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puth100

@puth100

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Posted: 14 years ago

#541

awesome update Sonia...is their any importance to yash and anu's meeting????

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#542

res...

ok unres...

okay...for once i am not going to swear at arjun and my swearing tradition will be broken and u wanna know why...because since stupid Arjun didn't come to the mall, Anu met Yash...sweet and cute YAsh and i know they are going to be together...i just know it...finally Anu is going to be with a guy who is going to love and care for her...i know it's a little far way but i do know it's going to happen..i can tell he already has feelings by the way he reacted when she told him she is getting engaged...so ya...very happy about that...😃

and poor Dev...i sorta kinda felt bad for him..he fell for the wrong girl...or witch to be exact..and distanced himself from his loving family...i really hope he leaves her at the end..she doesn't deserve him..

and the brotherly sisterly scene between Anu and Dev was cute and sweet...i liked it 😊

And Mr. Maan Singh Khurana...what do i say about this man...he has some sort of 'not admitting syndrome' if such a thing exists...he knows how much he still loves her, still cares for her, needs her and etc but he has show that he doesn't give a donkey's ass...honestly...he saw how weak she looked but he doesn't try to find out anything...WHY?? WHY???

but i was so so so happy when she gave him that two month notice that he used to get her back in the office...and how she was determined not to let him see how he hurt her...she is going to be strong this time..

all in all...fab update...new attitude for Geet and possibly new love for Anu...loved it 😃

p.s...dw...the replies can wait 😊

Edited by maankigeet4ever - 14 years ago

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ninavi

@ninavi

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#543

Awesome update
Loved it
Con soon

Thanks 4 da pm😊

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#544

spell bound sonia. you wrote so beautifully aaahhh still i am speechless . whenever anu para starts i am tensed ,will she will disclose the geet's whereabouts to arjun .thankgod in this update moron arjun doesn't come to know . par gala se machli gayi to kata phasa,today dev entered the scene i was like plz anu don't spill to dev otherwise through nt again arjun.ahhh,kitni mushkil hoti hai humein sambhalne mein .

vicky is like cutiepie , just observing his bro fighting with his mind and heart .

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...He knew there was this deep canyon between them that they could never surpass. Nonetheless, deep inside, he knew that she was all he wanted. No reasoning' no amount of facts eased his pinning for her. And if he couldn't have her, at least he needed to see her. Gradually, he was accepting this one reality of his life that tried as much he could never completely let her go. This was something that was completely beyond his control and he was succumbing to it. However, this didn't mean he had forgiven her. No! He would never do that! He could never do that! She would endure the same pain that he had gone through and then' then he would ask her' Why...

maan pov is so beautifully explained . the emotions which is for geet is out of his control . he had come to conclusion he will ask why . kudos sonia.👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Winds roared, huge waves violently crashed onto the shore in the distance but she turned around and shut the windows closed preventing not only the storm but even the radiance of the comforting moonlight to enter her room.

geet has made peace with herself .she is more determined ,she will not get affected by maan presence and will prove herself . she had accepted she had to lead her life in seclusion . bravo geet . come out of your shell ,fight back and emerge as winner .

sonia, these lines are so aptly written . i am touched .lovely sonia. ⭐️⭐️⭐️

hope anu will face the bittertruth and yash will be angel in saviour and hope dev will also come to the truth of his beloved wife nt and idiot arjun.

thanks again for long update . you are an amazing writer . keep going .

Edited by acjanfeb1 - 14 years ago

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Romenas

@Oblivion007

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#545

Oh gosh sonia!!how i'll be able to wait for the next update i don't know bt, ths was so enchanting,really when i saw u updated i was stunned as to jst yesterday i have finished the last part.it was like a bliss for me.
Maan is sooo much stubborn.why can't he see beyond his own ego!!it's like u are simultaneously getting ovewhelmed by the unconditional,larger than life love of him for geet&irritated as he jst never cared to know beyond the obvious,from that point of view he is quite selfish.i'm jst dead worried for geet cos she is becoming more and more numb with the passing days&she has like surrendered herself to her own ordeal.she is falling more and more deep in to the oblivion.in ths period only and only maan can help her to rise back, to sanity.besides maan needs to repent for his mistakes, though it was a cruel game of destiny throwed to them by the almighty yet he shd have fought for his luv,for the trust he had on her luv,bt fe jst failed miserably on that aspect!!nothing more to say,i jast feel too much sad after reading the updates for ths ff as it touches me soo much,i don't know why,i jst want to request u to bring some hope for them even it's jst a dim light of ray,bt hopefully i would be able to manage myself untill the next update.
Thank u soo much once again for writing ths outstanding thng and must let me know whenever u update the next part:)

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Eva Shah

@maanujaanu

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#546

u really think we didn't need tissues here

i mean yes we r strong reader but emotional too

plzzz update d next part soon

hope u won't make us wait 4 long

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sakadafi

@sakadafi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#547

Brilliant update! You've caputred everyone's POV so well. Both Maan & Geet's pain is visible/readable in each word they say...in each action. Curious to see how soon Anu will reach Geet...as for Maan...well, he's a stubborn idiot in love...it'll take him time...

Waiting for more...

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#548

super update...

eagerly awaiting the next part.

waiting to see what the new entries will do

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#549

fantastic update
cont soon
thank u for the pm

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undisclosed

@undisclosed

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#550

absoluetly spectacular...ooohh love the yash character..hope he save anu from arjun...loved hearing maan pov...glad the plan worked and he to the first excuse to make geet come back to the office...and love that geet is standing her ground now...as always...i can't wait for the next part 😃

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