kyun rahi ho. jawab do. Do you have kids?

G: ji

Maan is shocked. But he continues his next question

M: how many?

G: 24

Maan understands that geet is teasing him

M: (st) acha! My geet is planning for 24 kids? But 24 is too much.

(hey babaji!!! Ye kya horaha hai? 24 kids? No doubt...soon Khurana Constructions will pakka go bankrupt. But no problem... maaneet will be left with lot of Human Resources (24 Kids). Then maaneet can start their alternative businesses like Khurana Circus, Khurana Drama Company etc.,(Courtery: Sana). No HR problem at all)

G: kya hua maan? aap yesa kya soch rahe hai?

M: geet! maine soch raha hu ki 24 kids bohath...

G: kam lag rahe hai kya?

Maan almost feels like fainting. Geet controls her laughter with difficulty.

Maan composes himself and continues the interview...

M: what is your husband doing?

G: he is flirting with his wife

Maan is embarrassed and he shouts

M: Geettt!!!!

G: uff...mera matlab hai...he is running a construction company.

M: if your husband is running a construction company, you must be pretty rich. then why do you need this secretary job?

G: soon my hubby is going to become bankrupt. That is why i am looking for this job

M: geettt!!

G: i am sorry maan

M: what is your qualification?

G: i am Maan Singh Khurana's wife

M: is this a qualification?

G: haan! This is the unique and very special qualification that no one else has on the entire planet. I am the luckiest one to have this unique qualification

Maan looks into Geet's eyes and here starts Mahi mahi moment

After few minutes, both are coming out of the trance

M: teek hai. now your interview is over. You are appointed

G: thank s Maan

M: sir bolo

G: kyun?

M: i am the boss here

G: tho?

M: call me 'sir'

G: why should i call you 'sir'? Have you received any Knightwood from the Queen of UK or what?

M: kya?

G: are you 'Sir Maan Singh Khurana'? why should i call you 'Sir'?

(OMG!!! Knighthood for MSK...Sir Maan Singh Khurana...lol..)

M: chup

G:...

M: Geet! this is office. Here you can not call me Maan

G: then how should i call you?

M: just now i told you na...call me sir

G: teek hai Maan. i will call you "hubby sir"

M: hubby sir?

G: ji

Maan rolls his eyes

M: Geet! "hubby sir" is sounding like "puppy shame"?

D: you mean, "Shame shame puppy shame all the monkeys know your name"?

Maan is super duper annoyed

M: Geettt!!!

Geet continues to tease him

G: "shame shame puppy shame all the monkeys know Maan Singh khurana's name". it is sounding great. Hena Maan?

M: (st) acha. Abhi dekho geet

M: Geet! you know my name?

G: haan! Maan Singh Khurana

M: then what are you?

Geet realises that maan is trying to include her in the Monkey's list

G: Maan! are you calling me a monkey?

M: when did i say that?

G: dust danav. I am leaving

Geet gets up to leave

M: ek minute Geet. sit down

Geet sits back

M: i am the boss here. You can't leave unitil i ask you to do so. Samji tum?

Though geet is happy to work with maan, she teases him as if she doesn't like it

G: Maan! i have not yet accepted you as my boss . samje hai aap?

M: geet! i don't need your acceptance. I am your boss. That is it

G: dekhiye maan! don't try to become my boss forcibly

M: kyun? Don't you like that?

Geet's heart skips a beat. she feels like maan is trying to convey something else through his question. Maan reads geet's face and he is losing his self control. he did not realise what he is doing. he gets up from his seat and comes to geet. she too gets up from her seat and looks at maan. he looks into geet's eyes and asks

M: bolo geet! don't you want me to be your boss?

Geet couldn't bear his closeness and his look. she starts to stumble..

G; maan! wo..wo..

Maan has lost his self control. He comes more closer. Geet starts to breath heavily. Maan whispers in geet's ear

M: geet! don't you want me...

He stops and reads geet's reactions. geet is feeling butterflies in her stomach.

Hi buddies,

Hope you enjoyed the update. I'll continue tomorrow...143 buddies...Tonya

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Posted: 14 years ago

hi tonya

143 sweety
i m on nine cloud i m first for the first time at mmm...party time for me... having chocolate my self on my victory...
will comment after reading both the parts ...
Edited by maansee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
BOLO BOLO GEET...MAAN TOH GAYA KAM SE...LOVED D UPDATE...

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