Unbreakable Bonds [Mayur and Gunur] : Pt 4 : Pg 32 - Page 21

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur



Thanks yar.....hmm....i think i wanna make a siggie for u for sure.....

i wud be considering this.....

Thanks yaar........but i am not a fan of my siggies at all....

Ya sure......chane ke dhal par ek saath.....lol.....

siggy for me
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Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur



Thanks yar.....hmm....i think i wanna make a siggie for u for sure.....

i wud be considering this.....

Thanks yaar........but i am not a fan of my siggies at all....

Ya sure......chane ke dhal par ek saath.....lol.....

sure yaar
siggy for me.......... wow
awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally
last update bhi pad liye
running out of time yaar'
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the update was awesome
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update soon
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continue soon eager to read next😊
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First i thought not to comment
banti hai na
Is mini ff ko repeat telecast karna mujhe ki actualy kya hai isme
uske bad story samajh aayi madame
Ab jab aapne update kar hi diya hai to iti meharbani kare ki next part jaldi post kare
next time if i forget the story to rewind nahi karungi
samjhi na GM
Cut to update
the part has too much of past ,mystry
ab jaldi reveal kar dena
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Posted: 14 years ago

haila i thought mayur were in love 🥺

on top of that they are jiju saali 😲

m totally shocked.....i wasn't expecting this at all

great update.....continue soon....i can't wait now

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awesome update

loved it

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Posted: 14 years ago

THANKS


Hey Guys, Long time i know....

Please forgive me for not replying to your beautiful and encouraging compliments.

They surely do matter to me a LOT.

I just didn't had time....net is very slow and my time limit rivals it....

I am extremely happy that you guys are still with me, despite my slow speed.

Please shower your comments to me always. They are the only encouraging source i have.

The only reason for my updating are your beautiful words. So keep them going.

I am truly sorry for not being able to reply, i have a very tight schedule.

But, this doesn't means at all that i am not reading them! I read them and cherish them, so please keep commenting.

With loads of love,

-Mahi

Edited by ...Mahak... - 14 years ago
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Part 4-

Mayank's pov-

Well I knew that one day would come, when Gunjan would come to know about the truth. But I didn't ever know that this day would come. How could Nupur hide such a big truth from me? Says the person who tortured her so much!

But was it my mistake? No, but it wasn't her fault either. Her fault? Her sin! She made me cry like anything. She completely broke me down. She made me do things, which I would have never done in my life. She made me a monster.

It's irony that, me, the person who could never see a single tear in her eyes, want to give her a lifetime of tears. Are you serious? Yes! Then why are you waiting for her in the ward? Why are you praying to God for her welfare? It's because-umm…I want to be the one giving her pain.

I tried to reason out with myself. But I couldn't deny the fact that it was equally paining me. No matter how much I pretended that I hate her, I can't deny the fact that there is still a part of my heart which secretly loves her. I can't believe why. Because you can never be the person you are pretending to be.

Yeah, true. But she made me do this. I can't say that I do enjoy seeing her hurt, but when I get closer to her, even if it's for tormenting her, I feel good. Try saying, blessed. Yeah, I feel that. Anyways, why the hell is the doctor taking so long? She is so tiny, they could have inspected her easily.

"Why did you have to do this Mayank?" Gunjan asked me. I stared at her incredulously. What have I done? Oh, yeah, tormented her sister. I maintained a calm face and said, "You don't know anything Gunjan. If you knew everything, you would have been on my side. Nupur was the one to betray me."

She smirked. Did she really smirk? Gunjan had never smirked once in her entire life! Was there something she knew and I didn't? She smiled and said, "No, not me. It's you who don't know the truth Mayank. I wish you had asked her yourself. She never betrayed you. Even after you did so many horrible things with her, she still loves you." I couldn't believe her.

I said, "She never loved me. She just played with my emotions! Even if she loved me, she never had the right to do the things she did, without my knowledge. I hate her Gunjan, I just hate her." She smirked again. What the hell was happening? She said, "Oh! You hate her, do you? Then why are you waiting for her like anything? Anyways, maybe before jumping to conclusions, you should have asked her everything. She was broken when she told me the truth. And I thought that you were right, and that's why I agreed to pretend that I am your fiance."

Ohk, I wasn't shocked. It was our plan to teach her a lesson. I just pretended to be her soon-to-be-brother-in-law. I did that to make her understand everything and break her pride. Gunjan smiled at me and said, "Mayank, you are my best friend and my first love, but you have to understand that she is my sister. Between the two of you, I would choose my sister. I have been so ignorant towards her feelings. I never showed her that I loved her. I pretended to be the witch who had snatched the most important person in her life. But you know that I love her. As much as I still love you, I am trying to move on from you. I guess it was wrong on my part to love you."

Ohk, that was shocking! She loved me? How could she? Seeing me perplexed and shocked face, she continued, "Yes, Mr. Mayank Sharma. I am in love with you. Even though you never noticed me in that way and secretly were attracted to my sister, I loved you. I never confessed because I could see you secretly loving my sister. I know that she was egoistic and proud, but I could see her loving you too. She was trying not to fall for you, but she eventually did. And you, what the hell is wrong with you? You even married her for God sake! Just because of a little misunderstanding, you chose to leave her! Why?"

I knew all those answers. I was afraid to give them out. I could trust no one. She smiled at my face and asked me a simple question, "Just tell me one truth, do you still love her?" How could I lie to her? Damn-it, I love her! I knew that I couldn't lie to my best friend. I loved Gunjan too much to lie to her. But obviously, my love for Gunjan was brotherly. The only girl whom I loved was Nupur.

I nodded and said, "Yes Gunjan, I still love her. I never stopped." At this moment, her face broke into a smile while her eyes were full of tears. I knew why. Her heart was broken, yet she carried a bold outlook for my sake. I opened my arms for her. She hugged me and sobbed on my chest.

She smiled and said, "I am very happy that you love my sister. I should be happy, but I don't know why, but it still pains. I am sorry Mayank. I shouldn't have had fallen for you. Trust me; truth is far crueler than you think. I want to tell you the truth, but I think that you deserve to know it on your own. Please take care of her Mayank. I love my baby doll."

I smiled at her, but before I could say anything, a nurse came out of her ward. Nurse said, "Mr. Mayank Sharma, you should really take care of your wife. Especially in this condition, she needs proper rest. There is not thing to worry for. She just fainted due to some emotional turmoil or physical exhaustion. But they both are fine now."

Both? What does that mean? I gathered my courage and asked, "Umm, what do you mean by 'both'?" She looked shocked. She asked me, "Don't tell me that you don't know that your wife is three months pregnant!"

And she went inside. While I felt that the floor beneath my legs had slipped away. She was pregnant? Nupur was pregnant! With my child! I was going to be a father! I felt my heartbeats going crazy. When I glanced at Gunjan, I could see shock evident in her eyes. Then I came to know about a realization. Can I forgive her now, when she is bearing my child in her womb? Does she deserve it?


To be continued...

I hope that this update threw a light on Mayank's character. How can u even imagine that i would ever make Mayank bad in my ff? I mean, i love him to death! There is a reason for everything.

I hope that you enjoyed this one, cause i surely did. Till i write up the next part, keep waiting :)

I am sorry that even after so much wait, i just had time to post such a small part. But i would post the next part soon.

To tell you all the truth, the next part will be longer and it would cover up more secrets and twists.

You can see that this tale is really mysterious and there are loads of mysteries and truths coming up in next update.

Please comment and leave me a review :) Remember, that i am waiting for them <3

-Mahi


Edited by ...Mahak... - 14 years ago

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