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euphoric

@euphoric

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Posted: 15 years ago

#881

Originally posted by: jnawaz
so...my coworker (who I got hooked onto Geet) asked me if i read the update yesterday...i said no...not yet...she said "its good"...then this morning...my best friend (who doesnt read this ff but knows about it cuz of me)...asked if i read it so i could give her the details...i said no...not yet...she ordered me to read it and tell her what happened...im like..dear lord woman...hold your horses!! 😕...so...its Saturday afternoon...i just did three admissions at work...now...i have my chinese for lunch...my sobe cranberry/grapefruit drink...and now im read to read!! 😃😃😃...what a process its become...😆...so lets go!

"reminding her of her once apon a time..."...wow...Maneet truly are faiytales for us arent they...cuz just like after watching a disney movie you want your prince charming...here...after maneet...you want your MSK 😳...i LOVED Geet's reaction...i knew that she wasnt going to turn into a blubbering slob and open her dil ki bhadas in front of Maan...but i wasnt sure how you'd handle it...im glad that you showed that Geet remembered that when she needed him...she had turned her away 👏👏👏...he didnt give her a chance...and now...she shouldnt either...well...not yet any way...Maan's reaction to Geet's reaction...(wow) ...was just amazing...something snapped ruining the harmony of his spirit...because it was the first time he was seeing Geet as worn out and defeated...superb!! just...awesome!! 😲😲...i loved it!! im so confused!! i mean...ek taraf...im with Geet...she is right in her place to push him away after what he did/didnt do...then...seeing Maan somewhat repenting for his actions or lack there of, i feel for him...but...i think...at the end...im with Geet more on this one...at least for now...she needs to hold a grudge! 😛...i do however want to see Maan kick Arujns butt!! i want to see his reaction when he finds out the whole truth!! 😳😳...i swear...seeing Pinky standing up to Maan...i LOVED it...our sweet si, innocent si Pinky...haye haye...sherni nikli!!! ⭐️⭐️...ok...i agree...forget MSK...Geet can have him...i want VIcky!! you tell ms sasha that she has competition!! 😉😉...i loved how he tells it to Maan like it is !! fabulous...just...fabulous!!! 😃😃...i loved his talk with Babaji!! he he...🤣...the Arjun scene...umm...need i say...eww!! 🤢...chalo...finally Dev has found his...errm...spine 😉...good to see that he is finally standing up to that chudail of a wife he has...bleh!!! that comment Geet made about Maan hurting her before...and her being used to the pain...omg...dead...im dead...flawless!! 👏👏👏👏...

cant wait for next part!! eee!!

JAZ

Okay buddy... can u tell me who routed u to RA... I'm just plain curious😉😆 and u inturn got someone else waiting for u to update on the updates😆😆😆... nd here r my friends... if i tell them anything thy roll their eyes at me nd walk away

😆

oh yes... Maaneet has somehow that appeal of a fairy tale of the princess and the princess... of the knight in shining armour and his damsel in distress! making us single female souls wait for our MSKs to pass by😆 hmm i m all ready to up grab such an opportunity

😆

maine bola tha... maan singh khurana ko papad belne padenge... so he's on the job now... soon we'll have Khurana papad factory too😆

I know at times its confusing and distressin when she has to push her away... but no wounds heal so soon na and her trauma can definitely not be soothed in a day's time... so he needs to make ammends... besides he needs to do some mehnat too😈😆

U too want Vicky... Sasha is going to fortify him now😆 MSK ki popularity kam ho rahi hai😆😆

Thanks a bunch Jaz... so glad u r enjoying ur stay

😆

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Esha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#882

Hey Jaan...🤗...sab Usse dekhne gaye hai...main akeli hu ghar pe...😛

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euphoric

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Posted: 15 years ago

#883

Originally posted by: undisclosed

bravo sonia👏..what a tale you have weaved here...32 parts strong and still going on...i never get bored of it...i love that maan has now got a different determination...vicky's and sasha's relationship is too cute..arjun is the perfect psycho...he is simply insane...you are developing all of the characters very well...loved every bit of this update...and maan's reaction at the end was my favorite...because as you might have heard before...i love jealous maan😍...😆

Sylvia to be honest i myself don't know how RA got past 30 mark coz i didn't expect it to run so long and to be loved so dearly... so i m highly obliged and grateful😃

glad u enjoyed the whole update... i know jealous Maan is an instant turn on😉😆

Thanks dear😳

Originally posted by: honeygrape
just saw your ff 2 days back only... loved it very much... and eagerly waiting 2 know how this jealous maan will react... wonderful ff dear... wen are you updating the next partt.. plsss update sooon

