suraj-manasvi or arjun-bhumi - Page 2

very lovely anu.... plz do write the next part...
i was thinking of writing a scene.. but haila i cant be this lovely..

come on anu, that is no place to stop.......

.....but 1 day sumthing happens..............
over the past months mansvi has bcome a very gud friend of suraj but still doesnt realize tht she actually luvs him 😊 😳.1 day a party going on in heritage house.all couples incld A-B r on da dance floor.suraj asks mansvi but she refuses.suraj is in a gud mood n teases her by calling his other close friend 2 dance wid him.at 1st mansvi doesnt notice but when she sees her husband n da other gal getting closer n closer she feels sumthing burning(guess what!!)suraj notices dis.
suraj-mansvi tumhara face itna lal kaise ho gaya?
mansvi-(turning away)woh...woh..main arjun ko dekh rahi thi.
suraj-use dekh rahi thi ya mujhe!!
mansvi-tumhe kaun dekhega.sab tumhare partner ko dekhne me busy hain.
suraj-i feel sumthing is burnin.do u?
mansvi-burning, my foot!!!goes away angrily 2 room.in room she thinks of her behavior.why has she suddenly bcom so possesive bout suraj?has she started loving him?dis was da 1st time she felt so!!

howzattt!!!!plz tell me!!!😕

awesome anu... 😆 great work...love it.. 😃

as fer my fav scenes..

S-M ka abhi yet to come..par the best i like so far is the one in which suraj convinces manasvi 2 re-marry...n she hugs him.. 😳

A-B kai toh bohattttttttttttttttt saray hai yaro...hmmmm...my most fav one is in which bhavri decides to do sumthin after she loses Sugandhi creations n thn in the room arjun comes close to her n hugs her n she sleeps in her arms...tht scene is sooooooooo touchin..love it.. 😳 😃

it's toooo good anu 👏 👏 .plz plz write next part.

guyz i'm glad u like the topic and plzzzz do rite anything that comes to ur mind beleive me u guyz rite pretty good and impressive.....anu u rite gr8 plzzz do cont and as for suraj-manasvi create ur own romantic scene that u want to happen between them.. 😊

SORRY HAD SLEPT OFF!!!here i continue......
mansvi has started feeling 4 suraj but suraj is unaware of this.he thinks tht she still luvs satya.1 day suraj has 2 go 2 bangkok 4 sum business deals.its not even 1 day since he has gone,mansvi starts missing him.wherever she c's she finds suraj but he's not there actually.but still mansvi doesn't admit tht she luvs suraj.the day when suraj was 2 return mansvi saw in news tht da plane he had borded had crashed.she just goes mad!!!!starts crying 😭 .(backdrop-jaanam dekhlo mit gayee durian main yahaan hoon yahaan hoon....)she c's suraj again n again but he's not there.suddenly da whole heritage house shrieks 'SURAJ'!!!!.mansvi runs down n finding suraj runs n hugs him tightly.
den she utters da 3 magic words"I LUV U".
suraj did not hug her back thinking she ws saying this 2 satya.but den mansvi said "I LUV U SURAJ".suraj wid tears in his eyes hugs her back tightly n every 1 in da house is 😳.

whoa!!!! lovely part anu... real lovely!!!!!!! 👏
the scene was really wonderful!! really wondeful!! not the scene actually the whole story, concept.. n the last scene was too good!!!!!!!!
lovely dear really!!

Anu 2 good. I hope in the serial it also happens this way or something very similar. 👏

dis is da last scene b/w S-M as im getting 2 many ideas 4 A-B scenes but don worry i'll soon cumup wid sumthing b/w S-M.
suraj wid tears in his eyes hugs her back tightly n every 1 in da house is 😳
cing them 🤗 all others walk away.mansvi holds on 2 suraj 4 a really long time.whn she leaves him.suraj gently takes her 2 dere room n makes her sit.mansvi bursts out crying n says"i've lost my bloved once n i dont want 2 lose my bloved twice"
suraj-stop saying tht .main tumhe chodkar kabhi nahin jaunga 😕.saying dis he wipes her tears .ab meri pyari biwi mere liye hasegi.
mansvi doesnt laugh
suraj-thik he mat haso.kya abbhi tumhe jalne ki boo nahin aati?
mansvi smiles
suraj takes her in his arms n is about 2 kiss her but mansvi sighs n just hugs.just den our khushi enters n 2 make matters wrse asks dem"aap log kya kar rahein hai"
both S-M-uuuhhhh......wwwooohhhhh 😕
khushi lauhs n goes away.
bas now i'll send A-B romantic scenes. 😃 😉