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Posted: 14 years ago
Pls update karo na.. kalka pura din nikal gaya....

We r waiting dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey lovely update dear.............
happy to see maaneet n mk together...................
precap was interesting...........
looking fwd..........

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Posted: 14 years ago
Luved the update...😆..MK at tyms is so disturbing...hehe..😉...poor geet trying to cuddle closer to him n stupid maan lost in his thoughts......continue soon..!!precap is quite interesting..!!
A BIG SORRY FOR COMMENTING LATE...BUT I DIDN'T EVEN KNOW THT U UPDATED...I MISSED UR POST IN UR PROFILE...SORRY...PLZZ...UPDATE FASTER..!!

Rohini

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Posted: 14 years ago

very touching update....

precap s interesting.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
muskiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!where,s shocking news headlines????????me serching it in in news paper lolzzzzzz...................plz. update soon.😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
What is he upto now? He is so certain of her reaction but some how I feel she will act against it. She is not sure about his love and action as he is distancing her physically. She can't take his refusal neither he can tell her the reason for his stand as he very well know that she will not listen to him if the reason for distancing is her health. She can afford to take the physical pain than being away with him and that she has already exhibitten while they were in the tunnel. Hope he is not acting Gautham to encounter Virat on some pretext.
Please don't tell us that they will join together once and she will end up pregnant and with her current condition, she will have to stay away from him. By the way, hope there is no problem with the embryo.......................... as we are very sure that she will be carrying his 2nd child as a result of there passinate love in the tunnel.
Please give hi some happiness. let him enjoy the company of his wife and kid
jaya
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey don't tell me that news headlines is "the dedicated DCP GK is dead"

Jaya

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: princess163

Geet lets out her fears.....
I am scared...am I living in a dream???
you are here,but untrue it all seems....
All these years, its you I had craved for...
i knw you love me,and thats what i waited for....
the feel of your arms, the warmth of your chest....
its all that I ask for after life's several tests....
Those three magical words from you,
make me feel i got a life anew....
the love in your eyes, it makes me drown in you....
that occasional kiss and i fall in love all over again with you...
The happiness in our princess' eyes...
the laughter and paying off of all those lies...
The satisfaction that you are there...
The love and bonding that you both share....
It all seems the way i always wanted it to be...
But, i am scared...lest you let me free....
craving to fall asleep in your arms....
and to wake up next to you evry morning of my life...
But,i am still scared...what if you went away....
this time my strength will give away....
i have been strong, all for our princess..
our love also helped me nonetheless....
So, please don't go...my heart screams....
be with me, fulfill our dreams...
a house filled with love,heart filled with joy...
together,you me and our princess will enjoy!!
Maan's promise to wipe away all the tears........
The love that i see in your eyes...
Instantly makes me wanna die....
the hurt, the pain, the insecurities...
the unshed tears in your eyes that tease...
My ever so sure Geet has started to just hope...
the emptiness of your eyes, leaves a lot of scope
It all my fault, i know i blundered...
but now, nowhere will our hearts wander!!
i will fill your heart with love and happiness...
Trust will be built, this time i will harness..
i can't bring back what you lost....
But, i will give you love, million times that you lost!
our princess will know,her daddy will always be there...
foe stories, for playing for running with here here and there...
All the doubts,i will wipe out,
All the pain I will now shut out!!
There will be happiness and joy all around...
will fill each day with celebrations of togetherness abound!!
Muski di...m loving the updates...can understand Geet's fears, but m sure very soon maan will replace all of them with trust...faith.....love....and security that he will always be there......
the precap makes me wonder, is maan planning to declare that Gk is dead or something??
Actually,I thought of that because that will then Leave geet with more time for maan and mk😉
Please updat soon...and yeah...for a change...HAPPY POEMS(tho with a tinge of pain)
hope you will like them...
i am going away for about a month....
dunno when I will write next after thursday that is tomorrow!😭
love you loads..
Swati


wow.............Simply Superb⭐️👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
Mini TM:-

Next:-

Maan come out side to recevd raj when they heard some loud cry.

Maan and raj look at each other then runs to that direction , they see mk standing in the middle of the corridor and sameera's hair all stand up and she is in the pull and annie's face with something,

Maan and raj looks at them then burst out a laugh when geet said aap dono ko saram nehi aaraha hain they r facing problem, one of them drowining and mk what r u doing and maan , raj both of u r laughing.

Naina:- men r complicated things, and forget their curtesy also.

Raj and maan control their laughter then said ok we r helping them , ok

But naina said pull is less water, she is standing their firmly then y need of help.

