MY1RST FF Dil toh bacha hein jipt11@135promo145 - Page 49

nice precap lovd last ff as iam going throug my exams i cant comment on ur ff really superb . valare nannaitund👏

so interesting.😃...waiting for the rain romance😍...cont.soon😊

Originally posted by: Rachana_naksh_

Nice precap asha rain romance cv's ne hume assh dikakar chod diya hai par thum achese liko waiting for the part

thank u yaar

Originally posted by: RINSE

nice precap lovd last ff as iam going throug my exams i cant comment on ur ff really superb . valare nannaitund👏

thank u yaar😃

Originally posted by: nivedha_123

so interesting.😃...waiting for the rain romance😍...cont.soon😊

thank u yaar😛

part 9

Next morning

Akshi came after a shower @ saw natik sleeping like a baby.she went near him @ was about 2 give his morning kiss,but she got an another idea,she put her hairs on his face @ started 2 trace it through his face..he felt her hairs which was still wet,a mysterious smile came 2 their face,he rolled her @ came over her,planted a kiss on her forehead @ said "I",akshi again take a turn @ kissed on his both cheeks @ said " love",natik came over her @ kissed her lower chin @ slightly whispered with a husky voice "u", she again take a turn but this time they fall asdidnt realize that they had already reached the other end of the cot making them smile loudly. akshi placed her lips slowly on his lips @ said "so much",with in seconds they lost in each other eyes.karan came @ stood beside them,but thet didn't realize it,so he jumped in between them @ said ""me 22 love u"".trio smiled @ hugged each other

They started their journey 2 vagamon,in their way the car get break down,they were half km away 4mtheir resort,other vehicles r rare through this road,so they decided 2 wait,karan saw an elephant coming 4m distance,it was an elephant kid with brown hairs ,,he started clapping when the elephant passed infront of him.he asked the elephant 2 stop,but it didn't,he started crying,soon the elephant stopped @ walked 2wards karan,natik take him in his hands,with out any fears,he touched it @ gave fruits.it 4ward its hand @ touched his forehead(blessing).one of the men offered them a special elephant drive 4 them.natik liked this @ he went 2wards akshi while karan started playing with elephant with his foot ball,elephant showed some acts that it used 2 do at circus,karan enjoyed it @ was smiling madly.

Nt:ak,jaane ka intezam ho gaya

Ak:acha,toh chaliye

They reached near the elephant

Ak: gaadi kaham h natik??

Nt::gaadi nah elephant ride

Ak::kya??ap pagal ho gaya kya,nah nah mein nahi awwongi

Nt::ak,ap dariye mat,hamare rajastan mein kaise horse ride hote h na teek ussi tarah yaham elephant ride.bahuth maza ayega akshara,dekhiye karan iske sath khelne b lag gaya h,ap chaliye toh

Ak:nah nah mujhse nah hoga,hum kissise lift le loonga par ispar nah

Nt::ap na bilkul apne ma par gayi h.teek h apko aan h toh aa varna yahi intezar kar kar kisse lift lekar aram se pahunchana ,hum toh isspar h jawoonga

It bent down,they climbed up,akshi had no other option,so she also climped up.natik was sitting in between them.he hold both of them strongly but karan didn't like this @ he freed himself @ began 2 enjoy with sounds of happiness,he was acting as if he was controlling the ride @ the sweet elephant obeyed what ever he said.natik noticed akshi,her eyes were closed @ was holding him tight

Nt:ak,ap ankhen toh kholiye ,bahuth maza ayega

Ak:nah,mujhe bahuth dar lag rahi h

He wrapped her arms around his stomach

Nt:ab toh kholiye,dekhiye itni si bacha kitna enjoy kar rahe h aur ap,agar ap ankhen nah khole toh mein apko niche gira doongi

She fastly opened her eyes,but hide her face in his back.then slightly looked up @ saw karan enjoying with out any fear,after some time her fear also eased up,she moved her hands 2 his chest @ placed her head on his shoulder,he gave a side kiss on cheek @ she inturn kissed on his back

Nt::(very loud voice) I love uuu akshara

Ak:;(shocked)nt'. Ye kya h?ap dheere nah bol sakthe h kya

Nt:(cute face) vo kya h na mein pehlibar hathi par baitkar

I lv u bol raha hoon toh socha thoda alag tareeke se batawoon

Ak:ap b na

Karan also imitated natik @ screamed "" lab u 22 mamma & pappa ""

