My First FF-In Lamhon ke Daaman Mein- Pt12 @ Pg134 - Page 25

Originally posted by: saru.g

aastha its though u r late... I posted yesterday night only naa... its ok... I'm so happy that u liked it aastha... I'll write next part soon n will update it as soon as possible... 😃

will be waitin fr it,,,,,,,,,update soon😍😃

Saru di,my comment edited on pg 25.

Originally posted by: Hinakshara

Saru di,my comment edited on pg 25.

oh... I'll see it dear... 😃

Originally posted by: Hinakshara

Saru di,i already said that it is d best smp of naksh i have ever read.it was decent and romantic too.aftr watching ME i can imagine akshara of ur ff.because we got back our akshi tomorrow na,usse pehle wo kahi kho gayi thi.nahi tho akshi ko aise imagine karna mereliye mushkil thi.u updted this part on d r8 time di.v all naksh fans r in a gr8 mood.aapne us mood ko aur bhi superb bana di hai.thanku so much di.jab naitik aathe waqt akshi uske aaju-baju dekhi na,that was a cute scene.aapne akshi ko wahi saari pehnakar humare bhi yaadonko thaza kara di hai.luvd naitik's teasing.the hand kiss was mb,naitik's dialogue was perfect.the candle light dinner,just wow.akshi luks so beautiful in that candle light.i want this scene in yrkkh.ab dimri ko shock kab lagegi,tab hi ye scene yr mein milega.aapne tho rain romance bhi include ki.that too vry natural.thunder se darkar akshi naitik ko hug karte hai,ye bhi meri dream naksh sequence hai.hope ye bhi yr mein mil jaye.ab aathe hai,smp.the dress was beautiful.i can imagine naitik's reaction.u described it beautifully di.well written.akshara's shyness nd naitik's reactions,wow.all kisses r awesome.current bhi chali gayi.aur kya chahiye.i must say di,u included all the possible romantic scenes in this part,wo chahe candle light dinner ho ya rain romance.i SALUTE u 4 ur amazing imaginating power.aapne ithni beautifully describe kiya hai ki hum bhi imagine karne mein majboor ho jaathi hai.i think that is the success of a writer.now w8ing 4 naksh's anniversary nd their romantic trip.im sure it is going 2 b awesome.hope u strted 2 write ur nxt part.all the best di.thanku so much 4 d pm.

oh wowww... thanku so much rasha🤗 for explaning each n everyting in detailed n mentioned how u felt on it... I'm so happy reading such a long comment... I'm so happy that u liked the scenes I wrote on naksh n u were able to imagine them too... I have included all d scene which myself also want to see them on naksh... so included candle light dinner... rain... sulu maasi dress... powercut... everything.😳... I'm so glad u loved it... I'm still writing the 4th part... just started today... I'll be posting it on this friday as u asked... It will be a romantic n also a cute one... I hope u like that too... 😃

Originally posted by: saru.g

oh wowww... thanku so much rasha🤗 for explaning each n everyting in detailed n mentioned how u felt on it... I'm so happy reading such a long comment... I'm so happy that u liked the scenes I wrote on naksh n u were able to imagine them too... I have included all d scene which myself also want to see them on naksh... so included candle light dinner... rain... sulu maasi dress... powercut... everything.😳... I'm so glad u loved it... I'm still writing the 4th part... just started today... I'll be posting it on this friday as u asked... It will be a romantic n also a cute one... I hope u like that too... 😃

glad u liked my comment di.thanku so much 4 updting nxt part on fri 4 me.

Originally posted by: Hinakshara

glad u liked my comment di.thanku so much 4 updting nxt part on fri 4 me.

its my pleasure dear...

Its already almost nine pgs after updt.. Toh I think i got late here.. 😆
cuming to ur update, i loved it.. 12th oct, 9th nov n 1 nov,2010 ek saath.. 😍 Ab koi aur kya bol sakta hai?? 😳
Wow.. Ur naksh really luks like show wale naksh.. I can imagine every scene u written happening in YR.. Thats really awesome.. 👍🏼
and SMP k baare kya kahu?? It was so so so gud, cant explain how much i loved it.. ❤️ Kash ye scn show me aata.. 😳
ek suggestion du?? Chalo de hi deti hu.. 😆 Ye part plz fb pe dimri ko msg kar do taki dimri kuch ideas chura le.. 😉 😆

Originally posted by: pari1508

Its already almost nine pgs after updt.. Toh I think i got late here.. 😆
cuming to ur update, i loved it.. 12th oct, 9th nov n 1 nov,2010 ek saath.. 😍 Ab koi aur kya bol sakta hai?? 😳
Wow.. Ur naksh really luks like show wale naksh.. I can imagine every scene u written happening in YR.. Thats really awesome.. 👍🏼
and SMP k baare kya kahu?? It was so so so gud, cant explain how much i loved it.. ❤️ Kash ye scn show me aata.. 😳
ek suggestion du?? Chalo de hi deti hu.. 😆 Ye part plz fb pe dimri ko msg kar do taki dimri kuch ideas chura le.. 😉 😆

hey pari... thanku soo much... I'm so glad that u liked it... yaa ofcourse I mixed all... I dont want leave any romantic moment on naksh... so included all... n haa I too would love to see all these on naksh... I think dimri already visits our form... I hope she sees it... 😳

Originally posted by: sejal719

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dam it anvi and sh ur faster then me lol

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geee saru i never knew a good girl like you would write parts like this😳 was this hot or what omg i was blushing all the way ( which is a good thing) this is my kind of part 😉 loved this part so much and so i encourage you to write more parts like this and keep the romance meter super high 😉

awesome part and loved it thnx for the pm

and once again have no words to tell you just awesome and super cute 😳

and omg i also liked the length of the part it was nice and long 👏😆

tc

sejal<3

hey seju... when have u updated this?? I have seen just now... even I'm blushing while writing this😳... some how managed to write it whole n tried to keep it as decent as possible... I'm so glad that u liked this... I'm so happy... 😃

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