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Manita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
loved the terence scene! I too felt like I was there watching it all happen, very well done Manita!

Thanks Sonali.......plzz pm me your updates too !!
will read all after exams and respond together !!

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Manita

@-Manita-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: simiv
Oh Mani!!
You are just an amazing writer!! You managed to take me there with you and imagine them on the terrace! Loved it!! Loved Khanak's possesiveness, Shaan's hesitation and then his trust in her! Beautiful!!:)

Thanks a lot simi.....
it matters
the same request that I am doing to all.............plzz pm me your updates........will read them together after the exams and will come back after end of march !!

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Manita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: -shamima-
Awe that was beautiful date loved how they were all nervous but then the date which could be considered as khanaks dream date both let down their guards well shaan more and they share cute moments together and then the serious topic popped up which was why did shaan avoid her in those 6 years well that's something that's intrigued khanak and me but like khanak I'm patient and ready to find out anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

Thanks darling...........your comments are precious !!
loved them absolutely !!

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Manita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: roshnimanoti
Mani Di......

dis was just toooooo gooooood...... I seriously dont knw Wat to say..... Im speechless..... Before this update.... Part 11 was my favourite Bt now even part 12 is my favourite...... As soon as my exams get over im going to save this ff ka story in my comp....... So that i can read the full story at one go...... God how am going to concentrate on my studies now? Damn!!! Y do i hv my exams 2mrw..... It was just too too too too good..... Shaan planned such a dreamy date for khanak wow!!! Loved each and every thing u described from shaan talkin to khanak's photo to Their terrace date...... Ur busy for some days means no update on Saturday and Sunday...... Chalega since u updated such a beautiful and long updates(part 11 and part 12) I have more to tell I'll edit this post later.....😃🤗

Thanks Roshni.....!!
@ blue -- it is huge huge compliment...........thanks a lot darling....!!

and regarding exams..........the less said the better😆😆........have always cribbed about them.....why do we have them at all? ,............can't they test us like that and pass.........but guess we can't do much about it !!
Me too having an exam in last week of March......be back after that and will update then !!

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angel_9

@angel_9

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Posted: 15 years ago

#365

hey Manita..........

i am speechless...............wonderful update...........wow..............n a long one too...............

loved it ...............

shanak r amazing.........very well described........................

loved the beginning.................n she parked her car at wrong place ...........😆............

n shan notices her nervousness..............she goes to her home.........n remembers the time spend with shan ................n on other hand shan tooooooo..........wonderfully described............

their diner date.............wow...........👏.................n romantic too.............

he wants to tell her about the indifference but can't n she just let it go because she wants him to open up...............😃

each n evey dialogue..........awesome............⭐️⭐️⭐️

will wait 4 ur next update...................(if u r busy u can update when u r free........ surely understand that)

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Roshni

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Posted: 15 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: -Manita-

Thanks Roshni.....!!
@ blue -- it is huge huge compliment...........thanks a lot darling....!!

and regarding exams..........the less said the better😆😆........have always cribbed about them.....why do we have them at all? ,............can't they test us like that and pass.........but guess we can't do much about it !!
Me too having an exam in last week of March......be back after that and will update then !!

If it was a normal exam then i wouldn't have made a fuzz abt it waise bhi i dont study much.....😉😉
Bt this is boards so i have to study jarasa......
And regarding that saving the story on my comp.....

I was going to tell u after u updated the 11th part Bt i forgot.........🤗🤗

Edited by roshnimanoti - 15 years ago

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manjiri

@m4manju

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Posted: 15 years ago

#367

aww loved the date...😳 the kind of new bond they share now is amazing.... loved their small gestures told how they know and care for each other.... :) will wait for the next part..... and good luck for exams di 😊

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purvi08

@purvi08

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Posted: 15 years ago

#368

it was indeed romantic date.and don't be sorry for not sending pms .🤗 thanks mani di

Edited by sayni - 15 years ago

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Ramani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#369

hei manita,
such a romantic dinner..loved each n every part of it..how understanding n caring both of them are..perfectly made for each other..all the best for ur exam..we can never forget trespassers prohibited..as we would be reading it all over again n again till u come back again during our free time..
luv,
ramani

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#370

Reposting ... If you missed my updated post ....

Manitaa ....

I loved the moment after the kiss in his bedroooom ... Tightly Hugging eachother leaning on the cupboard dooooor... Awwwwwwwwwwwww ... Must be so peaceful after finallly confessssing !!!!!!

Loved the entire Date ! I can so imagine the Mumbai Skyline and the starrry nite !!!!

Loved that you dint rush with the lovestory .... Very goood that they talked a lot and shared everything !!!!!

Muaaaaaaaaaaaaah Gurl !!!

Please try to update sooooooner .....

All the best for your exams !!!!!!