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@DrashtiDhamiNo1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#431

waiting... waiting... waiting...

cumon hun im sooooo desparate 4 the next part

update quickly plz

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#432

Hey guys i am so so sorry!!!!!
I will update as soon as i get home i wqs goin to update last night but i got distracted lol

Update will be up in couple of hours!!!

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-eiya-

@-eiya-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#433

waiting...waiting...waiting...😍

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#434

Hey Guys!!! I am really sorry for not updating soon enough...I had someething to do and I got distracted with my other shows lol....anyway I am not sure about this part...I don't know how you guys will feel about it....Please do let me know!

IMPORTANT QUESTION AT THE END....PLZ READ!!!!

Chapter 10

Geet sat in her home...she decided to act sick for a while until Maan leaves...he might still be looking for her and knowing how he is...he would not sit quiet until he finds her..for four years she has been successful in hiding from him and she would not let her efforts go to waste...she sat on the bed remembering her dad....
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Flashback: (Her escape)

It has been two years since their marriage...each day his possessiveness went out of control...whenever she would go out for any small needs for home she would always come back to angry Maan. She tried her level best to keep Maan happy but he never understood her pain. She always did what he asked her to do no matter what and in return all she asked was for little happiness..Whenever Maan isn't here..he made sure that there were security guards keeping an eye on her and giving the information to him. She felt like a prisoner in her own house. Even though he isn't here physically...just the thought of him makes her shiver in fear. She looks at her arms with bruises that were fading away..she wished to fade away from this life as well. She sits on the bed hugging her knees silently crying...her cell phone rings...she knew that it was Maan calling her to see what she is doing. She hesitantly picks up the phone not wanting to get him mad..

Geet: hello (trying to sound normal)

Maan: What are you doing?

Geet: umm I was about to go to the kitchen to make lunch

Maan: hmm ok...I miss you...did you miss me?

Geet: ji

Maan: I will be home by tonight..I am done with my required meeting and the rest Adi will take care (Geet closed her eyes) I will see you soon..bye

Geet: bye (She threw the phone on the floor and cried herself to sleep)
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Few hours later Geet woke up hearing doorbells...she quickly got off the bed thinking it might be Maan...she opened the door and was shocked to see her father there

Geet: Papa (she went to him and hugged him tight....it felt like eternity since she saw her dad)

Rajiv: how are you?

Geet: I am good papa....Maan really takes care of me

Rajiv: Don't lie to me...I know what he does to you (angry)

Geet: What are you talking about?

Rajiv: Don't you think I know my own daughter? (looks at her arms where the bruises were quiet visible even though it was kind of fading away) I am here now...listen you have to go before Maan comes back

Geet (looked at him shocked): What..what are you talking about papa

Rajiv: Listen I can't see you in this state anymore...(Geet backs up a little looking at her father) I gave up hoping that Maan will change..I can't take this anymore knowing that my daughter is suffering everyday here....

Geet: How do you know?

Rajiv: I had asked Nakul to let me know what goes on around here when you didn't come to see me for a while...you didn't even bother to tell your father about this? You have any idea what went through me when I found out what he does to you? (cries) Enough is enough..you have to leave..

Geet: No..I won't do that...Maan will find me and he will do something to you if he found out that you helped me

Rajiv: Geet nothing will happen. I will handle everything here...

Geet: The security guards out there will tell Maan...

Rajiv: I have taken care of them...listen to me Geet...we don't have enough time..Maan will be back soon and it will be too late then...you have to go from here

Geet (started shaking her head no...) No I won't leave...I am very happy here...and I know you guys are safe as well..I won't leave to put your life in danger

Rajiv: Geet....just go....if something will happen to me at least I will be glad that you are safe and happy somewhere out there....just go... please..forget me and your friends...go..

Geet: No...I won't...I won't go....

Rajiv: Geet beta please leave...you have less time to decide before security guard comes here...

Geet (crying): No..I won't leave you....

Rajiv (holds her hand): as your papa's request please leave...(cries...Geet hugs her father and cries...) I can't stand these bruises on your body...and I won't rest in peace knowing my daughter is living in hell...come on we have to go....

