FF: Ek Paal Epi pg103 April 1

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SaJan-SaJan

@SaJan-SaJan

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#601

awesome update...

really loved it...

1st i was shocked 2 read d 1st line... they had nt met 4 six months... after reading further i relaxed a bit....

finally geet is free from all ds trouble....

how hard it must have been 4 maaneet...

They had already lost many years; they weren't going to waste another minute. They had spent so many years alone; they weren't going to be alone anymore.

loved ds line....

maan left geet n geet is crying... but i think maan is up to giving geet some surprise...

thnx 4 updating sooner...

n thnx 4 d pm..

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ansah

@SahSah

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#602

Jaz that was superb update as always....

finally geet is free....waiting what maan has in store for her

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#603

JAZ awwwwwwwwwwwww..why did u make him walk away..it better be something happy..u have already made us cry enough in this FF i will kill u pakka..

and it was that DASTARD DEV..ewwwwwwwwww..sicko he got money from hima nd stil..yuck kill him ...he deserves that..

and lovely update cont soon..

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abina03

@abina03

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#604

lovely update

you stopped in the edge

can't wait

update soon please please.............................................

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#605

Jaz

plz yaar update kero naa 😍

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Silver!

@silver.

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#606

sorry for the late comment, but this part was absolutely amazing! You write terrificly and i'm so glad that scum bag dev is now in jail! If you ask me he should be sentenced to death 🤣 And what is maan upto? 😉 why do i have a feeling it's something... well... good for Maan and geet, as in a surrpise? I can be wrong 😆 well anyway, great update! x. Silver,

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#607

ooooooooooo loved the part this was just amazing defo maan is planning sumthing big
hope evrything get clear out soon
that maan ******* will rot on hell i hope maan really punches him
well waiting 4 the nxt part soon

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#608

Hi jnawaz,

I really liked your ff. Very touching & beautiful concept. The character of geet went through a lot. Keep up the good work!👍🏼

Eagerly waiting😍

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#609

loved it n i think maan is planning something big for geet

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#610

Awe poor maaneet had a separation of another 6 months because of the stupid jerk devs acusation them having an affair and loved the judge she clearly understood what dev was and declared her decision in one go making geet free form that suffocation and hmm I think maan has planned some surprise that's why he left like that anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

Edited by -shamima- - 15 years ago

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