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aisha_ranbir8

@aisha_ranbir8

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#101

hey beautiful...........da part waz ............ loved it......... u write amazing so reminds mee abt the movie.............. anywa pls continue soon ........... n thanks for pm.............take care........love aish.............

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@Bazingaa

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#102

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Omg Aku! What an update...omg! I am grinning like hell! It was sooo cute! Omg! Karan asked for help! <3 <3 And haha, shanky's reaction...somewhat like my dad's! :p 😆

And he couldn't say you're beautiful..hawww...but during the actual play...😳...it'd a treat to read! :D

Awww...this was sooo cute! And omg she's finally opening up...though teensy weensy bit only! But this was such an adorable update...can't wait for more! <3

And Vicky, hmmm..I wonder what he'll do? 😆

Ahhh..the precap! You're making me sooo excited...when the fudge will u update...it better be SOON! 😈

I love the way you're keeping everything to the point and not dragging...well done! You're an amazing wirter! Brilliantly written!

You have to leave it at such an exciting point,don't you? And then not update for a good long time! I want an update by tomorrow! :p

Loved it! Continue soon! <3 <3

P.S- I guess this will be my last long comment on this...for a while. I have my exams coming up so I have stopped coming online much. I'll defo read it..I can't live without it lol but I wouldn't have the time to leave long comments until the 21st of June now..But I'll defo read it so don't forget to PM me when you update. I'll be back with my long comments after the 21st of june...hope you understand! <3 <3

Edited by kasharti1 - 14 years ago

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Usha

@alaipayuthey

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

wow!

awesome part!

loved it!

shilpa's dream was cute!

continue soon!

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MysticalRealm

@MysticalRealm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#104

Shilpa's goal was disturbing. Is she hiding something, i feel as if she is upset about something, does she love Armaan? It feels like she does! N I think this Vickey may help him realize that ye has some teeny bit of feelings for Armaan. Shanky made me laugh, he seems worse than the DMG Shanky! You are doing great with the fic! Thnnx for the PM!

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tulsi agarwal

@spicyheart

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#105

beautiful update

hehe loved shanky was osaamm

mmm vicky....new char haan

interestin

n abt shilpa's goal

there is something mysterious

continue sonn

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manjiri

@m4manju

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

nice part.... armaan couldn't speak the dialogue "u r beautiful" when he had shilpa herself in front him? 😲 open ur eyes dude 😆 anyways i think vicky is gonna play an intersting role here... continue soon 😊

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ayaan Gill

@..ayaan..

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

nice ff....add me to your pm list

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imshveta

@imshveta

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#108

Hi Akanksha
I just read the beginning of the ff and then realized that I have read those lines before. Then I read the chapter on page 15 and then I realized the book that I have read. I asked myself if I am willing to go through the pain again. I already know the story and from the look of it I know where it will end (I was hoping you might make it a different ending but that seems unlikely considering it has started from the end). But still I think I am willing to be taken to that beautiful journey of this story once again. Don't pm me because I am not regular with comments and you won't like it. Anyways I will find you.

P.s. I have not seen the movie. Dint know there was one. I would rather read it once again over here

Shveta

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Laila.N

@Laila.N

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#109

Amazing !

Please continue soon :)

Love,

Laila

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Garima

@ScatteredCastle

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#110

It was so so good!! I really loved the way you penned it down and the part where A bumps into Shashank... if it were to happen in real, I'm sure it would have cracked me up! But you described it well enough!

So, I'm liking the AS convos; they're witty!

Umm, nice part overall! I loved it! Do continue soon. :)

Love,

Garima!

Edited by Angel-Pebby - 14 years ago