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Awesome update angelic
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Hey mishty very nice part
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hi dear amazing part......
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                 Part 22


she was in so hurry...she didn't even think of him...coz expecting him in colge is nxt to impossible...she knew...
...
NO much crowd anywhere...
all d areas got lonesum
"ohh god..lec start ho gaya...me to aaj mar gayi...me..."
...
ohh goddd...
...
he pulled her in a jerk...
making her back sticking his chest...
and his hand...snaking from her waist to her stomach...
her eyes popped wid sudden act...
she was shocked...surprised..happy..nervous...
every expression was oozing from her face...
she never required any proof to recognize him...
her heart beat went faster n faster...
she was happy like anything...
every beat of her heart knew..dat its him..only he could do dis to her...
...
he was happy..delighted...mesperized..to hav her in his arms...his life in him...
he grabbed her more tightly from back..resting his head on her hairs...
her smile widened...
she didn't care about d lec..colge..frndz..anything...
nothing seemed to bother her at dat moment...
all she wanted is to stay in dat moment enjoying his ownership on her...
she was happy she is near him..d way she alwz like...
...
he slowly came to senses...
looked at her from back...
she was wearing d dress he gifted...
omg...wat a perfect return gift...
he stood frozen...
wen he bought dat dres...he imagined of her wearing it...but now she was actually wearing d dress n dat to for him...
he didn't get a single word to express himself...
her red lipstick..red dress..red cheek...she looked like a fresh red rose...
may b softer dan dat...
his hand grabbed her litle gently wid d fear of making her hurt...
he couldn't believe yet...she actually wore dat dress...
how on earth vil he b able to express his feeling 2day...
...

location class

lec was started...
group were chichating from last banches...
ranbir - aye nishu...ye geet 10 min boli thi..abhitak nahi aayi...
nisha - tu kab se uski baat par vishwas karne laga...aaj to wo gayi kaam se...
...
annie - ye mayank...etne aage kyu baitha hai...
nupur find her odd all d time asking about mayank n mayank...
but she ignored it...
nupur - wo mayank ko aage baithna pasand hai...hamesha se...
...
nisha - kya yaar..geet abhitak nahi aayi...
ranbir - me usse call karta hu...ruk...
nupur - abbe...pagal ho gaya hai..sir ko pata chala na to tu gaya..aur tera cell b...
...
annie - try kar ke dekhna...
ranbir took out his mobile to call geet...
d same moment his mob rang...

SHEILA...SHEILA...SHEILA...
music...
SHEILA...SHEILA...SHEILA...
...
he immediately cut d call...totally terrified...
all class started laughing loudly...
ranbir started making faces...
roflll
teacher came dere fuming...
ranbir half dead...sir wo...
teacer - mahoday...ye sheila sheila kya hai...
ranbir - sir wo...actually...
a boy from class - ha bol bol.ye sheila kon hai...
all started laughing again...
ranbir - haan..sir meri masi ka naam sheila hai..wo london gayi hai...to mujhe unki cafi yaad aa rahi thi...esliye me ye ringtone rakh li...mene sahi kiya na sir...
...
all were mutely enjoying...
teacher - ohh...dats sad..i hope wo jaldi vapas aa jaye...ok..sit down...
...
another boy - sir..meri b masi ka naam sheila hai..to kya me b...
teacher - kyu nahi..jarur...
all class - thnqqq sirrr...
...
n den on n on...

...
...GEET N MAAN...

geet was still in his embrace from back...
she softly closed her eyes whispering - aap...
a smile teased his lips...
he came near her ear from back whispering - kal raat mene kaha tha ke etna khubsurat lagane ka haq kisiko b nahi...par ab shayad ye keh du..etni khubsurat to sirf GEET hi lag sakti hai...meri GEET...
OMG...her blush n happiness was nowhere to stop 2days...
she was happy..mesmerized...lost in his love words...
dat was d perfect word to praise her...she thout...she vil never need a word more dan dat
...
she blushed wid a soft smile...
her rose petal like lips seemed more delicate to him...
she still didn't think of once to see his face...
she never needed it...
his heart was enough proof for her dat she is his..only his...
maan slowly carrased her earlobe wid his lips...
she was tickled wid his touch...again closed her eyes...
he loved watching his effects on her...
he whispered again - me bardasht nahi kar sakta...ke mere alava koi aur tumhe dekhe...
...
his words...sticked on her heart...
she loved him...his every single words...his dominance..his ownership on her...
as she belonged to him forever...
geet whispered - aap mujhe chhupa ke to nahi rakh sakte na...
maan dominantly - me tumhare sath kuchh b kar sakta hu...
n bit her ear...
she moaned - ouchhh...
his heart sinked wid her single moan...
he scared as if he hurt her...
he kissed her ear softly..carrasing it...
geet loved his behaviour...attitude at 1 sec..n caring at another 2nd...
he whiepered - dard to nahi ho raha...
geet smiled - me etni najuk b nahi...
maan smiled at her words..grabbing her more n more...as if dey know each other from yrs...
...
wat kind of relationship dey shared...
dey both couldn't understand...
wat was it wid dem...
dey hardly know each other from 2 days...
but dey behave as if dey r together from yrs...
dey knew every beat of each others...
...
deir hug deepened...
dey were so lost in each other...
nothing seemed to matter for dem...
dey both got scared dey may just melt in each other...
maan left her at once...
looking opposite to her...
she didn't turn to see him...
she alwz trusted him more dan herself...
...
both were standing facing deir backs...
geet - aap mere liye aaye the...
MAAN SMILED STILL LOOKING OPPOSITE...
maan - nahi..me kuchh aur kaam se aaya tha...
geet naughtily - jhoot mat boliye...
maan - sach keh raha hoon...
he couldn't dare to say d truth...
...
geet - me nahi manti...
maan - u dnt trust me...
geet - i don't...

PRECAP : d 1st FIGHT...OOOPPSSS...:((

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
Cont soon๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
today me the second one good one i like it very much update soon