Tasfia's os gallery...(updated) page 20 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
wow!!!! that's amazing!! 👏
i loved it!! ❤️
it was soo heartfelt! 😊👍🏼
you have such a powerful way with words! 😊
fantastic job! 👏👏👏
~Alisha~

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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

The Hate Letter....




Dear mr. monkey...

how are you?..must be good without me...right?..i know...you are really happy in life...arent you?...i also know you dont care about me...my presence doesnt affect you...but still i am writing this latter to you...you must be lauging and thinking.."how fool this girl is.!"..yes i know i am a fool...but what to do..couldnt controll my heart...

in my whole life i spent most of the time with you...we together started our journey...i dont know what you think about those moments..does it affect you or not...but i want to tell you that this moments were the worst part of my life..yes..! worst part ever..my whole life changed because of you..i hate you..i hate you more than anyone in this world....

i hate all the rain which i enjoyed with you...i hate that feeling which i used to get while i was with you..i hate rains now...i hate those water drops...they used to be my favourite but now..because of you..i dont like rain...i hate to be wet in rain now...i dont get the feeling i used to get before...i used to feel complete in rain water but now i feel lonlely...i feel incomplete..you know why?...cause now i am alone to see the rain drops..you are not here with me anymore...i hate rain and i hate you....

i hate that ice cream parlor ...remember we used to go there everyday...and eat the half of the parlor...you used to give all your pockets money to me so that i could buy those ice creams...i dont like ice creams anymore...i dont feel like eating ice creams anymore...may be because you are not here with me anymore...but i hate ice cream..ice cream parlor..and more than anything i hate you...

i hate the school...the school compound..where we used to do fun..and enjoy our time...do you remember ho we used to bunk our classes...we used to solve our silly fights here...do you remeber how you had beaten a boy in this compund cause he flirted with me..i used to feel safe with you...i used to feel you'll always protect me...but i was wrong...i hate that school now..and i hate you ....

do you remember the park?...where we used to play...we used to play hide and seek here...once you had broke my doll..and how much i cried..u remember?...and then you had gifted a big doll than that...i still remember...you have always be my support...i still have that doll with me..but i hate dolls now...and i hate you....

i hate black color...you used to look so handsome in black..i used to drool over you secretly...now if anyone wears balck..i remember you..but no one looks as handsome as you...thats why i hate black..and i hate you...

i hate that beach now...do you remember we used to go there together...we used to sit there hours...you used to tell me all your talks there only...you always liked that place..and because this i also used to love that place...i used to get some time with you...together we used to enjoy the sunset....i hate beach now...and i hate you..

i hate that farwell party...i wish i wouldnt have felt jealous that day...i dont know what had happeed to me...my tears were beaming in my eyes seeing you dance with someone else...i just could think you with some one else..i still cant dont know why...you know what...i used to feel that i ony have every right on you...to hug you, to tell you how stupid you are, to fight with you, to dance with you...and when i saw some one else is getting this right i couldt take it...i hate myself for being jealous..and i hate you...

i hate every moment when you ignored me..i hate that feeling which i had for you...i hate everything related to you...i hate myself that i fell for you..i hate myself that i could never said those feelings to you...i hate everything..i hate everyone...i hate you that you never understood the feellings...i hate you that you couldnt see the love i had for you...i hate you..and will always hate you....

yours and only yours..
ms nautangki...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
@Tasfia🤗
Beautiful Os sis🤗
very well written
do write more
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
res

*edited*

sorry... sorry... dil se sorry.... duniya mein jitne sorry hai, sab sorry...😳😆
aage se kabhi nahi bhoolungi😳


now about the OS....
buddy... Monkey man aur Ms. Nautanki ka tag toh sirf hamare mayur pe hi fit baithta hai😳
and yeh hate letter kitna cute tha, aur kitna painful bhi

you have written it beautifully

❤️ u

~jiya~



Edited by jiya_angel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
awwwwwwwwww
itna chotoooooooooo sa
was going to read it tomorrow but after seing the length i changed my mind
was soooooooo sweeeeeeeeeet dear
really was awwwwwwwww
lillo sa cutoooooooo sa
but was really really well written dear
hats off
u managed it really well
the length was optimal
have not lost its charm as was not much draged
n i dont have feeling tht something was incomplete
amazinggggggggg job
*thumbs uppppppp*
outstandinggggggg thought
brilliant concept
n u written ur thoughts really really well
nothing more to say
do wrte more sooooooooon
u r fab
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
Its Too good Yarrr..
i imagined on my fav couple....😍
tthnx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
awesomeeeeee os

sooooooooo sweet

do write more soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
So sweet OS
Thanks for Pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
beautiful dear .
thanks for the pm😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Tashu awesome yaar, OMG its so beautiful, Real kahani toh nahi hain na??🤣

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