Geet:-yes and oh yes that is sameera , that , maan, rukiye , then called nakulllllllllllllllllllllllll

Maan :- kya akr rehe ho , ahista geet,

Raj:- look gudiya she is drwoingin and we should help her

Raj smirked at maan and maan winks at raj then both of them goes close to pull when annie said dekhiye na bhai mk ne kya kya.mere pura muh make up ka kya hogaya.

Naina murmur pura make up ki dukan hain

Geet siged iyepehele aise nehi thi

Naina:- company dekh kiska mila hain

Geet:-ohi toh

Then suddenly geet said look raj is helping sameera .

Naina looks furious at raj and said aaj aao ghar mein phir dekhna

Next:-

Raaj help sameera and suddenly sameera try to hug him and raj just taken aback and said kya akr rehi hain aap?

Sameera sniffing and said oh mein.. mein na dub rehi thi

Naina greeted her teeth and said aacha hota agar dub jati , nehi hua toh mein hoon na aur raj u, wait .

Raj push sameera and said ok , then tunrs and said maan , let's go

When geet shouts mk, come here.

Mk twisted her lips and push her curls behind her ear and give a glare to annie and sameera then runs to geet.

Geet take her in her arms when naina said m going to out house.

Geet nodded then give a angry glare to raj and said coldly maan aapko iha rehena hain aapke dost ke sath iya unhe lekar andar aana hain.

Maan gulped his saliva to hear the tone and said jaan m coming ,I mean we r coming then to raj chalo, bahut social work kar lia aab manao jake naina ko.

Raj rubbed his forehead and said karne gaya tha kuch aur ho gaya kuch.

Both r still standing there and taling when geet shouts maaaannn.

After hearing this Maan pull raj with him almost.

Raj and maan enter the farm house when raj said so grt msk jaru ka gulam ban gaya

Maan give him a deadly smiles and tum bhi banoge, waise don't u scare of naina's anger.

Raj gulped his saliva and said oh ha, and runs to naina.

When geet said kya baatein ho raha tha

Maan give her a smile and take her is his arms and said kehe raha tha aapne biwi ke baat maana kaise chaiye, new new hain na raj, samajh jayga, har koi mere tarah thori na hota hain.

Geet :- r u joking or serious.

Next:-

Geet :- r u joking or serious.

Maan give her a quick peck and said mein kabhi tumahare sath joke kya , sacchi m only devoted to my lovely wife.

Geet giggles and the said ok ok, now take mk and change her dress.

Maan:- yes wify.

Geet rolled her eyes and then went to kitchen for making food.

Here in the up stair , maan help to change mk when they ehard some noise from coming another room.

Maan shook his head and murmur raaj tu gaya aaj

Mk:- kya hua dadda

Maan:- nothing

Mk:- but uha toh raj uncle and naina aunty hain na

Maan:-ha darling

Mk:-phir iye sound kaise

Maan:-oh kya hain na uha tv pe kuch show dekh rehe hain uska hain

Mk accha

Maan:-ha

Mk:-par humne toh uha kuch nehi dekha aise

Maan rubbed his forehead and said aab baad mein aay ahoga, chalo neeche dekhte hain mama ne kya prepare kya hain.

Next:-

Maan take her in his arms and said let's go , to see mama , kya akr rehi hain.

Mk smiles and kissed his cheek.

Both entered the kitchen and seen get is busy to make paratha, .

Mk:-mama.

Geet tunrs and said tum iha kya akr rehe ho aur aap maan, aap isse iha kyuon le aaye, iye abhi bacchi hain, chaliye aap dono bahar ,

Maan:-oh geet, mujhe kuch tumse kehena hain

Geet:- ha kahiye

Maan still looking at her and geet doing her work when maan said again oh geet, mujhe kuch tumse kehena hain

Geet:- do baar iye bol chuke ho aap, age bhi boliye.

Maan:-oh

Mk giggle but stop whne geet glare at her and said beta, go and play with ur video games

Mk nodded and goes from there after that geet asked now kahiye

Maan thinks how she know him well with out say anything she could read his mind well.

Geet:- maan, pls jaldi boliye , raj aur naina ko lunch bhi dena hain

Maan:-unke baarein mein hi hain

Geet:-kya

Maan told her the whole incident and said aab.

Geet :- raj ne jaise kya hain waise hi payega, don't worry they will make up it . give them time..

Maan:-hope so.

Geet:- maan just pass the bowl .

Maan smiles and paas her bowl and then slide his hand on her waist and said jaan, mk ki summer vacation mein hum sab kuch dino ke liye London chale phir se , sirf , mein tum aur mk.

Geet shocked, surprised and happy and just tunrs and hugged him tightly.



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Posted: 14 years ago
mukaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan
where is the shocking news yaar
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