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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey friends! I am really sorry' cannot continue with this ff for long because my coaching is beginning in this week and I have to concentrate there even' So I have to leave the track and wind up this ff so that I have only 2 ffs to take care of' I am even planning to wind up my Abhiya ff soon so that I can concentrate on Inhuman Ties and my studies!
Sorry Again!!
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Part 20
Maan and Geet couldn't help talking to each other and that was the most important thing among everything! Even during the party at the Khuranas'Maan and Geet were continuously on call chatting about everything they could' Finally it was the Haldi ceremony followed by mehendi and Sangeet in the evening! Geet was taken to the backyard for the ceremony and she wore plain yellow suit and yet looked adorable' Her mamis, chachis, maasis and other couldn't help commending her for her serene beauty! Before the ceremony, she again called Maan
Hi Maan! Kya kar rahe the? Aaj aapki haldi hai na?
Hm' waise hai nahi ho rahi hai!
Really wahaan shuru bhi ho gayi?
Hmm' aur phir wahi Haldi tumhare ghar bhi to aayegi na!
(Blushed) hmm'to aapne kya pehna hai?
Umm'kurta-paijama! Kyun?
Really'mujhe aap apni ek photo MMS karo na!
Nahi'
Kyun nahi?
Mujhe achcha nahi lagta!
Oye hoye! Sharma rahe ho Mr. Khurana!
Maan Singh Khurana kisi ne nahi sharmata!
Achcha ji'aisi baat hai to mujhe aapko us dress mein dekhna hai!
Rehne do na Geet!
Nahi Maan! No'
Please Geet!
Maan mujhe dekhna hai to bas dekhna hai!
Suddenly both Maan and Geet heard Rano's voice and Geet disconnected the call!
Ji mamma!
Chal beta'
Kyun Haldi aa gayi'waise itni jaldi to nahi aa sakti Maan ke yahaan to abhi Haldi ho rahi hai'
Geet'tu phir se Maan ji ko call kar rahi thi?
Nahi Maa'aapne aisa kyun socha!
Tu kya bol rahi thi'
Umm'woh mamma' Maan ke yahaan jaldi kaam kahaan shuru hota hai'wahaan to sab der se uthte hai na!
Haan'waise yeh to hai'lekin beta'tu wahaan jaldi uth jaana'theek hai na!
Mamma'aap phir se tension lene lage'fikar mat karo'main sab sambhaal loongi!
Chal'neeche aa jaa! Daadima aayi hain'shaadi ka joda lekar!
Shaadi ka joda?
Hmm' aa ja jaldi!
Ji aayi abhi'
Geet hurried downstairs and then hugged Daadima who had brought her dress! Receiving a stern look from Rano, she bent down to take her blessings' Her eyes were brightened seeing her dress and then Daadima left' Geet went upstairs and started trying her dress to check the fitting'While she was trying'Maan called her again'
Kaisa laga?
Kya Maan?
Shaadi ka joda?
Achcha! Maan yeh joda to itna changa hai! Main kya bataon'mujhe to bahut sundar laga!
Chalo'tumhe achcha to laga!
Kyun nahi lagega! Mere sasural ki baat hi kuch aur hai'
Achcha'waise Mrs. Khurana! Yeh joda aapke husband ne aapke liye choose kiya hai!
Pehle to'Mrs. Khurana banane mein mujhe abhi poora ek din baaki hai'and secondly'thank you!
(Maan smiled softly) Chalo'I'll call you later'
Hmm'bye!
Geet was changing into her yellow Haldi dress when she heard shouts of people calling her' She wondered' Annie! Actually it was decided that Annie would be bringing the Haldi from the Khuranas for Geet' Anni probably gave the Haldi to Rano and rushed up to Geet's room' Good Morning bhabhi! Annie hugged Geet who smiled back Good Morning Anni' Anni looked at Geet from head to toe and then replied' bhabhi'you're not ready'Rano aunty neeche bula rahi hai aapko! Geet grew conscious and hurried downstairs' Rano held her hand as she descended the stairs and then made her sit for the ceremony'Soon Geet was clad with Haldi and looked adorable still' The ladies sang and danced on traditional Punjabi songs while Geet sat there blushing' She was still all clad with Haldi when her phone rang'before she could pick it up'Annie stooped down to attend it' She grinned seeing Maan's number' Anni cleared her throat to sound like Geet'
Geet'tum phone kyun nahi utha rahi thi?
Umm'woh..main busy thi Maan bh'..
Achcha khair chhodo' yeh batao'kya kar rahi thi?
Haldi lagwa rahi thi'
I love you'
I love you to' (Annie cleared her own voice) Maan bhai!
Anni!
(Annie giggled and hung up the phone)
Geet poked her as she laughed the way through'
That night' before the Sangeet could begin' Geet called Maan'
Maan!
Hi'mehendi lagwa li?
(Blushed) abhi nahi Maan'bas jaa rahi hoon'aap phone pe rehna'I am plugging in the ear-phone'
Hmm' theek hai'
Aur aap bhi mehendi lagwa lena!
Main kya?
Maan!
Ok baba! Theek hai!
Bye!!
The Handa Haweli was lavishly decorated with lights and flowers and the entire house looked like a princess' a red carpet had been laid from Geet's room till the stage where the ceremony was to take place to signify Geet being a princess' Geet wore a beautiful red dress which made her more appealing and dazzling' All she could think of was to look perfect in front of her Mr. Perfect! She was escorted to the stage by Raaji and Annie and Pinky'
The mehendi began with Annie's dance followed by all the traditional rituals' by evening'Geet's hands were adorned by Maan's name' Geet was so delighted that day'.she couldn't sleep at all'all she could think of was Maan! Maan and only Maan which would officially be hers in a day's time' She laughed and finally dozed off'
Precap
The wedding and probably the end!
Sorry for the abrupt end'but I need to concentrate
on my studies as well'
Promise'will not end Inhuman Ties so soon!
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Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Oye Hoye!!

how romantic!!!

their always on the phone to each other...shooo shweet :-)

Keep it up dude

:-)


Edited by cue1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome yaar...loved it so much !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
simply wow
awesome , beautiful and very romantic.
Thanks for the PM dear.
My like button is not working
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Brilliant work dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
loved their cute convo...

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice i like it. thnxx 4 da pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it 😛

you are going to end this...hmmm anyways all the best for your studies dear..
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Posted: 14 years ago
good one...

thanks for pm...

count soon...
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good ff...thanks for the pm...love it...

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