-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 - Page 86

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Posted: 14 years ago

Har pal jab maine tumse maanga pyaar,

Mere dil ne maanga tumse ehtesaab;
lekin hamaara pyaar to pehle hi kahin kho chuka tha,
Mera dil tab bhi tunhaare liye ro raha tha!
Hamare pyaar bhare aashiyane ko tumne bikher diya,
saat janmon ke saath ko tumne chand palon me chodd diya,
hamari yaadon ko tumne kaale rang me rang diya,
Mere sheeshe jaise dil ko tumne choor choor kar diya!
Kya tumhe nahin yaad aaye woh lamhe?
Kya pal me bhool gaye pyaar ke woh nagme?
Kyun chod diya ye haath jo umr bhar ke liye thama tha?
Kyun tod diya woh bandhan jo vishwas se humne baandha tha?
Tumhe kho kar, maine khud ko khoya tha,
Tunhare liye har pal yeh dil mera roya tha...
Kahan kam pad gayi main, har ghadi khud se poochti thi,
Tumhare kiye gunaah ke liye har din nai sazaa paati thi!
Tumhi to mere apne the, kisis aur ko maine kahan jaana...
Jab se pyaar ko jaana, iss dil ne tumhe hi to pehchaana,
tumse bewafaai paakar dil baawanra hua ghoomta tha,
Kitna rokne par bhi yeh sirf tunhi ko dhoondhta tha!
Par aaj jab khud ko dekhti hoon,
Apne ko main khushnaseeb samajhti hoon;
Jo hota hai acche ke liye hota hai,
kahawat ko apni zindagi mein charitaarth paati hoon!
Jo tum na milte to pyaar ko naa pehchaanti,
Aur agar tunhe nahin khoti toh khud ko nahin pehchanti!
jo tum na aate, to dard ko na pehchanti,
Aur tum na jaate to dard ke rishte ko naa maanti!
jo tumko na jaanti toh pyaar ke ghaavon ko naa jhelti,
Jo tum ajnabee na ho jaate to pyaar ke malham ki hasi chehre par na khelti!
Har pal tumhare baad apne aap ko na dhoondha hai,
Is sangharsh me mee saath, mere pyar ne mijhe puja hai!
Jab kabhi dard ke samandar me khud ko doobta paaya hai,
Mere dard se pyaar karne waale ne mujhe paar pahunchaya hai!
Jab-jab apne aatm-sammaan ko chootta hua paaya hai,
Tab mere Maan ne aake mera maan bachaya hai,
Jab kabhi apne aap ko akela khada paaya hai,
Har baar uske pyaar bana mera saaya hai!
jab kabhi pyaar ka zikr bhi gar aata hai,
Sirf ek hi naam dil me, ek hi chehra aankhon me samaata hai;
Aaj poore dil se main yeh izhaar karti hoon,
Haan sirf aur sirf Maan se hi pyaar main karti hoon!
My last tribute to ehtesaab di!
Love
Swati
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb nidhi...loved it to bits
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muski

first of all I am really sorry for commenting so late...bu I read all the parts regularly...they r just awesome
so far I have loved all ur ffs actually adored them😳😳 but this one was completely different...another side of love that is pain...I must say you have potrayed the emotion so well actually personified it through ehtesaab😊...hats off to u for this👏👏👏
the way geet finally came out of the abyss of grief and betrayal was amazing and loved this new maan in ur ff who stood by geet in each n every situation...muuuaahhh😳
dev is...ah...forget it I don't have proper slang for him so just ignore him😡😡
epilogue was lovely...especially the twin part😛
awesome mindblowing amazing...I can go on and on with adjectives😊😊

love u🤗

anupam
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey!!!😊

Loved all the updates!!!!!!!
I read them all long back, could not comment...
But meri comment ki koi zaoorat nahi,
FFwas so marvellous...
I loved it a Lot...😃
Amazing job!!!!!!!!👍🏼
I loved the way Geet gave all to Dev as an account to his love...so called...love...👍🏼
and the anniversay...epilogue...twins...unbeliavble...😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Congrats on ending yet another beautifulk journey of unconditional love...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1744837/ff-awards-nomination-thread-note-50
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Posted: 14 years ago
such a breath taking ff
i just cant express my love for this ff
really really reallyyy
mindblowing work
i just LOVED it



Sana..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Relived the love, the loyalty, the persistence, the pain, the betrayal, the sorrow, the love, the bond,the strength, the feelings, the struggle, the loss, the release, the togetherness...

Pain in love...love in pain...
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow!!!!!!!!!

ehtesaab is too good...

loved it...

well done👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice yaar

i think u should really consider my idea
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it to the core...read it at 1go...thanku...

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