Geet: Papa no..I am happy here...(he drags her out of the house...when making sure that it is safe....he tells Geet to go)

Rajiv: Geet go run...you don't have much time until Maan finds out...go I will do whatever I can until then...go!! (He pushed Geet away from him....Geet stood there looking at her father with teared eyes....He came and pushed Geet...she started walking away...looking back at her father for the last time..her eyes were filled with tears...her father waved to her as she walked away)

End Flashback!
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Suraj drives to Geet's house to drop off her medicines and some food for her...
Suraj: Mr. Khurana..I will be right back..I have to drop this stuff inside to my finance's house...you can come in if you want

Maan: No you can go in

Suraj: Ok..I will be back in two minutes (he gets out of the car and walks toward Geet's house...Maan watched Suraj leave...)

Mahi: (opens the door knowing it might be Suraj): What are you doing here?

Suraj: you told me you are sick so I am dropping these off for you...how are you feeling now?

Mahi: ohh umm little better

Suraj (looks at her carefully): umm you sure...you look so tired...(Maan looks at his watch...he wanted to go back to the hotel and get this over with...he looks at Suraj who was talking to his fiance but her face wasn't visible...he watches Suraj enter the house...when Suraj goes in...he was shocked to see Geet closing the door...he closes his eyes and opens them again but the door was closed by then.. "No...my mind is playing tricks on me...Geet is dead")

Inside the house:
Suraj: Mahi you have to take care of your self

Mahi: yeah I know Suraj..thank you..Listen Suraj I need to tell you something important

Suraj: I have to go...next time you can tell me....Maan Singh Khurana outside waiting for me (Geet almost dropped the things from her hand...) I am going to go now...(she smiles slightly) Close the door...

Mahi: ohh umm...could you close the door when you leave..I am going to umm sleep now..

Suraj: ok...(Maan was watching the house hoping to see Suraj's finance again...the door opened...Suraj walked out of the house...Maan didn't see the lady again...Suraj came and sat inside the car) Sorry it took so long.

Maan: Could you drop me back to the hotel..I have some other important work to do

Suraj: Umm sure...(Maan went straight to his room...the image of Geet popped into his head)

Maan (to himself): No...Geet is dead....I have her mangalsutre...(he orders some scotch and drinks himself away until he could not feel any pain)
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Flashback:
Maan had immediately come home after his security guard notifying him of Geet missing...he yelled for Geet...he barged in each room yelling and screaming for her....he called the police commisioner and hired private detectives to look for her.... "I won't leave you Geet...you will pay for leaving me" He went to his security guard...
Maan: Did anyone come here today?

SG: Nnnn nnnoo sir...I was here all day today

Maan: THAN HOW THE HELL DID SHE GO? (he yelled...) you have three seconds to tell me what exactly happened today or else...

SG (scared for his life): I swear sir I was here all day today...I only left my post when there was an accident about a block away...some people had asked me to help them...when I came inside the house to give Geet Ma'am something she wasn't home...and that is when I called you

Maan banged his fist on the glass table..which broke in million pieces..the Security Guard immediately left not wanting to face his anger...he went out to his car and started driving around looking for her...suddenly he stopped the car and made a big U-turn...he parked the car in front of Geet's house...
Maan: Geet!

Ranjit: What is the meaning of this....why are you shouting...(he came down the stairs)

Maan (looked at him with anger): Where is Geet!

Ranjit: how would I know...she should be with you

Maan: she is not...she wasn't home when I got home...

Ranjit: What do you mean she wasn't home? (goes up to Maan and holds his collar) If anything happens to my daughter I won't leave you Maan Singh Khuarna

Maan (Holds his hands and puts it down): As far as I know Geet would never leave my house without my permission...I know she might have some one's influence on her...if I find out that you may have a hand in her leaving my house than believe me I won't spare you..and I don't make empty threats

Ranjit: The way you have been treating her it would've been enough for her to leave...