Trio created a romantic atmosphere there @ they enjoyed much @ talked 4 a long time,natik become mischevious @ fulfilled all his wishes 4m akshi by black mailing her @ they atlast reached the resort.natik got down 1rst @ then he take karan,he was about 2 take akshi,but before that elephant started 2 walk ,akshi become feared @ started 2 scream natik natik like a baby,karan @ natik couldn't control their smile,karan asked the elephant 2 stopp @ it stopped it in its way.natik take akshi in his hands @ hugged her tightly.he kissed her forehead 2 assure that he is there,karan said bye bye 2 elephant unwillingly

They got ready with out wasting time @ went 4 an outing.naksh were amazed by the hill station with a serene atmosphere @ pristine environment.they take a walk through the pine valley which was filled with enchanting tall pine trees wich gave them a beautifull experience especially in this monsoon season.it was a very delightful 2 watch crystal like water drops on pine leaves

Natik take her 2 the famous water fall centre.the valleys offers them a stunning views of the surrounding zig zag hills @ there are large varieties of flowers, water falls on either side of the road,they stood near the bathing point

Nt:;ak,yaham safe h,chaliye hum yaham nahayenge

Ak:yaham ,publis mein,ap bilkul pagal h

Nt::ak,water fall ke niche nahane ka ek alag maza h,ayiyena

Ak:mujhe vo maza nah chahiye

Karan got down 4m her hand @ went with natik,they were enjoying,bathing,splashing water,karan got an idea @ he whispered something in natiks ear,he also agreed .karan started screaming in a scared voice @ akshi also got scared @ came near him @ take him in her hands,natik suddently pulled them under fall

Nt:;hamare hote huwe ap kaise bach sakthe h??

She smiled @ get in 2 their own world

They were getting late,so they changed their wet dresses in the car,now it was akshi s turn,natik naughtily get in 2 the car,she didn't realize this,she was about 2 unpin her saree ,she felt some1 pulling her sarree 4m back,she understood that it was natik

Nt:;ak.ap jaldi change karligiye,hame jaldi nikalna h

Ak:ap yahaam. h tohh mein..kaise'mujhe sharam aati..hh..

Nt:ismein sharam ane ka kya baat h ap mein apki pati hoon aur ap meri pyaari si biwi

He 4warded his face 2wards her,but she pushed him back

Ak:phir b mein resort mein jaakar change karloongi.ab chaliye

Nt:teek h,par ek din apko mere samne change karna h padega

Ak:;dhatt'..

They came back.akshi came after a shower @ make karan sleep he was very tired so he slept soon

Natik take akshi 2 the balcony which directly leads 2 the garden,their hands were crossed @ was standing side by side,their eyes were communicating .it was heavy wind outside due it her hair are blowing widely in all direction ,he slowly decreased the small distance between them,suddently the rain started,she couldn't control herself,natik was about 2 touch her but before that she went under the rain.she widened her arms @ looked upwards @ take small turns @ was enjoying,but natik was still standing at the balcony @ was admiring akshi

Ak:nt,vaham kyon khadi h,yaham awo na bahith maza ayega

Nt:nah akshara ap beeg jaye mujhe barish ache nah laghthe

She pulled him under rain

Ak: barish ki basha samajhne k koshish toh kigiye

She again started enjoying,dancing,talking 2 herself,she was lost in her different world.natik kept looking at he,he wondered how she looks so beuatifull

Natik came 2wards her @ pressed her 2wards him @ plant a kiss on her earlobe

Nt:;ap kaham the akshara?

Nt:kya?ap pagal ho gaya h,mein apke sath h hein

Ak:nahi,mein uss akhara ki baat nah kar raah hoon jo singhanias khanthan ki bahu h,balki uss akshara ki baat kar rah hoon jisse mein pyaar karthi hoon ,jo mujhe sirf isse outings par milthe hein

Akshi didn't reply

Nt:kaise ap ghar par chup chap rahethe h?sabka khayal rakhthe h.unke chote bade cheez ka khayal rakhthe h.par kabh ap apni tareek se apni zindangi nah bitaaya,apke b khwayish honge na''

Ak:(in tears)mere khwayish ye h ki mein apke aur karan k sath der sara vakth bitawoon,jo mujhe ab mil rah h ,isiliye mein ye vakth bekar ki batoom par gavana nah chahthi hoon balki isse apni zindagi ki yadgaar pal banan chahthi hoon

Nt:mein b

His cute smile transformed in 2 a killer 1,she saw this @ tried 2 walk 4ward but he hold her wrist @ came 2wards her ,they were face 2 face

He started singing

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara( he touched her face with his 2 make her feel his breath)
Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye(bringinh her closer,then he locked her hands around his neck @ reducing the space between them,she again tried 2 ran but he hold her hand)

Akshi start singing

Aankhon Mein Humko Utharne Do Zara
Baahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara(looking back at him)

Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye(walking 2wards him @ placed her head on his chest)

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara(she moved her hands 2 his back @ pulled him more closer 2wards her(hugging))

Salvatein Kahin Karwatein Kahin
Phel Jaaye Kajal Bhi Tera (he came behind her ,slowly placed his right hand across her chest (4m back) @ left hand on her tummy,then he traced her eyes with his right hand,he kisses her on both eyelids assuring her that she was the love of his life)

Nazron Mein Ho Guzar Tha Hua
Khwabon Ka Koi Khafila(both recherished their memories,the milestones in their life flasher through their mind with brought tears in their eyes)

Jismo Ko Ruho Ko Jale Do Zara
Sharmo Haya Ko Machalne Do Zara

(turned her,he raised her face 2wards him @ looked in 2 her eyes with so much of love which no 1 could ever imagine)

Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara(akshi placed his head on his chest as she couldn't meet his eyes as she was feeling very shy,she realized wat she was doing @ tried 2 escape)

Hum' Hum Tum'
Tum' Hum Tum'(he got the hold of her pallu,she understood this @ she herself start walking back wards without turning)

Choolon Badan Magar Iss Tarah
Jaisa Surila Saaz Ho(she wrapped his arms around her stomach,he hold her tightly,she placed her one hand on his arms @ other on his cheeks @ bring him closer 2 her,he adjusted her hairs 2 infront @ unties her blouse lays @ placed a soft kiss on her back wich make her gently blush.then he kisses on shoulder @ then 1 near her ears making her shiver)

Chupe Tere Zulf Mein
Kholo Ke Raat Azaad Ho(he turned her ,he traced her hands through her hairs @ moved it 2 back side 2 gentli kissed her on neck wiyh passion)

Aanchal Ko Seene Se Dhalne Do Zara
Shabnam Ki Boondein Phisalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye(she understood his passion wich was shining in his eyes,she placed her hands above his cheeks @ caressed it thinking she is incomplete with out him,she placed her wet lips on his forehead ,then on his both cheeks)

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Bahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye(she came 2 his lips ,but she stoped her,she felt some1 was draining her strength 4m her,he smiled seeing this,he moved his lips 2wards her,but suddently the rain stopped ,she came back 2 her senses ,she put her fingures on his lips @ nodded 2 say no @ ran 2wards inside

Natik came after a shower @ saw akshi drying her hairs,as she felt his touch around her stomach she moved her eyes away 4m him.he knews that she trying 2 overcome her shyness so he didn't tell her anything,he slowly kissed her everywere on her shoulder she turned back @ slowly looked in 2 his eyes @ saw his hairs r still wet,he splashed water on her face 4m his hair ,then he wiped the water drops 4m her face by kissing on that spots,she stopped him @ started drying his hairs while their eyes were talking 2 each other.he bent down 2 kiss her lips ,she dropped the towel when his lips met her,she didn't realize this @ remained drying his hairs with her hands

Natik take her in his arms @ lead her 2 the bed @ he completely possessed her with in time @ she also surrendered 2 her soul mate

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nice part asha👏
Cntinue soon...luved trio
Luvd der elephant ride...send them 2 kovalam...want dem romancing n enjoying with karan der

Originally posted by: beoun

nice part asha👏
Cntinue soon...luved trio

thank uu so much

edo ashaattiye than enne oru paruvamakkum ennu enikku urappayi 😳 ithu enthonnu😳ayyo...aana savari gambheeram 😍😍 njan sarikkum enjoy cheithu 😳than enthu rasamayitta ezhuthiyirikkunnathu ennu thanikku polum ariyilla...sathyam...excelllent👏 rain romance pinne parayane yilla...njan visualise cheithu kandu than ezhuthiya pole thenne😳athi gambeeram😳😳😳ente vaka thanikku ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️...sarikkum than enne nakshlandl ittirikkuva😳adutha part onnu vegam venam plz...malayali manga aayittu akshi ye kanan oru moham😳

i could actually imagine tis song kyunki jabse akshi ne hame popat banaaya tha tabse i think almost 100 baar is gaane ki sapne dekh chuki hu...😳 ab toh i get irritated listening to tis song but tumhara description padke thoda sukoon mil mil gaya...😛 karan kitne saal ka hai abhi se hi baap ko ideas dene laga dj ho toh kehte ki chora bahut hi hoshiyaar hai karobaar ko aur badaayega din dugni raat chaugni kamaavega...😆😆 but completely luved trio scenes they r just so real & was vry close to my heart...😃 naksh se kitna smp karvaati ho thodi bahut tution dimri ko bhi do na...😆 toally the whole update was awesome superb fantastic...👍🏼
thanks for the pm & cont soon...😊