Thanks dear😳

glad u enjoyed the whole of the journey of RA

would love to hear more from u😃

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euphoric

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Posted: 15 years ago

#884

Originally posted by: esha143
Hey Jaan...🤗...sab Usse dekhne gaye hai...main akeli hu ghar pe...😛

haw? tujhe kyun chod gaye?

chal main ghar bhaag rahi hoon abhi😆

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ansah

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Posted: 15 years ago

#885

Thanks for double updates...sorries for being extremely late

not my fault exams talwar on my head...😆😆

loved it like anything...so maan finally know the truth..

thankuuu babaji...😆😆

can we have arjun killed plz...would love to do the honours

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Anu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#886

Lovely updates. Thanks for the double bonanza.

I am so happy for Maan and Geet as the misunderstandings have started to clear. Now Maan knows that his Geet is not married. She is still Maan ki Geet. But still Geet doesn't know that Maan is not engaged. Make her forgive him. He has also gone through a lot of pain.

Ab now that Aarjun knows that Anu knows where Geet is, wo to Mumbai pahunch jayega. But then now no worries as Maan is there with her. She is not alone as she was in HP.

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

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Posted: 15 years ago

#887

missing RIPPED APART from last 15 days ,read at one go .

so , much happened .loved it

She looked up at him as tears trickled down her cheeks. He searched her face, waited for her to say something but nothing happened. She looked at him as if he was a dream. Gulping the lump in his throat, he gently cupped her jaw and called again, "Geet"... and then she leapt forward and flung in his arms as she broke into gut-wrenching cries. He held on her tightly as she clutched onto his collar, seeking the warmth of his embrace.

atlast ,she is in maan arms . feeling content .so, loved this para , i can't tell u

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euphoric

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Posted: 15 years ago

#888

Originally posted by: mahi.ve
hey i read ur ff in one go..its really awsmplz pm me whenever u update further
i sent u buddy rqst...so plz accept it nd pm me😊

Thanks Mahi😃

i m glad tht u enjoyed the story.. will pm u and wud love to hear more from u😳

Originally posted by: zaqxsw
Hey Sonia...
R u going to hit me for not commenting earlier and even missing commenting on ur work earlier as I said..???😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I am sooo sorry... Was actually very busy with the college wrapping up and farewell and stuff and then sprained my hand so couldnt comment... 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Well lets leave the sad story... I am back here again to tel u how much I loved the update... 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
Was so eagerly waiting for the update u dont know...
Actually wanted the truth to come out in front of Maan but then how can I forget its u who is giving directions for the story to progress and then its Maan and Geet on the other hand...
I have my full sympathies with Vicky and Anu... I wonder how these two have been dealing with Maaneet... 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
Its indeed fun and adventurous task for Vicky to get the entire story but only he and Anu can do it... Loved his dialogue... "Unko angry young man banaya toh at least you could have spared us humans around him with a stronger heart na!"
Well if u permit me can I murder NT and Arjun especially... He is just disgusting... 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
Finally Dev has some voice in the story...
Pinky stupid hai... I knw she loves Geet but y does she have to come in between Maaneet... 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
Please inke beech ki MU jaldi se solve kar do...

For ur work, great update... I just cant tell u how much I love reading ur updates and wait for u to update...
Hope ur hand is fine now and u have got to best of ur health...
Thanks for the pm...
Waiting for a next nice interesting update from u...
Signing off
Love
Sakshi

Hi Sakshi🤗

yes... a whack from me😈😆

just kidding😳 i understand personal life comes first and farewell and the college days comes only once... so i m glad tht u enjoyed those😳

ha ha ha bhai ki love story main bechare Anu and Vicky ki waat lag gayi😆... can u imagine with both of them on Geet's side... what Maan would do post marriage? he for sure would go and bang his head out there😆

don't bother abt Arjun, his days r counted now... Maan and Geet are not going to spare him

well if u see Pinky's view point... anyone wud get angry at Maan... the poor girl is hurt and he has being a jerk

My hand is all fine... the next dose of dhamaka is a proof of that na😆 didn't realize it went so long😕😆

Thanks a bunch dear😊

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euphoric

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Posted: 15 years ago

#889

Originally posted by: Alvi18
awesome update sonia

Thanks Alvi😃

Originally posted by: sukklover

...😛

ur update was also ...

u really done a of couse ...

..really

just ...

👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼4 ur ...

4 PM me dear..😳.

once again i said n ...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

lots of ...🤗

update soon...

lov,❤️

Tama