Maan: What I do in my household is none of your business....(he was about to leave when Maan stopped and turned back to look at him) How do you know what has been going on in my house? You haven't seen Geet in a while.

Ranjit: You have no right to question me....leave my house right now before I call the police

Maan: I will find Geet and when I do that will be the last time you will ever see her...mark my words....(Maan leaves the house and goes to his car...he calls the police commisioner again having no response from them for now..he hired some security guards and told them to check every hospital, mandir, and told them to keep eye on Geet's dad....he goes home and starts throwing things around..it was evening now and still no sign of Geet anywhere)

Maan (picks up the phone): Better be a good news...(he listened) WHAT! Am coming right now...(Maan went straight to the police station..he hoped that the news wasn't true...he went to the station..there he saw Geet's father, Rohit and Meera crying...) Did you find Geet?

Commissioner: I don't know how to say this to you but

Maan: Just come out and say it

Commisioner (tells the peon to bring out some materials) Do you recognize these items?

Maan (looks at the items): yes these belongs to my wife...why are you showing these to me?

Commissioner: I am sorry to say but she is no more...we were notified of an accident...the description you provided of your wife clothing matches the lady we found....

Maan: NO that can't be...I want to see her

Commisoner: Her face is unrecogniziable...I am sorry....(he hands Maan the mangalsutre and her sari that she wore)

Maan: No she can't die...she has to be alive

Ranjit (shouts): SHUT UP! just shut up my daughter is dead only because of you....you killed her....I had brought her up with so much love and care...not once I laid a hand on my daughter or yelled at her...(looks at Maan with anger and tear filled eyes) But YOU killed my daughter....she used to be so happy...you killed my daughter every day with your over possesiveness....she was suffering because of you but you never cared to see her pain...(Maan walks back a little) you alienated her from everyone because of your insecurities...you made her break her friendship and her every relations she ever had because of your selfish reasons....yet My Geet accepted your every decision...All she wanted was your love but instead she got your anger....

Maan: No...I loved her

Ranjit (holds her collar): Love? You call that love? My Geet loved you..but did you ever love her? She thought that her love would make you change...but she was wrong...locking her up in a house like a prisoner is not love Maan Singh Khurana....

Maan: Geet is alive

Ranjit: Don't take her name from your mouth....(pushes him back...Rohit and Meera comes in between and takes Ranjit out...) You killed my daughter....You killed her..you are responsible!!! Remember that! You should be in jail!! (he was shouting as they bring him outside of the station)

Maan goes home..Geet's father's words rang in his head...he thinks of all the moments of how he treated Geet....he closes his eyes in pain...he drops to his knees and cries "GEET!!!!!..come back to me!!!!!"

End Flashback!
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Maan wakes up with a jolt after remembering that dreadful day....he wobbles his way to the phone again and orders more whiskey...he takes out Geet's mangalsutre...he drinks and drinks until his body was numb..he drops on the bed...looking at Geet's mangalsutre...

Maan: Geeeetttttttt......I............am...........sssoo(he goes into deep sleep)

Past: Geet in Maan's office
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A question: Do you guys want me to talk about past after this part?...OR you guys want me to coordinate between past and present like before?

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#435

loved it finally someone made maan realise that he was such an over possessive husband n the precap is awesomeeeeeeeee

Edited by hinalshah - 15 years ago

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#436

I'd say complete the past so that the present can move on smoothly....wow what a thought ;-)

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cyum321

@cyum321

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#437

Awesome update

u can continue with present track or ur wish.............

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puth

@puth

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#438

lovely update simi.....
i want past and present both to be coordinated so that we have the suspense factor of what happened in the past.....

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#439

amazing part.....i also want both present n past.............continue soon......

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#440

fab update
Glad dat Geet ran away from dis monster
Her dad was her saviour & helped her at dis bad tym
Gud dat Geets dad sed all dat 2 Maan or eps he Wud hav Neva realised how much pain he caused 2 geet
Ooooh Maan saw geet but thought he was hallucinating
Precap is awesome
U can continue lyk b4 past & present 2gether
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the pm